Recent Reviews for Sally Odgers
Spinning Pearls (Book) - 9/20/2011 7:47:20 PM|
I must investigate further, and I am about to finally publish something you edited for me soon, found a top illustrator in NZ here where I now live, and guess whose going in the credits? :)
TTYL keep you posted.
Spinning Pearls (Book) - 11/11/2007 8:55:36 AM
Sal, you are a genius at coming up with natural/fantastical imagery in your poetry. I'm so happy you are continuing with it in more books. Congrats, girl!! xoxo -- Sara
Jack Russell: Dog Detective. Dog Den Mystery (Book) - 11/13/2006 4:25:27 AM
Ventura comes to mind straight away lol, but i have to say, Jack Russell Dog Detective, that is kewl and would be a laugh, as my Daughter and SIL have just got themselves a JR PUP, he's a cutie.
My Cats a livid!!
Good to hear from you Sally
Jack Russell: Dog Detective. Dog Den Mystery (Book) - 11/10/2006 6:14:20 AM
Cars have windows. Dogs have noses.
When these things come together, one must be stuck out the other.
This is a fact.
It surely is, and my four mutts will swear to it! They also love a good Dog Detective book!
The Case of the Disappearing Dog (Book) - 6/28/2002 9:12:01 PM
This book excerpt has an "immediate presence" to it: you are instantly here with the character, from the moment you begin reading.
Candle Iron (Book) - 6/6/2002 11:13:39 PM
it was really great sally odgers has a fantastic imagination
Candle Iron (Book) - 6/6/2002 4:59:38 PM
fantastic book. I felt that it was really in depth but towards the end it lost that depth, it bacame a book where you knew what was going to.happenD
Candlelight (Short Story) - 5/8/2006 10:19:59 AM
Excellent write! :)
Splash. 50 word story (Short Story) - 10/9/2003 5:44:07 AM
It is close to Halloween 2003 and this is a good story for that, did she plot murder by accident? Chiller! Jackie <> <
Splash. 50 word story (Short Story) - 3/26/2003 8:20:19 AM
I agree! Nobody seems as interested in the stories. I wish they were also. But this story is super! I really like the way you said so much with so few words. Great job!
- J -
Splash. 50 word story (Short Story) - 3/16/2003 2:57:48 PM
I enjoyed your 50 word story even though short it had a picture I loved it !!! Longing to read more
Splash. 50 word story (Short Story) - 2/16/2003 7:55:09 AM
Wow! This one is profound and a bit chilling! Great job!
By the way, not only is 'other poems' clicked on but even more seldom is 'stories'. Wish more people would read our stories.
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/27/2007 7:17:44 PM
Chills ran down me throughout this one, Sal. The measured meter and ephemeral glimpses, that is so often you, always do it for me. And of course your last lines, as always, are wonderful:
"And should I prove to be dreaming
by temporal mischance,
may I come to you when you're dreaming too
Of course. And we shall dance."
Thanks for sharing,
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 6:45:39 PM
A most beautiful write, so passionate! Dance a wonderful dance from dream to dream to dream.....
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 3:02:18 PM
Very poetic and beautiful.
Blue skies and sunshine
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 12:37:40 PM
I like this, thanx 4 the verbs mate!
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 11:50:50 AM
Nice Waltzing Matilda, catchyer for the last dance...
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 10:07:34 AM
Wonderful write!! A future and now meet, or do they? Oh, the possibilties!
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 9:44:27 AM
I loved your use of the word "gloaming". It reminded me of the Glasgow Scotland song. Very beautiful
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 9:42:02 AM
Beautiful metaphors make this poem drift like a dream. Thank you for a few enjoyable moments while I read your poem.
Edge of Forever (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 8:45:29 AM
enjoyed the imagery, ambiance and concept ...
The Stable, the Star and the Cross (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 8:35:30 AM
Splendid and beautifully presented poem; very well done! :)
The Stable, the Star and the Cross (Poetry) - 12/24/2006 7:11:40 AM
This offering is a beautiful poem and filled with the Saviors Life and purpose for all that will receive his love. Thank You for posting this poem.
The Stable, the Star and the Cross (Poetry) - 12/23/2006 7:15:31 AM
Very beautifully written...you've told the story of our Savior with beautiful poetic words. Words that are inspiring and powerful. Enjoyed this very much, this poem would be a great selection to read at a church Christmas program...again enjoyed this very much. Merry Christmas.
