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Recent Reviews for Dawn L Mullan

Gossamer Square Chpt 1 (Short Story) - 1/15/2010 6:43:00 AM
Very difficult to write about this era - a very brave attempt but looks interesting and some nice detailing.

Poetry Dialogue: Scams vs. Publication (Article) - 11/11/2010 4:27:08 AM
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A Novel Idea: The Great (American) Novel (Article) - 6/25/2010 6:32:40 PM
Truly an informative and thought-provoking article that is very well-written. Thank you, Dawn. Love and best wishes, Regis

A Novel Idea: The Great (American) Novel (Article) - 11/24/2006 6:16:00 AM
Good discussion Dawn. Malcolm Watts

A Novel Idea: The Great (American) Novel (Article) - 11/22/2006 8:17:04 PM
The only thing about writing the great one, is how do you top yourself with the next book. ROFL Love your articles... Elizabeth

Poetic Dialogue: Grammar & the Arts (Article) - 11/21/2006 4:43:12 AM
=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*= “POETRY” =*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*= ONE DEMANDS TWO THINGS OF A POEM. FIRSTLY, IT MUST BE A WELL-MADE VERBAL OBJECT THAT DOES HONOR TO THE LANGUAGE IN WHICH IT IS WRITTEN. SECONDLY, IT MUST SAY SOMETHING SIGNIFICANT ABOUT A REALITY COMMON TO US ALL, BUT PERCEIVED FROM A UNIQUE PERSPECTIVE. WHAT THE POET SAYS HAS NEVER BEEN SAID BEFORE, BUT, ONCE HE HAS SAID IT, HIS READERS RECOGNIZE ITS VALIDITY FOR THEMSELVES.” – W. H. Auden (Wystan Hugh Auden) =*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=*=* "Poetic Dialogue: Grammar & the Arts" has presented its subjects to strike opinions, and did it properly -- leaving room for discussion -- and feedback. Any writer that uses poetic license to disform creativity dishonoring her/his language is either an iconoclast of art and logic, a joker or a member of "The MorosMoronite Academy". A true artist will only use poetic license to improve the form and the presentation of her/his work, always enriching the tools of her/his language. In English, as in any other language, there are rules that one must follow. In poetry one must follow the language's rules, and feel free to improve any branch of the poetic art. One has license to create around, change forms, styles and concepts, but one can never forget that there is no “Poetic License” to assassinate the language and its principles. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Poetic Dialogue: Grammar & the Arts (Article) - 10/10/2006 10:43:36 PM
I especially like some of the modern forms of poetry that have come along. Poetry is self-expression and choice of words. Good article. Thanks for this. Elizabeth

Poetic Dialogue: Grammar & the Arts (Article) - 10/10/2006 7:01:41 AM
I agree with you completely. Writing poetry is like doing photography - you have to know the rules but also know how to bend them for great effect. I love mixing language from old English with modern speech and inserting words from French such as Faire and extant where they fit well and say so much. Malcolm Watts Poet

Home (Poetry) - 7/22/2011 7:11:43 AM
Well penned, Dawn

Home (Poetry) - 7/21/2011 9:23:57 PM
Interesting; your verses awaken thoughts and emotions as I read, Dawn. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Wild West Journal (Poetry) - 6/12/2011 1:25:22 AM
A well penned piece, Dawn

To Dream (Poetry) - 4/4/2011 6:43:29 AM
This poem is very Inspirational. Thank you for sharing. Steph

Wild West Journal (Poetry) - 3/10/2011 7:37:41 AM
Wowww...great writing sweet lady..enjoyed...Hugsss

Wild West Journal (Poetry) - 3/8/2011 6:02:20 PM
This makes me think of Sgt. Joe Friday on a horse. Those tell-tale spoons will get you in trouble every time! Connie

Wild West Journal (Poetry) - 3/6/2011 10:48:07 AM
Entertaining to say the least, Dawn. Thank you for sharing your creative imagination. I think you meant to write "than" in the 17th and 18th verses. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Transcendence (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 4:12:05 PM
A wonderful revealing. A place of the soul, so dark within it's deepest places that if accepted in silence of mind, it becomes a chamber or windows in which to see the wisdom of love.

