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Recent Reviews for Brenda M Weber
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JOHN HORN- Legend of a Lumberjack (Book) - 7/13/2005 7:06:11 PM
You have been very professional in your request for permission to use material from William S Crowe's story and in including the recognition of that background. We appreciate that. I was able to pick up on some phrases and information from Grandfather's story...that was interesting.
I don't know a whole lot about historical fiction but I think one of the keys to success in that genre must be that it is hard for the reader to tell what is "real" and what is fiction. I found that to be the case in John Horn, so I think you have blended those two formats well.
It is obvious you did a lot of research to make the story as authentic as possible...again I think you succeeded.
Thanks for following through on the use of our materials...that is the mark of a real professional writer.
Lynn Emerick/ Skankia, Michigan
North Country Publishing
Flowers From Heaven (Poetry) - 8/30/2007 8:10:42 PM
hi brenda! this poem is so deep. i can feel it inside my soul...
anyway, i cried after reading it and now i savour my life more than ever! thanks...
Mona Lisa (Poetry) - 11/20/2004 11:27:55 PM
enjoyed much. it's the mystery behind the symmetry that calls to me. Dawn
For Love to Die (Poetry) - 11/10/2004 6:49:36 AM
Well done!
For Love to Die (Poetry) - 11/5/2004 9:41:23 PM
Ah such deeply moving poetry, this one got to me tonight, excellent.
Reindeer
His Mistress (Poetry) - 11/5/2004 9:26:54 PM
Plenty of men have fallen to this mistress
Peace and sunshine
HH
His World (Poetry) - 10/25/2004 9:57:04 AM
this is so well written, i was hooked from the beginning
His World (Poetry) - 10/25/2004 6:47:52 AM
wow. agree with Lisa below on image of that powerful ending. Also like the way this one picks up the pace up to that point. really nice writing.
His World (Poetry) - 10/25/2004 4:04:49 AM
just like Humpty Dumpty
spilling both yolk and
that white stuff
the mess thats left behind
from the orgasm of heartbreaking lies
from his world
You took my mind completely away from me when I read this part.
That is such an explosive thought, it's a good thing I had to go no further.
Awesome poetry.
Lisa
His World (Poetry) - 10/24/2004 11:12:23 PM
You have crafted some very nice images. Nicely done.
Our Aftermath (Poetry) - 10/24/2004 5:51:40 AM
well written introspective poetry ...
Our Aftermath (Poetry) - 10/22/2004 6:25:43 PM
very powerful poem
His Mistress (Poetry) - 10/3/2004 11:50:44 AM
knockout punch with that last word, Brenda! excellent write..
Her Blackened Eyes (Poetry) - 8/29/2004 4:08:42 PM
much-needed write and well-put
Her Blackened Eyes (Poetry) - 8/27/2004 9:48:33 PM
it's a shame the things we are forced to say ...
well penned ...
Her Blackened Eyes (Poetry) - 8/27/2004 9:38:47 PM
Brenda,
You have penned a powerful message, Dear Poet! I feel that there are a lot of someones out there suffering shamefully from abuse, while their partners carry on shamelessly behind their disguises. Great composition on a despicable subject. Thank you for sharing this!
Cynthia
Her Blackened Eyes (Poetry) - 8/27/2004 5:44:31 PM
It's a sad situaton. Great write on it though. I wrote a poem for a battered wives and childrens organization out west. If you vist my den It's called Excuse Me. Its desighned to hit hard on a terrible subject. Personally, I'd love to see them all rot in HE**.
Take care
Phil / Thunderduck
Isolation of Insecurity (Poetry) - 7/24/2004 10:21:30 AM
Yes, the rhyme is sublime but the emotions are even more grasping in this creation, Brenda. Love and peace to you. Regis
Comfort Zone (Poetry) - 7/24/2004 10:19:58 AM
A very comforting expression of love. Thank you, Brenda. Love and peace. Regis
The Poet (Poetry) - 7/24/2004 10:18:58 AM
I admire the disciplined construction of this write (rhyme and rythm). As well, it is very meaningful. Thank you for sharing this offering, Brenda. Love and peace. Regis
Changing Colors (Poetry) - 7/23/2004 8:34:12 PM
Ditto what Jude said. Thank you for sharing this offering, Brenda. Love and peace. Regis
Changing Colors (Poetry) - 7/22/2004 10:23:54 PM
hate is the most despicable words in the english language ...
well done!
Comfort Zone (Poetry) - 7/20/2004 7:43:59 AM
comforted by this poem,
Comfort Zone (Poetry) - 7/20/2004 3:17:58 AM
a delightfully warm poem ...
Isolation of Insecurity (Poetry) - 7/10/2004 6:34:37 AM
excellent rhyme ...
The Dance (Poetry) - 7/9/2004 6:26:02 AM
superb verse! If we must rhyme poetry then this is how it is done!
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