Recent Reviews for Carrie A Deveney
Untitled as of yet (Short Story) - 5/9/2005 6:36:44 PM|
Interesting write it seems to be missing something or other where it says "Insert Computer...) but and could use a little more info about main character but has definate promise. Run with it girl.
Untitled as of yet (Short Story) - 5/9/2005 2:42:07 PM
i like it! well done! :)
Untitles as of now (Short Story) - 2/19/2005 1:22:50 PM
Unedited you say -- don't change a thing because you did a decent job writing this one. I've been at the horror genre for 14 years and will say you do have a talent for writing it. I hope you take a darker turn with your style because you show a talent that will stand for a long time to come. Just don't let some of the established writers out there corrupt it.
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 8:01:15 AM
this piece is both classical in its flavor and flow. Outstanding work!
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 10/24/2005 8:57:11 AM
Somebody mentioned the painting but for me it also called to mind a poem by one of the French Romantics (Baudelaire I think, but don't trust me on that)
I do like that moody nineteenth century stuff - its like a Leonard Cohen song, quite uplifting in that it has a hypnotic effect.
Jaded (Poetry) - 10/18/2005 9:48:39 AM
the feel of passion rushing is certainly addictive, one of the strongest affirmations that we are alive...especially when so much else in life attempts to deaden our spirits...
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 10/11/2005 10:32:59 AM
what a sad, beautiful write. you got the feel of melancholy across very well, with the invocation of the tragic ophelia, and such beautiful natural descriptions.
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 8/27/2005 7:54:26 AM
Most enchanting, Carrie. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you.
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 9:02:51 AM
Absolutely outstanding, This is excellent.
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 7/29/2005 9:13:25 AM
This brings about thoughts of Millais' painting. Lovely.
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 7/28/2005 9:26:36 AM
very vivid imagery and atmosphere in this poem ... in "Hamlet" Ophelia is found with here dress spread open, leaving her looking like a flower ... i like how you took this theme into another level ... it has a dream-like quality to it ... i'm just a little confused why she waits for "a century later" to be never thawed ... overall, i like the affect of this poem ...
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 8:52:02 PM
A beautiful write, Carrie, haunting and timeless with wonderful word relationships, like quickly and splashes, and the leaves covering the maiden while the river does the same, by dragging her down, flowing and floats, garland and icy beauty.
A masterful poem that leaves the reader wondering ... why. The only hint is the name Ophelia, which is all, and nothing. Unless, the blue lips and purple-rimmed eyes have a deeper meaning than the winter cold...
Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen
Cycle (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 5:36:07 PM
Powerful reality statement that is so true in many parts of this world today.
Jaded (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 5:34:26 PM
Beautifful poe;m of love and hope.
Ophelia in the River (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 5:30:50 PM
Mystical and poignant write that leaves the reader wondering the maidens true story is.
Cycle (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 12:00:02 PM
Sometimes truth is very brutal -- powerful words.
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/16/2005 3:18:04 PM
very provacative, excellent imagery and methaphor
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/14/2005 11:21:45 AM
this read like some existential riddle, and i found myself searching for the answer in the lines you'd written. i'm not sure if i found them, either. lol a thoughtful work, poet. you definitely drew me in.
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/11/2005 6:07:23 PM
Credit For Write...
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/11/2005 12:18:36 AM
A very powerful write
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/10/2005 4:11:41 PM
Very powerful and beautiful rendering of martyrdom
thanks for sharing
love and peace
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/10/2005 1:57:26 PM
A woman with a higher purpose and vision in every step... seems like a Phoenix-write to me, Carrie! Having a cause one is prepared to die for perhaps make sense of living. Love the cleanness of your lines and the crispness of your message. A wonderful poetic crucible, thank you. Kate x
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/10/2005 10:55:05 AM
True rendering of your character, Carrie. Some need their pain and embrace it. Fine write...
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/10/2005 9:35:17 AM
Superb capture of a martyred moment!
Blessings to you,
The Martyr (Poetry) - 6/10/2005 8:46:56 AM
Very in deep look at what this women is walking away from or walking to.
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/9/2005 4:40:05 PM
a delightful read indeed ...
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/9/2005 2:46:00 PM
So beautiful, romantic and gentle!
God bless, Carrie.
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/9/2005 12:17:05 PM
So very lovely, this was just beautiful,
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/6/2005 6:35:14 AM
Beautiful. This write is soft and flowing.
