Recent Reviews for William F DeVault
The Sacraments (Poetry) - 10/28/2011 8:51:39 PM|
The greatest of the great.
the perfecting dark (Poetry) - 10/28/2011 8:49:19 PM
Such a romantic, poem, words speak the truth.
addiction (Poetry) - 10/28/2011 8:47:44 PM
Very erotic, and agree with Vickie's comments.
Thunder of Lust (Poetry) - 2/2/2011 3:37:07 PM
Evangelist (Poetry) - 2/2/2011 3:35:06 PM
William this is my favorite. Susan
White Sunday 122: blithe (Poetry) - 2/2/2011 3:31:22 PM
Hello William, I have read many of your poems and I must confess I've come to an abrupt halt reading your work. This poem, as well many of the others are exceptional. I do hope to see your work in book form. I'd buy it! You've talent galore. Susan
the quiet crucibles (Poetry) - 12/22/2010 1:42:41 PM
Thank you for sharing this moving, beautiful, haunting poem.
Peace & Blessings,
the quiet crucibles (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 7:55:04 AM
You take us through your love so eloquently.
the quiet crucibles (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 7:53:04 AM
This was a fascinating and most compelling poetic journey !
Certainly can relate ~
the quiet crucibles (Poetry) - 11/11/2010 5:22:38 AM
A fine collection of words. well done Will'
Aubergine (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 6:14:05 AM
Aubergine happens to be my favorite word. You -would- be the one to use it.
Thunder of Lust (Poetry) - 9/9/2010 6:10:48 AM
This is beautiful. I've missed you. Glad to see you're still around.
Thunder of Lust (Poetry) - 9/3/2010 10:44:57 AM
Now this is passion!!
Thunder of Lust (Poetry) - 9/1/2010 3:39:59 AM
Very well done dear man... enjoyed very much stay safe and well..Hugss
Thunder of Lust (Poetry) - 9/1/2010 1:24:34 AM
Very well written, William
Aubergine (Poetry) - 8/25/2010 12:47:47 AM
Excellent work, William
Aubergine (Poetry) - 8/22/2010 3:12:15 AM
Indeed this is powerful and runs through my veins as I read it, beautiful~
Walsingham in Padua (Poetry) - 8/21/2010 8:42:26 AM
Decisions unpoisoned by anything!
The Sacraments (Poetry) - 8/19/2010 10:43:06 AM
your resolute (Poetry) - 8/14/2010 5:08:09 PM
And every woman and man needs their resolute. Thank you for sharing this soul-felt write! =)
the perfecting dark (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 9:12:03 AM
Most beautiful offering Willaim!!
your resolute (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 9:11:04 AM
your resolute (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 3:49:59 AM
This pulses with hope, life and determination.
your resolute (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 3:35:21 AM
That last verse is melting. Some of us are born out of time it seems. Such a resolute is priceless. Written from the soul, felt in the soul.
the perfecting dark (Poetry) - 8/12/2010 3:28:20 AM
A breathtaking declaration of passion only the heart and flesh of a poet could understand. I believe this embodies the intensity all passionate women would want from a lover. Very beautiful.
White Sunday 30 (Poetry) - 8/2/2010 12:10:50 AM
Very good poem.
White Sunday 23 (Poetry) - 7/22/2010 11:56:32 AM
This is exquisite ~ your words are set like sunlight on water!
White Sunday 23 (Poetry) - 7/22/2010 11:31:55 AM
I have been n that place which you have describe so well. All there is is I and you, and none have ever been here before.
A good write
satin chessboard (Poetry) - 7/16/2010 4:08:53 PM
This is an amazing poem ~
Compelling and I love the intricate game of Chess, my favorite game!
I do not chase the wind (Poetry) - 7/14/2010 5:14:37 PM
Sweet wisdom William. Love the content of the second stanza and those "golden apples".
White Sunday V (Poetry) - 7/14/2010 6:35:54 AM
oh yes...those last lines
are very moving William
I can only imagine what I would feel
to hear someone say such a beautiful thing to me
with the sincerity of it all & none of the lusting
(lusting is good though) but in this feeling here
I feel a man naked with truth & this in itself is beautiful
or should I say beautifully inviting...
I adore the entirity of this poem
Every Day of The Week
addiction (Poetry) - 7/14/2010 6:30:39 AM
ohhh...this is charged William!
erotic and lusty
and also the play on words & phrases which grab hold
of my attention as I was seeing heroin adicts at one moment
& then a split second later....lovers climaxing
the rush of fervent need and penetrations pulsing
Tea spiked with Jack Daniels & Fresh Lemons
White Sunday V (Poetry) - 7/12/2010 9:04:30 AM
Interesting take. One of the beauties of poetry is that often people can see in it what works for their worldview, their resonances.
White Sunday V (Poetry) - 7/11/2010 4:34:51 PM
I READ THIS AS A CONVERSATION, BACK AND FORTH BETWEEN MY REDEEMER AND ME...THERE WAS NOTHING LOST AT ALL, IT IS STILL A PASSIONATE LOVE WORK. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING, LOVE AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
I do not chase the wind (Poetry) - 7/8/2010 6:15:18 AM
Compelling and I really like the rhyme scheme. The last verse is my favorite. "Golden apples of poetry" such a wonderful phrase.
The Sunday Girl (Poetry) - 7/5/2010 9:29:39 AM
What a character this sunday child, wild and free like the wind. Like a nature force. Fascinating poem.
The Sunday Girl (Poetry) - 7/5/2010 6:06:13 AM
Sweet!! I'm glad you have a friend like that!! A wonderful tribute to your friend!! :o)
White Sunday II (Poetry) - 7/5/2010 1:49:24 AM
Powerful writing, William
inside you (Poetry) - 7/2/2010 9:57:41 PM
I know these passionate feelings intimately and I can relate. Thank you, William. Love and peace,
Vampyr (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 1:44:43 PM
Ooh, his fangs drip and this is a dazzling dark poem ~
The Law is Love (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 9:55:52 AM
Love can change you forever!!
The Law is Love (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 7:36:03 AM
Amen. as a man I truly admire once said "Love is all you need".
White Sunday XIII (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 7:35:00 AM
I have been very, very busy. Prolific to a fault. I plan on sticking around for a while. Glad you like it...but, as always, I can only claim to being the mirror or lens to the passion and the muse.
The Law is Love (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 7:30:11 AM
And love is all, William. Thank you for sharing this perspective. Love and peace to you,
White Sunday XIII (Poetry) - 7/1/2010 7:28:20 AM
Oh...I've missed you! This is more fiery than the most dramatic sky with shooting stars...you haul this from the depth of the loins and I keep expanding my conception of what the poetry of Romantic Poet of the Internet William F. DeVault means in terms of a male poet's innermost virile character. Ancient, at love's thrust striding into eternity, William...you are the actual architect of ancient, timeless romantic poetry...it's good to see you back...be well.