Recent Reviews for Tony J. May Sr.
Will Duck Dynasty Survive Phil (Short Story) - 12/20/2013 7:02:05 AM|
Aside from this is an article in the stories section, your points are well taken.
Not every poor boy from Louisiana with a hobby making duck calls can turn it into a multimillion dollar business and then top that off with a top rated cable show that is about as inane as it can get with lots of propped up humorous stuff to keep the audience laughing (like the countless sitcoms with laugh tracks or "live" audiences for a laugh a minute for a half hour or an hour… All keeping us sedated in our silent majority hard-working, nose to the grindstone, lives.
That does not give him the right to get on his soapbox and announce his own opinions as though they were fact and expect the audience to bow down like they do to his "show." In this case, he out trumped the Donald in arrogance, ignorance, and stupidity.
You are not Trayvon Martin, Kanye West, or Jay Z (Short Story) - 7/27/2013 9:33:15 AM
I'll try the experiment, the thought of doing so is very intriguing.
You are not Trayvon Martin, Kanye West, or Jay Z (Short Story) - 7/16/2013 7:16:56 AM
A very poignant and timely article. From its very beginning there were people who felt that slavery in the United States was an abomination. It took until 1865 with the Emancipation Proclamation for slavery to be abolished. But American apartheid continued in full force until 1965 with the Civil Rights Act forced reform on how society views black people in our culture. The process is continuing and may take another hundred years when we are more racially mixed for those fears and prejudices to finally go away. But your article and others going to the streets are making that transformation happen, altbeit too slow for this generation.
The DNA of those of European and African origin are slightly different. Those from Europe have about 2.5% Neanderthal DNA and those from Africa do not. That may tell us something about the character of those from Europe being of slightly more belligerent and thickheaded than their African brothers.
While I've had thoughts about black culture and some of the negative impacts that result, in my personal dealing with persons of color and other cultures, it's all been about their character. And my experiences have been exceedingly good and sometimes disappointing when my expectations of an individual's character failed.
I served on the faculty and staff of two black higher education universities for 33 years. I have felt the sting of discrimination for being white, and, in addition the subtle discrimination of being disabled. While I was still walking, I passed very well for normal, and climbed my career ladder quite rapidly in spite of some obvious discrimination by employers like, “we didn't hire you because it was unsafe for you,” or “I don't know how you can keep up the shop.” When I was forced into wheelchair 22 years ago, the subtle “accommodation” started setting in. It's the same kind of age discrimination that often occurs in corporations.
I am waiting for the time, “when we can all just get along.”
Interrelated associated items of achievement (Short Story) - 6/20/2013 5:56:46 AM
While I wholly agree with the premise of your article (not story), that perseverance and working as a team or as individuals against great odds achieved great things, I have a couple of nitpicking things that I'd like you to consider.
I believe it was the 4 minute mile that was thought to be impossible before Roger Bannister finally broke the barrier.
The other accomplishments pale in comparison to landing on the moon. For that achievement, we became extraterrestrials, setting us on a course to the stars and a quantum leap from discovering nuclear energy.
I can't place bottled water has some kind of achievement overcoming all odds. The earliest civilizations stored water in terra-cotta bottles 8000 years ago. From goatskin bags, to canteens, carrying water was essential for those who hunted and gathered, and couldn't find water for days. Bottled water is similar to the discovery of fire in that regard.
As for the modern bottled water, while it may be lifeblood to parts of the world that no longer have any clean, potable water to drink, the commercial bottled water we have is a bane to society. Bottled water in plastic bottles is very expensive, and proven to be no better, and, in many cases, worse, than water from municipal water supplies and tested wells. The cast-off bottles pollute our streets and communities, and end up in the water and are washed to the sea, adding to the buildup of plastic clogging our oceans and killing birds, mammals and fish in untold numbers just for our convenience and wasteful lifestyles. I get along fine without ever drinking and carrying with me a plastic water bottle.
I wish Mom had a computer, I think (Short Story) - 6/12/2011 9:43:09 AM
I must read this poem, lol. Let me go read it now.
A lady commented in her blog ... (Short Story) - 6/12/2011 9:37:08 AM
The lady should know that two wrongs don't make a right. And has she prayed for a man who will treat her right?
Great write, Tony.
Holiday Hints (Short Story) - 12/12/2010 7:38:03 AM
Thanks for the advice, Tony. I enjoyed the humor and promise not to wrap hugs. I plan to deliver them personally. :)
Son, have you prayed about it? (Short Story) - 12/11/2010 11:32:24 AM
Wow! All in one breath? My late mother used to ask the same question of us children. Sometimes, she would suggest, "Let's pray right now." And she did, no matter if she were home or in the grocery store. She walked that closely with Him. I respected her stance and your title drew my attention. Incidentally, Do you still take your mom's advice and pray before every decision? I must say I'm guilty of remembering every time, but my baby sister sure has jumped on the band wagon. She's married and she and her spouse practice this very model. I know to wait about three day before I receive an answer from them - just about anything. So who's right? Just asking.
The Attraction Equation (Short Story) - 4/27/2010 4:45:26 PM
I like this! A great perspective, well done.
Have you ever noticed? (Short Story) - 4/29/2009 10:55:30 PM
Hahaha you are soo funny! Thank you for the laugh!
