Recent Reviews for Shezray Faisal
Washed in Black (Short Story) - 10/3/2007 9:07:08 AM|
I said it before, and I will say it again. You hve talent.
When the Wind Blows (Short Story) - 10/3/2007 8:57:03 AM
You have talent.
When the Wind Blows (Short Story) - 7/27/2004 4:49:48 AM
That gave me goosebumps...Really good, April
When the Wind Blows (Short Story) - 3/17/2003 3:33:10 AM
Excellent...just wonderful....keep it up...BHUWAN
Words (Short Story) - 8/29/2002 5:41:15 AM
Very touchy..i like it!
On April Fools Day (Short Story) - 8/29/2002 5:23:43 AM
Words (Short Story) - 6/1/2002 3:16:16 PM
Very nicely said! Enjoyed reading it very much!
Words (Short Story) - 12/3/2001 3:31:57 PM
touched ... very nice....though sad but ture that sometimes numbness is the only option you have left...once youve given something all you have nobody should expect anymore!!!! after that its all just not worth it.
Words (Short Story) - 12/3/2001 5:22:16 AM
the topic of the story was indeed very common!but it was well written!
Words (Short Story) - 12/3/2001 5:17:28 AM
Words (Short Story) - 12/3/2001 4:39:59 AM
nice one after a Long time.but a lil toooooo poetic.don't u think :)
Words (Short Story) - 12/2/2001 3:24:58 PM
Good work Shezray! Keep it up.
Words (Short Story) - 12/2/2001 3:11:10 PM
Sheeraz it was an awesome story. Don't tell me ur heart has turned cold. LOL it wud be fun if we start our conspiracy arguement here
Words (Short Story) - 12/2/2001 7:26:10 AM
...very touching indeed. the way u put forward the whole scenario did reach deep down...very interesting, true ....but depressing .... last but not the least ....buhat fit...loved it.
Words (Short Story) - 12/2/2001 7:24:54 AM
the writing is pretty good, but i dont think i am affected at all. This is maybe coz ive read too much of this kinda stuff and become immune.
Washed in Black (Short Story) - 11/13/2001 11:52:07 AM
....i liked the flow of the whole thing. its well written ...good show !!
Washed in Black (Short Story) - 11/7/2001 3:00:06 AM
Touching & emotional
Washed in Black (Short Story) - 9/18/2001 12:02:34 PM
I read this story, this really hit my heart
& left the deep effect.
Force In Marriage? (Article) - 1/22/2010 2:03:26 AM
Good to clear up difference between 'arranged' and 'forced' marriage. The former is OK (e.g. if prospective spouses believe their family/ friends know better what would be a good match for them and they voluntarily consent), the latter goes completely against the grain of Islam (even if culturally etc it's practiced, doesn't make it right!). Thank you for your article. My 2p. In peace, Rianne
Hijab: The Muslim Veil (Article) - 1/22/2010 2:00:47 AM
Due to ignorance and willful misinterpretation some women are forced to wear the hijab (or worse: the niqab - face veil) and some think it's the ultimate symbol of women's subjugation. I think it's WRONG for anyone to be forced to (not) wear they don't want to. I'm also not happy if people think I'm not 'liberated' for choosing to wear the veil (head scarf/ modest clothes - which men AND women are encouraged to do BTW!). We have so many things that are wrong in this world (injustice, oppression), let's focus on solving those together instead of creating differences. My 2p. In peace, Rianne
The Jewish State? (Article) - 6/28/2004 8:42:45 AM
Great to see your comeback in writing after a long time. I think before we discuss as to there should be a jewish state or no, we should indulge our time knowing some hard facts.
First of all what is the reason that Jewish people have occupied important posts in governments and military around the world? There is a simple answer to this , just because they were not allowed to live in one place which forced them to scatter and fired them with the spark of revenge, they occupied positions around the world and have been quite successful in their goals.
Having said that , its upto you to decide , weather there should be a formation of jewish state or no. I believe that having a jewish state wuld be better for world peace and stability,as jews might calm down....and will stop dreaming of greater Israel when they will have a place to live, what do you think????
The Jewish State? (Article) - 5/15/2004 3:29:48 PM
Recognizing Israel as a nation can only benefit Pakistan, as well as all the other countries. To allow free trade, of both product and knowledge makes for a stronger Pakistan.
I was curious about your quote from Benjamin Franklin. It looked strangely out of place, considering the time it was supposed to have occurred. So I checked it out. No historian has ever been able to confirm that Franklin ever said those words. It is believed to have been created the 1930's, by the Nazi's to foster anti-semitism.
I wish you the best and hope for peace to all nations.