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 6:14:18 PM
romance at its best
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 2:37:47 PM
Nice romantic write, exquisitely done.
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 1:22:39 PM
This touches the heart and the imagination with a longing to possess such a love as this for one's own. Beautifully expressed piece.
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 12:28:53 PM
Toxic love. You've used your muse well express it's poison...
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 12:25:55 PM
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 12:20:22 PM
Wonderful romantic write.
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 9:26:35 AM
Very soft and rythmic poem
The Lover (Poetry) - 6/2/2005 9:08:04 AM
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 5/29/2005 5:29:49 PM
There is nothing quite so demeaning as feeling used and discarded. This was both imaginative and visceral and I liked it very much.
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 5/23/2005 6:28:09 AM
"Among the dirt and ashes of your lies" Excellent line.
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 5/22/2005 5:55:25 PM
emotively powerful poetry, revealing the pain of a past relationship ... thanx for sharing this intense poem, Carrie ...
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 5/20/2005 7:48:59 AM
The imagery emphasizes the emotive strength and powerful meaning of this piece. Well done, Carrie. Love, peace, and strength to you. Regis
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 5/19/2005 9:58:31 AM
This cuts so deeply into my heart, so raw and painful, excellently expressed,
Awaken (Poetry) - 5/18/2005 2:45:13 AM
You weren't real.
Just a lost soul that never was.
...Oh ..the pain in this piece..my heart is thunderring...sigh
A Day Unmedicated (Poetry) - 5/18/2005 2:43:10 AM
I love the way you SEE..indeed there's a medium there somewhere within you..a most unique soul...YOU are!!
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 5/18/2005 2:40:13 AM
She’s seen things
I’ve only dreamed.
..you can SEE as well..open your heart..
Beautiful piece ..love it! Saved it ty Carrie!
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 5/18/2005 2:38:18 AM
You made me do it!
And part of me will always hate you for that.
..oh I do hope this is NOT a bigraphical..if so..forgivness is screaming at you..forgive = for give (ing)..
very heart-wrenching piece..
it is well written.
Broken Doll (Poetry) - 5/17/2005 6:36:52 PM
This may be dark but it is also ultra dramatic and vividly expressive. You really digestd your topic and spit it out whole as a great piece of art.
The Owl (Poetry) - 5/14/2005 10:18:45 AM
I have always had a fascination for owls. I love the way you did this. Thank you, Carrie. Love and peace. Regis
Awaken (Poetry) - 5/14/2005 10:17:40 AM
Makes one think, Carrie. Well done. Love and peace to you. Regis
Awaken (Poetry) - 5/11/2005 6:06:08 PM
wow, excellent write!
Awaken (Poetry) - 5/11/2005 2:06:27 PM
Thought provoking write!
Awaken (Poetry) - 5/9/2005 6:39:04 PM
Sad, well written, powerful. Henry
Awaken (Poetry) - 5/9/2005 4:04:29 PM
Why You Have Dreams To Dream Upon!
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 5/9/2005 12:21:16 PM
Fantastic imagery and meaning...
The Owl (Poetry) - 5/9/2005 12:19:12 PM
I've read of owls being the harbingers of death. This takes that belief to a deeper level. Great write, Carrie...
The Owl (Poetry) - 4/27/2005 6:13:30 PM
i luv the perspective of this wise poem ...
The Owl (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 8:40:55 PM
An interesting write....very creative!
Whooo would have thought Owl would make for such a great poem?
You I guess :)
The Owl (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 10:31:31 AM
The Owl (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 10:18:39 AM
Excellent write Carrie...such patient creatures owls.
The Owl (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 10:02:43 AM
when i was back in ohio, i was awakened by a great horned owl; he was sitting on the neighbor's roof, hooting. that was what woke me up. it was kind of scary, but it was also exciting! nice write, carrie; i love owls!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
The Owl (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 9:21:14 AM
i never thought of owls gathering the souls but they are eerie enough to imagine it. would his name then be shamuel
The Owl (Poetry) - 4/26/2005 9:16:12 AM
Excellent cryptic write. I love owls;-)
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/25/2005 1:41:23 PM
Awesome write that leaves an imprint on your mind.
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/25/2005 12:18:27 PM
An inspired vision.