The Hairy Fairy (Poetry) - 11/10/2006 6:06:51 AM
Quite a Hairy Fairy Tale, Sally!
Dogtime (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 7:43:18 AM
Mona Lisa (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 5:46:01 AM
An interesting take on a very controversial old Master, which by the way was pinched from the Palace the other day by Cats..
JK, I did the Cat O lisa, which concludes at trial this week LOL
Dogtime (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 5:41:53 AM
Yeah Dog years just don't add up the same, say if you find that time machine, can I loan it, I want my Sheppy back for a day :)
Intriguing write Sally, good to see you back again, missed yah.
Patricia's Hand (Poetry) - 12/2/2005 8:31:17 AM
Atlantis Fading (Poetry) - 2/21/2005 12:09:38 PM
I think you are right, Sally. Such a legend will never fade and, who knows, may well be proven true. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace. Regis
Weeping Avalon (Poetry) - 2/21/2005 12:08:07 PM
Reads like a ballad in a way. Nicely done, Sally. Love and peace. Regis
Danielle from Perth (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 1:08:36 AM
Why didnt I see this before?? She says indignantly :P
Must of been during a break I spose, but suffice to say tis rather brilliant.
Can you do mine, ( the real one that is) and private message me LOL
Weeping Avalon (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 1:02:34 AM
I have a fixation for Camelot and the days of Yore, so of course this one tickled my fancy.
Atlantis Fading (Poetry) - 2/1/2005 12:56:31 AM
Methinks this underwater utopia will never fade, though outa sight, never outa mind.
Intriguing and enjoyable Sal
Weeping Avalon (Poetry) - 1/31/2005 6:32:32 AM
Thank you, ladies! This is one of a series. I have two others (Valhalla Dreaming and Raising Lyonnesse) at the den so far.
Weeping Avalon (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 12:58:10 PM
Sally, this would rival Shakespeare's poetic eloquence. Great poem!
Weeping Avalon (Poetry) - 1/29/2005 6:18:07 AM
I liked this post on that old subject.
Living Will (Poetry) - 12/8/2004 1:48:15 PM
There's a lovely flow to this poem because of the rythm and the rhyme. Well done, Sally. Love and peace. Regis
Living Will (Poetry) - 10/11/2004 9:05:09 AM
I really like this poem. This poem appeals to me.
Sandie May Angel :o)
Marina (Poetry) - 8/28/2004 11:24:13 AM
Beautiful verses, Sally. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis
Marina (Poetry) - 8/25/2004 3:16:57 AM
Excellent images. This was a real pleasure to read.
Marina (Poetry) - 8/24/2004 5:55:39 PM
a striking piece
well crafted with a very economical use of language
Call Michael (Poetry) - 6/18/2004 5:16:06 AM
i like this
Call Michael (Poetry) - 3/26/2004 9:12:16 PM
Goosebumps and creepines .... Chills!
Wedding 57 (Poetry) - 3/26/2004 9:10:56 PM
This is just beautiful. Do you plan on including it in our book? :)
Wedding 57 (Poetry) - 3/23/2004 6:38:59 AM
Your'e not wrong Sally, boy it's a hard row to hoe!
Ty of this
Call Michael (Poetry) - 3/22/2004 6:27:36 PM
I shall never look at a signposting the same again.
Wedding 57 (Poetry) - 3/22/2004 6:26:49 PM
Enjoyed this. Nice rhyme.
Wedding 57 (Poetry) - 3/22/2004 6:22:01 PM
Nice one. It seems so easy to get out of relationships these days, it's neat to applaud those who stick with it.
Kitten Hyde (Poetry) - 3/13/2004 4:22:46 PM
Ha ha...this was great! I found out it's also true for dogs! ha ha..loved this,
Kitten Hyde (Poetry) - 3/12/2004 8:53:29 AM
aDORable write; so enjoyed~ Thanks for sharing!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Kitten Hyde (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 8:30:24 AM
Absolutely adorable! Sounds like one of mine when we have visitors.
Kitten Hyde (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 6:46:35 AM
Enjoyed this much!!!
Kitten Hyde (Poetry) - 3/10/2004 6:45:19 AM
LOLOLOL, at first stanza, rest is so true of cats, had plenty of furnature wrecked to prove it, great stuff:))
Culture/Clash (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 10:22:05 AM
Culture/Clash (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 7:53:50 AM
Please don't take offence. No, I only think it is coincidence. We poets many times do think alike as we are all humans and we do face the same problems daily.
