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Recent Reviews for . Crystalwizard
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Wizard's Bane (Book) - 8/6/2007 12:26:26 PM
Hi. You should consider allowing one of our readers to review this work.
Wizard's Bane (Book) - 8/3/2007 6:07:10 AM
Very good. Now for chapter 2?
The cover is nice and I have to agree that it is a handsome wizard indeed.
Wizard's Bane (Book) - 6/7/2007 4:10:42 PM
Looks interesting and loved the cover....very creative! What a handsome wizard too.
Instant Water (Short Story) - 8/4/2007 10:10:19 AM
Nice! Whoosh,...oh, do you think they allow fishing in that new lake?
Strange Names and Odd Words (Short Story) - 7/12/2007 2:46:29 PM
Reminds me of the rose yelling at the lilac because it smells different. Your point is well taken.
Strange Names and Odd Words (Short Story) - 7/10/2007 4:00:27 PM
If the story is well written and the dialect is well done then the story will definitely be stronger. But a writer had better make sure the dialect is well done or the reader (editor) will put the story down after the first few words of dialect.
A character's name simply has to fit.
Strange Names and Odd Words (Short Story) - 7/10/2007 10:34:15 AM
The reader will always read. Give thanks for the truly committed.
The Sculpter (Short Story) - 2/25/2007 4:55:43 PM
This is very true in our everyday lives. I have met people that would rather have the toothpick, than see something less than perfect. And I am extremely saddened by those poor lost people. Wonderful and insightful write.
Love,
Wendy D
The Sculpter (Short Story) - 2/3/2007 8:47:05 AM
I feel for the man. I'm a bit of a perfectionist (giving an infinite amount of time to the details) myself. And it's true; you have to know when to let go of your work. This is a well written story with substance. A work near perfection itself.
Lulu-Bell and the Great Bar-b-Que (Short Story) - 12/28/2006 12:34:23 PM
Hilarious! LOL Very well done! :)
Lulu-Bell and the State Fair of Texas (Short Story) - 12/27/2006 4:27:35 PM
The title drew me in; I was not disappointed; you capture the spirit and pride of Texas in humerous prose; you done good, really good. :) Enjoyed. Yes. So much so, I'm savin this one. :)
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
I live 12 miles south of Fort Worth. :)
Lulu-Bell and the State Fair of Texas (Short Story) - 12/27/2006 3:58:55 PM
Great story; very well done! Brought back memories when we went to the fair; thanks for sharing! :)
Utter Nonsense (Poetry) - 9/5/2008 4:06:17 PM
Gorgeous! Can I be there for the next treat? Love this.
John
Utter Nonsense (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 7:14:04 PM
Invitingly imaginative, perhaps Miss Elrond should bring brownies to class more often, real cute...
Be always safe,
Karen
Utter Nonsense (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 4:00:14 PM
Ha! I loved this...it just might lead me to share one of my silly ditties!
Thoroughly enjoyable!
Utter Nonsense (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 5:30:02 AM
I really enjoyed this! Delightful for Kindergarten and/or first grade story-telling, but with broad-range appeal to anyone with a little 'child' left in their heart... What fun it would be to illustrate the images you've provided!
Utter Nonsense (Poetry) - 9/4/2008 2:21:00 AM
good one
There's a Lion in the Living Room! (Poetry) - 8/25/2008 7:01:58 AM
Sounds like the school and classrooms I taught in for thirty years. Reading this poem reminded me of another blessing for being retired from that zoo. It wasn't like a zoo--it was a zoo. LOL :D
Secure in the Shadows (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 3:39:02 PM
The words"take nothing for granted" is a valuable lesson for us all to remember. As we get busy with our lives, it is easy to lose sight of the important things in life. It is sometimes hard waiting to see what the future will bring, but as you write, you mention that you are "secure in the shadows." To me, this means that you are prepared to wait for the future, as you are secure with yourself. Stop into my den when you have a chance
Our Sharing (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 3:36:55 PM
Excellent piece! My favorite part of the poem is "Life is a constant reminder. Not of us exists in a void." Your words pulled me into the poem, and made me want to read more! I will be tracking your work, and look forward to reading more. Take a look at my authors den when you have a chance.
Love's Prism (Poetry) - 8/4/2008 3:35:19 PM
Great poem. It is very clever! Stop into my authors den sometime, and check out some of my works. I would love to know what you think.
Poetic Experiment (Poetry) - 5/7/2008 7:27:38 AM
Moonlight chases stars
Brighter than Mars,
shining down
on my
Soul!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
There's a Lion in the Living Room! (Poetry) - 4/5/2008 6:02:01 PM
I liked this. Rather reminds me of something of the light animals poems I like to write every so often. I'll be taking a look at your wizard books to as I am a huge fan of Tolkien and the wizard Gandalf.
From one point of view, the supernatural is all stuff and nonsense, but from another it's magical wonderful lore callling to something deep and everlasting within us. Crystal Wizard, I hope you have achieved wonderful work of great literary merit that readers will cherish. All the best, kenny
There's a Lion in the Living Room! (Poetry) - 2/21/2008 7:39:57 AM
This is a great poem to recite to kids, my nine year old neice will love it with all the animals and the easy to remember rhyme, thanks for sharing!
Shay
Poet's Lament (Poetry) - 1/10/2008 5:02:10 AM
And therein lies the root of my insonmia. Thanks for saying it for me!
Kathy
Secure in the Shadows (Poetry) - 8/7/2007 5:40:24 AM
Great poem.
I enjoy your work.
Teresa
There's a Lion in the Living Room! (Poetry) - 7/29/2007 1:48:53 PM
You sure you haven't been to my house?
Just down the way (Poetry) - 7/29/2007 1:48:01 PM
Beautiful...
Our Sharing (Poetry) - 6/2/2007 8:10:23 AM
oh wow!
am impressed..
vesna
Sixpence (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 12:47:21 AM
Well, I still have a few sixpences, and the rest of the old currency in a drawer. We also had a thrupence, (threepence) which was half a sixpence.Then there were farthings halfpennies, shillings, florins, half crowns. All before the currency was changed. It was much better then. Anyway, nice little poem. Gerald J Tate
Poetic Experiment (Poetry) - 5/14/2007 4:46:07 AM
Lovely challenge
My time is out
I lose this!
Nothing
Came!
Eh eh eh! :) Very nice! angi
Poetic Experiment (Poetry) - 1/24/2007 11:43:28 AM
gorgeous melting ice
once frozen here
brightens life
winters
clear
dang get
did i do it???
Poetic Experiment (Poetry) - 1/23/2007 3:33:30 AM
Scale each obstacle
one at a time
tomorrow
will come
soon.
Poetic Experiment (Poetry) - 1/22/2007 10:40:38 PM
dreams are a window
to a river
watching light
fade to
night
time
Poetic Experiment (Poetry) - 1/22/2007 6:16:00 PM
The rain falls quiet.
Into sullen night.
Washing tears.
Calm Fears.
Rest.
How's that one?
Poet's Lament (Poetry) - 1/20/2007 11:11:51 AM
OMG! This happens to me ALL THE TIME!
It's amazing how easily you can write when you don't want to, Not write when you do want to, and have nothing to come out when you finally surrender to the temptation to.
Very well written!
Bravo!
Our Sharing (Poetry) - 1/13/2007 11:25:50 AM
Great write full of imagery. I look forward to reading your othr works.
Karen
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