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Recent Reviews for Lorri Proctor
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Jo's Real Face (Short Story) - 7/12/2007 6:06:05 AM
Another good story. Don't stop!
Jo's Real Face (Short Story) - 7/11/2007 4:45:33 PM
Excellent!
A Matter of Honour (Short Story) - 5/6/2007 6:44:30 AM
An excellent story, Loretta. I could just see the little girl dressing up in her mother's old gowns, feel her awkward adoration of the older man. I enjoyed following Tina through her life, and would have liked to read more. This could definitely be expanded into something much longer!
A Matter of Honour (Short Story) - 5/6/2007 5:55:49 AM
Excellent story, Loretta; very well penned~ BRAVA! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Mariana's Pygmalion (Short Story) - 4/9/2007 5:44:01 PM
Wonderful story, Loretta; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Mariana's Pygmalion (Short Story) - 4/9/2007 4:55:03 PM
Loretta, this story is beautiful! From the opening scene with the lovely description of the trees and gardens, to Mariana's touching reminiscence of her friend, and in the end, she is an old woman, enjoying an afternoon outside. It left me with a warm feeling, because I get the sense she has lived life to the fullest and is now content to end her days peacefully, enjoying her lifetime of memories.
XO Jean
Room in New York (Short Story) - 1/8/2007 11:47:42 PM
Hey Lorry - This is my favorite. I like the more subtle style of this one. You're a talented writer. - Gilly
New York Movie (Short Story) - 9/8/2006 7:21:43 PM
Great story, Loretta! As I read this, I felt as though it was a period piece... great descriptives and imagery. I really enjoyed this, thanks.
Tami
New York Movie (Short Story) - 8/9/2006 12:35:12 PM
Enjoyed the read, Loretta; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Room in New York (Short Story) - 7/30/2006 11:40:51 PM
I like the way you left this hang, Loretta. Nice work.
Tami
Office at Night (Short Story) - 7/3/2006 11:17:59 AM
Okay, I'm guessing Loretta - Mary calls Suzy and tells her about what she overheard. Tanya seduces Fred. Suzy walks in on Tanya and Fred. But what happens then? And what happens to Ned and his little Chinese teacher?
God bless,
Sandie.
Room in New York (Short Story) - 3/15/2006 9:31:34 AM
Loretta~
Excellent and satisfying story; very well written and told. BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/13/2007 9:16:02 AM
I am glad I found my way to your back yard. I was inspired by the beauty and your words.
Rose
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/12/2007 3:16:36 PM
Thanks for inviting me into your backyard, well done.
God Bless You and Your Loved Ones
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/5/2007 5:00:30 AM
Loretta,
Your imagery is impeccable.
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 2:51:05 PM
Loretta, I come to your poetry expecting something wonderful and I am never disappointed. This is such a pretty, tranquil write. One day I will venture to the UK and we will sit in your garden in the evening and share a coffee and a chat!
Lovely!
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 7:45:23 PM
Peaceful and relaxing to read.
Thanks for sharing.
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 7:16:15 PM
Awwwww! Such a loving write, full of passion from your backyard delights.......
Be safe,
Karen
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 7:09:36 PM
My back yard is my favorite place to write...Nature has that effect!
Enjoyed this pen...Have a Happy Fourth of July!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 4:36:47 PM
Indeed, looking out to ones garden from the window, it should look like a living picture, as indeed this does...
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 3:57:15 PM
You know I love this sort of poem Lorri, and what a beautiful picture to go with it. You can almost hear those birds singing somewhere in the bushes, just out of sight. Very calming and peaceful.
Love, "Louisa"
My Back Yard (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 2:41:34 PM
Tranquil.
Ron
I Had a Dream (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 1:29:01 PM
Brilliant work..
blessings..
Vesna:)
I Had a Dream (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 12:15:47 PM
Loretta,
A world which is a garden, and all peace to enjoy it.
My kind of place.
Wonderful poem.
I Had a Dream (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 7:58:25 AM
Loretta, yes, I too dream of a land where there will be no differences and where love abounds. This is a great inspirational writing. I truly enjoyed it!
I Had a Dream (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 3:28:01 PM
Blimey on Itunes podcasts I down loaded MLK speach...
Peace will come when man learns to leave his ego, men refuse to fight, and women rule the world....But they need a few days of a month...
The Skier (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 9:00:06 PM
Skiing is a fun activity, but those mountains do dwarf all around them.....
Be safe,
Karen
The Skier (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 8:37:12 AM
Loretta,
I used to ski, and you capture the majesty of the mountains in beautiful lines! There is a certain lure to try to conquor the peaks, and we fail, miserably. LOL But we keep going back! LOL
Well done, saving this to favorites.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The Skier (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 3:40:02 AM
Loretta,
When you look back and see the majesty of the mountain you realize just how small your efforts actually are.
The Skier (Poetry) - 6/5/2007 3:05:17 PM
Excellent poem, Loretta. You certainly captured the beauty and majesty of a snow-capped mountain on a sunny day. Skiing -- Never tried it. Never will. But this poem almost makes me want to.
xo jean
Oh, to be Free! (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 7:22:23 PM
Beautiful and uplifting write, enjoyed this much...glad I stopped by!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Oh, to be Free! (Poetry) - 4/17/2007 10:06:27 PM
uplifting sensitivity ... wonderfully penned ...
Oh, to be Free! (Poetry) - 4/16/2007 5:16:53 PM
What a wonderful poem! I felt lighter just reading it!
Oh, to be Free! (Poetry) - 4/16/2007 4:36:59 PM
Wonderful poem, Loretta; very well done! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Oh, to be Free! (Poetry) - 4/16/2007 1:18:49 PM
Loretta, this is a beautiful poem, such images and the voice is tender and alluring to the finish. Thanks for sharing.
Guardian Angel (Poetry) - 4/15/2007 12:56:40 PM
Perhaps if my mom had met a "stranger in the dark" she would not have gone the way your poem "speaks" of. As well, if angels had not looked after me throughout my life thus far, I do not know where I would be now. Powerful poem, Loretta. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Guardian Angel (Poetry) - 4/10/2007 6:24:26 PM
Neat rendition of those mysterious strangers who come when we need them most and then disappear without notice.
Nicely penned.
thanks,
~D.
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