I only posted my so that we both know that similarities do cross when we poets think alike.
I am not like that; I do not bring others down just because they happen to think alike. Afterall, we are all humans.
It has happened to me too before that I wrote on the same topic on one site and then another poet wrote on the same topic on another site, both talking about the same thing; but mine was posted 5 minutes earlier than hers. It was just plain coincidence...and yes, it happens all the time.
Please don't worry about anything. We are all here to enjoy and learn from each other.
Love your work,
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Culture/Clash (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 7:02:45 AM
Wow, there's a coincidence for you! I hope you'll accept my honest assurance that I've never seen or read your poem before? I wrote mine today after hearing about an incident in which a young woman of one colour was spat at by a young man of another, and, shortly afterwards, of a young woman of the second colour who was spat at by a young man of the first colour. This happened in different countries, and as far as I know none of the parties knew one another personally...
Culture/Clash (Poetry) - 12/14/2003 5:49:24 AM
I wish to say that this sounds like one of my poems which I had written in June 2001; and was posted in many websites, and have been critiqued by friends and critics. The idea of the difference is the same, even though the words are different. Here is my version which I had posted here in the den last month:
Of all people I know
I am the only one
who sips my coffee
from a stir stick.
You watch me -
consider me an oddity
as I wonder what you consider
I do things differently -
not what you normally do.
I look different -
not the same colour as your skin.
It is ironic:
does not mean
I am not as good as you;
does not mean I'm equal to more or less
in value than you.
I am different,
but so are you.
Copyright © SandieAngel :o)
June 28, 2001
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Doors and Windows (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 9:43:21 PM
I'd notice :)
Hey who else is gonna edit my spelling LOL
Picture Book Author (Poetry) - 11/14/2003 5:50:56 AM
Now where the Dickens have i heard this before :) Hmmmm it will come to me, A brilliant write sally
The Other Side of the World (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 9:34:40 PM
Sally!!!! What a touching tribute to our friendship!!! I love the lovely refrain:
"I have a friend who lives her life
On the other side of the world
We've neither spoken, touched, nor met,
This came when I needed it most.
Loads of Love,
Picture Book Author (Poetry) - 11/13/2003 6:28:35 PM
River (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 5:40:43 PM
really lovely imagery...
The Other Side of the World (Poetry) - 11/12/2003 6:02:32 AM
Lovely Sally, and so true, we can be across the other side, yet the bond is just as strong, TY :):)
River (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 8:37:39 AM
well crafted. great job
River (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 8:22:34 AM
River (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 3:41:39 AM
Wonderful poem, Sally.
River (Poetry) - 11/11/2003 1:47:38 AM
Interesting. I wrote about the river too, but here i am seeing what I did not know about the river. Beautiful and great lines. Thanks.
Letting Go (Poetry) - 10/28/2003 8:55:33 PM
Oh Sally, such simple verse -- yet it is the simplest that touch souls most. I assume this is about your daughter when she left home?
Letting Go (Poetry) - 10/27/2003 12:24:39 AM
Oh Shyte, :( Gonna cry. You know why, this is too much truth, and to the bone is crunches. Will try to remember these words of wisdom Sally. TY Lovely write.
Letting Go (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 9:24:26 AM
Letting go is one thing, but with that smile... sigh... emotive write... stay strong...
Letting Go (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 8:52:19 AM
This poem could be taken many different ways.
I loved it, well done.
Letting Go (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 8:40:43 AM
Ain't that the truth, well written!
Letting Go (Poetry) - 10/26/2003 8:03:15 AM
Letting go for me is the hardest too. Well done poem.
Sing Down the Years (Poetry) - 10/14/2003 4:36:06 AM
What is it about? Well, it's about putting things into perspective. When things get on top of us we can always reflect that whatever it is won't matter so much in the great scheme of things... but in case that thought is overwhelming or depressing, we can always live for the moment when we get it *right*- when we're in tune with our universe.
Sing Down the Years (Poetry) - 10/13/2003 7:06:23 PM
Another exquisite one, Sally -- but what is it about?!
Seawraiths (Poetry) - 10/13/2003 7:04:44 PM
"...close your eyes and be amazed
that the deep salt sea couldnt hold them" -- such a haunting, exquisite and eery tribute to The Titanic, that beautiful, doomed work.