Blown! (Article) - 3/24/2004 8:30:57 AM
A most interesting article, Shezray. You pose some very good questions in that - if security is supposed to be as tight as every world leader keeps claiming it is - then how can a Dr. Khan sell nuclear bomb secrets for years? He could be a scapegoat as you say. Either that or there was a consensus that - given his fame - he would be the least likely to be thrown in jail. [That he wasn't surprised me, frankly.] Everyone having a bomb isn't a good idea. [It's bad enough that so many countries already do. All's it would take is one psychopath and then here's the latest mushroom cloud.] Case in point, as you may have heard, a terrorist recently said hsi group now has portable nuclear bombs they can carry around. Anyway, it's always nice to read well thought out perspectives such as yours [and not some unsupported diatribe.]
Nuclear Silhouette (Article) - 7/17/2003 12:34:08 PM
A cute little puppy like you shouldn't be worrying your pretty head about things nuclear... Forget about the Hindus, Muslims, Zionists, Zoroastrians, etc. Think "pop-star" competition. Can u sing? Cause you sure can't write, coherently anyways.
Nuclear Silhouette (Article) - 7/17/2003 9:48:01 AM
> The recent landslide victory in elections of extremist groups in Baluchistan and Frontier is not owing to their popularity but rather the flow of unknown source of dollars. An apparently successful attempt to bring extreme radicals into power and later use them as bait.
Could you please clarify what you mean by this remark?
Nuclear Silhouette (Article) - 7/17/2003 7:22:46 AM
Disjointed haphazard ..... the article won't convince anyone of anything, even as a rant it is pathetic.
Nuclear Silhouette (Article) - 7/16/2003 8:22:38 AM
Good gawd,what happened to you babe?Did you marry a mullah or what?
"Rancid yellow fangs","zionists",...vivid imagery.The kind I normally hear from loonies preaching hatred.
"Martial nation" Pakistan indeed.WHat one remembers more of Pakistan are the aforesaid tribal leaders group sanctioning sodomy of a 12 yr old and a communit sponsored gang rape of his 30 yr old sister.
Begad if these are the kind of muslim martial races you wish to keep,then welcome to your powderkeg!
I hope the US stops giving aid to Pakistan too and gets out ASAP.I mean thats what you guys want isnt it?Be happy-kill a few shias,french engineers,bomb a few western consulates...whatever!
Nuclear Silhouette (Article) - 6/28/2003 12:19:31 AM
An interesting article. However one feels that the attack on India is more an attempt to satisfy existing public preceptions and attitudes mostly propogated by highly pro-establishment people. I thought you were different and had more of a broad view towards India. However regretfully you too are one of those see the threat of Nuclear weapons falling into wrong hands in India then the chances of a greater likelihood of Nuclear misuse in Pakistan.
Anyway keep up the effort and keep writing.
So Who’s Next? (Article) - 4/14/2003 8:40:51 PM
Uncle Sam, Uncle Sam, have you any fool?
Yes sir, yes sir, he's in the rule...
"One for Saddam and one for Taliban
One for Pakistan, who jumps again and again!"
So Who’s Next? (Article) - 4/13/2003 9:29:04 AM
Very good article with excellent points.
So Who’s Next? (Article) - 4/11/2003 4:14:48 AM
Well lets see whos next but one things for sure. Its the beginning of the End for the US. Im a firm believer of the fact that, in this world, u cant get away with injustice. Hitler didnt, Saddam didnt, Bust wont either!
So Who’s Next? (Article) - 4/10/2003 11:39:07 PM
Good writing.. I agree with your points/concerns.
So Who’s Next? (Article) - 4/10/2003 6:27:58 PM
I agree with your point of view but I dont see this matter black & white as you do. Lets try to answer few simple questions;
1, What were the causes which helped United States emerged as a powerful nation till now?
2, What should we do to become more powerful?
Thank You for sharing.
So Who’s Next? (Article) - 4/10/2003 8:23:13 AM
First, this is extremely well written. You might think of expanding into a book, by adding onto your themes and going deeper into some of these areas.
I do have some disagreements. Israel was constructed by Britain and the U.S.in the wake of WW II. The Arab world had alligned itself with the Axis Powers (Germany, Italy and Japan) both times.
Today, Israel acts as a sattelite for the West (England & America) in the Mid-East and that's why the U.S. and Britain insist that Israel "has a right to exist," and that any building of a Palestinian State will have come with assurances from the entire region that Israel's right to exist is accepted.
I think both Bush & Blair are committed to the getting nuclear weapons out of the hands of nations like North Korea...and other such nations. I don't believe that either India or Pakistan would be considered in that category. At any rate, it would be impossible to suggest de-nuking Pakistan without de-nuking India at the same time, but even such "mutual disarmament" is distrusted.
How do two sides that have a history of mistrust, come to trust in the other's disarmament?
