Recent Reviews for Leah C Wilson
I Will Paint You A Daydream (Poetry) - 10/19/2010 11:01:10 AM|
Awwwwwww this is so beautiful. It really is. The images this conjures up brings smile after smile to my lips. Thank you Leah for brightening up my cloudy day. :-)
May the Lord Bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and walk by your side. With love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister Barbie.
I Will Paint You A Daydream (Poetry) - 1/4/2007 12:11:07 AM
this is beautiful and so are you
compassion wears you well
enjoyed be blessed in this year
I Will Paint You A Daydream (Poetry) - 1/1/2007 9:52:55 PM
You dear lady are the opposite of that long haired hippie guy you live with & you both equal each other and give each other that magic...Ed
I Will Paint You A Daydream (Poetry) - 1/1/2007 8:02:57 PM
Wonderful,Happy New Year
I Will Paint You A Daydream (Poetry) - 1/1/2007 12:21:01 PM
Most beautiful Leah!!
Happy New Year Sis!!
I Will Paint You A Daydream (Poetry) - 1/1/2007 10:40:52 AM
Beautiful write and so good to read you again Leah hope to see more ofyou in 2007.
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 6/8/2006 10:42:16 PM
So Lovely, Leah. God through His son Jesus doesn't care where we pray, just so we do. Wonderful story poem of Little Ruedy.
May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 5/14/2006 4:15:52 AM
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 5/8/2006 5:52:24 PM
A lovely poetic tale, Leah. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 2:49:52 PM
Thank You, Jesus, for Leah's Miracle ~ "Woman, thou art loosed!"
Glorious, glorious...and worthy of praise. This is a song, no?
Anxious to hear from you ...been away...going away again, shortly. Send me message to tell me the WHOLE STORY, please!!!
Love you, my Sister. ~ rhonda
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 3:42:20 AM
Excellant write and great story I think this would make an excellant ballad crooned out by Willie or Chris. I love it.
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 3:28:31 AM
Wonderful story told in verse; outstanding writing, Leah! Very well done; brava!
(((HGUS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 5/7/2006 2:38:40 AM
God works in mysterious ways if we are open to receive Him. Excellent poem and inspirational message.
Little Ruedy Preaches Jesus (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 11:55:54 PM
Wow! This was a great write I love poems that tell stories, and this certainly did that, you took me right into little Rudey's world
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 9:57:30 AM
A powerful expression of your faith. Thank you for sharing it, Leah. Love and peace to you,
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 9:39:43 AM
Amen and Amen!!
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 6:43:23 AM
Spiritually motivating verses by a very spiritual being. God is your friend I have no doubt.
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 6:19:14 AM
This is so true! Thank you so much for posting and sharing this!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 5:49:28 AM
Praising Jesus! This is glorious, lovely! I rejoice with you! You are my precious Sister, Leah, and I dearly love you - The Holy Spirit brought me to you...and I am, indeed, lifting you up! Please know, that my words are not given lightly... You are a treasure, to me. My counsel to you: FEAST ON THE WORD OF GOD, THE HOLY BIBLE> "In this, you greatly rejoice, though now - for a little while - if needed be, you have been grieved by various trials, that the genuineness of your faith, [being much more precious than gold that perishes]though it is tested by [Holy} fire, may be found to praise, honor, and glory...at the revelation of Jesus CHRIST." I St. Peter 1:6-8 He is coming soon, hallelujah! genuine agape love, rhonda
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 1:34:36 AM
I am the Truth, the Way and the Life and you have discovered it in this wonderful faithfilled write to Him. Love Me as I have loved you. God Bless.
The Promise (Poetry) - 5/6/2006 12:11:38 AM
Amen and Amen, keep up the great work and be blessed in the writing
Down For The Count (Poetry) - 4/29/2006 6:52:43 AM
Bless you, Leah...you have, likewise, touched my heart. I pray the Father to send you the Comforter.....He will lead you back out, into the Light...again. Remember the words of Jesus, "Only believe."
