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Recent Reviews for Debra (DM) Kraft
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World Building for Writers (Book) - 11/13/2006 11:19:44 AM
tHIS BOOK LOOKS COOL.
Somewhere on the Edge of Words (Book) - 3/12/2005 9:41:00 PM
This looks like an intriguing collection of poetry, I look forward to reading more of your works
God Bless
Michelle!
He Smelled of Roses (Short Story) - 5/22/2008 4:04:50 AM
Nice read. Good tie back to the title at the end of the story. Short but potent (the nectar of short stories).
~Marion Francis~
He Smelled of Roses (Short Story) - 5/19/2008 8:50:45 PM
yes, a beautiful story
He Smelled of Roses (Short Story) - 5/19/2008 12:25:06 PM
Excellent story. It seems you write it with a certain familiarity. Nice.
Three Quarters Out (Short Story) - 5/7/2008 4:25:20 AM
very nice, well written story-i enjoyed it!
Secrets in the Walls (Short Story) - 5/4/2008 3:15:01 PM
If only the walls could talk. Facsinating story. Much enjoyed. Liz
My Sister, My Brother (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 6:51:00 AM
intense love and hurt come through this-i have been there-and know that the love is most important
My Sister, My Brother (Poetry) - 10/31/2009 1:32:45 PM
Acceptance makes all the difference doesn't it. Great write. LadyJ
What's left? (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 6:36:35 AM
Been in that state many times in my youth. Now I don't ask that question I just have to wait till I get up the energy for the task. It's a good way you explain those moments when the body is in survival mode just before break down. LadyJ
Family Crisis (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 7:25:42 PM
powerful words-i am so sorry-i know of such pain
What's left? (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 6:47:41 PM
it is tough to feel this way--your opening lines say it all--we dance so fast we are exhausted
Family Crisis (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 12:49:13 PM
Debra, how difficult it must be to write so movingly
of such pain and rejection. -gene.
Family Crisis (Poetry) - 10/28/2009 9:06:14 AM
Well done, and well understood. LadyJ
I touched the hand of evil (Poetry) - 9/17/2009 8:34:14 PM
I went to high school with Kami and I was also a friend of both her and Cynthia. Thank you for this outstanding work of literature. It really does capture the terror of the moment and what each girl (the Urbin sisters included) must have gone through in the last moments of life and how it must have affected the investigating officers. It helps bring across the "darkness of the hour" and the pure evil that is Leslie Allen Williams. The 18th anniversary of Kami;s death just passed a few days ago and I am happy I came across this. Again, thank you for your work.
Ty Hover
Mother (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 5:08:28 AM
a beautiful sharing with so many levels-I think the line: "but your wounds were also ours." is particularly poignant as i think that we all carry with us, our past-and must sometimes work very hard not to visit that past on the future.
What can you do? (Poetry) - 7/4/2009 3:47:09 PM
I find this particularly apt and timely and meaningful Debra; I am sure I'm not the only one. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
What can you do? (Poetry) - 6/3/2009 6:04:32 PM
we are fortunate for when we loose all else, we still have the freedom to choose, even if that choice is only our thoughts and our reactions to life
What can you do? (Poetry) - 6/3/2009 11:49:18 AM
Life can be so disapointing when dreams never appear. So true. Lady J
The Autos' Lament (Poetry) - 5/8/2009 8:15:33 PM
Wouldn't be nice if we could keep the autos and
toss out the shortsighted, greedy bosses have caused
the downfall of perhaps our one great surviving industry?
Debra, your "Autos' Lament" is most moving. -gene.
The Autos' Lament (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 8:22:38 PM
such a sad reality for many--hang in there
Dreaming (Poetry) - 3/22/2009 6:20:33 AM
i like this--sometimes, the ability to get lost in the dream helps us to get through
Dreaming (Poetry) - 3/21/2009 3:17:07 PM
Thank you, Gene! That line was added for this revision. I'm glad to see it worked so much better than the original line, which was very weak and cliche.
Dreaming (Poetry) - 3/21/2009 8:06:58 AM
Wonderful, Debra. I can really identify with this--as dreamer and writer. This is a great line: "the place where legends climb with me to the top of every hill." -gene.
Bye-Bye Mr. Corporate Pride (Poetry) - 2/9/2009 4:58:53 PM
A beauty, Debra. Don McLean would be proud of you.
Poor old Mr. Corporate Pride has to learn how to get by
on $500,000 per. -gene.
We are not weeds (Poetry) - 2/3/2009 1:05:31 PM
Excellent metaphoric description of a very real problem. Thanks for sharing.
We are not weeds (Poetry) - 2/2/2009 3:56:25 PM
A perfect and powerful metaphor, Debra, and so well written.
Good luck you, and I'm sorry about the company friend you wrote
about in the other post. -gene.
Mother Nature's Sigh (Poetry) - 2/2/2009 12:15:55 PM
Prophetic and poerful since it is timely and most appropriate, Debra. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
We are not weeds (Poetry) - 2/2/2009 12:14:40 PM
A most apt and timely write, Debra. How can there be unemployment when there is so much to be done? Just think of the aging and decaying infrastructure. It's no different here in Canada. This is proof that the economic/financial system has never worked for the well-being of the great majority of this planet's inhabitants. Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Love and peace,
Regis
The Key (Poetry) - 1/18/2009 6:04:25 PM
fascinating write--and thought provoking as we cheer for this girl then are shocked by her final imprisonment
Mother Nature's Sigh (Poetry) - 1/1/2009 10:42:34 AM
Dear Debra, better a sigh than a whimper. -gene.
Truth Skips a Generation (Poetry) - 12/31/2008 11:33:22 AM
You express wisdom in this thought-inciting write, Debra. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Regis
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