Seven Bears (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 11:25:25 PM
Sally, "But who will love them after me?" is so powerful it ought to stand alone in the end. Just what me thinks!
Moonrise Over Home (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 11:22:37 PM
Can't beat those last two lines! Breathtaking view -- you're inspiring me to do some poems on recent life photos!
Sing Down the Years (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 5:37:56 AM
Thought provoking poem,
"And yet the man who lifts his head
The girl, who, pausing, hears
The singing of the heavens
Lilting down the years
May dance for just a moment
To the music of the spheres."
I love this bit, wouldn't it be nice to hear that. Jackie <> <
Seawraiths (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 5:34:02 AM
Quite an eerie poem, the thought of all those drowned people wandering ashore in the sea-mists. I am a bit puzzled by your summary statement. Jackie <> <
Seven Bears (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 5:28:02 AM
My computer's Monitor shelf and my printer top are home to several bears, I recently posted a poem about the two beanie bears on the printer. I think that Editor is probably an old fogey who never had a childhood! Personally, I am enjoying my second childhood and I enjoyed your poem too. Jackie <> <
Moonrise Over Home (Poetry) - 10/12/2003 5:22:43 AM
Lovely poem and lovely photo, looks so green and peaceful, even in the twi-light of evening. Jackie <> <
Seawraiths (Poetry) - 10/11/2003 10:27:11 PM
Woohoo, no wonder that one was a winner.
I can just visualize as I read, what and excellent write, IMHO, and ne'er a truer told story of the depths and its inhabitants.
Seven Bears (Poetry) - 10/11/2003 10:23:10 PM
I wonder why they didnt like it Sally, no sense of the inner child within us. But, for the record, I think bears are cute, cuddly and totally necessary.
I have on the end of my bed, a little goat, called Paddy, A white Rabbit, called Peter cottontail, and an Sheep called Ewan Mcgregor, LOL, and I dont give a toss hehe.
I like the poem, and it is an idividual choice, but for now, I'm content to behave as childish as I want, collecting farm animals.
Moonrise Over Home (Poetry) - 10/11/2003 6:15:02 PM
Thanks, Sandie... that really is my hometown, taken from my own front door two days ago!
Seven Bears (Poetry) - 10/11/2003 6:09:31 PM
This poem is cute in one way, but filled with philosophy in another. I love the use of the seven bears being in the cupboard. Yes, sometimes we do have to put things away, and move forward.
Love your write!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Moonrise Over Home (Poetry) - 10/11/2003 6:05:53 PM
This was nice, and I love the choice of the picture too.
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)
Moonrise Over Home (Poetry) - 10/11/2003 6:02:12 PM
breathtaking! I love it.
Boy to Man Part 1. (Poetry) - 10/10/2003 6:39:09 PM
Sally, this poem makes me cry. I see a profound simplicity in your poetry much like my own. If you would like to check-out some of my poems, go to www.authorsden.com/sarawebbquest and click "poetry."
Skinny Dipping (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 12:42:42 PM
A lovely poem. I really enjoyed this.
Skinny Dipping (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 7:33:54 AM
Haha!..Wonderful refreshing write!
Skinny Dipping (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 6:09:45 AM
Great poem! You brought back many happy skinny-dippin memories from my youth.
Skinny Dipping (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 6:04:42 AM
That piece brought back many enjoyable times. Thanks for refreshing my memory on this particular activity. Excellent poem
Skinny Dipping (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 5:40:41 AM
It's a long time since I went skinny dipping/nude sunbathing in a deserted forested valley, a low flying jet came through, I waved at him and a short time later he came back, probably with gunsight camera working! Great poem as usual, you obviously had a lot of fun. Jackie <> <
Skinny Dipping (Poetry) - 10/9/2003 5:27:56 AM
Ahhhh Devine, lucky you! What an honour teehee, to take a pic of the finnish lass. Ahem! Last time i went skinny dipping was nudist beach at Catherine hill bay NSW, lots o caves there, and tidal pools, mmmm heavenly. I love your way with words, Sally, as you have captured amusement and togetherness so nicely, for lack of a better word in my adled brain tonight.
Ockers Don't Play Soccer (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 7:14:33 AM
Your'e not wrong, sacriledge i may say so.