I wish Mom had a computer, I think (Short Story) - 2/12/2007 4:49:02 PM
Hahaha!!!! Wonderfully-told. I've read your poem as well. But I'll have to agree with John, this could be true as well.
Wonderful work, Tony!!!!!
Sandie May Angel :o)
I wish Mom had a computer, I think (Short Story) - 2/12/2007 2:54:47 PM
That was funny. But has a lotta potential to be true. I know. I'm his brother.
A lady commented in her blog ... (Short Story) - 10/11/2006 3:10:29 AM
After reading your write, I had many thoughts...for what the lady said about treating all men like trash...well we can't judge all people according to one or two persons mistakes...you are correct my friend about our nation being founded on God, this is true and yes we are fighting against the principalities of the enemy Satan. It is not a perfect world nor ever has it been since Eve took the bite of the forbidden fruit. We were put here for a purpose, and war is a part and fulfillment of the Bible, the signs are all around us...everywhere if people will take their blinders off...but people do not want to see the truth or face it, just as they didn't want to believe it when Noah warned them about the flood, or when the city of Sodum and Gamorah was destroyed, our time is quickly coming to a close and it is our choice if we want to waste it and focus on the negative or try to still find what good is left in the human race and press on toward a better life later...I choose to keep on living one day at a time, pray much for myself, family, neighbors and our country, meditate, write, work, read my bible, I guess I ramble on too!
Blessings from Kentucky,
Ladies it's simple really (Short Story) - 8/27/2006 9:23:00 PM
What a Sweetie U R Tony ~ Honest and to the point, SOoo let me ask you... Do you like your women indepedent or dependent on YOU! manyly! not All the time... I find your take on Women very interesting as I do your mind!
Thanks for giving us credit, I shall write of men soon! and my appreciation to them! I hope your women/partner is feeling alot better, and for you to check on her-Shows you care deeply!
To know she willingly helps you with a smile, *( at times, My dict. is above on my PC too, but sometimes, you don't want to take the time to find the tough word at that time) hearing the sound of her voice is a great reason! Partnership is what I feel should exist! To Listen and to really care and try to have Patience when moody times are near. Men have their times of rotten disposition, many women know this and let them be, women just ask the same from a man! Good luck on your Life Long Journey of Friendship, Love and Parntership ETc. In that order I venture to say! Glad you wrote this and you wrote it clearly and distinctly! Enjoy! Your day ~ She is lucky to have a caring man at her feet/heart and mind! As I'm sure you feel the same at this time! Love and WArmest of Blessings my friend ~ Warmly, Sheeeoxo
State slogans pt 1 (Short Story) - 2/16/2006 2:14:04 PM
Yes...i totally agree on the fact that people make fun of us Alabamians,and it makes me mad b/c we are a part of the US just like every other frickin state!!!!!!And it isnt right!!!!!
Dad, does that hurt (Short Story) - 2/9/2006 11:11:20 AM
Enjoyed the story; well done! :)
Have you noticed part 2 (Short Story) - 2/8/2006 1:28:09 PM
Sorry, still on the floor. :)
Have you ever noticed? (Short Story) - 2/8/2006 1:27:12 PM
As soon I lift myself off the floor, I'll leave a real comment....:)
Dad, does that hurt (Short Story) - 2/8/2006 1:24:34 PM
Tony, this was great! I love it.
Have you noticed part 2 (Short Story) - 2/2/2006 3:07:50 AM
enjoyed the read
Be afraid ...be very afraid or Friends, Roman's, Countrymen ..... who cut t (Short Story) - 10/7/2005 12:35:35 PM
Lololol!!! To, you're bad! Are you sure you never planned this punishment?
Sex to go??? I think not ! I'll eat it/have it here (Short Story) - 10/2/2005 6:27:58 AM
Oh you are bad, bady, bad! Great imagination, I loved this!
Be afraid ...be very afraid or Friends, Roman's, Countrymen ..... who cut t (Short Story) - 9/29/2005 8:34:11 AM
good story; well done! :)
Lord concerts part 1 (Short Story) - 9/26/2005 2:01:06 PM
Sex to go??? I think not ! I'll eat it/have it here (Short Story) - 9/18/2005 9:11:09 AM
Lolol ... I wonder what they would have as condiments .... lolol!
I want to be the one (Poetry) - 10/22/2014 8:20:57 AM
Catchy lyrics. Are you going to put it to music?
These sentimental things (Poetry) - 9/15/2014 8:08:54 AM
The sentimental things that I've been dreaming about, keep calling, calling, to me.
Simple songs, sung with great emotion, like this one, are the best.
That girl (rewrite) (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 3:03:51 PM
Enjoyed - hope you can one day put it to music.
That girl (rewrite) (Poetry) - 3/1/2014 10:54:57 AM
I can't picture the music, but I can sure relate to the theme…
I Still Love (That Girl) (Poetry) - 2/28/2014 4:30:33 PM
Short Love Perspective (Here I Am) (Poetry) - 2/20/2014 9:09:28 AM
A very thoughtful and mature view of what a relationship should be.
However, I am going to have to turn down the invitation in the last paragraph because I'm strictly for the distaff and not wishing to link up with any guy anytime soon.
Short Love Perspective (Here I Am) (Poetry) - 2/19/2014 10:02:21 PM
You got it right. Lovemaking is every word we say to each other and also sadly the potential of deeper passions that are lost as we neglect to listen, engage, give, receive and basically understand who we are and who our perspective partners are.
