War and the Temple (Short Story) - 7/18/2005 11:18:38 AM
excellent story, peter; very well done! bravo!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Rhinoceros (Short Story) - 6/6/2005 1:13:14 PM
Holy s--t, this is powerful stuff. The imagery is among the best you've conjured so far. Slightly spooky, metaphysical, and so poetic you almost forget it's prose. Hope to see more developments on this project soon!
Love, A.
Rhinoceros (Short Story) - 5/31/2005 8:41:12 AM
An ambitiously planned and powerfully themed literary vision that promises to deliver an exceptional contribution to modern letters. You have a gift for making the spiritual concrete and the material numinous so that your prose achieves a kind of incandescent conceptual synthesis of music and poetry that makes it a true pleasure to experience. I wish you a rich and fulfilling journey on your way to completing this extraordinary work.
Aberjhani
Costa Rica (Short Story) - 4/13/2005 8:40:49 PM
An exhilarating excursion into the shadowed edges of human consciousness by way of the external wilds of the natural and civilized world. This visually voluptuous and aesthetically tasty literary brew might have been stirred up by Borges, Kafka, and McKenna, all waking up one morning swapping visions and nightmares. A superbly accomplished and boldly gorgeous work of prose.
Costa Rica (Short Story) - 4/7/2005 5:16:54 AM
Beautifully written - I look forward to reading more of your work. I love how you've 'worked the words' - well done...
Haiku (Poetry) - 1/29/2009 5:25:31 PM
lovely imagery
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At the Ending of the Day (Poetry) - 8/17/2007 12:30:36 PM
Birds in flight know their way home by the instinct within them regardless of what gets in their way. Nice portrayal in a multiplicity of images.
At the Ending of the Day (Poetry) - 8/17/2007 10:43:08 AM
I love the images portrayed...beautifully.Jen
September (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 2:39:04 AM
The painting is powerful as an entirety, and I think that the “chromatic wind’ sounds very well. It may be appropriate as a title for a collection.
Vasile
Pour Ecstasy (Poetry) - 6/3/2007 11:45:00 AM
I write such simple poetry and I'm always awed when I read the work of those who can write so eloquently, moulding words with seeming effortless skill to create works of arts such as this piece. I write from my heart but I'm trying to stretch my mind further and this wondrous work inspires me to go that little bit further. Thank you.
Chanti
The Ganges (Poetry) - 4/17/2007 12:38:42 AM
Excellent piece of poetry....words like "humid breath", "bathing the sorrows of atavism" are gem of masterpiece
Pour Ecstasy (Poetry) - 1/25/2007 5:28:48 PM
Peter,
Great write! Really full of passion and very touching. I feel as though you reached in and touched my soul!!! WOW!
Pour Ecstasy (Poetry) - 1/14/2007 9:11:59 AM
Very interesting and creative prose filled so vivid. My favorites "anatomy of drastic thought"...."changelessness of eternity". Thanks for sharing. My best, Gloria
Pour Ecstasy (Poetry) - 1/8/2007 3:39:49 PM
Your analogies are wonderful! Truly. Many poets can rhyme, but rhyming professionally doesn't mean "it" and "sit". Attempt a poem with this beautiful analogies and rhyming; more structure; and I think you could out bedazzle almost everyone of us!
I'm sorry if this was too harsh! I truly did like your gorgeous words! A soul that can express itself even as such as you have, is a soul that is envied.
Starlight Wandering (Poetry) - 1/4/2007 8:15:48 AM
Enjoyed
Womb of Pearl (Poetry) - 10/15/2006 11:13:19 AM
Very nice...makes me miss the sea.
A Separate Silence (Poetry) - 9/6/2006 6:43:29 PM
wow, amazing!
Oceans of Sky (Poetry) - 7/13/2006 8:38:08 AM
Beautiful imagery capturing the senses and my attention. Thanks for sharing this lovely write.
~hugs~
Karen
A Separate Silence (Poetry) - 7/12/2006 1:06:04 PM
"...sailing a separate silence..."
Well said.
A Separate Silence (Poetry) - 7/12/2006 12:52:09 PM
Thank you for this moving expressionistic canvas painted with brilliant hues of history, philosophy, and oceanic culture. The poem itself is like a journey that one can take over and over again.
Aberjhani
Silent Suns (Poetry) - 6/6/2006 4:18:16 PM
liked very well, very well written,,and I agree with Regis
The Deep Search for Sacred Thought (Poetry) - 5/16/2006 5:13:03 PM
this poem acknowledges its title ... mesmerizing imagery ...
The Deep Search for Sacred Thought (Poetry) - 5/12/2006 12:34:16 PM
This is filled with so much imagery and meaning. I was feeling like I was being transformed like the earth's clay, was way down in the center. Very provocative. Thanks for this. My best, Gloria
The Deep Search for Sacred Thought (Poetry) - 5/11/2006 9:38:29 AM
A masterful write covering your journey.Outstanding poem!
A subject that can never get enough exploration!
Continuance of the Universe (Poetry) - 4/15/2006 11:31:03 AM
Brilliance..!!!!
(((love and hugs, joanne )))
Womb of Pearl (Poetry) - 1/29/2006 6:58:33 PM
The title alone is powerfully evocative. Rich write. ~~Nordette
Womb of Pearl (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 7:38:19 PM
A rich and masterful fusion of vision and sensation. Powerful work.
September (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 7:34:29 PM
These lines flow and glow and breathe like the living soul of the earth exhaling one season and inhaling another. An intoxicating write.
Angel (Poetry) - 11/9/2005 7:29:44 PM
A classically-styled painting in the form of poem layered with genius and passion. Beautiful on every level.
Angel (Poetry) - 11/1/2005 10:07:02 AM
indeed a celestial movement enchanting ..glorious in its expansion..
love it!!
saved this one as well..ty Peter!
Vesna
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