The Traveling Man’s Rhombus (Poetry) - 7/1/2008 8:01:06 AM
Hello Laurence,
I surely enjoyed traveling within the poetic words of your journey!
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
In the Shadow of Eden (Poetry) - 2/3/2006 10:05:52 PM
Now the earth screams in distress because of what the pink creature called man has done to the glorious gift God Gave Them. I loved this piece.
Bobbi
In the Shadow of Eden (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 9:35:14 AM
This is quite a piece, Laurence - and I truly enjoyed reading it.
In the Shadow of Eden (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 6:18:08 AM
I really really like the way the words chase each other throughout this write...Quite thought provoking!!!!!! the labor pains are enough to shake the very cores of others and tear down their realities...
The Traveling Man’s Rhombus (Poetry) - 2/2/2006 1:11:10 AM
Wow. What wonderful comparisons and expression. Excellent work.
Welcome to AuthorsDen, Laurence!
Tami
The Traveling Man’s Rhombus (Poetry) - 1/31/2006 9:16:54 PM
What an enchanting poem. I could feel the cold of the snow, and see the mountains on either side. Sometines transitory relationships are all we have the time and heart for. This one sounds sublime.
Bobbi
The Traveling Man’s Rhombus (Poetry) - 1/30/2006 11:02:58 AM
what a wonderful story...i thoroughly enjoyed the glimpse of a fleeting relationship...or was it