The Serpent (Short Story) - 10/21/2008 5:01:32 PM
Good show,Dennis. I thought I was reading the Master himself.
Eighth Gate To Hell (Short Story) - 3/10/2008 12:53:37 PM
I was reading and the cat jumped into my lap and I nearly died. Well, not, not really, but I did jump. Great story.
Eighth Gate To Hell (Short Story) - 7/8/2007 12:09:12 PM
What a great story! You can picture him in the corner in the old man's room, waiting. Makes you wonder what the old demented folks see right around check out time! So much for the angels singing and the shiny light at the end of the tunnel - - not in this story! "Twilight Zone" material.
The Serpent (Short Story) - 7/4/2007 3:59:52 AM
Your writing style is captivating! Good stuff. And such a vivid imagination. You're very talented, indeed.
Eighth Gate To Hell (Short Story) - 5/24/2007 4:27:11 AM
Awesome read,I liked how you used the narrative to unfold this story with the pacing slowly building to a dramatic & powerful conclusion! Thanks for sharing this piece.
The Serpent (Short Story) - 2/23/2006 7:28:19 PM
wow; truely a ride of pure satanic pleasure from start to finish.
Charles O'Connor
Eighth Gate To Hell (Short Story) - 2/15/2006 7:33:15 PM
Very strong story. Sends the chills up the spine as any good horror story must. I really liked the period feel you created here as well.
Eighth Gate To Hell (Short Story) - 2/10/2006 9:58:18 AM
Yikes! That kept me riveted to the very end! Great story. Thanks for sharing! April
Eighth Gate To Hell (Short Story) - 2/10/2006 8:30:40 AM
Chilling story; very well done! :)
