White Lights (Article) - 4/28/2003 12:34:36 PM
Excellent Dallas - looking forward to Chapter two!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Hope we don't have to wait tooooooo long ;-)
Smell that Smell (Article) - 3/31/2003 1:09:01 PM
Goosebumps for sure, and some eyewatering. Either it is because of the goosebumps(sometimes they happen at the same time) or I need to get away from my screen.
Loved this.
Mindy
A Meeting of Minds (Article) - 3/31/2003 1:02:30 PM
I enjoyed this very much. I was talking with a friend of mine about a clerk in a local store in my town.
She doesn't say a thing, she doesn't smile.
My friend reminded me that some people that seem unfriendly or "stuck-up" are often just shy. My friend is shy too and says, "I just don't walk down the street smiling at people."
White Lights (Article) - 2/26/2003 4:32:07 PM
WOW!!!!!!!! I soooooooo want to read what happens next!!!!!! Great storytelling, Diana
White Lights (Article) - 1/12/2003 9:17:00 PM
Great story there, Dallas. Waiting for the next chapter. Excellent writings.
White Lights (Article) - 12/9/2002 3:35:49 AM
enjoyed the read
White Lights (Article) - 11/21/2002 5:30:35 PM
OOOO, where? where? ;) This is mesmerizing, please don't leave us hanging too long. I love stories like this simply b/c they can be true. ;)
Love, Janet xoxoxoxo
White Lights (Article) - 11/19/2002 11:44:13 AM
Thanks Dallas, I'm looking forward to chapter two!
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 11/19/2002 11:22:19 AM
Thanks Dallas, enjoyed and it made me smile.... Vivian
White Lights (Article) - 11/10/2002 9:56:07 AM
Finally reading it. Great story Dallas! Looking forward to reading the rest of it one day - more, more!!!
White Lights (Article) - 11/8/2002 11:53:03 AM
Fantasy is not my bag, but you have definitely caught my attention and desire to want to read more.
White Lights (Article) - 11/8/2002 7:34:48 AM
Very well written! This really flows and makes the strange powers that Mara suddenly finds herself with, seem almost logical. A neat trick...and fine writing!
White Lights (Article) - 11/7/2002 3:58:53 PM
Very nice read! The end left me wanting more...and that's a good sign! Your attention to detail is great, and I can 'feel' what your protagonist is feeling. Dallas, hope you continue with the wonderful book!
Ellen
White Lights (Article) - 11/7/2002 1:59:15 PM
A magical story that realizes the longings we all had as children. Lovely.
Carolyn Howard-Johnson
http://www.TLT.com/authors/carolynhowardjohnson.htm
Author of This is the Place
White Lights (Article) - 11/7/2002 8:32:39 AM
Wonderful story - can't wait to read more of it :-)
White Lights (Article) - 11/7/2002 6:14:44 AM
WOW DALLAS~
This was WONDERFUL`*
I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT PART!
White Lights (Article) - 11/7/2002 5:33:26 AM
Can't wait for the next chapter.....isn't this something we all would love to have happen.........wheeeeeeeee ;-)))))
White Lights (Article) - 11/7/2002 5:14:52 AM
Hmmmmmm......, white lights... (glitterings of pixie dust?....) adventures in 'destiny of densities'...., tell more, do tell more!
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 11/3/2002 12:57:45 AM
You have a great open heart. Loved it!
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 10/17/2002 7:10:26 AM
More, More More.......I love your Ghostie story! I hope that house is still in the family, and, the view must be grand.
LovenHugs, Judy
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 10/16/2002 9:42:59 PM
Hey Aunt Dallas,
I can't say that I've heard that story before, mom told me to read it so I'm sure that I'll get the rest of the scoop from her. Glad to see that you are doing well with your writing.
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 10/16/2002 6:16:00 PM
I wanted to hear about a trip down memory lane and reminders of that house-good memories-gave me smiles as I read it! Keep up the good work! Love Donna.
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 10/16/2002 10:45:04 AM
I loved this memory of yours. But, what gave me a true shudder of both
delight and warmth, was your the responses from your family. I got a little
tear too. It was sweet.
Take care,
Mindy
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 10/15/2002 3:51:28 PM
Thanks for the trip down memory lane. I'd forgotten about the eerie good times we had at thathouse.
Love Will
Haunted Home Sweet Home (Article) - 10/13/2002 6:04:59 PM
Loved your article. I remember Mom telling me about the ghost in that house. The building I work in at present has had a varied past and we get 'visitations" frequently. We always joke amongst ourselves.
