Recent Reviews for RM Green
Everybody Playz Tha Fool (Book) - 10/7/2010 1:07:36 PM|
Sage Sweetwater is endorsing Everybody Playz Tha Fool. This author RM Green is a researched storyteller. Her characters are well-placed and from what I've read, the action is fast-paced and taps into cultural dynamics. All my best, RM Green!
The Passion Within (Book) - 9/10/2007 4:23:55 PM
Sometimes I Cry has absolutely captured my attention, it's strange when you see that someone else in the world truly feels the exact same things that you feel, and has the same motivations to keep one focused and fighting for survival. This piece was written as if its author was reading my mind, heart and soul. Thank you for letting me know that i'm not alone in all that i face and please, keep writing.
The Passion Within (Book) - 8/16/2007 11:18:37 AM
After I've received my autographed copy, sis, I will post a more appropriate review.
I will say that knowing your passion for writing, the beauty in every single word, the way that your poetry brightened Embracing candace: Anthology One, I have no doubt that I will be engrossed in
The Passion Within!
Mimi aka Miriam L. Jacobs
author/publisher Embracing Candace: Anthology One
EVERYBODY PLAYZ THA FOOL - Episode 5 (Short Story) - 10/7/2010 12:52:03 PM
I read this Episode first. This delivers a great story of suspense. Jonas is a character who can equalize a story like this. I think he's got to find a way to vindicate whoever these thugs are, but I think he's got to use his head and strategize his moves to fend off these bad dudes. What's Jonas not telling us? It leaves alot of questions as to who these bad dudes are...drug dealers? Illegal human traffickers perhaps smuggling Asians and Africans for the slave and prostitution trade...all kinds of wild things are going through my head as I read this...now I'm going to start at the beginning at episode one. There's a reason I started with the last episode first, RM. There's three things a great storyteller has to accomplish.
1. Get your character up a tree
2. Throw rocks at your character (this means give them action. If I was in a tree with someone throwing rocks at me, I'd MOVE! ACTION!)
3. Get your character down from the tree (the ending of the story built from plot and many subplots)
You've done all three just here in this one episode...good writing with ongoing action and good dialogue.
Everybody Playz tha Fool - Episode 1 (Short Story) - 9/2/2007 10:23:00 AM
Thank you for posting this again! I get the opportunity to revisit
Everybody Playz tha Fool again from the beginning!
Keep up the great writing!
Everybody Playz Tha Fool - Episode 4 (Short Story) - 1/27/2007 10:49:12 AM
Everybody Playz Tha Fool - Episode 2 (Short Story) - 1/25/2007 6:05:35 PM
Human relationships are so screwed up sometimes. Love seems to turn to hurt. Take care. Love and peace to you,
Dead in the Water (Short Story) - 10/8/2006 2:41:04 PM
I like the honest tone of this write, RM. Moreover, this is well written. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
PS: I'm very picky too so I understand.
Dead in the Water (Short Story) - 9/28/2006 7:05:56 AM
I LOVE the reworked ending Mishie. Great job! I giggled all the way through it. Shells
JANAE (Short Story) - 9/19/2006 8:08:41 AM
Abolutely Crazy, I can actually picture the characters in question. A virtual roller coaster ride within. Keep It Up. In the Five Heartbeats It was said"One Day you will be a great writer when you suffered more"...
Those days have come and gone. I knew you had it in you...
JANAE (Short Story) - 9/17/2006 8:42:59 PM
A most intense and compelling story. Thank you for sharing it and best wishes to you. Love and peace,
JANAE (Short Story) - 9/4/2006 12:32:21 PM
I just wanted to give a big 'THANK YOU!' to those who have pointed out the grammar errors in my work. I have enlisted the help of an editor and she has helped me smooth the excerpt out, and I have re-posted the edited version. It is because of my reviewers that I am producing a better quality of work, and I felt I had to let you know how much I appreciate you all.
Peace & Blessings to ALL!
JANAE (Short Story) - 9/1/2006 5:10:20 PM
This one sucked the breath right out of me Mish. It was THAT forceful. I agree with Richad that it could use a bit of fine tuning, as I could sense that it poured out of your heart like a river. But it's an amazingly intense chapter, with one heck of a big sex scene...(and no Herman involved! Fancy that!) Like every chapter thus far, I've been blown away by your insight and talent. Love you girlfriend! Shells
JANAE (Short Story) - 9/1/2006 9:15:58 AM
GOOD WORK MICHELE THIS ONE WAS VERY INTENSE, JANAE NEED CLOSURE.
JANAE (Short Story) - 9/1/2006 8:34:06 AM
JANAE (Short Story) - 8/31/2006 11:27:36 PM
Whoa lol! Great job!