I believe in Him - and you - and the multitude of gifts/talents you've been given! You go, my precious Sister! Love, Rhonda
Down For The Count (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 10:37:43 PM
You my sweet dear will always be a winner in my eyes. For there is no weapon that can be formed against thee, and neither shall it prosper. For you are and have always been the winner...
Love ~ Da ~
Down For The Count (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 7:30:48 PM
U definitely need a new referee, as he is supposed to count forwards not backwards...so just while you are down there lay back and allow that special person to you mount, then again start the count...;) Ed
Down For The Count (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 6:59:57 PM
You are a winner. Your poetry is A_1. I love boxing believe it or not and so this one caught my eye in a special way.
Down For The Count (Poetry) - 4/23/2006 6:18:11 PM
You will always be a winner in my books and I am sure in your hubby's booka s well. Get back up girl we are poets we never quit.
Silent Seduction (Poetry) - 4/21/2006 3:36:21 AM
Beautiful words and visions that tease and tempt the reader to a place that they would like to share with you no doubt.
Silent Seduction (Poetry) - 4/20/2006 9:47:08 PM
Beautiful dreamy write!!
Silent Seduction (Poetry) - 4/20/2006 8:21:05 PM
Thats right, time to go back to reality, unfortunately...ed
Book Of Yesterdays (Poetry) - 4/20/2006 10:30:14 AM
Book Of Yesterdays (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 8:08:50 PM
Dreams are the poor mans stress reducer, never let them go and as for burning the written word, no matter who wrote it, NEVER! Ed
Book Of Yesterdays (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 7:50:39 PM
Oh Leah, how very powerful and outstanding this poem is, I was just moved to tears. Just moved me so very deeply.
Book Of Yesterdays (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 7:28:20 PM
Well said and a great write though I am not sure I agree with the content, I think we should never give up on our dreams until we breath our last breath in this world. Then start dreaming again for our dreams to be fulfilled in the next.
The Thief (Poetry) - 4/19/2006 10:02:36 AM
Well written Leah!!
She can be greedy at time this old Mother Ocean!!
The Thief (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 8:25:43 PM
Better be watching yourself with regards stomping your feet and yelling at ole mom ocean, you may find yourself on the receiving end of a good swift smack or wave action that will knock you off your feet...Ed
The Thief (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 3:31:20 PM
Ah the sea is a stern mistress as pretty as a child and just as tempormental from laughing and calm and beautiful one minute to angry and spiteful and tearing up all around it the next minute, but how can we not love it.
Voyeurs And Jasmine (Poetry) - 4/18/2006 4:03:38 AM
Wow this is very smooth erotica at it's most sensual best, you lure the reader into the spirit of voyeurism as if we were all there behind the curtain watching your voluptuos body sway and frollcik to the music, your breasts heaving ,,,,whoa see where this one sent my mind. Seriously great write and good to see you back posting, really cool ending as well.
Voyeurs And Jasmine (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 10:45:29 PM
And he will keep on coming back even to me on the otherside of the world!!
Well written Leah!!
Happy belated Easter to you!!
Voyeurs And Jasmine (Poetry) - 4/17/2006 8:42:23 PM
And he will again see you this evening, as you capture his rise from the sea to the sky...Ed
Fragments of Time (Poetry) - 1/10/2006 9:54:13 PM
a wonderful introspective look at one's life. And yes , for most of us, we look at the clock and it is 1953, and when we look again it is 2003...what did we do in between the two times? Nice work Leah. Thnx for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, maybe too stubborn for my own good, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS))))))))), your very sad and very terrified little sister, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."
Fragments of Time (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 1:38:33 PM
"...How strange, it seems that a whole life passes by, one hour at a time..."
And it speads up rapidly once you hit 30.
Fragments of Time (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 10:15:15 AM
Yip that's how it is!!