To Dream (Poetry) - 3/4/2011 3:02:00 AM
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Weather (Poetry) - 3/1/2011 8:05:59 PM
yes, the passion of the weather found in the passion of our emotions. which are the same. Nice piece Dawn

To Dream (Poetry) - 3/1/2011 7:56:48 PM
As the mists of past disappear into the ever changing clouds of present moments. Great thoughts Dawn, wonderful write here.

To Dream (Poetry) - 2/28/2011 9:18:23 PM
This are most compelling and meaningful thoughts, Dawn. They awaken my thinking. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes, Regis

To Dream (Poetry) - 2/28/2011 5:20:40 PM
Finely said, Dawn, warm and strong. John

To Dream (Poetry) - 2/28/2011 1:34:02 PM
Awe-inspiring poetry! Blessings, Christine

Grasshopper (Poetry) - 6/25/2010 6:33:37 PM
Succinctly powerful in what is expressed, Dawn. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes, Regis

Grasshopper (Poetry) - 5/29/2010 2:28:09 AM
Grasshoppers sing? Mine don't. They more,,sort of gurgle' maybe I should change their diet? Nice poem Dawn

Grasshopper (Poetry) - 5/26/2010 3:51:29 AM
Delightful

Grasshopper (Poetry) - 5/25/2010 11:33:45 AM
Awww how sweet... Be always safe, Karen

Grasshopper (Poetry) - 5/25/2010 5:35:15 AM
Dawn, Great Haiku with much meaning. Mary

Asymptote (Poetry) - 2/24/2010 6:51:55 PM
Lines angles and curves to lose ourselves. I hadn't read any of your work lately... Axilea

Transcendence (Poetry) - 2/18/2010 2:25:38 AM
Dawn, This is a powerful piece. I found myself relating to these thoughts. It's rare that I come across a poem that gets that close. Thank you for sharing this. Sheila

I, Village 1911 (Poetry) - 2/18/2010 2:13:17 AM
This is very interesting, Dawn. I like how you used flashes of imagery in this. Well done:) Sheila

I, Village 1911 (Poetry) - 1/15/2010 3:59:12 PM
most enjoyable reading love your imagery Welcome to Our Den Peace & love be with you William

Abstraction (Poetry) - 12/24/2009 10:34:52 AM
Truly an artistic and creative recipe, Dawn; a fine sharing. Thank you. Love and best wishes, Regis

Unrehearsed (Poetry) - 12/24/2009 10:32:59 AM
Creative, original, and very effective, Dawn. Thank you for sharing your gifts. Love and best wishes, Regis

Depth (Poetry) - 12/24/2009 10:31:33 AM
I agree with Joanna. This poem "speaks" to me as well... ...and leaves me reflecting. Thank you, Dawn. Love and best wishes, Regis

Transcendence (Poetry) - 12/24/2009 10:27:52 AM
I find that your thoughts as expressed within your verses enter deep into my soul and echo there. I can truly relate. Contrary to what many say, I have not fount that "time heals all wounds." Thank you, Dawn. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

I, Village 1911 (Poetry) - 12/23/2009 10:03:05 PM
Fascinating... ...both your descriptive writing and the graphic image, Dawn. Thanks for sharing this original creative "take" of yours. Love and best wishes, Regis

I, Village 1911 (Poetry) - 12/19/2009 3:36:47 PM
Wow this was quite a writing indeed. Great job doing your craft. I read your bio and I am sorry to know of your illness. As someone who had a bout with COPD I know of your discomfort. GOD BLESS YOU, DAWN. Tony

Transcendence (Poetry) - 12/3/2009 5:15:53 AM
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE YOUR WORDS!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Transcendence (Poetry) - 8/21/2009 8:32:09 AM
a curse we all endure and few transcend ... well written ...

Transcendence (Poetry) - 8/20/2009 6:22:57 PM
We all need our space in which to crawl and let life waltz by as we relax.