She Could Hear the Silence Part VII - Sarah II (Article) - 2/1/2007 7:33:16 PM
I know it's been awhile and I will explain....still good work and great reading....smile
She Could Hear the Silence Part VII - Sarah II (Article) - 2/1/2007 5:06:30 PM
Wow...God works in mysterious ways...for them BOTH. A great write Mishie! Love, Shells
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part V - Sarah (Article) - 12/16/2006 9:29:58 AM
This is most engaging. It leaves the reader wanting more. Well done. Love and peace,
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part V - Sarah (Article) - 11/25/2006 5:42:37 AM
I haven't read the other installments, but you have a great storyline going here. One thing that distracted me was the use of capital letters used for emphasis. In most of the sentences, I automatically knew emphasis was meant for that particular word without the use of bold. I also noticed that you casually slipped between present and past tense throughout.
Good work. I look forward to reading much more from you.
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part V - Sarah (Article) - 8/27/2006 10:50:08 AM
Michele, I was fortunate to read this a second time and it seems to get better each reading. I also think that this is your best chapter yet. Jason was a good man and Sarah was just materialistic.....GREAT WORK MICHELE, I can't wait to by your book.
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part V - Sarah (Article) - 8/25/2006 4:55:00 PM
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! This is the best installment yet. Absotively posolutely! Fantastic work Mishie! Shells
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part V - Sarah (Article) - 8/24/2006 10:24:46 PM
OMG this the best so far!!!!!!! I SERIOUSLY HAVE TO BUY THE BOOK!!!!!!!! LOL GREAT JOB MICHELLE! ABSOLUTELY AEWESOME!!!
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part III - Phaedra (Article) - 8/20/2006 11:44:20 AM
I just finished Part III. I'm not realy a fiction reader but this is definitely keeping my attention. Keep up the good work and I look forward to reading more!
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part III - Phaedra (Article) - 8/18/2006 9:07:37 PM
I CANNOT wait to read the rest!
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part IV - Simone (Article) - 8/18/2006 11:13:39 AM
Wow what a shocker, looks like Reggie was on the down low. That is such a shocker and i feel so bad for Simone and her daughter, she did not deserve that after coming so far alone. truth is that one out of every three person have some sort of desease, so so scary.
Good work michele, it is really great writing. love ya Glenn
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part IV - Simone (Article) - 8/18/2006 10:33:05 AM
OMG...I feel sick to my stomach too. What a wakeup call, as if she needed any more of them. Oh dear...
This is an AMAZING write Mish. Truly amazing...
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part III - Phaedra (Article) - 8/17/2006 8:14:41 PM
Wow, you weren't playing when you wrote this, were you? :-)
I need to go back and read the other parts so I can catch on to the whole thing. Looks like a winner.
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part III - Phaedra (Article) - 8/13/2006 10:41:53 AM
Hey Girl! It's Heather. This is the best chapter yet! I forgot where I was for a moment, I was living the life of Phaedra! I am axiously awaiting your next chapter!
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part III - Phaedra (Article) - 8/13/2006 10:32:47 AM
Whats up girl? This is Les. You are such a talented woman. I really like it. I'm so gald that I'm not Mark. I could really feel the anger and pain she must have felt. keep up the good work. It will all pay off in the long run.
She Could Hear The Silence' - Part III - Phaedra (Article) - 8/11/2006 4:16:24 PM
OMG! Hand me the GUN! I'd like to shoot the bastard myself!!!! I've said it before and I'll say it again...some people don't deserve to live. If Mark has made a habit of screwing females out of more than their sexual dignity, it won't be long before one of them pulls the trigger on his sorry ass! This is a marvelous chapter! Keep them coming! WOW! One of these days, as sure as I'm sitting here typing, raving, and getting ready to re-read this piece for the THIRD TIME, this will be a movie someday. Love ya, Michelle
She Could Hear The Silence', Part II - Daphne (Article) - 8/8/2006 8:16:17 AM
Michele, It appears you have a good grammar critic - and a writing coach - so I am blessed to read and enjoy the story. Keep up the fast paced writing style. This story is moving at a good tempo and I want more.
You have definitely surprised me today. V
She Could Hear The Silence (Article) - 8/8/2006 8:02:21 AM
Michele - you are an author! Who knew?! I really could not stop reading your first chapter. It is fast moving, interesting and gripping. Congratulations. I certainly will buy your book - hot off the presses - just be sure you autograph it for me. May God continue to bless your efforts.
She Could Hear The Silence', Part II - Daphne (Article) - 8/6/2006 9:45:10 AM
The story is one I'm sure many women can identify with. Keep up the good work! I think there might be a typo..."The Then quickly went back..." I'm not sure what you were actually trying to say.
