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Recent Reviews for Jordis Lane

Insanity (Short Story) - 12/30/2005 11:15:21 PM
What a poignant write, Jordis! You have described the feeling of being confused, lost and hopeless so well! God bless, Sandie.

Fear (Poetry) - 12/31/2012 7:47:22 PM
This thing named me, And there is work to do here Is why I want to believe And just that. I must challenge the way, however, beware Any more, and to watch out For being here, for I cannot stop, as I could As my time in a weak soul Can gasp the void of perpetually.

Fear (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 9:12:22 AM
Very dark, but very good.

Persistent Past (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 9:11:31 AM
I really related to this poem. I too have a past that seems to still haunts me at times.

Persistent Past (Poetry) - 11/28/2005 7:23:03 AM
wow, intense and so well written, i have often felt this way myself, we are nothing if not products of our past

Eternal Darkness (Poetry) - 11/11/2005 5:10:03 PM
Oh no Jordis ... you're never doomed!! Turn on the light to Eternal Light!! Love & Friendship Suzie xox :-)

Untitled (Poetry) - 11/8/2005 10:55:46 PM
Oh Jordis This is beautiful! May hopeful thoughts remain and love you find soon!!! Love Suzie xox :-)

Eternal Darkness (Poetry) - 10/6/2005 10:57:20 AM
Darkly effective; bring shivers to my spine. Well done, Jordis. Love and peace. Regis

Uninspired (Poetry) - 10/6/2005 10:51:35 AM
I know well this feeling/situation, Jordis. Your poetry truly merits more than one reading. Thank you for sharing your gift. Love and peace. Regis

The Watcher (mesmerized) (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:45:16 AM
It is hard to find the right words to express the emotions that these verses awaken. Well done, Jordis. Love and peace to you. Regis

Possessed (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:43:23 AM
This makes me shudder. Powerfully dark and scary. Thank you, Jordis. Love and peace to you. Regis

Fried Green Tomatoes (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:41:59 AM
"Ignored I am fed to the wolves of loneliness with no leftovers my soul is empty...." I can feel the emotions expressed. Very well done, Jordis. Love and peace. Regis

My Darkness (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:40:41 AM
Very effective in brevity and choice of words that hit right into the soul. Thank you, Jordis. Love and peace to you. Regis

The Window (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:39:28 AM
I believe there is much truth and wisdom in your poem, Jordis. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you. Regis

Time Passes By (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:37:10 AM
I can relate very well to the sentiments expressed in your verses here, Jordis. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace. Regis

I want... (Poetry) - 9/28/2005 10:35:45 AM
A yearning in these verses is strongly expressed and expertly shared. Thank you for sharing this offering, Jordis. Love and peace. Regis

I want... (Poetry) - 9/27/2005 7:53:04 PM
excellent! no doubt the ghost will find its home amoung the poetic dunes of time ...

I want... (Poetry) - 9/24/2005 11:35:06 PM
In time and with such determination you will get there. Wonderful hopeful write, Jordis. God bless, Sandie.

My Darkness (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 10:48:56 AM
You chose each word well, to make this a poem dense with meaning but slim in words- good stuff.

My Darkness (Poetry) - 9/16/2005 7:21:10 AM
Excellent peom. Deep and meaningful with expressions of some sadness

Fried Green Tomatoes (Poetry) - 9/6/2005 2:58:10 PM
Jordis, great! Pain's many moods are clearly stated . great write you have accomplished. peace'', Rich Criso Suarez

Possessed (Poetry) - 9/5/2005 9:25:16 AM

Possessed (Poetry) - 9/5/2005 8:23:49 AM
hard hitting. punctuated. direct. not my genre, but well written. TX

Follow Me (Poetry) - 9/3/2005 9:33:59 PM
Intereting concept here, but sorry, you lost me. hey, that ain't hard, i'm usually lost. TX

BloodStain (Poetry) - 9/3/2005 7:04:41 PM
Jordis, This poem reads like a rock song! it's great! Plus your name reminds me of the INXS Challenge show. really Great! I write my poems like songs too and it's a pleasure to see other artists doing too. Excellent!!! Peace'', Rich Criso Suarez

Ghost Of Love (Poetry) - 8/31/2005 9:14:51 AM
interesting point of view..i like this

Ghost Of Love (Poetry) - 8/31/2005 9:06:50 AM
nice wirte. TX

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