Weather (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 2:55:51 PM
Wow excellent unique style of writing Weather conditions are always on everyone's mind Love how your words captured such beautiful vividness Truly a brilliant piece!! Wising you Peace Love and Light...Yolie

Depth (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 4:26:34 AM
This poem makes me very emotional. Poems can be interpreted differently, but to me it is symbolic of loneliness.

Dawn (Poetry) - 5/18/2009 4:24:18 AM
This is an inspirational poem. This simple poem awakens every part of my mind and spirit. Joanna Leone

Banished (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 6:28:49 PM
excellent write. milton

Poisoned (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 10:50:25 AM
Your verses (an experience) serve as an indictment of our "modern" world, Dawn. I hope you are feeling better. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Banished (Poetry) - 5/12/2009 10:47:50 AM
The theme you express via your verses is a sad one but nonetheless real and not at all uncommon in this world/life. Thank you, Dawn. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Longing (Poetry) - 4/7/2009 7:51:41 PM
luv the structure and sentiment ...

Longing (Poetry) - 2/21/2009 7:40:36 PM
You have captured all of my attention and taught me a lesson in poetry, Dawn. Truly a lovely and meaningful offering. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Undefined (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 8:16:03 AM
I am a Pisces swimming in one Aquamarine galaxy where death doesn't exist, but where vibrations disclose secrets, swimming incessantly among celestial bodies trying to escape the shark's sharp teeth of aging. Georg

Imbue (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 8:10:13 AM
Imbue gives us with its illustration and abstract picture of keys, quite a few of them, offering us like a puzzle the opportunity to open only one true door where there wait only one true love. Too many keys, too many doors, too many loves, but only one is true for all of them. Georg

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 8:07:03 AM
The clandestine rendezvous where words weren't said, boudoirs where the morning sun is not yet putting its fingers inside ruffed bed silks and awake lovers of distant desires and intimate fires. Death replies to Emily Dickinson is a rebuke to a tragic demented wish with wishes pregnant with hope. Georg

The Collection (Poetry) - 2/20/2009 8:01:21 AM
Shattered pieces of crafted figurines shouldn't not be the home of ghosts, or hope, or freezing and alone thoughts, because they are passports so the author can enter another world we are not invited to see, like a mirage, but an existing one that allude us. Fetishes wrapped in words, like those empty spaces left by the crafted symbols that went to their final rendezvous. Georg

Asymptote (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 7:52:17 AM
The poem is the straight line with the illustration picture being the tangent, with an air of the top end of a violin giving a softly hight C, like a spider's tread to captivate yet not making the reader a prisoner. Georg

Depth (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 7:47:40 AM
A sleeping maiden, wearing only perfume and a couple of dreams, innocently offering enchanted deeps filled with life elixir. Concaved, like a chalice holding a few sips of a special wine. Georg

Abstraction (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 7:44:11 AM
As a painter, colors talk to me inside my head, sometimes in abstract mode, others in classical ones, but always surprising my brushes with gray of sadness or with blushing reds. But the abstraction of the painter is solid while for the observer will remain an enigma. Georg

Dawn (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 7:40:33 AM
When you had gone all night writing because inspiration is so gossamer made that if you don catch then and there your pages next day will remain empty, yes, when you had gone one febrile literary outburst and dawn hits your window...a kind of warm peace crawls all over your skin, and then, you are at peace. Dawn does it to you. Georg

Longing (Poetry) - 2/19/2009 5:06:21 AM
Yes, the love that exists within all very nicely said Bill

Unrehearsed (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 4:10:19 PM
I love this one and the little cues given between verses as if we are all a part of a mini play of immense drama. Well done, a good format for you. hugs fee

The Collection (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 4:08:04 PM
The lines of this poem pull at the thought processes makin me think which is what good poetry should really do...that and grip the emotions which this one also manages...well done. hugs fee

Dawn (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 4:05:24 PM
I am just starting to read your delightful poetry and this one hit me like a delightful stretch like feeling you get when you smile first thing in morning knowing it could be the start of anything. fee

Longing (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 4:03:33 PM
This transcends the beauty of the body for the beauty of what's inside and that is sooooo much longer lasting. Fee

Poisoned (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 7:27:08 AM
Dementia...oh! dear dementia that allows us to escape the suffocating world of "normality"..... The poem "Poisoned" show us the many facets of that mysterious diamonds that human beings are. Georg

Dawn (Poetry) - 2/18/2009 12:00:39 AM
You've described perfectly my favorite time of day.