Another thing...I would give the description of why the son is in rehab FIRST. I went back over the excerpt because I thought I had missed something. it wasn't until I read on that I learned the reason why. Minor comment--more about "writing style" than anything else.
I wish you much success in your endeavor and enjoy wholeheartedly this new "journey" that God is laying out for you.
Peace & Blessings,
Author, Whatever! A Baby Boomer's Journey Into Middle Age
She Could Hear The Silence (Article) - 8/6/2006 8:25:30 AM
From what I have read so far, "She Could Hear The Silence" is going to be an outstanding book. Michele you have really out done yourself, I want to read more. After I read the excerpts, I went and told my husband, he said that it sounds really good. I can't wait until your book is published, just to let you know I will be buying a copy of your book. Good luck!!
She Could Hear The Silence', Part II - Daphne (Article) - 8/5/2006 8:18:55 PM
All I can say about Tony is that he's in for the rudest of awakenings. What a JERK. I guess it's true that money doesn't buy happiness. It helps grease the wheels and make life more interesting sometimes, but it definitely doesn't buy happiness. I think it's time for Daphne to get into social work...donate her love and talents to someone who will appreciate them. This is a fantastic write Michele, and I LOVE the ending.
"She stares blankly at the television screen, but she sees, hears and feels nothing. The world is completely blocked out, and she could hear the silence as she sits on the silk sofa in her beautifully decorated, multi-million dollar house of hell.
It is deafening."
THAT is excellent writing at it's best my friend!!!!
Blessings and hugs, Michelle
She Could Hear The Silence (Article) - 8/1/2006 10:09:35 AM
Michele, this ROCKED. I can't wait to read the whole book. It was like an east coast version of "Waiting to Exhale" which was a most enjoyable movie, AND read. I think Daphne needs to get busy applying her riches to a 'cause' of some sort...a charity where they would not only welcome the donation, but would put it to good use. While she was writing the checks, she should volunteer her services. She needs to feel needed, and heaven knows there's plenty of need out there where she could put her talents and love to good use. Keep it up my new friend...you've got the goods! Michelle
P.S. You might want to consider a few less ! throughout the early text of the story. Most editors frown on excessive use of them. Just a suggestion.
Just Because I Love You (Poetry) - 1/3/2012 9:35:37 AM
Your verses address a most compelling theme in a gripping manner and style; thank you, RM. Love, peace, and best wishes to you,
Just Because I Love You (Poetry) - 10/11/2010 8:04:33 AM
There is an emotional cycle in this that is not foreign to others. Trusting another, trusting anyone for that matter, is becoming more and more difficult in this ever-changing society.
Peace to you sis ...
Just Because I Love You (Poetry) - 10/10/2010 11:36:14 AM
This poem is difficult to comment on RM! Superbly written,the mixed emotions wrench heart and soul!Take care,blessings to you!
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 11:24:57 PM
"We both own glass hearts that are so fragile,
To shatter or break just one
Would destroy us both."
Beautiful imagery, and I especially loved that part.
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 9:19:57 PM
this is absolutly beautiful,touching and true! I love it
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 7:20:48 PM
Your poem is truly beautiful.
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 4:45:35 AM
A lovely poignant piece Mish. Truly touching...
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 7:36:20 PM
So fragile yet so heartwarming...
Be always safe,
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 9:42:17 AM
There is a sense of brooding in this that I can well relate to. I like the vulnerability and hopefulness that you end the piece on. Welcome back sis! peace to you.
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 7:05:43 AM
Breath taking sweet lady..stay safe and well..Hugsss
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 6:33:17 AM
This is absolutely tender and heart warming..Be very careful who you give your heart to. It is bound to that person for eternity.
Peace, love and light,
Glass Heart (Poetry) - 10/7/2010 5:09:42 AM
I can't think of anything more important than true love...well composed.
WINDOW TO MY SOUL (Poetry) - 4/30/2010 8:26:58 PM
A lovely and meaningful write; the photo that you have chosen very effectively complements your theme. Thank you. Love and best wishes,
WINDOW TO MY SOUL (Poetry) - 12/13/2008 1:08:33 PM
E x c e l l e n t !! And you chose the perfect way to illustrate the
piece. B R A V A !! <3 'Pea' <3
WINDOW TO MY SOUL (Poetry) - 12/12/2008 5:16:18 AM
Very nice!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
WINDOW TO MY SOUL (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 3:02:43 PM
A well expressed write filled with many emotions yet, smoothly delivered. Yes, the eyes ARE the "Window to the soul"......
Be always safe,
WINDOW TO MY SOUL (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 12:40:58 PM
An emotionally compelling and spiritually evocative write. Enjoyed the read.