Sadly, I used to be guilty of this and eventually Jesus showed me what real love is all about. A GREAT write Tony. A GREAT write...
I'd Do It For Love (Poetry) - 2/4/2014 9:19:10 AM
It's a great song. And a great theme… What we all do for love.
I'd Do It For Love (Poetry) - 2/4/2014 7:20:45 AM
what an enjoyable read tony...i loved the beat
I Would Hold You Again (Poetry) - 2/1/2014 12:18:16 PM
Would make a great song. Full of emotion and remorse. Loved it.
I'm Lonely (Poetry) - 1/29/2014 8:38:08 AM
You've got a lot of company. And you'll have a lot more when this song airs.
Love Is Just Words (Poetry) - 1/28/2014 8:42:25 AM
I can envision someone singing it with conviction enough to win a Grammy with it.
This is why (Poetry) - 1/19/2014 2:05:59 AM
It felt like a beautiful love song to me too....have you a tune?
This is why (Poetry) - 1/18/2014 10:56:10 AM
Because it was meant to be. Perhaps a song?
This is why (Poetry) - 1/18/2014 10:39:28 AM
Such a universal theme in romance and why it would make a wonderful song.
This is why (Poetry) - 1/18/2014 3:43:21 AM
this is why
Another day of ordinary blues (Poetry) - 1/11/2014 11:20:01 AM
Life can be pretty mundane, but it is how we choose to live the individual moments that matters...that is where the joy lies...
Another day of ordinary blues (Poetry) - 12/29/2013 8:34:27 AM
Like making lemonade out of lemons. We must make joyful music out of ordinary blues. Interesting questions raised as we continue through our ordinary lives.
Let Go (Poetry) - 12/27/2013 12:00:22 PM
Love at first sight sometimes lasts a lifetime. And then again, sometimes it doesn't last all.
Gimmie yo' love (Poetry) - 12/25/2013 5:06:54 PM
Great poetic song Tony. This is a romantic song with soul that tops most all songs written today. Amen!
Gimmie yo' love (Poetry) - 12/25/2013 10:53:25 AM
I really like this one. It's got all the right vibes. But I really think she is a bit conceited, don't you think?
Everything Is You (Poetry) - 12/24/2013 12:37:53 PM
This one is lost and will never return. The good thing here is that this would make a great song if you took some of the stanzas and created a refrain.
Otherwise, like I always say… Time to move on.
Everything Is You (Poetry) - 12/24/2013 9:44:25 AM
Love is a many splintered thing!
Everything Is You (Poetry) - 12/24/2013 1:28:27 AM
Well done with romantic relationship poetic flair Tony. The title says it all. Yes, we would do anything and everything for that special woman. Why don't they know that? Then again, do we really want them to know that? That's the mystery of it all. That thing called love. It should be so easy but then when we seem have it all figured out, we really don't...
Have a Merry Christmas Tony beyond your wildest dreams!
I am, love was, we are (Poetry) - 12/22/2013 8:44:14 AM
Love is and was and always will be everything to those in love with each other.
Simple Poem ... love it seems (Poetry) - 7/9/2013 10:55:05 AM
The kind of poem I love best. Simple and direct, it conveys deep meaning, especially for the one you love. I know that she loved it too.
Simple Poem ... love it seems (Poetry) - 7/9/2013 5:29:41 AM
Love is a beautiful thing as described in your wonderful poem.
Simple Poem ... love it seems (Poetry) - 7/8/2013 12:16:59 PM
Great poem Tony! Love - something we cannot see but people have fought and died for it throughout history.
May you have peace, love and blessings,
John Michael Domino
I wish ... (Poetry) - 2/26/2012 4:56:29 PM
I wish, oh how I wish that your wishes come true. Awesome piece!
I wish ... (Poetry) - 2/25/2012 11:12:57 AM
I wish that this were put to music.
I want the truth, nothing else (Poetry) - 2/16/2012 11:26:25 PM
I like the lyrics, Tony. Reminds me of your piece, "The economy of words."
Are we free (Poetry) - 9/18/2011 5:40:38 PM
Nice hip-hop poem! I feel the words and they are powerful and true! Thanks for sharing Tony!
Are we free (Poetry) - 8/22/2011 4:03:42 AM
I do not see much hip/hop poetry posted here, but you get your message across with this one... Thanks for sharing...
To know you (Poetry) - 2/4/2011 7:59:27 AM
What a lovely song Tony, a joy to read.
To know you (Poetry) - 1/30/2011 7:13:48 PM
just friendship is best in a relationship sometimes.
I'm Missing You (Poetry) - 1/17/2011 1:36:36 PM
You've taken the word "if" and woven a tapestry that is a testament for all who love as you do. Loud applause for this wonderful write.
Perpetual (Poetry) - 1/16/2011 8:51:23 AM
So tender, a beautiful love poem from the heart.
Perpetual (Poetry) - 1/14/2011 12:40:15 PM
Love Song (Poetry) - 1/9/2011 6:55:44 AM
Very romantic song. I hope you are trying to sell it. Do you have a musical composition to match? Not that I could help you. It is more of a rhetorical question. ~ Sara
Love Song (Poetry) - 1/4/2011 10:14:38 AM
This is so beautiful, tender, loving and passionate.
