Security Deposit (Poetry) - 9/20/2009 6:12:27 AM
to love, we must first love ourself -- ipso facto -- great piece of poetry J.L. --I enjoyed it very much -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Security Deposit (Poetry) - 9/14/2009 9:04:27 PM
Thnx guys!
Security Deposit (Poetry) - 9/14/2009 1:13:59 PM
Yes we have to love ourselves before we can love another and we should be the first in line. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Security Deposit (Poetry) - 9/13/2009 7:56:31 PM
such a wonderful declaration!
Security Deposit (Poetry) - 9/13/2009 1:41:58 PM
I like the honest straight forwardness of this write and well it is presented in format...well done.
fee
Security Deposit (Poetry) - 9/13/2009 7:40:18 AM
A wonderful write, you hit it on the head, you can't love no one unless you love yourself first. Blessings! Jasmin Horst
Security Deposit (Poetry) - 9/13/2009 4:49:03 AM
I let the demons go and made this decision for myself. After so much deception you learn quickly. Love yourself!!!
I Love You (Poetry) - 7/19/2009 6:01:28 AM
Nicely written - Has substance!
I Love You (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 11:54:08 AM
You are quiet right in every aspect. I am a victim of not letting one know, "I love You" until the opportunity had sank into the ocean. Very Good Poem.
Tommy
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/20/2009 3:30:06 AM
a well written ppoem with good advice-love the lines: I could have been more
More than just a change in season,
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/19/2009 6:49:17 PM
words and advise to live by J.L. -- peace and love -- Jon Michael
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/19/2009 6:34:46 AM
Wise message, so very true. Great pen.
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/19/2009 3:17:29 AM
So very trueas I still tell my adult children that I love them daily. I never want it to be too late. Wise words dear. thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/18/2009 6:01:17 PM
Such an ageless beauty, filled with wisdom. Yes, once someone has passed on, it is too late, better before....
Be always safe,
Karen
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/18/2009 12:46:06 PM
Very well put my friend, you grasped sadly too late that often what we have is what we stand the most to lose...
Fee
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/18/2009 5:25:34 AM
Loved your words. They are filled with much wisdom..."tell them now" is true.
I Love You (Poetry) - 3/18/2009 4:20:06 AM
''Better tell them, I Love you you never know when they'll say good-bye''---------- BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE THIS!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 11/9/2008 3:13:00 AM
Your words speak loud and clear JL, We look forward to hearing more from you. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 10/6/2008 9:51:29 AM
JL this is so compelling and so true of many young men with fathers who never taught them how to be men. I'm impressed, you write from the heart.
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 10/6/2008 8:57:39 AM
Oh my,I feel your pain also sweet man..keep writing never stop..very well done indeed...be well and always safe ...HUgsss
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 9/21/2008 7:23:07 PM
Moving! I feel your pain in my heart. Keep writing. Would like to see more on authorsden. Linda
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 9/13/2008 10:07:48 AM
I can feel the hurt in your work. So many children are hurt by parents that dont really understand how much they need them. A well written piece with a good message.
hugs
Kathy
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 9/2/2008 4:56:17 PM
That's a tough one - but it well penned.
Times are tough but God is still in charge.
Because of where God lead me
I am now involved in Kairos Prison Ministries.
Did you ever hear about Kairos?
It is really rewarding and exciting.
Check out my website sometime.
Peace be with you,
John Michael
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 9/1/2008 11:13:19 AM
A Well penned and profound write
Peace be with you
William
Job Vacancy (Poetry) - 9/1/2008 5:33:51 AM
Strong and intense and the bitterness and frustration comes through loud and clear. I am not trying to defend single parents but I was a "part time father" when my childs mother and I split up when she was only four. However, very seldom a night went by that I did not call her and see how her day was, I picked her up every weekend, and on holidays and all special occasions, and I loved her and I shared a bond of love that continues to this day. Part time may not be the greatest way to be a parent but if you love enough they will still grow up knowing love.
Fee
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