Fragments of Time (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 7:41:57 AM
Did ya ever run from your own shadow, only to turn around and find it there afterall...? This poetic endeavor does remind me of this as it speaks volumes of the author...Enjoy your time on Al's island...;) Ed & rufuz
Fragments of Time (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 4:24:40 AM
No one can run from theirself this is very well done. I enjoyed this piece.
Fragments of Time (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 4:10:55 AM
The best is to just enjoy life and forget about watching. The clock stops too soon for some.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Fragments of Time (Poetry) - 12/29/2005 3:42:47 AM
How strange, it seems that a whole life passes by, one hour at a time
Strange, indeed, for most of us, and a most powerful question in your last stanza, Leah.
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/27/2005 10:33:46 AM
Yesterdays dreams are often colored by the passion of that moment- you showed this well here.
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/27/2005 8:18:00 AM
frustration and realism mixed coherently ...
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/23/2005 8:39:21 PM
ohhhhhhhhh Beautiful powerful poem Leah! Nice to see you here as You and not a guest! You are very much part of the family! Thanks! you made my day!
Happy Thanksgiving to you and your entire family.
I hope you all are doing well and feeling better than tip top!
Peace and Many Blessings of all that your hearts long for, be yours today and always!
Tracey 42xoox(c :)
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/21/2005 4:58:28 AM
Very good images and metaphors. Excellent ending, a surprise for the reader. henry
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 11:54:10 AM
Leah such perceptive imagery, keenly describing the disappointment in the hopes that never seem to materialize. Sad but beautifully written! Good to read you! Be well!
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 8:20:47 AM
That is called nightmares...and I know how they can haunt you yes....and it leaves a bleachy smell and look upon my face trying to forget them......good to read you again Leah!!
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 7:46:29 AM
Beautiful and brutally honest piece written with acceptance of what must be. Good to see you back on board again Leah, we missed you.
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 5:53:48 AM
Quite a powerful piece, Leah - and glad to see you back.
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/20/2005 12:37:31 AM
Wish I could see Ed's humor in this....just doesn't seem like you're talking about dirty laundry. I like your style.
Yesterday's Dreams (Poetry) - 11/19/2005 10:29:56 PM
If yesterdays laundry is still out on the line, you better get it in, I hear rain is approaching...? Ed
response to "Wuss of Walmart" (Poetry) - 9/7/2005 7:55:41 AM
Glad to see you Leah,especially with this witty wonderful reply to your superspouse;-)A joy to read!
response to "Wuss of Walmart" (Poetry) - 9/6/2005 9:53:08 PM
Old bugger..give him a wedgie next time!!
Oh and to Ed.... you are a blast!!
response to "Wuss of Walmart" (Poetry) - 9/6/2005 7:27:46 PM
I knew it, I knew it, he was just whining again...that will get those women interested every time...he is a dirty old man, a 17 year old, though it is legal afterall...LOL! Keep dragging him to those wally marts, he gets his ego massaged each time...;) Ed
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/22/2005 5:46:00 AM
Cheers and Happy Anniversary to both of you, Leah - to you for this marvelous love poem, and to Allen for "dancing with you for no reason at all, except to hold you."
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 8:13:04 AM
What a wonderful gift you share, Leah. Thank you. Love and peace to you.
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 7:27:26 AM
This moves me so deeply, Leah - it is also my 28th wedding anniversay today! Would you believe that?! This is toast indeed and testimony to the true depth of your feelings, one for another. Your words say everything and leave us only to enjoy and celebrate that special union and relationship with you. A toast to your mutual blessing and happiness always: not two, but one. My love and congratulations for today and all the rest to come. Thank you for sharing with us. LOL Kate xx
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 6:01:29 AM
Can't be much better anniversary present that this, well, maybe jut one. Heehee! I know, I am naughty.
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 5:43:08 AM
This is a love that will last a life time and what a wonderful birthday present you have given to your loving husband. God has blessed the both of you.
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 3:57:13 AM
Most beautiful Leah!!
You are one VERY LUCKY lady!!
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 2:30:07 AM
In every write you and Allen, dedicate to one another, it's as though you are repeating and writing your love and vows one more time. Your hearts are pure, and overflowing with the sweetness of one another.