I also believe that Iraq will be returned to Iraqi control almost immediately. Some will argue that "a pro-Western government" has been installed, but a repressive regime like Hussein's, and one that openly supported Hammas' suicide/homicide bombers is untenable to both the U.S. and Britain.
Just some of my thoughts on the matter.
Once again, fine writing!
Bush & the Poodle (Article) - 3/17/2003 8:57:48 AM
yep - a week or so ago, I wrote in my private journal just how this would play out in the early stages...sadly, it appears to be coming true. Democracy? haha - when the majority of all nations' citizens have voiced dessent against this outrage, yet their GOVERNMENTS will support/ignore this?
It's time for people everywhere to ASSERT their democracatic principles...the earth is in great peril from all governments' military
power... small-time terrorists are NOT the significant threat! IMO
Bush & the Poodle (Article) - 3/17/2003 1:19:56 AM
Written from the heart! True but alas would mean nothing more than "Yes teacher, I protested", Fire in the heart needs to be backed up by firepower.
Bush & the Poodle (Article) - 3/16/2003 6:02:56 AM
This is excellent write from you...Very very deep and powerful write...cheers..love n luck..BHUWAN
Plight Of The Prisoners (Article) - 3/13/2003 4:54:09 AM
Whenever in the world a great change for good has come about, there was first a single voice raised in protest. May you be heard!
Plight Of The Prisoners (Article) - 3/8/2003 3:27:54 AM
u know that i would grade ur work as great.
Plight Of The Prisoners (Article) - 1/14/2003 2:40:34 PM
A Wise step towards Wisdom
Student and Politics (Article) - 1/11/2003 2:36:02 PM
I would agree with most of ur comments. Alot of valid points, one sticking point throughout the article is that student politics is in many ways part of the establishment. Rather than discouraging student politicians perhaps they should form independent organizations , student unions therefor making a fresh start without the filth of the establishment.
Plight Of The Prisoners (Article) - 10/2/2002 12:54:05 PM
Not read completely....! So, consider these as grace marks! :-)
I guess good journalism is still alive...
Force In Marriage? (Article) - 9/30/2002 12:48:10 PM
Again, your scholarship shows through these wonderful words and into our world..
Oceans Away (Poetry) - 9/6/2011 1:22:50 AM
THE SHAGGY BLACK HORSE (Poetry) - 5/11/2006 6:34:50 PM
i like this
Lost (Poetry) - 5/11/2006 6:33:59 PM
enjoyed the read
From a Far East Beach (Poetry) - 9/27/2005 5:54:56 AM
Sweet and beautiful like a soft breeze.
If You Could Feel What I Feel (Poetry) - 9/20/2005 5:58:13 AM
What a deep beauty! Your words will be with me for a long time.
If You Could Feel What I Feel (Poetry) - 9/6/2005 8:43:53 AM
Whao! What a lovely set of words reflecting the emotions from inside. Wonderful write.
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 12:41:22 AM
This is an international anthem of kids from all around the world ... bravo
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 12:32:55 AM
:-) My God...
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 12:31:26 AM
This is a painting of a scene which only a talented poet dressed with a powerful muse can see or only an angel with broken wings suffering nostalgia... This is indeed very original and very beautiful poem. "Pit patter of rain kissing the ground", rustling of leaves whispering to the wind, Angels praying and nightingale singing a note she stole from you"..... Aren't you the Wordsworth of cyber age.
I am very pleased after reading your poetry. plz keep it up.
From a Far East Beach (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 12:22:19 AM
Similarity in missing ang gazing at the bright stars.... wow.. it is very romantic
If You Could Feel What I Feel (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 12:19:19 AM
"Patient fear", "surprised tears"
It is a very powerful write.
If You Could Feel What I Feel (Poetry) - 6/23/2005 4:39:29 AM
The continous struggle of trying to keep up with the roller coaster of emotions in our daily batles with our surroundings is a part of makes us human.
remember what you said if not today then someday ...
If You Could Feel What I Feel (Poetry) - 5/29/2005 10:22:21 AM
"Of loving and keep loving,
How tired a heart can feel"
I can relate most intensely with these verses and to the whole poem. Thank you for sharing it, Shezray. Love and peace to you. Regis
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 5/29/2005 9:49:06 AM
Awe---Sweet #1 and #1 - make two - Both are Perfect- alone or ToGether Shezray.- it's Beautiful!
If You Could Feel What I Feel (Poetry) - 5/29/2005 9:40:11 AM
Never give up Shezray- Keep the Faith! This is a really nice poem- HuGs,Sheee
If You Could Feel What I Feel (Poetry) - 5/28/2005 9:25:29 AM
wonderful write, shezray! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, a friend in america, karen lynn in texas. :D
From a Far East Beach (Poetry) - 2/28/2005 9:48:05 AM
wow...lovely romantic write...clap clap clap..love n luck...BHUWAN!!!!