Longing (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 11:59:41 PM
Beautifully expressed with passion.

Longing (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 3:07:33 PM
Wow, so very expressive and incorporates so much.... Be always safe, Karen

Longing (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 1:38:17 PM
I imagine being inside a red rose, smelling your perfume and feeling the velvet of your skin, and closing my eyes going to sleep by the beat of your heart as your lips softly kiss the rose. Your poem inspires the poet inside a man. Georg

The Collection (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 4:09:53 AM
Excellent poem,take care Edwin

Asymptote (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 4:08:21 AM
Great poem.I enjoy reading it,take care Edwin

Longing (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 4:07:05 AM
Passionate and good poem,take care Edwin

Longing (Poetry) - 2/17/2009 3:50:32 AM
Painted in vivid colors of passion.

Poisoned (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 3:14:50 PM
Outstanding imagery~&*

Poisoned (Poetry) - 1/1/2008 4:56:22 PM
There is an insanity to the ways of the world...it seems to hide within the seeds of greed and careless considerations of life... even your thoughts cannot escape it's grasp... nice work... enjoyed, Art Sun... Oh! A Happy New Year to you Dawn...

Poisoned (Poetry) - 1/1/2008 4:25:36 PM
This gale hides beyond the horizon. Where the blind cannot see and the knowledgeable fail to act. insightful ... well imaged ...

Poisoned (Poetry) - 12/29/2007 10:43:57 AM
Powerful write my friend...well done! Blessings, Joyce B.

Poisoned (Poetry) - 12/29/2007 7:10:38 AM
excellent the winds of what men weave bill

Poisoned (Poetry) - 12/29/2007 12:35:45 AM
Strong convictions and everlasting passion runs throughout, well said... Be safe, Karen

Aftermath (Poetry) - 12/28/2007 8:52:21 PM
Such powerful imagery--the first stanza grabs the reader's attention and makes them feel, relive the aftermath of disasters, seen (9/11 comes vividly to mind), as does the rest of the poem. Brilliantly captured. Well done. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Poisoned (Poetry) - 12/28/2007 8:49:57 PM
A claustrophobic feel to this: one doesn't know the sufferings of others until they've been there, or read powerful poetry such as this. Well written, you took me into your world. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Asymptote (Poetry) - 12/3/2007 6:08:40 AM
This I enjoyed also but oddly I did not see what the others who commented saw. I guess I'm a romantic at heart and read this as a tale about a lover who betrays with their words. elliott

Bloom (Poetry) - 12/1/2007 4:14:26 AM
Pretty image and a succinct poem with lovely imagery. Good work.

Abstraction (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 6:45:06 AM
i enjoy the abstract. writing and art bill

Abstraction (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 5:20:46 AM
Your talent is well beyond the simpleness of thought...nice work and very nice compliment through art... nice... Art Sun...

Abstraction (Poetry) - 11/14/2007 9:29:02 PM
Very nicely done...Both art & poem.