Oh Lord (Poetry) - 4/10/2008 10:35:42 AM
Think this is great writing and thinking and can relate to it. Sometimes feel like I just must go to heaven to God and husband Tom and family members passed on. But have to wait til God needs me and calls me home. Luckily my husband went peacefully and quickly and I hope I do too. Poetry like yours helps and I enjoy it tremenously.
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 6/27/2004 5:15:19 AM
enjoyed the read
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 5:00:53 PM
What a lovely tribute to dear old Ralph Waldo, Dallas!
And I love that hunk of cat you're hugging on your bio
page. He looks like the Haji Baba I wrote the humor article
about (on my bio page). I'll have to dig out his pic and
add it to the story.
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 9/24/2003 4:41:17 AM
Excellent flow of thoughts and feelings. Great write!
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 9/2/2003 5:35:44 PM
What can we say that others before us have not already mentioned? Nothing, but to tell you how much we enjoyed yet another one of your works that always delight and entertain. Your words always seem to flow with words from your soul.
Love and friendship, Kam
The Seal is Cast (Poetry) - 9/1/2003 4:44:07 AM
"The Seal is Cast" flows all the way under the sounds of the drums of wisdom.
I really learned while enjoying a good reading from an outstanding WRITING.
Please, allow me to suggest a revision on the last stanza, for this "The Seal is Cast" is too precious, and I feel that its closing is not corresponding with the power and the message of this masterpiece. Please consider revising the last Stanza of "The Seal is Cast".
I thank You.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 8/21/2003 5:03:19 AM
"Waldo, Where are You?"- A beautiful free-verse composition that sings under the music of respect with a voice of the wise.
"Waldo, Where are You?" is a Paean to a great Soul, written with ink of knowledge with words of wisdom.
Thank You for being a Paragon of culture, and for sharing this treasure "Waldo, Where are You?" with us.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 5/1/2003 3:03:53 AM
Loved it !! Wonder if someday, someone out there will pose questions about our words!!! <makes for some uneasy thoughts lolol!>
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/30/2003 4:28:42 PM
Most excellent my friend, I love the questions posed.
Love, JC xoxoxo
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 8:04:49 PM
Wow I most certainly love this piece Dallas!
Hugs and Blessings,
Teri
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 4:47:11 PM
I'm awe struck! Very nice poem Dallas. Keep up the great writing! Kath.
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 2:03:58 PM
very well done, dallas *love your name*...enjoyed reading this! (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 2:02:34 PM
This muse is no ruse, and in the reading I lose...., myself, to thoughts I'd thought had once come and gone. The past revisited is but the future revealed. I would say Waldo is present and accounted for!! Very well done!!
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 1:00:59 PM
Excellant Work and although I am a R frost lover myself I do believe Waldo would be giving you quite the standing ovation on this one!
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 12:27:25 PM
I love this poem!!!!!!!!!!!!A great lilt and Now I must confess that I have never read Waldo so I will put him at the top of my must read list ;-) Hope I will enjoy him as much as I did this wonderful poem of yours !!!
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 11:28:27 AM
What a lovely harkening. It feels like something by the poets of old; a nostalgic visit to language used back then and perfectly matched to the poem's subject.
Carolyn Howard-Johnson
Award-winning author of "This is the Place" and "Harkening:
http://carolynhowardjohnson.com
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 11:16:46 AM
Dallas, not only are you a superb purveyer of information for the writer, but a fine poet. This is a gem. I put your link on my bio-page for a few months. Your ezine is the greatest.
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 9:42:33 AM
Excellent, I love your style of writing...
--Karissa
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 8:45:18 AM
great write, dallas! :) (((HUGS)))
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 8:31:49 AM
This is really good! THAnk you. I really enjoyed it.
- J -
Waldo, Where are You? (Poetry) - 4/28/2003 7:37:33 AM
Dallas, Your poem is awesome. Very well written. The flow was outstanding.
Oh Lord (Poetry) - 3/12/2003 9:32:17 AM
Love your name, Dallas. I hope you don't shoot off anytime soon as I'd like to read more of your poems. Great write.
Sandy
Oh Lord (Poetry) - 1/17/2003 12:47:02 AM
Well hello, I made it here. Surfing all over the place. This is precious. Got a guitar handy?
~E
Oh Lord (Poetry) - 1/6/2003 5:59:02 AM
Outstanding Dallas!!!!! Your message came through loud and clear! Oh Lord, that times will change and and hearts will become more generous and loving as is yours ;-)
Love and God Bless, Judy
Oh Lord (Poetry) - 1/4/2003 2:51:28 PM
Very good, Dallas! Sorry to say that is the way some people think and act. I just keep praying for a better world.
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