Pearl in a shell (Poetry) - 1/17/2005 2:42:47 AM
Stirring memories of mirages forgotten.... very beautiful
By NightFall (Poetry) - 10/23/2004 5:23:59 PM
You write wonderful poetry. Love this indeed!
Sandie May Angel :o)
From a Far East Beach (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 4:47:09 AM
That is a very romantic description of missing someone. Loved it! Good job, April
From a Far East Beach (Poetry) - 7/27/2004 4:02:57 AM
This is lovely poetry with great longing expressed. Well-done, Shezray!
Sandie May Angel
By NightFall (Poetry) - 6/19/2004 6:30:17 PM
beautiful imagery ... i like this poem very much ...
By NightFall (Poetry) - 6/17/2004 7:03:01 PM
Excellent write with an enjoyable pace. I loved the graphic and layout as well.
By NightFall (Poetry) - 6/17/2004 1:52:38 PM
Mesmerizing and captivating verses, Shezray. Thank you for this offering. Love and peace to you. Regis
By NightFall (Poetry) - 6/16/2004 5:24:08 AM
splendid. Like the colorful dream-like stae this poem brings about.
Pearl in a shell (Poetry) - 5/31/2004 10:40:52 AM
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 4/27/2004 2:26:49 PM
What a wonderful picture and a most wonderfully penned poem!
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 4/3/2004 9:27:54 AM
Photo and graphics complement one another to create a wonderful offering. Thank you, Shezray. Love and peace. Regis
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 3/7/2004 4:59:01 PM
I like the picture of the little kids you chose to go with your poem. Its a great poem. I was thinking how pretty that photo of you is in your biography. And that's not all in my mind.
Pearl in a shell (Poetry) - 1/16/2004 7:18:05 PM
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 1/16/2004 7:13:57 PM
Nice little poem indeed.
Greetings from Atlanta.
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 12/6/2003 7:40:19 PM
Oh my God...a wonderful concept of surrender with the innocence leading to ultimate sacrifice, just to get love in return. Picture is nice too.
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 11/17/2003 6:39:20 AM
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 12:51:54 PM
fun and cute
full of goodness
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 12:34:34 PM
Excellent and well written!
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 12:33:30 PM
Well done Shezzzzzzzzzz.
Don't ever change for anyone.
In Your Mind (Poetry) - 11/16/2003 11:40:18 AM
Excellent poem and message.
Pearl in a shell (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 10:40:03 PM
Pearl in a shell (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 10:07:19 AM
This is a beautiful piece, Shez.
It's so nice to see you here again.
Pearl in a shell (Poetry) - 11/8/2003 10:03:25 AM
Interesting write, and beautiful emotion.
May Lu a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
NEBULA (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 9:12:21 AM
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 10/20/2003 9:07:39 AM
It is a very nice poem indeed.
Greetings and blessings from Atlanta.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 3:59:14 AM
This bought tears in my eyes.....heartfelt and realistic write....but above all an excellent tribute....love n luck.....BHUWAN
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/13/2003 3:33:20 AM
What an exceptional tribute, brought tears to my eyes. So sorry for your loss, though she will always be with you.
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 7:42:13 PM
A moving and heartfelt tribute, excellantly done!
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 3:35:37 PM
What a moving, sensitive tribute, Shezray! Thank you for sharing...
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 1:57:15 PM
wow, this is wonderful, I could feel you in your writing..... good write
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 1:25:58 PM
Excellent poem of tribute, Shezray.
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 1:20:16 PM
So very heartfelt and moving. A beautiful and loving tribute.
ORCHIDS BY YOUR LAKE (Poetry) - 8/12/2003 11:20:40 AM
Brilliant, outstanding, bravo...just...wow!
NEBULA (Poetry) - 7/27/2003 3:04:46 PM
It is written brillaintly .. but a bit ...hmmm .. intriguing i should say .. but still great writing
NEBULA (Poetry) - 7/26/2003 6:43:11 PM
Wah ji wah! ;-) Loved it
NEBULA (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 11:30:12 PM
Loved the imagery and pic.
NEBULA (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 8:50:22 PM
Great imagery.. Floating behind your eyes.
NEBULA (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 6:24:17 PM
Excellent....Loved this much....BHUWAN
NEBULA (Poetry) - 7/25/2003 12:08:07 PM
Great imagery ... nice message!
Your Sun (Poetry) - 7/12/2003 11:47:19 PM
beautiful imagination..beautiful as you are..very nice..
off course every end is the begining of something new.
Your Sun (Poetry) - 6/26/2003 9:26:10 AM
So lovely and full of inspirational hope!