Stacy ... in a quiet moment (Poetry) - 1/1/2011 9:26:31 AM
One of your best! It really gets stronger with each verse! Nicely done!
This Is A Lover's Prayer (Poetry) - 12/24/2010 12:50:06 PM
A well felt song. A wise person once said, "We usually find it when we stop looking for it and accept the void." I hope you find Love in the void.
Rewrite (A First Kiss) (Poetry) - 12/23/2010 10:23:04 PM
A good rewrite to post, Enjoyed reading it very much. There can never be too much love passed on in this world these days.
A First Kiss (Poetry) - 12/22/2010 8:07:51 AM
Such a lovely poem. Merry Christmas My Friend.
A First Kiss (Poetry) - 12/22/2010 3:49:21 AM
well written, a song to be sung and enjoyed.
His Sin (reprint) (Poetry) - 11/15/2010 5:35:34 AM
Beautifully romantic and heart touching.
Valerie (Poetry) - 5/20/2010 4:14:09 AM
Valerie (Poetry) - 5/19/2010 4:21:11 PM
Valerie (Poetry) - 5/16/2010 6:55:16 PM
wow! Very nice!
Valerie (Poetry) - 5/16/2010 3:00:48 AM
A very accomplished piece, Tony
When God decides to make a woman(revision) (Poetry) - 5/4/2010 2:48:19 PM
TRULY 'BEAUTIFUL WOMEN' THINK OF GOD ALMIGHTY AS THE HEAD OF THEIR LIVES...FROM THERE, THE SKY IS THE LIMIT!!! THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS, LOVE, JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Sentimental Reasons (Poetry) - 4/23/2010 2:24:12 AM
Excellent work, Tony
Sentimental Reasons (Poetry) - 4/22/2010 5:17:26 PM
Oh what a romantic treasure as you share your beautiful, loving heart....
Be always safe,
Sentimental Reasons (Poetry) - 4/22/2010 8:07:40 AM
Nice start, Tony! I do believe that when you set your mind to it, any good things can happen. Love this!!
Sandie Angel :o)
Pour me like rain (Poetry) - 4/20/2010 1:45:13 AM
Agree with Wynne this could easily be a song. I loved it!
Pour me like rain (Poetry) - 4/19/2010 12:31:49 PM
I loved it! :)
Pour me like rain (Poetry) - 4/18/2010 5:39:38 PM
I like this; very rhythmical. I could easily hear this as a song.
The Coldest Days Of Summer (Poetry) - 4/15/2010 1:39:27 AM
Well achieved poem, Tony
The Coldest Days Of Summer (Poetry) - 4/13/2010 7:19:36 AM
I like the idea of that coldest day in summer being summer anyway. Great meter, and a well-put message for your friend. --Charlie
Pour me like rain (Poetry) - 4/9/2010 6:21:24 AM
Tony this is truly stunning work.
Pour me like rain (Poetry) - 4/9/2010 4:39:10 AM
Really excellent, Tony !
Ladies your attention please, ladies ... ladies (Poetry) - 2/1/2010 1:03:44 AM
I don't know if one would consider me beautiful, most the time I don't really care, as life is just so full of responsibility, one hardly has the time to consider..We just throw on the makeup on the way out the door, hope to of covered the dark circles through lack of sleep, age, stress, all that lovely stuff!!
As for special favours, pffft this is the 21st century, women don't get special favours for anything. In fact u get knocked flying in public places if your not careful..Smaller communites are a little more apt to hold a door for you, when the blue moon shines..
No, gone are the days of chivalry
Gone are the days of women being revered as anything special..Unless you're lucky enough to of found the one in a million decent fellow..
Beautiful women, that are beautiful on the inside as well as the outside, scarcely get a break, but beautiful women who are wonderful to look at on the outside only...They seem to land on all four paws nicely.
That sum it up Tony?
Thanks for your survey, sorry I am so hard on the opposite sex..I've reason enough to be for a while I think.
Do To Me (pt2) (Poetry) - 1/28/2010 9:40:11 AM
Whoa! Tony, this Song just gets better and better! Rock her World! I feel the passion pumping of the words. You be writing! And feeling..
BLESSINGS of Peace and Harmony, SOULFUL_PurplePaSsionsSHEE
Do you get your music published snd sung!?? I hope you do!
Do To Me (Poetry) - 1/28/2010 9:02:05 AM
Good Poem of Reaching Out Tony! Did it Work, as you write of the Fine Inspiration it nay have blessed you with!Your heartfelt writings are INTERESTING! As I may read part 2 - Reciprecation is means to double pleasurs!, letks hope she read anbd knows your genuine intentions.
BLESSINGS of PEACEFUL Harmonies, SOULFUL_PurplePassionsSHEE
Ladies your attention please, ladies ... ladies (Poetry) - 1/28/2010 8:45:08 AM
Tony! I HAVE NO REAL COMMENT! But, I found your questionable Poem tactful and tasteful of concern! Major Concern? I won't go that far as I will ponder them awhile, From a Beautiful Soul to another, We all do the Best we can with what we have!And, that's putting it mildly :)
Blessings of PEACE and HARMONY, SOULFUL_PurplepassionsSHEE
another thought (Poetry) - 1/5/2010 6:26:18 AM
This is so wounderful. I thank God for making you!
another thought (Poetry) - 12/10/2009 1:59:35 AM
This is nice
We can fall in love (no chorus yet) (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 4:55:20 AM
This is very very good.You are talented.take care
a thought (Poetry) - 12/2/2009 4:52:56 AM
Excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
We can fall in love (no chorus yet) (Poetry) - 11/28/2009 8:09:44 AM
i like it
Time (Poetry) - 11/25/2009 4:26:09 AM
Get on the Bus Gus, and don't make a Fuss...SORRY! Tony, just had too... You write Beautifully amd with such Human Truth (I could feel)!
