Recent Reviews for Mary Deal
The Ka, a paranormal Egyptian fantasy (Book) - 7/25/2007 10:07:50 AM|
I am intrigued about Egypt having visited there a few times as well as nearby Israel. Having explored the pryramids of Giza and elsewhere, I find the area fascinating.
When's your next book?
Aloha from Afghanistan,
P.S. Maybe I will look you up the next time I return to Kaua'i.
Good luck to you and keep the faith.
The Ka, a paranormal Egyptian fantasy (Book) - 1/24/2007 9:36:25 AM
Since I read KA I always tell my friends you got to DEAL with it. This is rich and fascinating.
The Tropics: Child of a Storm-Caught in a Rip-Hurricane Secret (Book) - 12/9/2005 4:47:18 PM
I love your book's setting and it sounds like a good read full of tension. By the way...the Ahab scene where his arm flops back and forth will stick in my mind forever. I got a visual on it right away. You know how to put the reader right there 'in the scene'.
Chrissy K. McVay
The Tropics: Child of a Storm-Caught in a Rip-Hurricane Secret (Book) - 4/28/2005 1:12:10 PM
Belatedly, I want to thank you for your notice of my book on Kauai and to ask if you've written any new poetry. I'm preparing my first chapbook of poems for lovers, entitled "Silly Little Love Poems." Aloha. Keith
Grandpappy's Cows (Short Story) - 6/8/2011 7:19:24 PM
oh goodness, fictionalized? i hope so, but am not so sure!
fun and well done,
Any Way You Distort It (Short Story) - 11/8/2006 3:31:39 PM
Opening Scene - Down to the Needle (Article) - 2/6/2013 11:28:00 AM
Excellent!. I love how you immediately start off with dialogue. It immediately paints a picture in my mind.
Forensic Evidence in Plots (Article) - 8/12/2007 9:48:10 AM
A treasure-trove of ideas from a talented author. Anyone reading this article (from the novice to the expert) can benefit from its insightful and detailed explanations.
Unfinished Manuscripts: A Tribute (Article) - 4/2/2004 3:52:52 PM
My heart goes out to you at the loss of your truly cherished friend. You were blessed to know such a kind and generous person. A fine tribute to Mr. Robbins. Thank you for sharing.
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 10/7/2013 3:36:08 PM
Excellent and enjoyable poem, Mary! That's a challenge to pack so much meaning into so few words, but you have pulled it off famously I think!
May your writing touch many, many hearts. my friend.
~ a fellow human & poet, Z.B.McClure
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 3/2/2013 2:11:55 AM
computer have shortened a long distance into a one finger touch.
like it very much, peace, thanks.
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 9/29/2012 6:04:11 AM
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 12/1/2011 7:25:50 PM
This is fun. Check out mine called, "Kapu." I wrote it in college just wanting to show how I might sound if I wrote a pigeon poem.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 12/1/2011 7:23:34 PM
I can so relate to this. It is and isn't a block. Sometimes I go long periods without writing, until I get some type of inspiration and then it all flows. But the block I get as well as the problems in life that arise always lead to better days and poetry. Thanks again.
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 12/1/2011 7:17:07 PM
Aloha, Mary. It was wonderful chatting with you and Ronald today. It was such a wonderful experience and I appreciate everything you both had to share. I just read this poem and found it breathtaking with all of its many many layers. Whether from a sensual interpretation or an awakening, or even as a passing poem, this poem reveals so much so wonderfully. Thanks and keep up the words. :-) Richard
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 12/21/2009 5:46:39 AM
Nicely done. One can visualize a wonderful night in the tropics.
Florida is not too bad either. However I have been to The Islands a few times and it is special. Where does one go to have this vision?
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/12/2009 9:09:52 AM
I loved this writing! Blessings...Frances
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 4/21/2009 10:32:27 AM
What a GREAT idea!
I lived in Japan for three years.
After we golake
Rapid boatride too.
So bring changeclothes.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/5/2008 4:09:37 AM
Wonderful thoughts! I agree with you! I sometimes get procrastinators rush!
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 7/22/2008 8:09:43 PM
I feel awsh in discriptive detail, wonderful!!!!! Sandi
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 2:43:07 PM
My mind gets blocked and I can wrack my brain and nothing there to write about. All at once an inspiration comes to me to put it to words. Not an expert but like to try and succeed.