Your Sun (Poetry) - 6/26/2003 2:54:42 AM
a wonderful rendition of hope ,may you always see colours in the setting sun :)
Your Sun (Poetry) - 6/26/2003 1:51:08 AM
Beautiful write...this is excellent write from you...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Your Sun (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 1:38:23 PM
Very pleasant write! Hopeful for the morrow.
Your Sun (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 12:24:50 PM
Shezray, There is always hope and the possibilities are endless as long as we keep trying. Great train of thought. ~SH~
Your Sun (Poetry) - 6/25/2003 12:00:57 PM
Of all things life is- and isn't,
it always remains full of possibilities.
So nice to see you back.
Slip Away (Poetry) - 5/20/2003 7:19:53 PM
A haunting piece. All I can say is, my friend, you have company.
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 2:23:45 PM
Shezray...its just too good ...too good !! no exaggeration, im just surprised at how u manage to say so much in just a few lines......buhat aalaa !!! lov ya !! Mus.
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/19/2003 1:04:26 PM
hmm.....cant put it better than farrah....makes two of us then.
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/17/2003 1:49:18 PM
I think I already told you how much i like this but it really is something special! Well done!
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 9:06:36 AM
That which does not kill us makes us stronger. Keep up the good fight, Shezray.
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 8:33:17 AM
Beautiful verse and lovely picture.
Slip Away (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 8:32:20 AM
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 7:40:13 AM
Your poetry is evolving. I think this is very good. ~Joseph
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 5:29:11 AM
WOW WOW WOW...Shezray...this is excellent write....a complete and gripping write from you...clap clap....love n luck....BHUWAN
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 4:59:16 AM
SheTake it by its horns
For I''m looking for tranquility
In the eye of a stormzray,
This is beautiful,"
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 3:49:18 AM
This is sooooo good. A poem with strength!
Sandie Angel :o)
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 3:41:21 AM
Shezray, very good poem. Hope you find what your looking for. Some search forever and I believe it is because they give up too easily that they never find it.
From The Ram (Poetry) - 4/15/2003 3:39:30 AM
Five (Poetry) - 4/13/2003 10:11:41 AM
"..without you my existence is imcomplete !!!"....:)..what would we do without you shez....!!!! love ...Mus !
Slip Away (Poetry) - 4/12/2003 6:37:03 AM
Indeed a beautiful pice of work. It makes me to read it again & again, and each time I feel the same depth. Wonderful
Slip Away (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 1:05:45 PM
An excellent expression of sadness and pain. ~Joseph
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 1:00:12 PM
I find this very delightful ... I especially like the last line! ~Joseph
Five (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 12:56:07 PM
if i could afford to cry i would have ... but alas ... i was touched ... i hope you know what you mean to us ... like farrah said what would we do with you ... my ib ...
Five (Poetry) - 4/11/2003 6:54:39 AM
what would we do without you :)
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 4/4/2003 8:57:23 AM
This was very lovely! I really enjoyed reading this sweet verses,
Five (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 12:05:42 PM
Shezray, great emotion and warmth and reaching out to your friends. And strength
inside to know you were wrong and admit it.
You are a very good friend to have in ones corner; theirs or mine. Very good. Loved
your poem and the truth. Bill
Five (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 5:13:27 AM
Heartfilled emotion in this warm tribute!
Five (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 4:00:25 AM
Lovely tribute, great poem
Five (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 3:59:44 AM
This is very sweet dedication...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Five (Poetry) - 3/29/2003 2:33:07 AM
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/28/2003 2:07:13 PM
A very soulful piece of artwork Shezray! It is we who must give these angels wings with our prayers. Thank You for being courageous enough to speak the truth. ~Joseph
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 10:39:06 AM
it's so sweet how you've taken this war from a little child's point of view. very moving ! and the picture is so apt for this poem.
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 3:09:26 AM
it has alot of depth............very nice.
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/27/2003 1:24:38 AM
Too sad and too good. The picture alone is worth a thousand words.
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/25/2003 1:47:19 AM
Brilliant work Shez, Alexander is right and I hate politics and the power trips that come with it. Humanity is caring about others, which you have shown...keep it up.
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/24/2003 6:00:25 AM
wow...now this is great tribute...very very deep and powerful write from you....This is one of your best write till date...superb...hearltly write...I think the leaders should read this once...war is evil...i hate war....take care..thank u...love n luck...BHUWAN
Black (Poetry) - 3/22/2003 2:23:50 PM
...i always think of u as a good artist with a great mind ....n uve just proven that right ...like all times !!!...cheers n lotsa love ...Muss !
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 3:09:07 PM
never will get over man's inhumanity toward humanity... the horrors of war are particularly hard upon all children... for their innocense has been destroyed...