Love & Light,
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/25/2005 10:46:33 AM
This was lovely, so very beautiful, excellent poetry,
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/20/2005 11:07:12 AM
thought provoking write. Well done.
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/20/2005 9:43:12 AM
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/20/2005 9:32:16 AM
Peace and sunshine
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/20/2005 8:23:34 AM
This is vibrant and sharp look at what truth means to you the poet but it transcends over to the reader making them consider their own evaluations of what they believe. This is a great thing to do for any writer.
Goddess of Truth (Poetry) - 4/20/2005 8:13:56 AM
Truths do tend to come with flames of pain but it does clean us doesn't it? Great write. Love the descriptions.
Dance of Spring (Poetry) - 4/18/2005 9:12:46 AM
I like this one too. You are certainly well into this nature based spirituality aren't you?
Good on ya!
Blessing (Poetry) - 4/18/2005 9:09:20 AM
Nice other worldly feel to this one Carrie and good "moon" images. The cadences of your words serve this free verse (I should say "stressed syllable line" but that's just getting too technical) style well and suggest variations of tome and pace that make it a pleasure to read.
Blessing (Poetry) - 4/17/2005 7:52:30 AM
Blessing (Poetry) - 4/16/2005 4:23:53 PM
Blessing (Poetry) - 4/15/2005 8:43:14 PM
I find this captivating in mysterious poetic "aura." Thank you for sharing this offering, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis
Blessing (Poetry) - 4/15/2005 1:21:54 PM
What a magical and mystical write that pulls at somthing deeper and even wiser then religion or science. Wonderful write Carrie,
Blessing (Poetry) - 4/15/2005 12:19:31 PM
how pretty, this flows nicely
The Body (Poetry) - 4/14/2005 10:46:57 AM
The Body (Poetry) - 4/12/2005 5:00:09 PM
an extreme sense of desolation and alienation in this powerful poem ...
Battered (Poetry) - 4/9/2005 6:27:28 PM
Powerfully expressed and most à propos, Carrie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
The Body (Poetry) - 4/9/2005 6:26:28 PM
Wow! The imagery serves to enhance the meaning of these verses so strongly that they will not be denied a reading and another... ...and another. Thank you for sharing this offering, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis
The Body (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 1:43:37 PM
this is very interesting, as brian said, the imagery for sure but the entire poem gives a haunting feeling
The Body (Poetry) - 4/8/2005 1:15:33 PM
Haunting imagery. I can actually smell the decay..
Dance of Spring (Poetry) - 4/7/2005 10:37:33 AM
oh how beautiful, spring of the
Dance of Spring (Poetry) - 4/6/2005 11:01:53 PM
delightful spring poetry ...
The Ocean is Lonely in Winter (Poetry) - 4/5/2005 9:45:56 AM
I can relate to what you write and can feel your innermost emotions as an outpouring...
Looking back on my life..I survived the rough road as you have an encourage you to keep writing. It will help you along the way and pave the way for your publishing
Battered (Poetry) - 4/5/2005 6:56:35 AM
Oh this is outstanding, I pray every battered woman finds the courage to leave, excellent,
Battered (Poetry) - 4/3/2005 12:43:59 AM
An honest portrayal of the battered woman psyche. It's never easier to stay - no matter what they say.
Battered (Poetry) - 4/1/2005 6:32:16 PM
this poem is a stark glimpse into a battered woman's ability to overcome being abused and bring to her the peace she deserves ... emotionally powerful poem, Carrie ...
Battered (Poetry) - 4/1/2005 10:56:24 AM
Dreams Lost (Poetry) - 3/30/2005 9:09:32 PM
nicely penned! what's here today may be gone tomorrow ...
Dreams Lost (Poetry) - 3/30/2005 5:24:39 PM
Beautiful images and not overly pessimistic as much as wistful and dreamy. I think you did a great write here.
Dreams Lost (Poetry) - 3/30/2005 2:56:33 PM
Very intriguing! I like!
Little Urn (Poetry) - 3/29/2005 2:51:39 PM
I agree with Retta, this conjures up all kinds of images that the reader must draw conclusions on. Is the urn the ashes of a cruel parent, husband, lover? Is it just an empty bottle where you mentally store your emotions? Is it yesterdays Coke bottle that just happened to unleash your thoughts? No matter it set in motion a fantastic write. Well done Carrie.