Abstraction (Poetry) - 11/14/2007 10:15:41 AM
i like this alot

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/13/2007 6:05:53 PM
"The Collection" is engaging, emotional and filled symbolic imagination. Thanks for sharing your gift. My best, Gloria

Aftermath (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 2:11:45 PM
A very nice piece, good imagery... I enjoyed the read... Wishing you well.. Sam

Aftermath (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 5:36:15 AM
A very moving poem, Dawn. Compelling. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you, Regis

Depth (Poetry) - 10/17/2007 9:09:52 PM
A cinquain or kind of (the second line has three syllables), but I'm really no expert of form poetry. What I see is the beauty of the description with so many interpretations when taken metaphorically. Wishing you peace and inspiration, always, Axilea

Aftermath (Poetry) - 10/14/2007 3:38:49 PM
Wow I love the peaceful feelings and tone In this expressions of loss Your words captured very nice imagery and vividness Enjoyed reading this stunning piece!! Love Peace and hugssss....Morning Star

Dawn (Poetry) - 10/14/2007 11:37:04 AM
Nice thoughts....the early sunrise can awaken the inner beauty of many things... nice... Art Sun...

Aftermath (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 8:24:52 PM
A peaceful atmosphere and the simple description of loss. Thank you for sharing this. Axilea

Aftermath (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 6:05:35 AM
A nice work of this view of the oceans and the sea, the aftermath and loss of life can place one within tears...even when they are calm... very nice work... Art Sun...

Undefined (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 5:38:39 AM
I like the structure of your poem...makes for a comparable view of the universal view through your thoughts... nice... Art Sun...

Inferno (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 5:25:18 AM
I've always been terrified of fire but did enjoy this work. bill

Aftermath (Poetry) - 10/8/2007 5:22:33 AM
a beautiful sad poem. The sea can be wanton and lovely or cruel. It can be both giver or taker of life Aftermath was a wonderful and touching piece. bill

Asymptote (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 8:27:50 PM
Fascinating poem, the allusion to the painter and the canvass too is very compelling

Unrehearsed (Poetry) - 8/6/2007 5:58:40 AM
It's a pleasure reading your work bill

Unrehearsed (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 11:28:08 PM
This is a very beautifully written piece.

Unrehearsed (Poetry) - 7/15/2007 9:33:02 AM
Beautifully written my friend, powerful imagery within the lines allows the reader to visualize the setting as well as feel the emotions within. Enjoyed this much! Well done! Blessings, Joyce B.

The Collection (Poetry) - 4/22/2007 4:51:00 PM
Entertaining write it holds the reader's interest from the start to the end... excelllently done... Wishing you well... Sam

The Collection (Poetry) - 3/7/2007 9:06:19 PM
A very interesting write, one must view deeper than the words for the thoughts and emotions are hidden and yet exposed within the lines... a very nice work of poetry....enjoyed, Art sun...

The Collection (Poetry) - 1/25/2007 6:56:16 PM
A powerful write my friend, great imagery... a bit sad, but a great write! Blessings, Joyce Bowling

The Collection (Poetry) - 12/16/2006 2:40:09 PM
When we get angry, we tend to throw things. Nice imagery Dawn, and I think I see a little sadness here too. You wrrote this well from you heart and emotional feelings. Thanks for sharing, Dawn. Merry Christmas to you and your family and loved ones, and a very Happy New Year too. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, babrie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Imbue (Poetry) - 12/11/2006 12:13:10 PM
I absolutely "feel" this and I can apply it to someone right now. I love it, Dawn. Thank you for sharing this gift. (By the way, I got notice of you latest poem but, for some reason, I cannot access it.) Love and peace to you, Regis

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/23/2006 7:44:34 PM
thought stimulating with finely tuned imagery ...

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/21/2006 1:01:10 PM
You have a remarkable way with words. Each elicits a different emotion when read. Enjoyed. Elizabeth

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/21/2006 5:56:20 AM
Empty home of ghosts, a secret lair of madness where figurines once were bone. Quite a powerful piece, Dawn.

