Recent Reviews for Jordis Lane
Insanity (Short Story) - 12/30/2005 11:15:21 PM|
What a poignant write, Jordis! You have described the feeling of being confused, lost and hopeless so well!
Fear (Poetry) - 12/31/2012 7:47:22 PM
This thing named me,
And there is work to do here
Is why I want to believe
And just that. I must challenge the way, however, beware
and to watch out
For being here, for I cannot stop,
as I could
As my time in a weak soul
Can gasp the void of perpetually.
Fear (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 9:12:22 AM
Very dark, but very good.
Persistent Past (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 9:11:31 AM
I really related to this poem. I too have a past that seems to still haunts me at times.
Persistent Past (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 7:23:03 AM
wow, intense and so well written, i have often felt this way myself, we are nothing if not products of our past
Eternal Darkness (Poetry) - 11/11/2005 5:10:03 PM
Oh no Jordis ... you're never doomed!! Turn on the light to Eternal Light!!
Love & Friendship Suzie xox :-)
Untitled (Poetry) - 11/8/2005 10:55:46 PM
This is beautiful! May hopeful thoughts remain and love you find soon!!!
Love Suzie xox :-)
Eternal Darkness (Poetry) - 10/6/2005 10:57:20 AM
Darkly effective; bring shivers to my spine. Well done, Jordis. Love and peace.
Uninspired (Poetry) - 10/6/2005 10:51:35 AM
I know well this feeling/situation, Jordis. Your poetry truly merits more than one reading. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace.
The Watcher (mesmerized) (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:45:16 AM
It is hard to find the right words to express the emotions that these verses awaken. Well done, Jordis. Love and peace to you.
Possessed (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:43:23 AM
This makes me shudder. Powerfully dark and scary. Thank you, Jordis. Love and peace to you.
Fried Green Tomatoes (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:41:59 AM
to the wolves
my soul is
I can feel the emotions expressed. Very well done, Jordis. Love and peace.
My Darkness (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:40:41 AM
Very effective in brevity and choice of words that hit right into the soul. Thank you, Jordis. Love and peace to you.
The Window (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:39:28 AM
I believe there is much truth and wisdom in your poem, Jordis. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you.
Time Passes By (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:37:10 AM
I can relate very well to the sentiments expressed in your verses here, Jordis. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace.
I want... (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:35:45 AM
A yearning in these verses is strongly expressed and expertly shared. Thank you for sharing this offering, Jordis. Love and peace.
I want... (Poetry) - 9/27/2005 7:53:04 PM
excellent! no doubt the ghost will find its home amoung the poetic dunes of time ...
I want... (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 11:35:06 PM
In time and with such determination you will get there. Wonderful hopeful write, Jordis.
My Darkness (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 10:48:56 AM
You chose each word well, to make this a poem dense with meaning but slim in words- good stuff.
My Darkness (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 7:21:10 AM
Excellent peom. Deep and meaningful with expressions of some sadness
Fried Green Tomatoes (Poetry) - 9/6/2005 2:58:10 PM
Jordis, great! Pain's many moods are clearly stated .
great write you have accomplished.
Rich Criso Suarez
Possessed (Poetry) - 9/5/2005 9:25:16 AM
Possessed (Poetry) - 9/5/2005 8:23:49 AM
hard hitting. punctuated. direct.
not my genre, but well written.
Follow Me (Poetry) - 9/3/2005 9:33:59 PM
Intereting concept here, but sorry, you lost me. hey, that ain't hard, i'm usually lost.
BloodStain (Poetry) - 9/3/2005 7:04:41 PM
This poem reads like a rock song!
it's great! Plus your name reminds me of the INXS Challenge show.
I write my poems like songs too and it's a pleasure to see other artists doing too. Excellent!!!
Rich Criso Suarez
Ghost Of Love (Poetry) - 8/31/2005 9:14:51 AM
interesting point of view..i like this
Ghost Of Love (Poetry) - 8/31/2005 9:06:50 AM