Little Urn (Poetry) - 3/29/2005 12:55:45 PM
Powerful images and verses, this is excellent poetry,
Mother Moon (Poetry) - 3/27/2005 7:12:19 PM
the light of the moon always casts a light upon the shadows surrounding us ... you are now gifted with sight ...
I Sit Alone (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 8:06:12 PM
I can so relate to the way you express your soul; thank you for sharing, Carrie. Love and peace from my soul to yours. Regis
Drops (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 8:04:42 PM
I've seen what you describe. You did this beautifully. I love the way you write, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis
The Lonely Woman (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 8:03:18 PM
I LOVE the way you write, Carrie. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace. Regis
Mother Moon (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 8:02:21 PM
I love the moon and her magical spells. You do her a great homage with this beautiful creation. Thank you, Carrie. Love and peace. Regis
Mother Moon (Poetry) - 3/25/2005 8:47:51 AM
Mother Once (Poetry) - 3/23/2005 9:51:11 AM
Powerfully emotive and meaningful. A compelling poem, Carrie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/23/2005 9:46:25 AM
Once again you've reached right into my soul with your verses, Carrie. I find this emotively meaningful and I can relate totally to it. Thank you. Love and peace to you. Regis
Despondency and Hope (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:12:28 PM
Soul reaching write, Carrie. Your verses surely reached the depth of my soul. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Liberty Lost (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:11:02 PM
You are a powerful poetic voice. Your imagery enhances the meaning of your creation. Plus, your brevity of words is refreshing. Thank you, Carrie. Love and peace to you. Regis
Saved (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:09:29 PM
Some people think they write poetry. Some people write poetry. You write poetry. This is very soul grasping. Thank you, Carrie. Love and peace. Regis
Ragdoll (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:08:22 PM
Oh, you have portrayed the sickness of depression so well, Carrie. Great job. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Trigger (Poetry) - 3/22/2005 8:07:20 PM
So few words that express such powerful emotion and meaning; so well done. Thank you, Carrie. Regis
Trigger (Poetry) - 3/21/2005 4:21:46 PM
agree with felix here
dark yet oh so real
enjoyed the fleeting pain
Trigger (Poetry) - 3/16/2005 5:12:44 PM
As per the emptiness of feeling lost and when the hope starts to dwindle maybe the trigger finger justs gets a little itchy.
Trigger (Poetry) - 3/16/2005 4:29:57 PM
Yes it is thought provoking because I have known people who have had their fingers on the trigger literally and in fact.
Trigger (Poetry) - 3/16/2005 2:08:36 PM
Thought provoking... at one time or another, many think of that trigger... but a little faith often brings solace...
Ragdoll (Poetry) - 3/15/2005 6:55:43 PM
I've ridden on that emotional rollercoaster a time or two myself so I know how rough it can be and how emotionally drained it can leave you. However as you say the ride comes to a stop sooner or later.
Ragdoll (Poetry) - 3/15/2005 4:19:49 PM
Well as Sue says this is a terrible swing to be on and sometimes I think that it happens to me but I put that in my background a while back and hope that it does not come out again.
Ragdoll (Poetry) - 3/15/2005 12:52:50 PM
this is a terrible seesaw to be on, as many of us are aware...but there is hope...somewhere
Saved (Poetry) - 3/14/2005 5:22:31 PM
Very insightful. I never thought of a shadow in that way before.
Liberty Lost (Poetry) - 3/14/2005 3:21:09 PM
Two home runs in one day, this is also one hell of a great write and begs the reader to look at what you are saying of the deaths of the innocent. You have done well in both these works today.
Saved (Poetry) - 3/14/2005 3:19:04 PM
This is one of your best and I love the vivid flattened and pillared images so real to the mind. Great work of art.
Saved (Poetry) - 3/14/2005 1:44:41 PM
Excellent metaphor, intense poem, superbly written!
Saved (Poetry) - 3/14/2005 11:27:30 AM
Good images use of words. Good poem. Henry
Saved (Poetry) - 3/14/2005 11:10:06 AM
well done, substance and shadow in this poem.