Great descriptive write, and I am highly amused at the latest developments between the wallabies and the Allblacks, it's hilarious. The Wallabies are going to do a corroboree dance come war cry, to match the Kiwi haka, fair go!!!
Kamate Kamate kura kura lolol
Now all we need is the didge
Tea (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 7:09:06 AM
Dont they serve decent tea anymore???
Yes i know, it's all fancy stuff, who knows what. Good on yah for making a point of this.
I like decent tea.
Toffee + Apple + Hmm (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 7:04:41 AM
Thus avoiding a broken tooth. Yum, simple and so sweet.
Royal Marriage Guidance (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 7:03:10 AM
Oh my word, the last line takes the cake, love it.
How yah been Sally?
Please Mum, What's an Ocker? (Poetry) - 9/4/2003 7:00:38 AM
Hehe You tell it like it is Sally, onya mate
Ockers Don't Play Soccer (Poetry) - 8/30/2003 10:45:51 PM
Such charming characters you describe, haha! Is there such a thing as an 'Ockeress' - if so, how would you describe her/them? Jackie <> <
Toffee + Apple + Hmm (Poetry) - 8/30/2003 10:43:31 PM
Tis better than 'going to waste,' scrumptious! Jackie <> <
Royal Marriage Guidance (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 1:05:16 PM
Loved the way this flowed and bounced about, brilliant write, well done...Mark xx
DVD TV (Poetry) - 8/18/2003 1:03:35 PM
You see very well, almost as good as you write, loved this for its obvious but not so much we all can see, well done, take care...Mark
Please Mum, What's an Ocker? (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 4:51:52 PM
This was great..learned something new!
Please Mum, What's an Ocker? (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 6:30:09 AM
Way kool! I often wondered what that was... :)
Please Mum, What's an Ocker? (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 1:38:48 AM
I love it! I'm going to save this one to my library and tell my Ozzie cousin about it! Jackie <> <
Ockers Don't Play Soccer (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 3:34:43 PM
what the heck is an ocker???? totally clueless!
fun, clever write, though...now that my tongue's tied in a knot LOL
(((HUGS))) and love,
Ockers Don't Play Soccer (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 12:26:21 PM
Excellant work and yikes a tongue twister indeed...can someone please help untie my tongue now!? ;O)
Ockers Don't Play Soccer (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 4:57:26 AM
Sally, well done. Quite a bit of a tongue twister.
DVD TV (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 4:21:08 AM
U C what CD & DVD can get into UR I-s?
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Boy to Man Part 2. (Poetry) - 5/13/2003 10:40:51 AM
Mercy...what a hunk !!!!
Sweet poem too.
Sleepy Girl Part 2. (Poetry) - 5/13/2003 1:00:56 AM
I think it is typically DOG :) I love K9s as they are God's way of cheering mankind when all else seems to fail. for e.g. it was my birthday today! Not much of anything happening, just one of those sort. My little Yorkie, who doesnt usually spend quite so much time by my side, never left my side today, and her big eyes told me that she was an angel in disguise to comfort me.
Sleepy Girl, your a gem, and you inspire your master, who in turn eloquently describes you.
Lovely write Sally.
Sleepy Girl Part 2. (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 11:51:14 AM
Oh my gooodies this is so sweet!!
Sleepy Girl Part 1. (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 10:37:12 AM
She looks like...."huh, what you takin' my picture for huh huh????" lol Great write....thanks, Dani
Sleepy Girl Part 2. (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 10:35:45 AM
That is a very sweet picture....awwwwwww. A lovely poem...Animals can become just like people....ty, Dani
Sleepy Girl Part 2. (Poetry) - 4/21/2003 6:27:01 AM
I have a Beagle that sleeps like that.
Toffee + Apple + Hmm (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 4:11:58 PM
hee hee this was hilarious nice job
Toffee + Apple + Hmm (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 3:28:07 PM
If it does, you can always wait for your waist to waste away!
Toffee + Apple + Hmm (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 10:18:57 AM
Once you get past the sugar, everything will be okay. [smiles] Cute poem.
Toffee + Apple + Hmm (Poetry) - 4/7/2003 7:57:41 AM
Sally, maybe it won't. It's all in the toffee. LOL
Nugget (Poetry) - 4/3/2003 11:41:33 AM
A thought-provoking piece. Forever is a long time. ~Joseph
Nugget (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 12:01:04 PM
a chance lost is gone and what we dont see under the surface is the true treasure awesome job on pointing that out
Nugget (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 9:13:53 AM
Sally, this is very good, but the nugget never knew it was dead. As a nugget it is in the full bloom of life. Bill
Nugget (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 8:36:58 AM
lovely write, and so like life, those who look only on the surface never see the gold underneath.
