Recent Reviews for Sandi L Schraut
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A short, not so sweet love story. (Short Story) - 4/1/2008 11:07:26 PM
A short, not so sweet love story. (Short Story) - 3/14/2008 2:36:10 PM
This piece reminds me a little of the 60's song by Mary Wells..."Two lovers" and yet it is distinctively different in the way it is spun making love the central point of view with the reality of what is...is and can never be changed. Well done, Sandi
Amor
A short, not so sweet love story. (Short Story) - 3/13/2008 8:18:50 PM
2 Things:
Only Fool's Never Make Mistakes....
Your Just Rewards Are Not Of In This (Evil) Physical World...
Etal: (God) Threw Out That Rope Either You As I Hang On To It Or You Hang Yourself In The (Lasso) Loop...
I Can Show You Your Future Mate But, As All You Can't Believe In Beliving What I'd Show You,i.e. I Have Many Future Photos Of Many Thing's (Both Physical & Material ) In Lieu Of "NOT OF THIS WORLD"....
TRASK
A short, not so sweet love story. (Short Story) - 3/13/2008 7:08:10 PM
It's the primal lonelines Sandi, ultimate, destructive and entered at great risk. This is a wonderful concise piece that touches the heartstone. Good writing, well done!
Tom
A short, not so sweet love story. (Short Story) - 3/13/2008 6:52:54 PM
All the heartbreak, heartache, anguish that lies beneath shows one incapable of forgiving one's self for the deeds of another. The guilt must be set aside to fullfill one's own quest in life. Guild is crippling and only leaves dispair. Be strong, see the light and you will learn to freely love another again. Relish in what CAN be changed and all else pack away, for all of life's experiences make us what we are at the moment.... All in all a well told story....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Paper Prison (Article) - 10/4/2009 7:05:33 AM
Too true!!
A Paper Prison (Article) - 4/8/2008 6:03:47 PM
So much for a paperless socirty...nice write!
Goodby to addicts! (Article) - 10/28/2007 5:22:23 AM
Excellent advice. We've also said good riddance to the addicts that we knew. Whether it's drug, alcohol or people addiction, they cab suck the life out of you. We are very proud of you for getting your degree, your self esteem in tact and moving on. Good for you friend.
Janet & Alan xoxoxo
Love Letters in Time (Article) - 5/29/2007 8:43:57 PM
Hi! Sandi, I read "Love Letters in Time". Great imagery. Metaphorically enchanting. You are a natural writer. Best of luck.
Please feel free to visit my site at www.freewebs.com/kendoo and also here in the "Den".
The Value of truth (Article) - 2/6/2007 11:28:52 PM
Hmm! We keep changing the goalposts so the game can go on. But, always, the truth circulates to haunt and ruin every game in due course. This is the promise of Love. Thanks for a fine honest write.
Tom
Big Deal (Article) - 1/4/2007 2:37:15 AM
Maybe we are too thin-skinned. We'd prefer to be like the unfeeling brutish folks (nothing phases HIM!). And we really cannot be totally objective (we are not logical like computers). So, we are thin-skinned and we get our feelings hurt too easily ... and that is what makes us into writers! Come to think of it -- we would not have it any other way. Write on!
Ted
Goodby to addicts! (Article) - 12/26/2006 2:10:17 AM
Deep feeling here, Sandi, and well expressed. I think it is very appropriate for you to withdraw from your attempts to nurture drug addicts. Someone once said (it might have been Jesus) "I love you but I don't like what you do." This statement sets up an adult frame for viewing an addict, instead of the parental frame where you try to nurture them. Nurturing only works when the food you offer is what the child seeks - all else will be rejected. My organization interacts with convicted criminals in jails, prisons, and juvenile detention facilities. We have found that about 80% of them are (or were and will be again) drug addicts. Everything from marijuana to heroin to crack and methamphetamine. The drugs provide them with a "world" where they can be high and empowered and happy - as opposed to living in their sober "normal" selves which are depressed, afraid, self-damaging and awful. The use of drugs makes their "normal" life even worse, as they lose family and friends, and their perceived need for the release of drugs increases. These people live in a speedily descending spiral. And they are very seldom looking to be rehabilitated; they are looking for drugs. You found that you have nothing to offer them because they were looking for right-now euphoria rather than someday salvation. Dave Harm expressed it perfectly, I think. He made his own personal decision (12 years ago) to be sober, and he still makes that decision every day. Your essay is well expressed as a stated closure on a bad situation. Well done.