The Ocean is Lonely in Winter (Poetry) - 3/12/2005 1:32:18 PM
Lovely and meaningful, Carrie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
The Ocean is Lonely in Winter (Poetry) - 3/8/2005 9:12:51 AM
Excellent imagery and wisdom!!!!
very well done
The Ocean is Lonely in Winter (Poetry) - 3/7/2005 8:59:08 PM
MY ocean is never lonely, it always has me there to talk to...Ed
The Ocean is Lonely in Winter (Poetry) - 3/7/2005 12:13:08 PM
well done :)
The Ocean is Lonely in Winter (Poetry) - 3/7/2005 10:40:21 AM
So dramatic and sweet that it stirs the old seamans blood running thru my veins.
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/5/2005 7:42:40 AM
deep painful write......i agree with Sue
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/4/2005 2:32:47 PM
from the pain, comes understanding and once you've attained understanding, you can only grow...now if it just didn't hurt so damned much huh
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/3/2005 7:45:06 AM
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/2/2005 12:46:54 PM
the end of one cycle, is the beginning of a new one........and the chance to grow......reading this I see the positive side of possibilities......
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/2/2005 5:58:08 AM
Your heart shows in each line.
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/1/2005 11:53:18 AM
I can relate a little too well right now.
Sometimes poems are mirrors, and we need to know to fix a bad hair day.
Indifference (Poetry) - 3/1/2005 10:52:58 AM
One of the saddess emotions that we force ourselves to use as a defence is indifference. I have also used it in the past when I've grown to tired to fight, argue and yes to love. There is a bright side though it is a self inflicted emotion and can be lifted when and if we decide to.
Despondency and Hope (Poetry) - 3/1/2005 10:49:20 AM
Without the odd patch of despondency we could not fully appreciate the wonders of hope and the promise of tomorrow or the lessons of the past. Nice write Carrie, deep.
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/26/2005 9:11:49 PM
Such a romantic write...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/25/2005 12:24:25 PM
A beautiful and passionate write...well done!
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/21/2005 12:27:28 PM
Sensually beautiful as it characterises your style.
Makes a vivid reading.
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2005 2:42:04 PM
very romantic...i remember that feeling, like the lungs are too full for another breath
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/18/2005 1:58:56 PM
You leave no doubts as to your feelings. Wonderfully expressed, Carrie. Love and peace. Regis
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/16/2005 1:16:57 PM
I agree this is indeed a passionate write.
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/16/2005 9:14:29 AM
very passionate write :-)
Conflagration of Love (Poetry) - 2/16/2005 8:17:07 AM
Very passionate write and so deeply said from the heart. You cnvey your message well.
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/12/2005 2:01:04 PM
Excellent!! Could be the Earth, could be a person, you've penned a complex, but dynamic poem! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Storm in your eyes (Poetry) - 2/12/2005 1:59:45 PM
Stunning imagery and heartfelt emotion--BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Storm in your eyes (Poetry) - 2/12/2005 1:05:12 PM
Emotively and meaningfully enthralling verses, Carrie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Storm in your eyes (Poetry) - 2/12/2005 11:12:37 AM
Wonderful imagery and a beautiful painting of an image seen and percieved.
Love from India - Joel -
Storm in your eyes (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 7:32:36 PM
Oh Carrie, this was outstanding, beautifully expressed, loved this,
Storm in your eyes (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 1:52:03 PM
Unrequited love is like this a thunder storm. A very compelling write.
Storm in your eyes (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 9:53:41 AM
this is beautiful in its strife
sometimes the most attractive
things in our lives are the most
obscure and intangible
Storm in your eyes (Poetry) - 2/11/2005 8:22:19 AM
What they say about the eyes not lying is true and if you look you can read so much in someones eyes and I think you have read and transferred your reading so well in this write. Well done Carrie.
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 5:13:26 PM
ilove this kind of poetry!!!
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/8/2005 10:31:45 AM
This is excellent and lovely, great feeling and observation.
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/7/2005 1:06:30 PM
Interesting, well-written poem. I love the mystery woven within.
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/7/2005 12:54:19 PM
This could be about a person, or even about the planet earth
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/7/2005 11:26:37 AM
Scars are like tattooes,
It reminds one of agony,
painted in a canvass of
Keep writing. I resonate with you in this one.
Your friend from Nigeria.
Emeka Chike Nwogu
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 2:44:32 PM
Interesting perspective and compelling poem overall, Carrie. Thank you. Love and peace. Regis
Drops (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 3:44:02 AM
I have never heard of raindrops looked at in such a marvellous way and I'm not sure if theintended analogy here is about humans but it sure compares well when you say "Each their own journey, but all end as puddles." I love this one Carrie, keep up the good words.