Loved reading your poem! We can never look back only ahead to a better and more happier Future as We learn from eachother... I wish you a HAPPY AND WONDERFUL "THANKFUL" Thanksgiving Day! May your bounty runneth over!
Blessings of Peace and Light, PurpleSHEEoxo
GOD BLESS YOU!
Sentimental people (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 7:41:42 PM
The beauty in this piece is its simplicity and longing for a most genuine love to surpass the test of time, so beautifully written...
Be always safe,
I'm the one (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 11:52:42 AM
Very sexual, it's got me motivated.
Sentimental people (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 8:11:35 AM
Following the natural flow of natural life is all that it can be.
A very natural poem written ..naturally.
Sentimental people (Poetry) - 11/22/2009 6:32:45 AM
Very nice, a romance flower bloomed here.
I'm in love ... (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 11:08:39 AM
Very sensual, got me thinking. HMMM, I think I'll keep it to myself, however, I do need to ask you a question. See me on FB, wall-to-wall.
Heartbeats and passions (Poetry) - 10/17/2009 4:35:14 AM
I tink everybody feels this way from time to time. As if you're doing, saying or feeling something that no one on the outside understands. So one of you is trying to conform in one way or another. Seems everybody has a version of this struggle. Life is a series of goals and obstacles. You just have to keep creating a new way to overcome.
Yeah, oh yeah!! (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:06:24 AM
This is very good,I enjoy reading it,take care
This is ... (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 8:58:14 PM
I envy you for the inner beauty that you express so endearingly...
Be always safe,
This is ... (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 10:37:39 AM
A wonderful song, heart touching and well penned.
This is ... (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 10:36:15 AM
As always, nicely done. Good vibes.
This is ... (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 9:11:51 AM
VERY NICELY DONE WITH GREAT PHRASES. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
This is ... (Poetry) - 7/27/2009 8:10:38 AM
Sonnet to Shelee, (as it was the day I wrote it) (Poetry) - 5/20/2009 12:08:43 AM
Beeautiful writen poem.Take care
Sonnet to Shelee, (as it was the day I wrote it) (Poetry) - 5/17/2009 8:49:10 AM
Any woman would love this poem written for her. You Shelee is a lucky woman.
Slow Motion (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 4:49:30 AM
This is very good.I enjoy reading it,take care
It's Not Falling In Love (Poetry) - 5/1/2009 6:14:41 PM
I agrre with Belle here Tony...Love if its real will heal...not hurt. Well done
It's Not Falling In Love (Poetry) - 5/1/2009 6:06:53 AM
Beautiful song Tony and love should heal, not hurt.
Cowboys Never Fall In Love, But I Did (Poetry) - 4/27/2009 2:32:57 PM
"But you did" and all that came before lingers on in your mind and heart.....
Be always safe,
What Did God See (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 5:25:26 PM
When God created everything ready for man, He created Adam, but when Eve was created, He had second thoughts...and a headache.(LOL) Nice poem and message!
Lament (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 5:23:07 PM
Sad arrangement - love in two shifts! Maybe you can catch up on the days off...real love is still makes thing beautiful as the poet declares. I like the way you wrote the verses, it gave the poem greater impact.
Lament (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 6:39:40 AM
What a very special and endearing proposal. She would be crazy not to accept.
Some People (Poetry) - 4/24/2009 2:29:43 AM
A well written piece,I enjoy reading it,take care
Some People (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 1:25:16 PM
Promises are made to be broken, and love is as perennial as the grass.
Today, most people (not some) think that "singleness is bliss".
Some People (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 12:31:17 PM
Sad yet uplifting as our emotions journey through...
Be always safe,
Missing You (Poetry) - 2/26/2009 6:43:05 AM
This is very bittersweet and lovely Tony~I can hear it in my mind with some haunting melody behind it...
Goodbye forever ... I love you (Poetry) - 1/24/2009 9:51:29 AM
I enjoyed this very muc~I think it would make a lovely song~
2 b with u (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 5:04:59 PM
Reverently down to earth, filled with such true expressions....
Be always safe,
2 b with u (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 8:25:49 AM
I like! I like! Great words, Tony! They should be put with music!
2 b with u (Poetry) - 10/12/2008 6:15:17 AM
Beautifully worded and expressed. Words every woman wants to hear from the man she loves. HUGS! SC
Because you're beautiful (Poetry) - 8/28/2008 12:31:28 AM
A beautiful Love Offering, from a beautiful heart! SC
The pleasure of you (Poetry) - 5/12/2008 9:48:01 AM
A beautiful romantic writing!
The pleasure of you (Poetry) - 5/12/2008 6:37:26 AM
Very Romantic and expressive. Well written.
The pleasure of you (Poetry) - 5/12/2008 5:27:33 AM
Very soulful and romantic!!!
