Listen (Poetry) - 8/19/2004 11:49:04 AM
Nicely done. Pain and aggravtion can bring out the best in some people.
Listen (Poetry) - 8/19/2004 4:28:06 AM
Isn't it fascinating how our best works come from our dysfunctions? Nicely expressed.
pain (Poetry) - 8/16/2004 8:37:21 AM
stay strong--keep writing--this is powerful and cleansing. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
pain (Poetry) - 8/15/2004 11:23:17 PM
Poetry often helps many of us to empty our souls and not kill anyone one.
Best of luck to you and keep writing.
devils child (Poetry) - 8/12/2004 2:27:28 PM
Satan Devil Has many Millions Of His Children In High Lowly Places Roaming This Evil World,i.e. Do Not Become Victim Of His Mis-Interpertation_
devils child (Poetry) - 8/11/2004 8:52:09 PM
dead but not forgotten ...
devils child (Poetry) - 8/11/2004 7:06:41 PM
I guess what you meant was that the devil child within you was finally dead after you prayed. At least that's how I've read this poem. Good ending.
Sandie May Angel
devils child (Poetry) - 8/11/2004 6:28:50 PM
After night comes day. Pray for a new day and not for the end.
ghost bride (Poetry) - 8/10/2004 4:33:33 PM
Your work displays wonderful emotion.
Why? (Poetry) - 8/10/2004 4:09:25 PM
WHY Is Only Question (God) Will Ask You Whence You Stand Before Him In Judgement!
DEATH IS ENEVITABLE,i.e. You Want To Hurry It Up I can Think Of Million Ways-
If You Get Up After You Fall You Will Make It To The End!
Credit for Write!