Nugget (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 6:26:06 AM
Sally, this is awesome. Such a wonderful reflection.
Nugget (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 5:56:45 AM
Nugget (Poetry) - 4/2/2003 5:29:26 AM
Un-Guessed (Poetry) - 3/31/2003 4:45:21 AM
Guess (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 11:03:37 AM
Sure sounds like JK Rowling.
Guess (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 11:01:05 AM
HUH?...you got me in a tight corner....I will never take a guess here......but You did a gteat job here.....lol
Guess (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 9:07:33 AM
no but its good
Guess (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 7:52:48 AM
Oh, my, could be so many...Piers Anthony, Anne McCaffrey, Zenna Henderson, Andre Norton, CS Lewis, Fritz Lieber...but your words have the flavor of JK Rowling. :) And a lovely write it is, Sally!
Guess (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 7:41:15 AM
Wow! This sure sounds great!.....but I don't know the author!...
Sandie Angel :o) a.k.a. May Lu $*_*$
The Girls, Tonight. (Poetry) - 3/30/2003 6:14:18 AM
Loveday, Lady (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 11:16:43 AM
that was cool and vividly fantastic awesome job on this
Loveday, Lady (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 10:47:55 AM
Loveday, Lady (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 10:41:56 AM
Inspired! Had visions of an abriginal wise women arms extended to the sky greeting nature.
Loveday, Lady (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 5:24:50 AM
Voice of Silence (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 10:54:41 AM
the voice of silence is empowered by its own uproar... excellent write
Rose Under Glass (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 10:36:20 AM
gorgeous, Sally. Well done.
Rose Under Glass (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 7:11:37 AM
Rose Under Glass (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 6:11:01 AM
... nice word play.
Rose Under Glass (Poetry) - 3/23/2003 3:04:27 AM
Voice of Silence (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 7:54:10 PM
This is lovely.
I carry silence with me always. I am deaf, but I do remember the beauty of sound.
Voice of Silence (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 7:49:40 PM
Voice of Silence (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 7:41:19 PM
This was lovely and thought provoking, the only silence I find is within myself,
A beautiful poem for inner peace,
Why Can't We... (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 9:46:47 PM
Why Can't We... (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 12:56:33 PM
Excellent observations ..excellent write!!
Why Can't We... (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 1:06:49 AM
Excellent observations and writing. Well done, Sally.
Why Can't We... (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 11:36:45 PM
NOw that is some observation.
Well done, Sally.
Glad I stopped by to read.
Made me smile.
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 5:27:31 AM
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/20/2003 3:10:15 AM
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 10:35:09 PM
Sally, you always come up with the most unusual subjects. Great write and great lesson for everyone who ever doubted themselves.
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 9:47:36 PM
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 8:04:24 PM
I'm still wondering how planes can fly.
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 7:52:45 PM
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 7:51:15 PM
Very good message love the art.
Impossibility (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 7:50:24 PM
There is a message.. This is wonderous write.. Good for you.. Finding something in nature to inspire us all.. to new heights.
James' Eyes (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 12:50:02 PM
I see my little guy's dad every day the same --SAME way...I liked this :) Teresa
Wedding Dress (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 12:48:56 PM
Ha ha...I love these dresses... Very good job. Teresa
Wedding Dress (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 12:19:27 PM
wonderful poem here nice job
Wedding Dress (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 6:39:40 AM
stunning dress (and daughter!)
Wedding Dress (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 6:19:04 AM
Ha! Loved this, excellent!
Wedding Dress (Poetry) - 3/19/2003 5:08:17 AM
Tess Surprised (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 8:03:12 AM
LOL HEE HEE this was so cute hee hee
Tess Surprised (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 7:54:14 AM
Tess Surprised (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 7:13:46 AM
I enjoyed this one--delightful write and pet!
Tess Surprised (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 6:42:43 AM
Adorable one here.
Tess Surprised (Poetry) - 3/18/2003 4:03:36 AM
Heehee! She's a darling! A cute one! Love the pic and this little poem!