Sandie May :o)
Goodbye forever ... I love you (Poetry) - 4/29/2008 4:10:23 PM
How painfully sad and disheartening, but sometimes it just was not meant to be. You are in my prayers.....
Be always safe,
Unafraid to love (Poetry) - 4/27/2008 12:26:41 PM
I love this, saving it to my library!!
Unafraid to love (Poetry) - 4/24/2008 5:56:10 PM
You are so right and I guess that is why "trial and error" is so much a part of learning and sometimes re-learnin life's lessons...
Be always safe,
Don't break my heart (Poetry) - 4/23/2008 12:20:13 PM
Oh my this makes a beautiful song, how well it flows as an endearing and eternal love....
Be always safe,
Don't break my heart (Poetry) - 4/23/2008 8:42:58 AM
Words that have been echoed through time from all of us opening to share praying for honorable hearts that care. You penned it well. Love is a limb on a tree and you never know unless you try how sturdy that limb is. Well Done! Deborah
Are we free (Poetry) - 3/2/2008 4:40:25 PM
Freedom is something we must allow ourselves...nice poem
What Did God See (Poetry) - 2/19/2008 6:16:26 PM
Awsome write and it makes me wonder what would God say to us for all we are doing, or rather not doing to keep his creation alive and well...
Be always safe,
What Did God See (Poetry) - 2/19/2008 5:45:21 PM
This is a really cool poem! I love it!
What Did God See (Poetry) - 2/19/2008 7:18:33 AM
T h i s p o e m i s a w e s o m e !
Enter it somewhere--it has to be a winner.
Am I (Poetry) - 2/5/2008 8:34:25 PM
A hear a sense of insecurity, but if we never try how will we ever know? Wonderfully written and very well organized....
Be always safe,
Livin' for you ... (Poetry) - 1/22/2008 5:29:18 AM
Enjoyed your song, from your heart.
Come home again (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 7:21:53 PM
And the cycle of life continues. At birth we come down from the heavens and at death we return.....
Stifle (Poetry) - 12/21/2007 5:34:15 AM
Another gentle, sweet, passionate Love Offering. SC
Stifle (Poetry) - 12/20/2007 4:40:52 AM
This is a very lyrical piece on love. Interesting, with a nice, easy flow. I enjoyed the chorus interspersed between sections of the narrative. Nice work. Uplifting.
You were made for me (Poetry) - 12/5/2007 7:33:13 PM
Precious! There are very few non-poets that grasp the beauty of poetry, that is very sad, because we really can't talk to non-poets because they can't get where we are comin from, we are truly not of this world, we live in the kingdom of fantasy, a most beautiful place to dwell! This was a beautiful Love Offering! SC
3 verses (Poetry) - 12/4/2007 10:56:44 PM
So beautifully worded and expressed! SC
The Oh ... girl you love me! (Poetry) - 12/4/2007 10:48:50 PM
There is nothing like lookin into the eyes of yore Beloved and see love shinin from them for you! Loved this! SC
It can never rain in my heart (Poetry) - 12/3/2007 5:48:08 PM
Tony, this reminded me of..."When a man loves a woman," this is a reminder to us all that as long as we have love, the rain won't bother us at all. I thought this was really good!
It can never rain in my heart (Poetry) - 12/3/2007 1:02:44 PM
When a man loves a woman, it is an awesome, beautiful thing! Great write! SC
It can never rain in my heart (Poetry) - 12/3/2007 6:46:00 AM
It's not silly at all Tony, it's uplifting and joyously loving.
Hard to find (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 3:25:41 PM
No one really knows what love really is, that's why love is impossible to find. I refuse to quest for it anymore, for it does not exist for me, so I will quest for inner peace and leave love to the dreamers! Another beautiful, sad write from you! SC
His Sin (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 2:59:56 PM
So beautifully worded and expressed! Most men have no clue as to how to love a woman. A woman, to most men is just a booty call or a Mama replacement. A real woman needs a real man, not a troubled little boy hidin in a man's body! I adore yore poetry! SC
Hard to find (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 4:38:30 AM
Why in deed is love so hard to find?
You were made for me (Poetry) - 11/27/2007 5:36:38 AM
That's great! It says a lot. It's a really well written poem. At the same time, I suppose it's therapy. Lord knows it seems that we need more and more of that these days. I can't see how you won't show this to her.
Will love be the end of me (Poetry) - 11/25/2007 5:25:58 AM
Sadly beautiful! Yore writes are always so very real and ones I can relate to. THANKS! SC
Will love be the end of me (Poetry) - 11/23/2007 10:15:27 PM
Yes it hurts, but we all have learned that no matter what we, as a single entity, must continue forward. Nicely written...
Created you (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 9:32:48 PM
Such wonderful expression and love to give.....
Created you (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 12:10:20 PM
You are so beautiful and you can express yore beauty on paper for all to enjoy and treasure! HUGS! SC
When you say my name (Poetry) - 11/3/2007 10:48:37 AM
NIce love lyrics
Another one (incomplete) (Poetry) - 11/3/2007 10:47:00 AM
Awww sad but nice write.