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 2:11:57 PM
So beautiful ...and I pray for them too. I am so pleased to read this here today.
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 9:56:41 AM
I pray for them too.
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 9:22:49 AM
my prayers are with those people, too! :( (((HUGS))) to you, shezray! >tears < (but i am inclined to disagree with alexander's comment.)
I'm An Angel (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 7:45:13 AM
Excellent. Wars only kill innocent children. Bush's "liberation" of Afghanistan and Iraq is nothing but a big lie.
Black (Poetry) - 3/21/2003 6:57:13 AM
So, hey shez, u not only write - u draw too?? what else don't i know? :) excellent write yaaar!
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 9:27:27 AM
An excellent poem and I love the sketch too.
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 9:08:03 AM
Darkness prevails, and the fate of the planet is on the tightrope. Who is it at the ends, holding and shaking - threatening life as we know it? (the power-players with the military muscle that seems to obstruct their brain function.) - a terrifying write.
I am too outraged to be as sad as this should make me.
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 7:08:03 AM
Excellent words and art Shezray.
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 6:27:54 AM
Very intense write with an equally intense sketch. Wonderful combination of talents.
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 5:27:20 AM
Sad but true write...heartfelt...this is overflow of sad verses...hope ure free and fine..take care...cheers..love n luck...BHUWAN
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 4:04:53 AM
I'm impressed Shezray. It seems you hold many talents. Keep up your beautiful work.
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:19:40 AM
Shezray, very nice pic and poem. I don't know why but it gave me a very spiritual feel.
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:17:53 AM
Hello....This is excellent meaningful write...thought provoking i must admit...well..the picture is stunning....the whole presentation is perfect...cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN
Black (Poetry) - 3/17/2003 3:16:40 AM
I applaud you for an extraordinary choice of pic and the outstanding poem to match this pic. Great write indeed Shezray!
Sandie Angel :o)
THE MESSAGE (Poetry) - 3/15/2003 6:26:11 AM
This is one of your best write...This is full of sentiments and truths...cheers..love n luck...BHUWAN
Slip Away (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 6:09:38 PM
Oh how much I loved these words:
I cant catch that shadow
I can no longer chase that dream,
Slip Away (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 1:05:17 PM
sometimes its too hard to let go.....but for the sake of self preservation...and self respect you have to......but if you can write out your sorrows...take that path...because you do it with beauty and style...
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 6:45:44 AM
Hey...this is superb write from you...enjoyed this much...superb...love nluck...BHUWAN
Slip Away (Poetry) - 3/14/2003 4:54:56 AM
a haunting, delicate piece of soul
Slip Away (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 10:10:24 AM
Oh I hate it when the heart is in pain excellent write.
Slip Away (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 6:36:15 AM
Absolutely beautiful and very, very sad.
Slip Away (Poetry) - 3/11/2003 3:47:10 AM
sad write...but realistic write...hope that ure fine...cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Hush, Don't Cry (Poetry) - 2/27/2003 8:54:16 AM
lovely Shez...just lovely
The Dip (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 9:57:04 PM
Oceans Away (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 9:47:33 PM
Strange things happen in life...............
beautiful.....writings. i hope where ever he is, he comes across this, & realizes he is still cared about.
Hush, Don't Cry (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 9:32:25 PM
its v nice..........
but life is too short, to weep or cry inside. if u look beyond the dark curtain, some where the sun still shines.
Hush, Don't Cry (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 11:52:18 AM
...it is said less is more ...n u just proved that right !!!...gr8 goin yaar !! lov..Mus
Hush, Don't Cry (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 7:17:11 AM
Wow...this is what i like much...small and sweet write...very deep and powerful indeed....loads of depth in this write of urs....cheers...love n luck....BHUWAN
Hush, Don't Cry (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 5:11:39 AM
Good things come in little packages. Nice write Shezray.
Hush, Don't Cry (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 2:58:20 AM
Hush, Don't Cry (Poetry) - 2/22/2003 1:21:48 AM
So much said in so few beautiful words.
Lovely Shezray. Chrissie x
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/17/2003 5:24:08 AM
If i had an option to choose none, I would, ever poured hot warter on ice cold hands? ... I dont even recommend tryin it! Shez, be strong and stay warm. Love Baz
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 1:58:03 PM
nice. wellwritten meatphors. excellent flow.
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 12:42:11 PM
The title caught my attention, your words drew me in. A well-crafted poem.
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 9:52:47 AM
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 9:44:09 AM
Shezray, you have post quite a dilemma haven't you? The fire drives me wild and the ice makes me feel cold. So you know I choose fire. Bill Murray
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 8:36:09 AM
Nicely written Shezray.
The choices we must make...
