Recent Reviews for Smokey Lonesome
John Remembered . . . . (Short Story) - 12/9/2005 9:06:01 AM|
Even though I am not a big fan of the Beatles, this is a very well done tribute to John Lennon! Excellent write, Smokey!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
John Remembered . . . . (Short Story) - 12/9/2005 1:15:46 AM
Smokey, This is a very nice tribute. Your memories are wonderfully described. I can almost hear the sound of you playing your guitar and singing the songs that John Lennon wrote. It was a good way to deal with the saddness and grief, and I Imagine, one that John would have approved of. Write more, I like your stories.
Blinded by the Lights, part 1 (Short Story) - 11/16/2005 8:53:38 AM
Excellent write, Smokey; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 1/6/2007 4:38:15 AM
Gee, I just saw you yesterday and you didn't look "smokey" or "lonesome" but I recognize your heart. Your poem gives every stepchild hope. Hope for a connection from a source often elusive and from a child's perspective, sometimes scary. Bless you for passing the love on to your own; biological or not. The world needs more dads like you.
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 4/5/2006 6:35:33 PM
Very touching tribute to your dad. As the saying goes; anyone can 'father' a child, but it takes a special person to be a 'dad'.
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 2/20/2006 2:10:55 PM
My grandson has your dad's middle name. This means you are both "smokey" and "cool!" And I know you wrote a melody about it (or at least are planning a melody)
blessin's Curmudgeon Brother (and that's okay with me!)
cynth'ya lewis reed
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 12/10/2005 6:15:31 PM
Beautifully written and expressed. Brought tears to my eyes. I wrote a poem for my dad too when he passed. I will post it.
Bullshit (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 4:11:50 AM
Very well expressed...I liked this a lot.... - Duke
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 4:08:03 AM
Very, very well written indeed.... - Duke
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 5/27/2005 5:06:39 AM
Another wonderful, heartfelt piece, Smokey... Sounds like a man worthy of a poem and I'm very sorry for your loss...
Marsha the Masher (Poetry) - 5/25/2005 6:58:36 PM
An enjoyable and enlightening read, Smokey. It's true we all know a "Marsha"`by whatever AKA
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 5/25/2005 6:54:48 PM
A wonderful tribute and great write poet Smokey Lonesome
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 5/25/2005 9:35:36 AM
o, smokey, i am so sorry for your loss! god bless you in this time of grief! beautiful tribute to your daddy; he will live on in your memory and in your heart! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :( >tears <
beautiful artwork! :)
That's My Dad (Poetry) - 5/24/2005 10:12:43 PM
A Fine Man, Your Dad. A very respectful and Loving honorable tribute to Your Dad. A man admired.
My Deepest and Most Sincere Heartfelt Condolences to You and Your Family.
The strength of your love will always hold you tight and strong.
Thank you for allowing me to meet such a loving man.
My love for you,
Two People Gone (Poetry) - 5/20/2005 10:36:25 AM
nice write, smokey; well done! :)
Two People Gone (Poetry) - 5/16/2005 12:55:05 PM
Set it to the music of "16 tons" and it works!
Two People Gone (Poetry) - 5/16/2005 9:06:26 AM
smoke, a powerful evocative piece
All of This . . . (A loverís Prose) (Poetry) - 5/16/2005 7:10:14 AM
Beautiful work Smokey -
Two People Gone (Poetry) - 5/16/2005 7:06:41 AM
Very powerful, Smokey - can't wait to read more...
Two People Gone (Poetry) - 5/15/2005 3:29:13 PM
And the beat goes on,... down the generations. Couldn't help noting '1972' on this one.
Two People Gone (Poetry) - 5/15/2005 1:15:56 PM
Hmm this is the second time that I read this but it still packs a whallop.
All of This . . . (A loverís Prose) (Poetry) - 5/13/2005 7:39:29 PM
My god, no wonder you have ten kids.
from another desert dweller.
All of This . . . (A loverís Prose) (Poetry) - 5/13/2005 7:27:31 PM
Oh my and now you gone and done it and got me teary eyed but this is a splendid write.
Ain't the One Girl Kind (Poetry) - 5/13/2005 5:53:02 PM
You've got a lot of company! At least you were honest!
Twice As Dark Within (Poetry) - 5/13/2005 5:31:13 PM
Great write Lonesome,
I enjoyed, thank you.
To Have Loved (Poetry) - 4/20/2005 9:10:13 AM
Wonderfully done! Youve got skill, Smokey!
A Small Loss (Poetry) - 4/20/2005 9:08:52 AM
This was beautiful! And written the year I was born! How funny! ;)
Loved this poem - seriously.. :)
A Small Loss (Poetry) - 4/15/2005 6:44:44 PM
This is both heartfelt and inspiring. Well-done Smokey!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
A Small Loss (Poetry) - 4/15/2005 6:23:22 PM
Lots of heart-felt truth in this write, Smokey. I think most of us can relate to this.
To Have Loved (Poetry) - 4/15/2005 9:56:02 AM
wise words...and so true
Bullshit (Poetry) - 4/14/2005 4:50:42 AM
Congratulations on a such a successful first entry into AD! With luck, one day we will learn from our mistakes, but the way things are going, I seriously doubt it. Humans are the slowest learners of all...
Bullshit (Poetry) - 4/13/2005 4:00:12 PM
First of all, thank you for your service. *SALUTE*
Secondly, welcome to Author's Den. You are among friends and you won't be lonely any more.
A disturbing write in the fact that nothing seems to have changed. There is still a lot of anger and unrest--the sixties revisited.
An excellent, powerfully penned, thought provoking piece--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Bullshit (Poetry) - 4/12/2005 9:03:13 PM
Been on the streets in Philly and recall all the curb side writers ranting and raving as you did in this write...no I don't think you find yourself to be lonesome here...ed & rufuz (w00f)
Bullshit (Poetry) - 4/12/2005 8:40:37 PM
Very powerful work. It is easy to visualize an angry young man trying to make sense of the world in the 60s. I think you should add "writer & poet" to musician & singer on your bio. Looking forward to reading more of your writings.
Bullshit (Poetry) - 4/12/2005 7:52:16 PM
Well Smokey, you won't be lonesome here;-)
Not if you always write like this!
Bullshit (Poetry) - 4/12/2005 7:50:36 PM
A powerful piece of social commentary and political outrage. Enjoyed it.