Recent Reviews for Lori Jean Finnila
MY MOVIE PITCH (Short Story) - 11/14/2014 2:51:57 AM|
This doesn't have that "pick up" thing that needs to be there in a movie. I appreciate your writing skills though :) You can be an amazing writer in future someday.
MY MOVIE PITCH (Short Story) - 10/19/2014 11:14:29 AM
Most fiction is grounded in truth or at least believability. This plot lacks a quality to make it memorable. It would satisfy viewers needs with a twist of redemption, or love conquers all, or a happy, hopeful ending--perhaps all three. That's my take.
TEEN PREGNANCY AND TEEN DOMESTIC VIOLENCE (Short Story) - 10/1/2013 2:16:54 AM
i enjoyed this story, well written
Are our supposed mentors bullshit artist? (Article) - 10/31/2014 6:02:57 AM
I don't know the story of Mario Cuomo and Sandra Lee, but I can guess: the sex drive is stronger than any morality there is. People will do very stupid things as result of attraction regardless of the consequences. When it happens the public figures (like President Clinton) it becomes very embarrassing. Most people have incidents like this in their lives, kept secret. Unfortunately, celebrities and politicians have their lives gone over with a fine tooth comb. Any indiscretion (in the eyes of the morality police) can be found and blown up in the rumor mill. That's why scandal sheets sell. We all have our secrets (mostly about sex), so we enjoy watching people in highfalutin places shot down by indiscretion.
Memories on the Run (Poetry) - 10/12/2014 4:29:59 PM
Very good this one. It is indeed a memory on the run!
Your Image (Poetry) - 3/2/2010 3:21:10 AM
This is a very beautiful piece.I enjoy reading it.take care
The Long Awaited Night (Poetry) - 5/12/2004 2:48:15 PM
What a Great endearment to someone you love....nice read....thanx for sharing....Peace Abel
The Long Awaited Night (Poetry) - 5/10/2004 8:11:12 AM
The Long Awaited Night (Poetry) - 5/9/2004 4:10:23 PM
So nice to have someone so thoughtful think about you through the night!
The Long Awaited Night (Poetry) - 5/9/2004 3:50:46 PM
A great sense of longing. Good write.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
A Special Place (Poetry) - 5/9/2004 3:37:11 PM
Sad romeance. Enjoyed.