I think I'd choose both. The fire would melt the ice, which in turn would put out the fire.
But then again, my luck, I'd then most likely drown. lol.
-Hope all is well,
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 8:18:10 AM
I've read something like this before...about which was the better way to die. What inspired this work? Its very nice.
OF FIRE AND ICE (Poetry) - 2/14/2003 7:55:24 AM
Shezray...This is very very wonderful write...excellent write...i like this....i like this....cheers...love n luck...BHUWAN
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 8:34:33 PM
Alone and Lonely was a poem filled with emotion but it was written so nicely
MOVING ON (Poetry) - 2/9/2003 8:30:21 PM
Shezray Moving On was a poem with an excellent message a powerful strong message which I can relate to. Loved this exploding write. It was grander than grand!
The Dip (Poetry) - 1/29/2003 3:13:22 PM
You are describing the passing away of someone dear to me so perfectly ...
one last sigh. Excellent writing.
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 10:58:14 AM
Go ahead makes the skies cry. no wonder its been raining. well hey they laughed with you now they cry with you. All part of life. great words but too sad if you ask me. Just because there are no ripples does not mean the pond is not there. Its in tranquility, ripples are turmoil. let it be. The pebbles doesnt distort things. it just gives you a different view of everything.....be glad for your heart is alive, it feels.
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 7:55:13 AM
Ab mein kiya kahon??? Itni painful hay kay mujhay yahan baith kay bhee chubh rahi hay! ;-)
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 1/22/2003 4:52:42 AM
I feel every word. I love it.
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 6:00:38 PM
Oh so sad dear. So lonely and no ripples in the pond. Take a pebble in your hand shut your eys, and toss the pebble in the water. Then make a wish and open your eyes. The pebble will make a ripple and your wish will come true. Bill Murray
MOVING ON (Poetry) - 1/20/2003 10:52:57 AM
That first step is always the hardest.
I liked this.
THE MESSAGE (Poetry) - 1/16/2003 8:12:18 AM
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 1/16/2003 8:04:01 AM
Remember, in a pond without ripples
it takes but a pebble...
Alone and Lonely (Poetry) - 1/16/2003 1:37:50 AM
Shezray, what a beautiful name, and what a sad, brilliant poem. So much heartache in your words. Really a swell conveyance of sorrow. Like a broken heart. On the mend? Deb
SANDS OF TIME (Poetry) - 1/5/2003 4:09:51 AM
Nice work keep it up
FREEDOM FIGHTER (Poetry) - 9/1/2002 6:52:37 AM
Yes very true
THE MESSAGE (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 5:37:00 AM
Great work!!!keep it up!
MOM (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 5:34:37 AM
im absolutely in love with this poem of urs..its out of this world...
Oceans Away (Poetry) - 8/29/2002 5:29:48 AM
Wow...i cant believe that we r related?;)
THE SHAGGY BLACK HORSE (Poetry) - 8/7/2002 9:40:55 PM
In The Rain (Poetry) - 8/7/2002 12:58:00 PM
I'm just a sucker for a good rain poem. I get the feeling from this that you have danced in more than a few rainpours. Very soothing.
In The Rain (Poetry) - 8/7/2002 6:02:32 AM
WOW! That is all I can say! WOW! Bill Hugs
In The Rain (Poetry) - 7/14/2002 11:22:30 PM
I love your writing style and the way you express yourself.
JILTED (Poetry) - 7/2/2002 8:18:31 PM
too little, too late. Exceptional writing
In The Rain (Poetry) - 7/2/2002 8:16:30 PM
absolutely lovely imagery, and great usage of words.
In The Rain (Poetry) - 7/1/2002 2:37:30 PM
Ahhh "And thatís when I knew that
I had looked in the eyes of God" wonderful.
In The Rain (Poetry) - 7/1/2002 12:02:21 PM
well done........ ;0)
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/24/2002 2:08:21 PM
i think nobody couldve commented better than Ghuffran. really imaginative, takes u right there where uve been n makes one want to think how easliy u got ure thoughts such a wonderful image ..well done ..like always ...it was fantabulous !!!
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/23/2002 4:10:40 PM
Exellent attempt!! Very nicely written.
SANDS OF TIME (Poetry) - 6/19/2002 11:24:14 PM
"I remain a cameleer... moving swiftly through the shifting sands of time... seeking direction from the winds of change... and moving towards that oasis, always on the horizon."
Ur poem reminds me of the above i wrote in o'levs while describing myself... Sometimes u remind me of what i felt about life back then. Now everything is too practical... for me there are no footprints in the sand... and if someone comes into my life only to leave a void and a "cold white glare" then they werent worth being part of my life anyways!
People are more important, if they mean someting to you never let go... hold onto THEM instead of their footprints and their memories.