Ted
Dating Ronnie Last Chapter (Article) - 10/8/2006 7:56:30 PM
Great stuff! You are one sexy writer! Cheers.
Dating Ronnie part 1 (Article) - 10/8/2006 7:42:20 PM
You've done well with this...establishing the era and the feelings of fear and new independance. jim
Love Letters in Time (Article) - 9/13/2006 2:35:39 PM
BEAUTIFUL !!! Its so romantic and heartfelt ! ........
A Paper Prison (Article) - 9/13/2006 2:32:58 PM
Great article with provoking thoughts......
Good Chemistry (Article) - 9/13/2006 2:30:51 PM
Great article. I worked in Mental Health for years and found it quite rewarding....
Self discovery (Article) - 8/31/2006 6:25:23 AM
It's wonderful that you're taking responsibility for your own happiness and trying to influence your life experience! Good for you, Sandi! Good article!
Goodby to addicts! (Article) - 7/2/2006 9:10:59 PM
wow, that was intense and full of feeling.
Rebecca
The Queen and the Wolf (Article) - 7/2/2006 12:58:25 PM
^. .^
*howls with approval* I hope you write more like this, it's the kind of beautiful shapeshifter myth that few people would ever hear, but sorely need. ^_~
...beats a frog any day...
Goodby to addicts! (Article) - 5/7/2006 7:27:12 AM
Thanks for sharing this beautiful article - Could not have said it as well but I know it will help some victims as well as those who love and are effected by these adictions to come to realize that they are loved and they need not do harm to their minds and bodies by finding another god - That they have the only Father God, Son and Holy Spirit (The Trinity) they need to carry them through this Valley Of Tears - Marguerite The Little Flower
Goodby to addicts! (Article) - 4/8/2006 11:22:35 PM
Good advice and common sense.
The world is in short supply of common sense.
I don't have much patience with people who screw up their lives and then expect to be rehabilitated with charity, only to screw up again and again and again. Anyone who would waste their lives on something that has no redeeming value, can stay in their gutter. The rest of us have a life to live and being another crutch for those who can't hold themselves together isn't my idea of common sense.
Best,
Elizabeth
Goodby to addicts! (Article) - 4/8/2006 8:52:09 AM
Excellent letter... as an addict, I know how easily it is to manipulate the ones you "love" into your addiction and fantasy world.
In recovery, bridges still haven't been rebuilt even though I've been sober for close to 12 years. I hold no bitterness nor anger - I do understand their uncertainty. But someday, in God's time, we will be reunited and I can wait. The only thing I can do is be clean and sober, when that time comes.
For every co-dependent, don't think about it, don't believe the stories - run! It's your life and health that you should be concerned with - not theirs. They made their choice - now it's time to make yours...
Big Deal Part #3 (Article) - 9/30/2005 11:24:03 PM
Self-acceptance and self-love are a tough find, but I can see that you're well on your way. Good for you! It's taken me a very long time to find peace within, and even though I still struggle (often!), I'm learning to be ok with ME.
I'll be back to read more of your work :) Thanks.
Tami
Big Deal Part 2 (Article) - 9/30/2005 11:17:05 PM
You have no idea how much I connect with this piece. Sheesh, if I get started, I'll fill this whole box (yikes!)
And why haven't I read you before? Geez, I really need to get out more. (lol)
Tami
Big Deal (Article) - 9/30/2005 11:12:14 PM
You cannot control another's action, but you can control your response to those actions. Woo hoo! You go, girl!
Tami
Big Deal (Article) - 12/9/2003 12:49:19 AM
Sandi, I enjoyed reading "Big Deal" I surely believe it is true. Although written some time ago, I agree with Jessica.
On another note, I totally enjoyed your short stories about dating. Thank you for sharing your writtings. Best of luck in all you do!
Big Deal Part #3 (Article) - 5/13/2003 10:30:19 AM
I have Sandi's book. I read through it often. I know Sandi from nursing school days and we've kept intouch. Everytime I talk to her I see the growth that she has accomplished. She has given me the courage to grow into a happy and healthy woman. And I thank her profusely.