Sandie Angel :o)
Sky Blue (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:10:50 PM
"Holding Heaven's hue" really says it all for me. What a nice feeling that must've been. Thank you for showing us all what it was like.
A Kind of Competence (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:05:42 PM
Gotta say that I enjoyed this one. Made me smile. Glad you liked "Bamboo". And no, you're not weird for liking it. I am for writing it. See ya later Sally-gator!
Temptation of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 8:31:40 PM
that is an excellent observation awesome job on this poem
Temptation of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 3:44:21 PM
Excellent poem, Sally. Beautiful reflections in this solid write.
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 2:54:00 PM
Very nice !
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/16/2003 8:54:42 AM
spiritual and awesome
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 9:43:37 AM
Reads like a lullaby. Soft and serene. I could fall into your words
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 9:02:37 AM
very spiritual and awesome nice job on this fantastic poem
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 6:55:25 AM
Short but to the point...simply excellent!!!
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 6:15:53 AM
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 11:56:18 PM
Ah, galaxy, my galaxy, where do you lie? How lucky you are, Sally!! Sweet little write! :)
Galaxy (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 11:12:27 PM
Neat. So much said in such few words.
Really enjoyed the reading of it.
Flora in Antiquity (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:36:59 PM
Great write. Perhaps, Flora lives on in you.
Flora in Antiquity (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 6:25:05 PM
Brought a smile. Good one.
Day of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:53:35 AM
Lovely ode to the rose.
Day of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 10:13:59 AM
I do hope that flower is blooming nicely wonderful is this poem great job on it
Day of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 9:19:37 AM
Beauty with deeper meaning expressed in words. Congrats! Sally.
Day of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 4:27:47 AM
Sally, fine write.
Day of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 4:18:35 AM
"Day Of The Rose" bears the nectar of knowledge asking for dews of JUSTICE.
I Salute the Author.
Long Life, health and Inspiration.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Day of the Rose (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 3:54:44 AM
Flora (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 10:41:39 PM
Nice invitation, good poem, simply and sweet.
Ace Smiles (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 10:01:07 PM
Ace is really very cute! A lovely poem Sally.
Unicorn Question (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:53:04 PM
We all have a talent , some never know their's .. But you captured the essence of a wondering and mystical mind that we all should experience at least once in a while. Keep floating in your mind and catch that dream we all wish we had.. This was great . Keep up the good work. God Bless
My Eyes (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:45:22 PM
They say the eyes are the mirror of our soul. This must be true, because as I look at your eyes they tell of someone that is still longing to capture something that has never ben found you think. But what I think is that you know what is and what is not to be and have come to accept and enjoy the things that you do have.. God Bless and don't think of what can't be changed because only God knows Our Fate. God Bless
Love Song of an Anonymous Girl (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:38:05 PM
You are getting better because you are putting in your secret about the wondering you must have did when you daydream of what if, and what will be. God Bless
The Weaver (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:34:13 PM
god gave you the compassion to be able to express and feel the things that most people only dream of being able to feel. God Bless
Flora (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:31:17 PM
Nice simple straight forward poem.
James' Eyes (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:31:10 PM
I can feel the motherly love for your son and I can see his love from the eyes looking at me and that's the way he feels about you dear mother. God Bless.
Sky Blue (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:25:35 PM
God gave you the insight to feel and see what most people would like to be able to see and feel. Keep up the good work. God Bless
Ace Smiles (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:18:06 PM
They keep getting better. Lots of luck and
Flora (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:14:33 PM
Keep up the good works.It was beautiful without writting many words. God Bless
Ace Smiles (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 7:42:34 PM
A boy's best friend! :-) Nice write.
A Kind of Competence (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 3:56:07 PM
A Kind of Competence (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 12:19:57 PM
And the muse has spoken.
Good one. A keeper.
A Kind of Competence (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 10:50:28 AM
this was hilariously funny doing battle against a stubbornidea likte taht nice job
A Kind of Competence (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 10:19:21 AM
LOL this one is a delight
A Kind of Competence (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 8:12:45 AM
Sky Blue (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 7:49:57 AM
Sky Blue (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 7:44:19 AM
I love it all Sally.....but I really like those last two lines.....Thanks, Dani
Sky Blue (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 7:41:39 AM
This is super......one can stare in the sky blue as easily as someone's beautiful eyes.
Sky Blue (Poetry) - 3/13/2003 7:40:42 AM