Recent Reviews for J Tyler Blue
The Most Fantastic story (Short Story) - 4/10/2004 5:42:51 AM|
vicious sewing machine (Poetry) - 4/11/2004 2:32:41 AM
Only twenty six? You are an old man already.
vicious sewing machine (Poetry) - 4/10/2004 9:06:24 PM
You are a head above the rest!
Your work is extremely good and I have
enjoyed reading you!
vicious sewing machine (Poetry) - 4/9/2004 12:41:08 PM
I really love your style here.Fantastic.
vicious sewing machine (Poetry) - 4/9/2004 11:30:53 AM
brutal honesty at its best.
"that this is too long. and that it is too much like other ones."
this is exactly what makes this brutally honest and at its best.
Kick me, I need some dying (Poetry) - 4/9/2004 8:06:14 AM
another nice one. you have some great poems here.
vicious sewing machine (Poetry) - 4/9/2004 8:03:55 AM
this is by which i'll judge all things cool.
Kick me, I need some dying (Poetry) - 4/8/2004 4:48:07 PM
i like the flow of thought and the formatting of this piece as well as "when i draw maps." these are a pleasure to dive into.
To Tyus (Poetry) - 4/8/2004 4:46:19 PM
well-expressed ... but a consolation ... i have heard it told that when a child finds it (seemingly) easy to say goodbye, it is because they are very, very comfortable and sound in the relationship ... as in they know the goodbye is not final, but a temporary thing, and the relationship continues in spite of it.
when I draw maps (Poetry) - 4/8/2004 3:46:26 PM
The map to a woman's heart changes routes every day. And they wonder why men always stop for directions.
To Tyus (Poetry) - 4/2/2004 8:46:19 AM
children are a blessing ... it's tough when we miss them ...
To Tyus (Poetry) - 3/31/2004 4:25:02 PM
To Tyus (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 6:12:01 PM
This is just so touching. Tears began to well...if it had of been any longer I'd of been outright crying. Excellent in feeling and goodness. Thanks for sharing..Lisa
To Tyus (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 5:40:37 PM
There are many ways to lose a son (or a daughter), and I
can certainly emphasize with you in this painful scenario.
Been there. Done that.
Baltimore Nights (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 2:47:03 PM
outstanding write with powerful emotions and imagery! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
baltimore sounds a lot more interesting than burleson, texas LOL
To Tyus (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 2:45:30 PM
this is a tender, loving write of a parent's unwillingness to let a child go on their own--especially enjoyed
"...all i can do/
to delay inevitable/
is squeeze you tighter/
hold you longer/
take pictures of you sleeping/
and store away/
a million million/
i miss you"
BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and love, karla.
welcome to author's den, BTW--you're among friends
Kick me, I need some dying (Poetry) - 3/30/2004 1:49:36 PM
excellenty imagery and depth of spirit!
Baltimore Nights (Poetry) - 3/29/2004 12:55:21 PM
Love this piece. I really love how you let the reader into your mind for the length of this poem. It also makes me wonder what everybody is doing in Baltimore.