Out of Body (Poetry) - 2/14/2006 6:52:44 AM
Nice tone to this poetry... Thought provoking!
Roger and Birgit
I Dreamt of “Kick” (Poetry) - 12/19/2005 4:29:05 PM
Most compelling, a very driven piece. Poetic, poignant, pressing, full of action.
blessin's to you Neale, this was a full-tilt adventure.
cynth'ya lewis reed
I Dreamt of “Kick” (Poetry) - 10/24/2005 2:05:46 PM
Inspiring poem. R
I Dreamt of “Kick” (Poetry) - 10/23/2005 11:38:35 PM
An inspiring story through the lines of "I Dreamt of “Kick”".
It is a true poetic compliance in a prose-poem. Very live motion
feelings transmitted here with a hypnotic and mellifluous voice.
Thank You for sharing this gem of writing.
Never rest Your Pen, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A Lesson In Passion (Poetry) - 8/3/2005 7:38:17 AM
A logical definition of poemization of feelings.
"A Lesson In Passion" voices a philosophical-poetic grand.
Keep posting, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Angel/Angelus (Poetry) - 8/3/2005 7:33:06 AM
An impressive symbolistic-surreal composition.
"Angel/Angelus" flows through its river of mystery.
Striking reading from an intriguing writing.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Tief (Poetry) - 8/3/2005 7:26:36 AM
"Tief" prods the wings of imagination and strikes
philosophical thoughts in form and style.
I salute You, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Out of Body (Poetry) - 8/3/2005 7:22:09 AM
A full Poetry's compliance. "Out of Body" is rich in contents and
symbolistical imagery, delivering a poetic grand.
Keep posting, Poet!
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Out of Body (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 12:08:53 PM
Very philosophical and spiritual composition Neale
Peter
Out of Body (Poetry) - 6/10/2005 8:09:22 AM
Enjoyed the set-up, flow, and content here, Neale.
Out of Body (Poetry) - 6/1/2005 8:31:07 AM
Hmmm. this is a deep one!!
Out of Body (Poetry) - 5/19/2005 7:22:31 AM
A lot of great phrases, a little hard to "get" in certain spots, but overall a fine piece of work.
Out of Body (Poetry) - 4/7/2005 8:21:20 PM
This feels so real! Our bodies are not us - just something pretending to be us. Well done!
Monette
Angel/Angelus (Poetry) - 3/26/2005 7:20:06 PM
Hello fellow Whedon fan. Cool lyrics. I miss the show. Loved the theme music. ~~Nordette
Out of Body (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 9:21:00 PM
Awesome write. Powerful write.
Out of Body (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 9:06:14 AM
Great message in this intriguing poem!
I like your self-control! Well done!
etw
Out of Body (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 8:40:09 AM
Very powerful write. R
Tief (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 4:56:13 AM
lovely work
Out of Body (Poetry) - 3/20/2005 4:55:04 AM
powerful words
A Lesson In Passion (Poetry) - 3/10/2005 6:42:17 PM
I can only say what others before me have said. This is very beautiful sensual poetry with a softness behind it that one feels immediately.
Sherry
A Lesson In Passion (Poetry) - 1/28/2005 3:37:34 PM
beautiful flow, great imagery...especially like the soft sensuality in this...well done, Neale
A Lesson In Passion (Poetry) - 1/22/2005 2:46:23 PM
Well said, well said. Beautiful and touching.
A Lesson In Passion (Poetry) - 1/16/2005 11:35:13 AM
Beautiful. Touching my heart.
Thanks,
Mahdi
A Lesson In Passion (Poetry) - 1/11/2005 10:01:06 PM
Neala,
You're still the queen of beautiful language. Beautiful, sensual poem.
Bill
A Lesson In Passion (Poetry) - 1/4/2005 3:12:32 PM
This is a beautiful soaring poem that lingers in your mind long after you stopped reading it.
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