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/6/2005 3:40:54 AM
Your obvious love for literature (and perhaps the classics) always shines through. This is a poem truly worth publication, great stuff.
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/5/2005 6:12:30 PM
This is a unique and interesting write here.
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/5/2005 4:38:41 PM
Interesting vein you've tapped here. I wonder if this poem is about anybody in particular?
Her Scars (Poetry) - 2/5/2005 4:14:42 PM
hmm...scars to athenians
what a divide
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 6:42:13 PM
Gripping and powerful imagery here of abuse captured wonderfully in the language of the poet. Well done.
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 6:34:15 PM
Empowerment and freedom, Carrie. That's what your verses convey to me. Love, peace and strength to you. Regis
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 4:39:14 PM
Very powerful poem! Well done!
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 2:55:54 PM
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 11:19:26 AM
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 11:05:38 AM
yes i love the ending of this
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 11:05:15 AM
This sounds a lot like my post called How Do You Like Me Now? Yes you take your life back.
Slave No More (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 10:59:43 AM
And the mighty rise up and go forth! Well said. :)
I Sit Alone (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 10:51:13 AM
Definetly an excellent write.
I Sit Alone (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 10:18:21 AM
excellent write, carrie; thanks for sharing! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Naked (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 10:00:06 AM
The fresh face of passion. There are a few lines in this piece that stand out for me such as,
"Pad softly with my paws
Into spaces of embarrassment"
"It loses something that way
I’ll rip off my skin and show it to you"
I Sit Alone (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 9:57:23 AM
Your ending attests to youthful resilience which I hope stands you in good stead for a long time to come. *I Sit Alone* is a well crafted piece that flows smoothly when read aloud. :)
Holy Bones (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 9:51:02 AM
I Sit Alone (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 9:48:27 AM
Intriguing and expressive write, Carrie. Well done!
The Lonely Woman (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 8:52:25 AM
Wow so beautiful in its simplistic capture of how one alone feels so often.
I Sit Alone (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 8:48:56 AM
Old houses and being alone always seem to be a recipe for looking back and rflecting on our lifes. You covered this lost love so eloquenttly in this poem. Well done.
I Sit Alone (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 8:32:20 AM
wish i had one of those...a heart that cannot break. good poem
The Lonely Woman (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 8:16:55 AM
Excellent poem! Wonderful metaphor!
Naked (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 7:54:03 AM
I love this one. This a freshness in it.
The Lonely Woman (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 7:28:52 AM
I visited my countryside recently. Your poem painted an accurate
picture of what I saw.
She is indeed not alone. A nice input.
The Lonely Woman (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 6:49:11 AM
Yes this reminds me of the woman in my love letters.
The Lonely Woman (Poetry) - 2/4/2005 6:46:24 AM
Mother Once (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 1:29:20 PM
Very haunting write full of gut emotions.
A Day Unmedicated (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 1:26:02 PM
Love the creative way you work with images and thoughts. Great write.
Naked (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 1:24:27 PM
Very insightful write. I can see I'm am going to enjoy the freshness of your written work.
Rain Falls Down (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 1:22:14 PM
Rain can be very refreshing, as is this poem. Thank you for dropping by my port and for your suggestions.
Rain Falls Down (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 12:14:35 PM
There is something about the rain, isn't there? To this day, I still like to stand in it, walk in it. This is a delightul work, Carrie.
Rain Falls Down (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 10:01:21 AM
This is a really refreshing poem that you have written.
Rain Falls Down (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 9:41:40 AM
You and me both. The neighbours must think I'm bonkers, I so love the rain. The harder the better..
Rain Falls Down (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 8:51:20 AM
This was so beautiful, very lovely poetry!
Rain Falls Down (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 8:18:50 AM
Beautifully written and expressed! Welcome to the Den!
Rain Falls Down (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 7:27:16 AM
Excellent. Have you ever read my piece "I rained poetry"? Evokes the rain as a metaphor and there is a line "the thought of you, naked in the rain" that came to mind as I read this.
I am editing this to include a link to where you can find the piece online...it was part of my 2002 interview with "poetry Life and Times"
Holy Bones (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 6:28:37 AM
i like this one
Mother Once (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 6:27:40 AM
Embitterment (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 6:27:05 AM
A Moment (Poetry) - 2/3/2005 6:25:35 AM
nicely done -- john+