Happy Anniversary you two!
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 1:15:32 AM
Very romantic Leah and very loving of the man who has given you so much, and you have given him so much in return. Happy Anniversary Leah & Allen. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, stubborn to a fault, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY HAPPY RETURNS ON YOUR ANNIVERSARY AND MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS TO LEAH)))))))))), your little sister in the written word, Barbie
"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I may as well be."
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 12:37:18 AM
Happy Anniversary to two good friends that deserve the best...Ed
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/20/2005 12:05:50 AM
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/19/2005 9:16:29 PM
Infinite love. Your own words express my wish for the two of you as well. Dawn
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/19/2005 8:12:44 PM
Beautiful romantic write :-)
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/19/2005 7:37:22 PM
Beautifully said Leah! Blessings to you both and have the most happiest of anniversaries!
Our Toast (Poetry) - 8/19/2005 7:33:26 PM
Well expressed and heart felt your Allen is a lucky man.
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 7:07:17 AM
Sounds like my scene alright, Leah... I'm just not sure I have ever really left Neverland - or perhaps the problem is that I have never yet arrived... and I've bin travellin ALL night!! :)) Delightful for us kids of all ages. TY Kate xx
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 4:54:12 AM
Wonderful whimsical fairy ride and loved the part about Puff, I always hoped someone would come up with a happy ending for him.
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 4:24:02 AM
A delightful poem, Leah - I truly believe that no matter how old we get, we should let our 'inner child' out once in awhile to play - I think it makes life a lot more fun. (Mine seems to come out quite often!!)
Lady Regret Dances (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 3:56:59 AM
Wow this is one helluva write Leah!!
I almost felt guilty as charged!!
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/17/2005 3:56:50 AM
Oh I love it...and my thoughts danced with you!!
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 8:52:02 PM
Love the wisdom you have shared in this uplifting write!
Yup next year at this time I am traveling by day to Ed's K home; setting up camp and when he comes out in his "natural" I'll say, "Happy Birthday!" as his neighbour screams again.
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 8:43:34 PM
A delightful tale of whimsy Leah, and yes the world needs lots more of it and getting in touch with the little ones! Thanks for a joyful poem, well done!
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 8:36:00 PM
charming, whimscial poetry ...
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 8:05:19 PM
I have many friends that are "fairies" though they prefer we use the term "gay", and I have never seen them dance around hand in hand though they had their hands doing other things...as for Puff, I thought he was more of a mythical beast toking on the weeds that grew in his cave...;) ed
Fairy Dance (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 7:40:21 PM
With a sweet poem like this one, you can always sing the world a beautiful song. Beautiful write.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Lady Regret Dances (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 10:42:57 AM
Wow! Leah, this one is an all encompassing karmic experience.
Written with wisdom and superb word usage! Your best, I think!
A keeper for sure!
Lady Regret Dances (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 9:13:16 AM
Deep and brooding and ful of the reality of what life is all about. Well written and very powerful imagery.
Lady Regret Dances (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 8:50:03 AM
Experience truly is the best teacher, and this is quite a powerful piece, Leah.
Lady Regret Dances (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 7:57:17 AM
To start with, it seems you and Jerry co-wrote his and yours, geez, now I am afraid to leave my house today...all these almost predictions of doom and where we end up and all has me shaking in my BVD's...Actually though if you were up those meds you are on, these thoughts may dissipate...LOL! Another wonderfully thoughtful, interesting write from a certain Southern couple that I think highly of...Ed & Rufuz (w00f)
Lady Regret Dances (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 5:01:17 AM
Youu . . . are . . . talking . . . about . . . me . . . again. Stop that! Wierd that you would write this poem just as I posted one that, shall we say, carries your premise a bit further. Very good stuff.
Lady Regret Dances (Poetry) - 8/16/2005 4:02:20 AM
People who live in regrets norally let Lady Regrets lead them by the nose; that is why Lady Regrets should never wins. One cannot cry over spilt milk, so one should only always move forward. Lady Regrets should never win!