A melody of love (unfinished) (Poetry) - 11/3/2007 10:16:04 AM
So beautifully worded and expressed! The lonely heart is always looking for love's melody, so they can sing along! HUGS! SC
Another one (incomplete) (Poetry) - 11/3/2007 10:12:59 AM
Yes Dear Man! I am that other one! I can so relate to your words, they bring comfort to a breakin heart! HUGS! SC
A melody of love (unfinished) (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 8:53:09 AM
It explains hopes and feelings a lover has towards a person whom she/ he admires.Though these hopes and feelings could not be fulflied or painful they still define love for somebody the speaker calls My melody of love.
A melody of love (unfinished) (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 8:28:27 PM
Thoughts of sweet love, oh how wonderful. One should never give up.....
Falling in love (Poetry) - 10/21/2007 11:39:08 PM
I can so feel and relate to yore poetry! It is lovin, gentle, honest and so real! I am sending yore poems to my beloved, I want to share yore beauty with him! HUGS! SC
A man and a woman (Poetry) - 10/21/2007 11:33:58 PM
You are an AWESOME POET! You write golden verse, reality that all can relate to! I adore yore style! HUGS! SC
When you say my name (Poetry) - 10/21/2007 11:25:45 PM
When you hear yore name spoken with love from the lips of yore lover, it is an awesome experience, one to treasure always! This passionate write really touched me, because I so know what you mean! HUGS! SC
Falling in love (Poetry) - 10/21/2007 2:57:36 PM
Cute piece and it sounds more like you are head over heals in love to me... Can't think of a better way to be....
When you say my name (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 5:31:43 PM
Interesting and very creative. Nice when the imagination has a chance to unfold.....
Satisfied (Poetry) - 8/18/2007 5:49:28 AM
I enjoyed reading this. Thanks Tony.
Satisfied (Poetry) - 8/17/2007 10:55:59 AM
Tony this is absolutely exquisite and heart touching.
In love with you (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 8:38:34 PM
Enjoyed reading, Patti
In love tonight (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 9:55:59 PM
Partridge in a pear tree?? Now that is original and started me laughing so..... Enjoyed your poetry, so very heartfelt, yet light!
You happen to me (Poetry) - 5/10/2007 9:19:54 PM
Oh, I love this... This one too. :)
Loretta (Poetry) - 3/13/2007 7:46:17 AM
There's Loretta Lynn. *grins*
(((HUGS))) and love, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Loretta (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 5:22:53 PM
I loved this...
Freaky Tonight (Poetry) - 2/12/2007 4:47:22 PM
Hahah!!!! You are a good storyteller.
Sandie May Angel :o)
Doesn't she know I love her (Poetry) - 2/11/2007 6:16:05 AM
Beautiful verses, Tony.
After this poem yes, she'll know:)
Blessings to you,
You're Gone (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 9:10:36 AM
Happen To Me (Poetry) - 2/5/2007 8:04:33 PM
this will make a nice tune, maybe one more verse then the riff
i like it,
Happen To Me (Poetry) - 2/5/2007 3:08:39 PM
This is a love come true .... (Poetry) - 10/26/2006 5:36:37 PM
This is a love come true .... (Poetry) - 10/26/2006 3:57:29 PM
A beautiful song, Tony. I can definitely hear this one should it be set to music. Splendid. Thank you!
The ways ..... of love (Poetry) - 10/25/2006 1:02:41 PM
Excellent...somewhat sad but people relate when things fit their circumstance; present or past-Brava!
It comes down to this (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 3:59:51 PM
Heartfelt song; someday I hope to hear the melody!
Peace&Grace my friend,
Bombs An' Butterflies (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 2:36:02 PM
Amen; God is all we need.Peace&Grace, Sharon
If ... I Had Wings (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 2:31:51 PM
Good Point!If I had...wings.Good message.
I Got To Have It (Poetry) - 10/23/2006 9:36:14 AM
there was a time....but no i don't club either. good poem though
Your Eyes (Poetry) - 10/20/2006 6:37:23 PM
Very good romantic lyrics; I see the sound in your pen; lovely!
Not again (Poetry) - 10/18/2006 6:15:06 PM
Awesome piece...truly heart warming...thoughting. Thank you for sharing your prayer!
The moment (Poetry) - 10/18/2006 6:13:07 PM
Well written...heart to heart!
The way you love (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 3:43:03 PM
Sorry, I read the review & truly had to admit; like Edwin, the blanks take away from the real meaning of what you're trying to say... Fill in the blanks...
The way you love (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 2:55:55 PM
Nice!...I think the long and the short blanks represents how you sing the word "love", a long blank means that you'll sing the word love in a longer breath; and the shorter blank means that you'l sing that word "love" in a shorter breath.
Hope I got this right!
Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)
The way you love (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 2:20:50 PM
I guess I don't get it...Is it 'fill in the blanks' or what?
You're MOST WANTED ... (Poetry) - 10/5/2006 6:37:25 PM
I love your lyrics continue to write but put this into some money are behind some tracks, again continue the good work.
Are we free (Poetry) - 10/5/2006 6:35:42 PM
Peace my brother freedom came at birth, I love this I am one of the people from bed sty and believe me they are doing great things, freedom come from the state of mind, continue to teach my brother, I love your style.
Third Degree (Poetry) - 9/9/2006 9:43:01 AM
Brother you're on a THIRD DEGREE roll. Jam on!
I want the truth, nothing else (Poetry) - 9/9/2006 9:35:36 AM
These lines definitely sing with a lot of heart and much conviction. This reader enjoyed I WANT THE TRUTH, NOTHING ELSE, very much.