Moral of the story : I am worth holding onto for the rest of ur life ! ;)
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2002 1:01:28 PM
Superb rendition of human soul expression...u are so aligned with your spirit... hold on to it always
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2002 12:15:07 PM
A great reminder of beauty that's all around us.
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2002 12:05:38 PM
a beautiful rendition of what we all wish we cud get a glimpse of..ur gifted...its beautiful!
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2002 11:50:46 AM
well if i say it again i'll be repeating what everybody said...but envy the rain i envy the reason you were in the rain in the first place....what lucky girl....find me a reason to look into the eyes of God also....but lovely my dear....i am sure at that moment God smiled upon the earth because you smiled of sheer happiness at him...
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2002 11:22:27 AM
So Beautiful and The rhyme part is amazing! I envy the rain! :)
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/18/2002 3:41:01 AM
nature is very revealing...
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 2:45:44 PM
Excellent writing; you brought it to life.
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 2:02:05 PM
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 1:44:47 PM
I feel the cool touch of rain on my face even as I sit in this office....
In The Rain (Poetry) - 6/17/2002 1:25:11 PM
A dance of sanctity...most beautiful...;-)
THE MESSAGE (Poetry) - 6/12/2002 11:20:36 PM
You have a beautiful sensitive soul! Your writing is sublime, touching! Enjoyed this poem very much
JILTED (Poetry) - 6/12/2002 11:18:09 PM
MOVING ON (Poetry) - 6/10/2002 2:52:03 AM
it's really good..... never knew u were into poems !
IN Your Eyes (Poetry) - 6/8/2002 9:51:59 AM
JILTED (Poetry) - 6/7/2002 8:30:25 AM
i am sure your friend is crying by now .....touched me deeply wonder what it did for her...........
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/7/2002 8:24:42 AM
i always said you were amazing.....but after that i hope you remember to mention me in your pulitzer prize speech.....lovely my dear
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/6/2002 11:55:32 PM
I was feelin that girl! Keep it up and me posted k?
MOM (Poetry) - 6/3/2002 3:46:23 PM
MOM (Poetry) - 6/3/2002 4:31:14 AM
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/3/2002 4:22:45 AM
Hmmmmmm! I am silence becoz thats the language of God.and what gives U , when u are going to be a small creator....... Congratulations
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/1/2002 5:02:28 PM
Beautiful poem... I can hear it.
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/1/2002 4:38:12 PM
Very good, the imagery is excellent, and the lines are well structured. Bravo.
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/1/2002 4:32:24 PM
I love the images you are sharing with us and the sounds. Wonderful write.
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/1/2002 3:14:15 PM
Shezray, your poem is very beautiful! (BTW thanks for the kind review of my poem your thoughtfulness was most appreciated!)
Stolen Note (Poetry) - 6/1/2002 1:15:58 PM
MOM (Poetry) - 5/29/2002 12:52:02 PM
A very good write. I wonder what you comment on reading my poem, "To Parents, with Love".
MOM (Poetry) - 5/29/2002 12:19:05 AM
I wudve given it 11 but its not in the scale!!!.....good work shezray,keep it up!!
MOM (Poetry) - 5/4/2002 2:43:41 AM
Shezray...this is just in time for Mothers day. I bet many readers will use it and mamy moms will cry happy tears on the 12th of May! Thanks Gorgeous!!!
MOM (Poetry) - 5/4/2002 2:34:02 AM
Ideas present themselves quite fluently... nicely composed. I wonder how it'll feel to open up to my mom like this !!! 8-9 days before mother's day ur poem comes at JUST the right time for me to copy for amma ! :)
Sincerely WANT you to win ! ;)
MOM (Poetry) - 5/4/2002 1:05:37 AM
MOM (Poetry) - 5/3/2002 6:18:03 AM
Hey Sis... That was really sweet! I have no doubts about you getting the Big Award!!!!! Best of luck!
Oceans Away (Poetry) - 5/2/2002 10:16:02 PM
very beautiful, and moving
MOM (Poetry) - 5/2/2002 10:10:03 PM
well u did it again.I'm sure ur mom would be proud of u, as for the prize i wish u all the best.A delightfully delicious stuff.
MOM (Poetry) - 5/2/2002 9:29:45 PM
Each line accurately triggers off its expected emotional response. The poem sails across the imagination laden with literary associations ransacked from the riches of the Human Nature... :)
Oceans Away (Poetry) - 5/2/2002 11:26:59 AM
WOnderful writing gurl, glad to see one after a long time!
Oceans Away (Poetry) - 5/2/2002 10:57:57 AM
IN Your Eyes (Poetry) - 5/2/2002 10:54:31 AM
how beautiful! wow!
MOM (Poetry) - 5/2/2002 10:52:14 AM