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Recent Reviews for sarah a playle
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A Criminal Life - Chapter one (Short Story) - 4/18/2010 12:33:24 PM
Definately has some possibilities but should try and watch out for run on sentences and punctuation. Also more details of her surroundings to draw the reader in to the room to see what she sees around her. Looking forward to more...
fee
To you, my brother (Poetry) - 4/6/2010 4:35:17 PM
Deep and intense and one I can understand for I too was the brother who once stood on the outside of the family looking in that smudged window...
fee
Wonder (Poetry) - 4/6/2010 4:57:15 AM
Very touching and mind refreshing views of life and living...nicely done sarah
fee
Wonder (Poetry) - 4/5/2010 8:16:21 PM
For if we cannot fathom the simplest star,
How can we hope to solve the mysteries of our universe,
And thus,
Ourselves.
I appreciate the philosophical perspective that you share in your verses here, Sarah. I find it gives me pause for reflection. Thank you. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis
The Clock (Poetry) - 3/23/2010 7:14:14 PM
I really do like the way you express yourself within your verses, Sarah. Sometimes when I close my eyes, it is as though I can feel time flowing past my face like a breeze. Thank you for sharing. Love, peace, and best wishes,
Regis
The Clock (Poetry) - 1/7/2007 10:37:20 AM
So very true...and NOTHING can stop that ticking of time even if your battries fail...time still goes on!!
Love Tinka
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