Ready For Love (Poetry) - 9/5/2006 8:43:15 AM
Oh Yeah! Just jumping around like a littl girl with glee! Heeheee! I was just trying to recit my poem, "My Muse...
then I saw your poem telling us we should jump around. Such a coincident!
Good song lyrics!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Then Came You (Poetry) - 9/4/2006 12:12:05 AM
This would make a neat little folk song.
Then Came You (Poetry) - 9/3/2006 6:28:06 PM
It is difficult to take the plunge again when the last time we did we landed in shark infested waters, but life is for loving and the sense of elation we have when we are in love by far surpasses any pain we have over the losses. Beautiful poem, Tony.
My Lover (Poetry) - 8/28/2006 2:15:32 AM
What a beautiful song Tony! And... I hope she will be your True Love! of your heart, Mind and Soul! Your songs hold so much meaning, and I would love to hear them! I am still prayin'! for ya' my friend~ Love, Light and PEACE! Warmest Blessings!Warmly, *She*oxo
I Can't Forget (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 10:06:14 PM
Holy Shit! if you don't mind me expressing my real feelings Tony~ This song/ poem is So Beautiful, you brought tears streaming from my eyes! Do something important with this one, I feel it deeply. You must and it's a Spiritual plea! You can't forget... I don't know why - their was a parting of the ways, but think of the memories as a step on your Ladder to a more stronger and deeper love that's coming! I hope happiness and Love and peace find you and keep your heart warm! Remember! If you had it once! That is a Blessing! to have it again, you can learn from what didn't work. I 've been there to be able to say that willingly! I wish you happiness and no pain, but for every pain we experience- A Growth and strength and Wiseness is not far behind! I will wipe my tears now! That sounds like the beginning of a Poem I must write. See- I told you- YOu inspire me...Thanks again....My Spiritual writing deep hearted friend~! Love, BRIGHT Light and Warmest Blessings! Warmly, Lady,Sheeeoxo
when I was invincible (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 11:23:06 AM
Yes, i think most of us thought this way in our teen years, then something big happens that ejects us back to reality and we realize that all this posturing is not nearly as important as the things that matter, like family, love, etc. Good flow.
Love is not impossible (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 9:19:22 AM
but it is damned hard! good poem
Love is not impossible (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 8:04:44 AM
Wonderful for you and Barbara!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
I Can't Forget (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 6:15:55 AM
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
My Lover (Poetry) - 8/27/2006 4:52:29 AM
I'd love to hear tis sung. It has a pleasing feeling, a je ne sais pas, if I remenber my darned French well.
When you have to say ...goodbye (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 2:54:19 PM
Wow Tony! That's deep and very sad! YOu have a way of writing exactly what's in your heart, and where it's understood the most! A New Beginning is always a good thing, if looked upon it with lots of Positiveness! YOu did this with your closurer on your feelings toward this person~! I wish you Lots of LOve, Light and Happiness! HuGs, *She*oxo
When you have to say ...goodbye (Poetry) - 8/22/2006 11:06:39 AM
This is really sad, can feelthe loss in your chosen words.
Dance with me (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 9:04:42 AM
She (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 8:59:31 AM
Sweet Tony~ and It is a precious with your feelings expressed thoughtfully! of the one you love dearly! and Truly! WArmly, *She*
You're gonna hurt somebody (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 8:56:52 AM
Wow! YOu have NO problem expressing your feelings and thoughts Tony! I do enjoy reading you! We write similiar! Check out a few of my Poems/writings if you have alittle time on your hands~ This is very clearly thought out and felt! StrOngly! I hope TRUE happiness finds you and keep you feeling complete within! Love, Light and Peace! WArmly, *She*
Your Eyes (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 8:49:16 AM
Very Catchy and True to Nature! Great song I can feel comin' on! Warmly, *She*
free (Poetry) - 8/21/2006 8:46:12 AM
I find your pourring out of wrongful feelings, a Blessing of Change! GReat Write Tony! I feel a song comin' on... WE seem to write similiar, getting the words clearly spoken, writtten and felt! I will be bacccccck, as Arnold once said! Good luck -REmember! Happiness comes from YOU and then out to others! in Warm Blessed ways! Love,Light and Peace! WArmly *She*
free (Poetry) - 8/20/2006 2:48:56 PM
Good start on a a tear-jerking song. Got a melody?
Love me down (Poetry) - 7/30/2006 2:25:44 PM
Sounds like a song to me. Get your band out and cut a track.
A man and a woman (Poetry) - 7/12/2006 7:56:54 AM
A man and a woman (Poetry) - 7/11/2006 7:40:01 AM
Mars and Venus...
This would make a good song.
Right There 2 (Poetry) - 7/3/2006 4:14:03 AM
I could almost hear you sing the song. Wonderful lyrics!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
Are we free (Poetry) - 6/30/2006 12:01:01 PM
Sonnet, I want to make a promise (Poetry) - 6/29/2006 5:52:04 PM
Right There (Poetry) - 6/29/2006 5:49:14 PM
lovely words and feelings~
Right There (Poetry) - 6/27/2006 2:33:08 PM
Right There (Poetry) - 6/27/2006 8:52:33 AM
come here! excellent poem/song
A world for us (Poetry) - 6/26/2006 12:29:06 PM
very nice write and tribute , Tony. Mary