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/21/2006 2:18:31 AM
An ontologic psychological depicting of today's society in a symbolistic philosophical poetic grand -- make "The Collection" a glowing page to enrich The American Fine Letters. I salute You, Poet. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 9:45:45 PM
I think there's a lot more to this than what appears "on the surface." It think the figurines are symbolic; well that's the way I interpret this. The fact that you made me think and read and read again indicates that you have an effective poem here, Dawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love to you (and peace too), Regis (Reg)

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 8:44:33 PM
Women love collecting, my g/f is xstitch and living dead dolls..LIVING DEAD DOLLS, I'm now in therapy..lol

The Collection (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 7:34:13 PM
Oh when one breaks and falls~ I go to E-bay! LOL! I have my little collections too...cows, lighthouses and plates, tea cups and steins...and anything OLD! it drives my hubby crazy! Love and Peace~ Kimmy~

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 10:42:22 AM
Absolutely lovely writing, Dawn. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you, Regis

Inferno (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 7:04:41 AM
So much said with so few words. Fantastic work Dawn. The imagery is amazing. Michelle

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 7:02:48 AM
How incredibly sad and moving. Beautiful work Dawn. Michelle

Inferno (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 4:00:24 AM
This is exceptional, Dawn. Your images have captured perfectly "earth as a fire warrior ..." Hugs and respect, CJ

Weather (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 3:58:33 AM
I love your style of writing, Dawn -- thank you so much for your review on my poem, an introduction for me, to be aware of your work. This is so flowing, your imagery crisp and real. Again, I love your style. Hugs and respect, CJ

Bloom (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 3:55:35 AM
So lovely. The images flow one into another. Again, lovely. Hugs and respect, CJ

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 3:54:19 AM
A very powerful poem, Dawn! Very powerful and full of truth. All I can say is "Amen". Well done. Hugs and respect, CJ

Undefined (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 3:00:20 AM
Sci-poetic in "Undefined" shows how the pen of a true Poet can glow. I have enjoyed the reading of "Undefined". Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Asymptote (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 2:46:53 AM
An accomplished poetic piece... "Asymptote" glows. Long healthy creative life, Poet. Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 11/20/2006 2:41:10 AM
This composition is rich in contents, style and rhythms. I salute You, Poet. Andrew Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 11/19/2006 9:04:03 PM
No American who lived that day... will ever forget where they were when this happened, especially those affected with the loss of their loved ones, so tragically. A great write for my library... Love and Peace~ Kimmy~

Inferno (Poetry) - 11/19/2006 7:09:18 PM
Powerful. This reminds me of a poem that I've posted here title "Afterburn." I find this poem of yours most compelling, Dawn. Love and peace, Regis

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 11/19/2006 7:05:31 PM
What a sad truth about this world. Well done, Dawn. Love and peace to you, Regis

Inferno (Poetry) - 11/17/2006 9:19:50 AM
Modern and dramatic.

Inferno (Poetry) - 11/17/2006 9:15:11 AM
What instant images this brief, seamless poem provides, and effortless, it seems. Well done.

Inferno (Poetry) - 11/17/2006 6:31:13 AM
Such a shame~ Your poetry leaves such impact! Very well written and the graphics say it all! Love and Peace~ Kimmy~

Inferno (Poetry) - 11/16/2006 10:20:08 PM
I can smell the smoke Dawn. Nice piece. Malcolm

Undefined (Poetry) - 11/16/2006 12:27:01 PM
Very unique and quite beautiful. Thanks for sharing. Christy

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 3:29:46 PM
A wonderful poem centred around a very inspiring lady. There is some lovely imagery in this piece, and your idea of Emily Dickinson's soul going on a liberating journey, is effective and original. Thankyou for sharing this uplifting and thoughtful tribute.

Asymptote (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 3:14:04 PM
Like the tightrope clean lines of this one, Dawn, which are as a springboard to all the angles and curves that exist in potential. Like rods of iron before they are wrought. Elliptical and thought-expanding write. TY K xx

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 11/14/2006 2:12:12 PM
Dawn, I appreciate the depth - and starkness - of this work. Blessings, Rhonda

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 11/9/2006 5:47:24 PM
Excellent! Elizabeth

Asymptote (Poetry) - 11/9/2006 5:46:49 PM
Free verse...my favortie...and a good one. Elizabeth

Asymptote (Poetry) - 11/6/2006 5:18:57 AM
Kinda like the vanishing point of two parallel lines... cept ones curved here I guess one is one a downward spiral here. The for the brain gymnastics, now I need a kip..