A very creative write, great metaphor!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 8:58:42 PM
sometimes we have to be imprisoned by someone we love to know what freedom is truely like ... powerful work ...
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 7:35:24 PM
a powerfull tour de force into reality. I enjoyed this immensely. You are gifted and finely tuned. Yes and I will submit
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 10:38:04 AM
Powerful offering Leah!!
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 7:53:03 AM
I bet you and Al have one hell of a kinky relationship, I can just hear you guys screaming and begging for more...L0L! ed & rufuz
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 7:24:49 AM
Leah, this is a striking (no pun intended), well-crafted composition, which clearly illustrates the “reality” can and will whip one into shape, and release one from the hostile captivity of “illusions deceit.” Outstanding work. Thank you for sharing it. Take good care and be well.
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 7:14:03 AM
Now this is a wonderful example of empowerment, not by mankind but by oneself as you so tantalizingly expressed. Leah you offer hope and promise in your words. Thank you.
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 4:15:44 AM
My name is Reality. I am your Reality.
I will whip you into submission.
Reality truly has a way of doing that to us, and as you say, once we accept it, we truly are free.
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/15/2005 4:12:45 AM
A lot of "whipping into submission" and "wands of power" and . . . er . . . is that whip you weld bloody or do you make your miserable subject like the blood away after your "sessions?" Just kidding. Just kidding. The poem freaked out the fantasy-side of my brain. LOL
You Must Submit (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 9:59:45 PM
Powerfully stated as if from deity! It is through submission that we are set free...Wisdom message poem...
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/14/2005 8:17:18 AM
I love it!
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/12/2005 7:12:07 PM
One of my favorite treats!
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/11/2005 2:40:39 PM
I was thinking of a bowl of chocolate cherry cordial no fat yogurt and you didn't dissapoint me. Well done in setting the table for this ravishing delight to the senses, splendid write.
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/11/2005 10:08:02 AM
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/11/2005 6:20:00 AM
This sure wets the appetite and the lust for delicacies almost forbidden. mnnnnnnn sounds sooooo good.
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/11/2005 3:34:25 AM
That serves us lustful, wicked people right. Leading up on. Keeping the sexual vision prominent and milking (hehe) from us every drop of desire and then laugh in our face when the lust turns to something else again.
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/11/2005 2:49:20 AM
What an invitation, Leah! What a build-up... what a climax! WOW! I have a hunch that most of us reading this will be the colour of that strawberry by about line 13! And you don't disappoint - you take us allll the way there. You are a Master Chef with this fine hors d'oeuvre and keep the juices flowing. Thanks for the experience - but reckon you through it have proved that, far from happening quick, once the vital spark is kindled it's the savouring of the slow-burn that creates the most intensity! Very well done. TY Kate xx
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/10/2005 11:10:05 PM
Know this me love...in the strawberry fields of life, I will for you be forever.
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/10/2005 8:55:47 PM
I'm allergic to strawberries...damn! Ed
Upon a Silver Platter (Poetry) - 8/10/2005 8:26:49 PM
wow, this is really passionate and sensuous ... luv the imagery ...
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/10/2005 9:18:27 AM
Powerful write....fantastic...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 8:41:44 PM
just put a big smile on my face, having just read Allen's post. thanks, Leah!
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 8:28:46 PM
sometimes one life jacket will have to do to keep love afloat ...
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 2:57:07 PM
Powerful truths are within this write.
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 2:34:53 PM
Haha! Probably shouldn't be laughing at this serious and poignant piece, but hell, struck me as funny. Like the way you string those words together.
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 10:33:26 AM
very interesting...is this a response?
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 10:19:32 AM
An engaging poem, Leah. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace.
