Synthetically Yours (Short Story) - 1/2/2012 7:28:51 PM
I know this story needs a lot of editing but it was intended to be the beginning of a novel that I obviously never finished. Maybe if I decide to start the novel again I will clean this up. Before I put a whole lot of effort into such a project I need to know what my readers think of the story in general. If you like this story enough you are excited about this work being expanded then I will definitely consider working hard on this. Otherwise this story will have to stand as it is.
Get Your Foot Off My Neck (Short Story) - 1/2/2012 7:23:02 PM
I did intentionally duplicate parts but this was in fun to show a loop in time. Although this in fun there is the metaphysical implication that our reality is just another level in a dream. To give an idea of my thought process I was recently reading Wisdom of Insecurity by Alan Watts (Writer on Zen) and just recently enjoyed a TV movie short 12:01 PM (1990) and and the independent film called Happy Accidents. I am really glad you enjoyed my story. I am working on short stories now in preparation for publishing a novel. Although my books on philosophical topics will probably come out first.
Get Your Foot Off My Neck (Short Story) - 12/31/2011 5:15:42 PM
i enjoyed your story. however....did your story duplicate toward the middle ...or is this circular reasoning, that which i no nothing about... or just fun, that which i do know something about-ha!