Big Deal Part #3 (Article) - 3/17/2003 4:13:13 PM
enjoyed the read
Big Deal Part #3 (Article) - 2/24/2003 12:47:12 PM
Are we related? LOL You gooooooo, gf.....you deserve all the things you're doing for yourself. Only you can make yourself happy and it's a decision you make to be happy, it doesn't just happen. Enjoy! Huggggs, Diana
Heart-safe (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 11:56:30 AM
I can completely relate to the meaningful sentiments that you share within your verses here, Sandi. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
The drug I need (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 11:55:26 AM
A fine ode to a fine brew, Sandi. Love and best wishes,
Regis
It's in the threads (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 11:54:38 AM
Substance to reflect upon, Sandi. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
It's in the threads (Poetry) - 11/11/2009 9:45:00 PM
Very true, and very well penned, Sandi. Excellent!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
By the title, was wondering if this was about sheets (thread count). The more you have, the softer they are. LOL
It's in the threads (Poetry) - 11/11/2009 8:55:50 PM
so true, well put
A Full Plate (Poetry) - 11/3/2009 11:08:58 PM
a great walk through a day, and a full plate life
The drug I need (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 11:12:37 AM
One Of Your Z Best Is The Trick...
Your Friend, TRASK
The drug I need (Poetry) - 10/29/2009 3:22:44 AM
I'll drink to that.
Just got French Vanilla myself.
Fine write.
John
One day at a time (Poetry) - 9/25/2009 6:18:49 PM
Very well said, always live in the moment, it's all we have. Never worry over what was or what is coming, just what is at the moment.
Good advice.
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Heart-safe (Poetry) - 8/20/2009 12:50:08 PM
Whole Idea Is To Remain INTACT!
TRASK
A Full Plate (Poetry) - 8/20/2009 4:04:31 AM
Wow, one could read a lot into this fancy full of delicious metaphors. Pass the salt please. lol ;)
Janet xx
Heart-safe (Poetry) - 8/20/2009 4:00:59 AM
I was always an adrenaline junkie, always hurt too. That is until I met Alan. I am safe, secure and starry eyed too. You CAN have it all. However, if I personally could only have one, I'd take safe and secure. JMHO. You're a real beauty, God's perfect Gem.
Love you, Janet xx
Heart-safe (Poetry) - 8/19/2009 8:20:55 PM
So much has changed over the years, but an adrenaline junkie I think I will always be as I know God is always there...
Be always safe,
Karen
Heart-safe (Poetry) - 8/19/2009 5:54:46 PM
I want this too! Do you think it is really possible? Be Well, Carin'
A Full Plate (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 9:33:21 AM
cute, rich and full enjoyed this much
A Full Plate (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 9:12:44 AM
A most meaningful and thought-inciting metaphorical write, Sandi. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Tell Me what to do Dear God! (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 1:01:50 AM
Your writing style is so personal and so daring. That's what I like. No frills, just a heart laid bare so the rest of us can feel more deeply about life. God hears and uses prayers and poems like these.
~ a fellow human & poet
Is this life or is it merely living? (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:55:20 AM
Once again Sandi, you have put some of the deepest human experiences into very memorable words. You have a very special gift, and I do so treasure your way of speaking.
Keep on blessing us all with your gift, and may God be with you. ~Z
Remembered Moments (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:49:59 AM
This poem preserves, no doubt, the cherished memories of multitudes.
Thank You for capturing the light with words Sandi !
~Z
Without/ within (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:45:38 AM
Very essence of poem- depth revealed.
I see a tree in your form. your poems are a rarity
~Z
Grandbaby (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:28:48 AM
This just became one of my MOST favorite poems. Your well-chosen details communicate so powerfully, that my eyes welled-up just now.
Powerful, clear, and a delight to read!
~Z
Merely passing time (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:24:12 AM
A very readable and thoughtful write about a feeling we all share at one time or other. Sandi, may you continue to write from the depths of your heart, the profound truths of life. And may you continue to be a clear voice for the speechless. I treasure your poetry
love, in Christ, ~Z
I wonder if its true? (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:16:19 AM
a VERY thought provoking exploration of life's meaning; wondering if things really have one, or if THE meaning is instead, just such something we read back into things after they are past, like animals in clouds .
Yes, everything dOes have a meaning- AFter God explains it to us!
Someday, yes, all things will be explained. GREAT POEM!!!! ~Z
The Tie that Binds (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:04:21 AM
Very well put, Sandi. Good choice of images, contrast, to leave one feeling grateful for the tie that binds!
~Z.B.
Nurses (Poetry) - 7/20/2009 12:00:46 AM
I have worked with many nurses down through the years, as a physical assistant, nurses aide, developmental aide and home-care aide, and this is a heart-warming, and well-deserved tribute to all their service. Jesus forever remembered nurses when he gave us the parable of the good Samaritan. God bless all nurses for their selfless devotion and may He use your poem to express the often unspoken praises of countless humanity. ~Z
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