Recent Reviews for Willow L. Jorden
Heofen 2 (Short Story) - 8/13/2006 2:26:23 PM|
nice work. fine imagery. keep writing!
Heofen 2 (Short Story) - 8/9/2006 1:07:45 PM
I like it, Willow! More! :)
Heofen 2 (Short Story) - 8/8/2006 10:46:15 AM
Very captivating and compelling story here
I love anything to do with folklore and faeries
And the Willow Tree is a symbol of Adaptibility and Flexibility..
You show that in your dexterous writing..
Ya..I would read more
Art (Poetry) - 8/10/2006 7:13:28 AM
Art (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 1:09:10 PM
Although I truly loved the overall approach and concept of the piece, at times the format became very repetitive. While it seems you were clearly going for that, the pattern still would have been just as equally recieved if you didn't repeat it for every of the begining stanza's. That was just the begining though, once I hit the third I think it was, stanza, I really started to get into it. I really loved your concious sense of diction and syllable count... It made for a very clean and organized aesthetic, that allowed the content to really pop out. I liked this despite my complaints about the earlier stanzas. Good job man.
Art (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 12:02:01 PM
This is very well written and it is a true deep reality.
Art (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 10:33:06 AM
These are so many sides and facets to the multi faceted coin of human nature..
Terrific analytical poem
Art (Poetry) - 8/8/2006 10:28:44 AM
gee, i don't feel so bad about the other three people in my head...nice poem
Breaking (Poetry) - 5/14/2006 11:14:53 PM
Wonderful write telling all too well the longing heart that beats aloud, yet still is silent in its comings.
Breaking (Poetry) - 5/14/2006 4:03:28 PM
Wonderful depiction of love that was lost and is longed for still, yet in its longing the key is out their waiting to be discovered when it opens your heart to love again.
Breaking (Poetry) - 5/14/2006 11:10:36 AM
Sometimes, a broken heart bleeds too long.