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 6/6/2008 2:41:10 PM
Hearing the surf, lying near the ocean, a dream of mine forever. You painted a lovely scene and a beautiful night into morning.
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 5/5/2008 10:51:06 PM
love your verse Mary, it is sexy, sensual and heart throbbing
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 4:04:46 PM
the images in the poem painted pictures on my mind-well done!
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 2/26/2007 4:23:13 PM
"stretch in a bath of light"
Very beautiful work Mary!
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 1/9/2007 7:21:47 AM
Perfectly tantalizing, suprisingly mesmerizing, definately appetizing. I adored this piece!
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 11/28/2006 6:23:48 AM
A sensual one and i like it. Good blend of metaphors of similies. Thanx for sharing.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/29/2006 7:49:45 AM
I tend to have a painter or pastel artist's block. It is a matter of looking at the stool, it being the first obstacle, and forcing myself to sit upon it. Once I have achieved this, then it's on with the headphones and the music does the rest - I am away.
With writer's block, I am new to poetry and so far, I still have a large enough repository of ideas to draw upon.
This list is affirmation that we are all prone to a pen run aground.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 6/13/2006 4:25:27 PM
Nice "guidelines" for overcoming "writers's" block. We can all see ourselves in this predicament!
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 5/10/2006 1:04:45 AM
Every writer or professed writer can relate to this! Excellent.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 5/1/2005 11:10:38 PM
No such thing as writer's block that a walk in the park won't cure.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 1/12/2005 3:41:03 AM
True portrayel... excellent
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 6:14:18 AM
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 3/4/2004 1:27:55 AM
Creative juice . . . ain't it great Sis!?
cynth'ya lewis reed
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 2/4/2004 8:56:30 PM
What a small world. I signed your other poem and didn't even realize that you had been on the Showemall Writers' Block. This is a cute poem.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 11/20/2003 3:48:38 PM
Nice verses Marty... Thanks for sharing...
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/22/2003 10:42:31 PM
Very good, Mary, well said! I know I tend to write better under pressure and, fortunately, have never been cursed with writer's block. Stop by my A/D pages sometime.
Love in Christ~~
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 10/7/2003 10:49:26 PM
Excellent job on this. Unfortunately, I have writer's block most of the time. I'm lucky if I can write a poem a month.
Writer's Block (Poetry) - 9/26/2003 6:18:11 AM
ah yes. very well done.
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 9/17/2003 3:43:24 PM
Most beautiful poem. Well worded and excellent write.
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 8/26/2003 4:33:13 PM
a very tender and sensual poem....very well done!
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 5/31/2003 2:56:40 AM
celestial. at one with the night, garbless and taking it in. wonderful write!
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 4/20/2003 11:37:08 PM
sort of sensual. got me ...!
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 4/20/2003 11:33:25 PM
Coming from Nigeria, pigeon is my unofficial lingua franca. I enjoyed. Thanks for sharing.
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 4/8/2003 7:32:10 PM
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 12:09:25 PM
Oh, this was really beautiful - sensual and mysterious. Ron
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 3/6/2003 6:09:57 AM
Love it!:) Rhyme is usually my bag, but this is right-on. Thanks for starting my day with a laugh. Phyllis:) ::::>
PS: Like your bio, too. What a fascinating
background you have...and we share a love
for Steinbeck. Aloha!
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 2:23:01 PM
Hi- Mary- I've spent some time in Brazil and Fiji and other such places and you capture
the sensual feel and cool, cool luxury of that sweet slumber very well indeed. I enjoyed it. When you have time read my Long Gone Love and Old Souls. You'll like them. I'll be reading you. Jerry
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 1/13/2003 4:51:56 PM
There are two things I love:
soulful poetry and rhythmic poetry.
Both are here.
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 1/3/2003 12:08:57 AM
awesome in a simple word
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 10/9/2002 1:45:30 PM
I think I think in pigeon
can I move to Hawaii now?
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 4:06:38 PM
glad its fixed
Pigeon Modem (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 1:28:42 PM
funny and delightful write!! LOL
Naked Night in the Tropics (Poetry) - 10/8/2002 12:49:55 PM
very good write!!