Imbue (Poetry) - 11/6/2006 4:16:34 AM
Quite powerfully penned, Dawn.

Bloom (Poetry) - 10/27/2006 8:13:51 PM
Beautiful work...

Dawn (Poetry) - 10/27/2006 8:13:31 PM
Lovely...an economy of words saying so much.

Weather (Poetry) - 10/27/2006 8:12:58 PM
Beautiful work!

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 6:21:21 PM
You've written it well, a day that we will never forget. Beautiful tribute, and I love the idea of 9.12.01 instead of 9.11.01...for to me the day after was worse, I guess because the shock had worn off. You've penned a great tribute. Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Asymptote (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 11:38:34 AM
Thank you for sharing this poem and for teaching me a new word, Dawn. Love and peace, Regis

Bloom (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 11:36:47 AM
Lovely imagery and sentiments; thank you for sharing, Dawn. Love and peace, Regis

Dawn (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 11:35:03 AM
Thank you for sharing your creative talents, Dawn. This is lovely. Love and peace, Regis

Weather (Poetry) - 10/22/2006 2:29:10 PM
Your superb imagery serves to emphasize the meaning of this offering, Dawn. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you, Regis

Weather (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 6:02:25 PM
I agree with Andy, Dawn. The greatest show on earth is the weather, because we are so fascinated by it, that we talk about absent-mindedly. Like right now it is raining here. :D A very good write Dawn, and thank you for sharing. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and those whom you love, and be with you always, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

Weather (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 1:29:28 PM
The greatest show on earth is the weather..

Weather (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 8:23:26 AM
Dawn, This is exquisite, spiritual poetry! Surrounded by His forces...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Undefined (Poetry) - 10/11/2006 3:45:52 PM
Mesmerizing verses and thoughts therein, Dawn. Thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace, Regis

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 10/9/2006 10:21:57 AM
Oooo..this I like ..incredible piece.. Vesna:)

Undefined (Poetry) - 10/9/2006 10:20:37 AM
well indeed THIS is exceptional work..wow! this one's a keeper.. Thankyou Dawn Vesna:)

Undefined (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 5:55:49 PM
unique style and imagery ...

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 10:01:25 AM
Sounds like a ride I would enjoy, just as much as I have enjoyed this write! Love a positive thought :-)

Undefined (Poetry) - 10/6/2006 9:42:52 AM
Love the desciptive words you have used and the way you have used them. Love universal thoughts :-)

Undefined (Poetry) - 10/3/2006 7:06:01 PM
Very unique indeed, you have a style all your own...very well designed and appropriate as well... Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 10/3/2006 7:04:31 PM
I love this...it is very unique indeed. I love to read Emily Dickenson...you've written it well.. Blessings, Joyce Bowling

Undefined (Poetry) - 10/3/2006 6:17:15 PM
Great, great, great because I was trying to explain a fav colour of mine...Aquamarine TY These types of thoughts can put my mind into orbit.. Very well constructed too..

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 10/2/2006 6:50:03 PM
A wonderful tribute, Dawn. Karla said it well. What more can I say? Thanks for sharing this with us. May the Lord Jesus bless you, and all of those whose lives were lost on that, another day in infamy. May He also bless the families who lost their loved ones too soon, by acts of cowardice. May he be with you and everyone on earth, always, and be by our side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & ((((((((((MANY WONDERFUL SISTERLY HUGGGGSSSS)))))))))), your little sister, Barbie "If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 9/13/2006 8:31:42 AM
P O W E R F U L, Dawn; well done! You capture it brilliantly in verse. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 9/12/2006 12:51:17 PM
thanx for the great work!!! I was trying to find a way to pay tribute, but I didn't want to linger on the date of 9/11, this has given me an idea......

9.12.01 (Poetry) - 9/12/2006 11:36:16 AM
Dawn I like the stoicness and courage in this splendid tribute to the victims and survivors of 9/11/ Well done ! Peter

Death Replies to Emily Dickinson (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 9:40:09 AM
Now this was a unique perspective and rebuttal. Very clever! Richard Lloyd Cederberg