Autumn Trail in Darkness (Poetry) - 10/18/2004 5:17:43 AM
This one is so creative. You have contructed the stanza so well by using the 2nd line of the previous stanza to create the 1st of the present stanza. Very well-organized stanzas and flow well when read.
Wonderful write indeed!
Sandie May Angel :o)
Autumn Trail in Darkness (Poetry) - 10/18/2004 3:30:44 AM
This is exceptionally well written and just plain 'ol good poem. The flow was perfection, and the thought was in total sink with the season.