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 10:01:18 AM
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 7:02:07 AM
Poet, in the word in which one has chosen to venture into, very often ones being sometimes allows the awful, painful memories that many others have no concept nor could they without being on the frontlines to overwhelm one. Yet, with the love and support of ones life partner the “good memories” can easily be brought to the foreground with their unyielding guidance, and if need be “a black iron skillet” may help do the trick … lol. However, one can only lead a horse to water, but one can never make it drink from the “fountain of life.” Thank you for sharing your wonderful, thought-provoking composition. Take good care and be well.
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 5:43:50 AM
Love these dueling compositions between you and J. Allen, Leah, and I'd like to read more of them!
Love your little prologue, too!
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/8/2005 4:20:38 AM
hmmmnnn well this sort of says so much and to ignore such a straightforward and honest a homily would truly be madness, but...you have held out the life jacket now it is his call to either sink or swim, for you the shore is closer then you think. Great write Leah,
Oppressed Steed ?? (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 10:25:21 PM
Aha so we've got a Tracey and Hepburn among us;-)Nice work Leah, for the Hepburn side;-)
Who Can Count The Tears (a grown man cries) (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 8:05:44 AM
This poem is so good and should be read by all. I don't think it's fair to expect men not to cry, as emotions of pains and sorrows are both natural, it's as natural as the release of the flood of tears.
Why shouldn't men cry? I think it is cruel to expect that of men to not releasing their tears and to hold back on their emotions.
A great write, Leah!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Who Can Count The Tears (a grown man cries) (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 7:44:40 AM
Very powerful write!!
And a man that can shed a tear has compassion for others...and I adore a man than can be filled with tenderness and show his deepest emotions!!
Who Can Count The Tears (a grown man cries) (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 7:10:13 AM
Yea a wonderful poem and great statement of how we men are brainw ashed as kids by parents, teaachers and religious leaders to be strong and aloof and never show emotions. But...even Jesus wept so why can't we. I am a man and i am not afraid to cry when I am sad, happy and sometimes even when I am angry. Great work Leah.
Who Can Count The Tears (a grown man cries) (Poetry) - 8/7/2005 5:53:29 AM
Very powerfully penned, Leah, and I've learned that all human souls truly need to cry once in awhile, whether they be man, woman, or child, in the healing process you speak of.
Who Can Count The Tears (a grown man cries) (Poetry) - 8/6/2005 8:20:27 PM
"Cold, alone, and full of agony, suffering and pain"
Thats me, I cry them as I no longer have my baby, she has been taken away, given by me to a young driver that will probably wreck it, already I am suffering from separation anxiety, I already miss her chrome wheels, her shiny surfaces, her...you will excuse me, I have to go cry myself to sleep...ed
The Image (Poetry) - 8/4/2005 11:34:23 AM
Oh Leah! How beautiful!!! I remember you telling me about this. What a wonderful creation in both artwork and poetry! I was very moved!
The Image (Poetry) - 8/4/2005 10:20:21 AM
Most outstanding package!!
The Image (Poetry) - 8/4/2005 7:27:28 AM
this is a fantastic charcoal and poem, thank you so much for sharing and thank Allen for allowing it to be posted it. Fantastic.
The Image (Poetry) - 8/4/2005 4:25:07 AM
Hands that await barren but not empty
Caressing tenderly the brush that is eager
To capture on canvas the mysterious
Enigmatic dance of that sweet illusive image.
I think you've captured that illusive image extremely well, Leah - a marvelous poem and and a marvelous portrait.
Disappearing Act (Poetry) - 8/3/2005 7:40:11 AM
peace & prosperity ;)
Disappearing Act (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 12:03:54 PM
Have fun, Leah, and I bet it will be a wonderful portrait!
Disappearing Act (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 7:32:56 AM
Hope to see that pic some day...ed
Disappearing Act (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 6:54:22 AM
How wonderful! I hope you take a photo of it to share with us! All the best with it,and I pray the show goes well for you!
Disappearing Act (Poetry) - 8/2/2005 3:34:07 AM
Hi Leah Glad to hear you are still on board, and I hope you share the portrait with us when you are done. Take care and keep loving life.
