Recent Reviews for K. Mulroney
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Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 10/1/2009 6:56:58 PM
Brilliant. Liz
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/13/2009 9:56:41 PM
Oh boy, God bless you because I raised a few and have been there before. It can be a very difficult time. I'll be praying for you...
Be always safe,
Karen
Ouch (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 2:01:07 PM
Funny. Liz
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 1:59:34 PM
I'd go with #1. It is catchy and grabs your thoughts. Liz
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 7:55:52 AM
I too, would have to go with #1, it captures your attention, as it makes you really think, what is he talking or thinking about?
This same thing happened to me with a grandson just recently. He lied about something serious, I was faced with rather to tell his Mom what he did and get him on "big time restriction at 14" or let his Dad know, who would have understood better, talked to him about it and I would have earned valuable trust with my grandson, who because of how his life has been, doesn't trust to many people? He trust me, but would have trusted me even more, if I had only been home to handle it. My husband, did what he thought was right, told his Mom as he couldn't reach me nor his Dad and it was serious in his eyes.
So, consequently my grandson who leads a difficult life and a sad one, is back on restriction again, for doing something that any other 14 year old would have done also! If this young man was rewarded for the good things he does and not the negative one's, he would be a different person.
Sorry to bring all this into this question, it just hit home with me! As I remember my grandson, after the damage was done, looking into my eyes and crying, "Grandma now everything that I just got back after being on restriction, will be taken away from me again and I won't be able to talk to my Dad, as it will take me forever to earn them back!" The lie didn't justify the consequences and I could have lied to protect him and what trust I would have earned from doing so! He wouldn't have been on restriction again (from not making his bed, keeping his bathroom clean, all from a very strick step-dad) if I had protecting him and kept it between myself, him and his Dad! This is what comes from a broken home, nothing but sadness, restrictions that are unfair and the child suffers.
I too, could write a book about a lot of these things, maybe you can add it to yours, just kidding!
Linda T.
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 7:42:32 AM
#1
Cheers and peace,
Dan
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 7:24:59 AM
Number one. Number two reads like a government pamphlet. Good luck. Patrick
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/12/2009 3:45:01 AM
Have to agree with all the others.
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 9:52:24 PM
'TRUST TO LIE BY' for me Boo - it contains two opposing human characteristics; one honorable, one not so.
Martyn
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 6:43:44 PM
I agree with the otheres, Kim; "Trust to Lie By." Love and best wishes to you,
Regis
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 5:50:38 PM
Kim,
TRUST TO LIE BY
seems right.
John
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 4:09:37 PM
TRUST OR LIE BY?
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 1:51:51 PM
Unless content gives reason for the other title, I'd go with TRUST TO LIE BY.
This is Very Important My Friends- Please Respond (Poetry) - 9/11/2009 1:23:33 PM
I'd go with 'Trust to Lie By'. Immediately grabs the attention by it's unusual composition. Hope this helps - you are in my prayers.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 9/7/2009 7:22:45 AM
I think this is the best I have read. of your work.
Cheers,
Dan
Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 6:27:31 PM
This is beautifully written with fine observation of detail, fine feeling and great truth.
John
Take it with a Grain (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 1:48:21 PM
definately mind stirring...
fee
Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 1:45:04 PM
I am speechless...this is so filled with the reality of life and love...how can anyone not relate to it...
hugs
fee
Take it with a Grain (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 9:55:53 AM
Succinctly expresses a great deal. Love and peace,
Regis
Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 9:54:51 AM
know it’s just a dream but when we get to have a moment of true love in this life, if only to witness in sleep the sheer gleeful warm cloak it gives is worth the waiting.
So true. Very engaging. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
Regis
Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 5:27:15 AM
This is "indeed" a love poem! And so well done. The words simply flowed as I read them.
Your Friend,
George
Take it with a Grain (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 5:21:11 AM
Easy to understand and agree with. Great simile in the second line. Thanks for sharing.
George
Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 9/6/2009 4:27:56 AM
A most heartfelt piece, indeed.
Once stood a wheel barrel (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 11:03:22 PM
blimey you must love that ol barrel. I had an old pair of concrete boots. I used to stick flowers in them but I gave up in the end.
now they just sit in a pair behind the shed,,lol
Mist (Poetry) - 6/30/2009 11:23:10 PM
"...born to die by crafted tool?..." is the fate of every poet worth its salt!
Some write about love others love to write, some let others to love them and there are people around that just love.
Life can be a peaceful mist or an storming event, we are bound to wear our galoshes...just in case.
Georg
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