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/29/2005 10:45:33 AM
So we pray one for another, and never know who prays for us.
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/26/2005 5:03:14 AM
The power of prayer can truly be awesome, and I truly hope that poor man receives the help he needs.
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 7:44:25 PM
Would be nice if your prayer worked that well for all that have problems such as this...Ed
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 3:25:21 PM
Leah, so good to see you have a page here... I hadn't realized. I slip in and out of AD, but will make a point to visit you. I see you share the compassion I so admire in Allen's poems. Great descriptive detail here. Thanks! Dawn
Facing Truth (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 2:57:27 PM
a well-written poem of sorrow
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 2:53:36 PM
So warming and wonderful
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 2:37:59 PM
This is amazing and very possible. Great write.
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 1:30:46 PM
beautiful and uplifting! well done! :)
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 8:29:16 AM
you've done an excellent job of getting the message across ...
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/25/2005 3:24:10 AM
Wonderful and very well written...love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 9:44:49 PM
I will simply echo the words of those who have said things before me because they have respected you and what you've stated. Love and peace. Regis
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 9:42:59 PM
Thanks for sharing this inspiring piece!!
I ditto the others here!!
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 7:29:03 PM
Leah thanks for sharing this poem. Excellent work and beautiful
example of how we can help even when we think we can't. So many
people say,"the least we can do is pray' However, that is the best we can do, not the least, when it's done with a believing heart!
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 7:26:11 PM
Very interesting and nicely written. I wonder why you projected evil an devils onto him, though. It could be he's sick, and with all the cuts to social services can't get the help he needs - in which case he's the innocent and his mother's heart would break for another reason.
Delivered (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 6:29:48 PM
Inspiring, I saw a guy panhandling on street corner the other day and even though he was being ignored by evryone I called him over and gave him $2 in change it was like magic all of a sudden windows started opening and people all started giving him change even held up the light to do it. GOd truly does work in mysterious ways Leah.
Facing Truth (Poetry) - 7/23/2005 12:14:30 PM
Superb prose on a topic that needs to be continuously aired because it never ceases to be a heartbreak. Thanks for sharing Leah!
Facing Truth (Poetry) - 7/23/2005 11:00:04 AM
All women are ladies, no matter how they dress, look or act, as far as I am concerned...Ed
Facing Truth (Poetry) - 7/23/2005 6:16:36 AM
This is stark realism in poetry at best. Though sad this is happening more and more and more people need to be made aware of it.Good write and a good message to all.
Glad You Are Gone (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 10:22:46 AM
Very well written....with a very bittersweet twist at the end!!
I feel sorry about the tree but if that's what it takes to see the moon...a man has got to take action!!
The Box (Poetry) - 7/21/2005 10:08:30 AM
Very inspiring piece...glad I popped in to read you Leah!!
Thanks for this offering!!
Glad You Are Gone (Poetry) - 7/20/2005 11:04:27 PM
Awww, the poor tree, after all what a few leaves in the pool, beauty never dies, look at yourself in the mirror, you are still as beautiful as the day you first met Al...call the tree doctor, maybe he can put the tree back together...LOL! I had the feeling throughout that that twist at the end was forthcoming...;) Ed
Glad You Are Gone (Poetry) - 7/20/2005 8:47:14 PM
Very well written. excellent piece. like the twist near the end
The Box (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 10:48:21 AM
Lovely inspirational Leah! He is THE light that's for sure.
Welcome to the den family!
The Box (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 9:10:59 AM
Him, Him who? I thought He was a She...? ;) Ed
The Box (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 1:20:49 AM
Very inspiring write indeed, Leah. Without Him we can not do anything! We are in total darkness! We are nothing! Amen to that, Leah!
The Box (Poetry) - 7/17/2005 12:31:58 AM
Hey baby, glad to see you writing again. Glad to see you here. Great write you have here...you know I love everything you do.
The Box (Poetry) - 7/16/2005 6:00:34 PM
Very inspiring write about the wonderful box of life.
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)