WINDOW TO MY SOUL (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 12:26:54 PM
And what a lovely soul it is. -gene.
WINDOW TO MY SOUL (Poetry) - 12/11/2008 12:23:41 PM
And to think that once upon a time you said you couldn't write poetry! Look at you go now! Beautiful write Mishie. Love and hugs, Shells
LOVE IS... (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 9:14:23 PM
Loving photograph of two precious children and warm words to enhance the feelings well....
Be always safe,
LOVE IS... (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 7:58:22 PM
Sweet poem that warms the heart.
LOVE IS... (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 3:34:33 PM
Love is a warm puppy. It's as sweet as its alter ego, the kitten.
LOVE IS... (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 2:57:04 PM
Love is indeed all of those things that you described.Love is like winning the lottery,that person is the jackpot to your happiness and that is priceless.I enjoy reading this poem.take care
MY PASSION WITHIN (Poetry) - 6/19/2008 1:34:11 PM
Nice title and it is very eye catching. The poem and the picture is very eloquent. Thanks for sharing!
Spiritual Warfare (Poetry) - 6/19/2008 1:31:45 PM
Nice write! Thanks for sharing!
Spiritual Warfare (Poetry) - 5/28/2008 4:31:22 AM
Such a compelling write, beautifully done my friend...you held me captive from beginning to end, also has a wise message within...well written, expressed and just a great write!
Spiritual Warfare (Poetry) - 5/27/2008 5:19:51 AM
A very compelling account. Love and best wishes to you,
Spiritual Warfare (Poetry) - 5/26/2008 8:29:17 AM
Rm, such a difficult decision to make, but if you trust in your discernment it will be the right choice. Especially since you ask Creator for the blessing! Beautifully done!...ET
Spiritual Warfare (Poetry) - 5/24/2008 8:53:19 AM
How incredibly lovely Mishie...I hope he's the one too. You deserve that special someone. Love always, Shells
MY PASSION WITHIN (Poetry) - 5/3/2008 1:15:26 PM
Yes, this is what love is made of, and waiting for it and following in His paths are very positive things. Nicely done.
YOU (Poetry) - 5/1/2008 2:24:56 PM
Pretty awsome feelings that you share here. I wish you the very best. Love and peace,
MY PASSION WITHIN (Poetry) - 5/1/2008 8:58:11 AM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. They sure got me thinking. Love and best wishes,
MY PASSION WITHIN (Poetry) - 4/30/2008 11:11:36 AM
In keeping God first is the proper order, but one can and many do also share a loving relationship with another. We give our lives to God, but we share love with all we know and meet. Very loving and endearing write with many wonderful sentiments....
Be always safe,
MY PASSION WITHIN (Poetry) - 4/30/2008 6:16:13 AM
OOOOOOOOHHHHHHH Mishie's got a boyfriend! I need a girl chat on the PHONE to hear all about this!!!!
Seriously this is wrought with tension, passion, dilemma...all in all the stuff that makes for HEAT. Great write. Love you, Shells
MY PASSION WITHIN (Poetry) - 4/29/2008 9:47:23 PM
RM It is so good to read you again! It's been to long!
This poem is so powerful in the ways of divine order,and it is perfectly perceived. It isn't easy for most to understand the spiritual warfare in this way, but when we do we have the burden and must find the strength we need. Prayer is a must to keep us true!Splendid !
MY PASSION WITHIN (Poetry) - 4/29/2008 6:48:15 PM
I hear you, you have to keep God first... it is hard, no doubt. You have written some powerful words of a struggle that many of us face. I like this...keep writing.
YOU (Poetry) - 4/27/2008 7:38:00 AM
OOOOHHHH, Mishie's got a boyfriend! I'm waiting on the dirt girlfriend! This is a lovely piece. Michelle
FREE (Poetry) - 12/6/2007 3:04:44 AM
This a wonderful write. It is very vivid in imagination and language. It is a very inspirational and uplifting write. I love your writing style and the photo that is shown. Thank you for sharing this piece with us! Stay blessed~
FREE (Poetry) - 9/6/2007 7:58:51 AM
Thank you for the comments on my work... I am actually writing this about the quandary of a relative who is still nursing a hurt over the recent marriage of one her friends to a guy she secretly had a yen for and never acted upon. My advice to her was to be happy and learn to love being free to be herself.
I think we may have all found ourselves in similar situations, especially when growing up, so you were on point, Larry! I'm sure it will work out for your daughter... these thngs always do!
Peace & Blessings, RM Green
FREE (Poetry) - 9/6/2007 12:10:10 AM
This was a wonderful offering of expression
FREE (Poetry) - 9/5/2007 9:18:33 PM
A similar situation occurred to my daughter. She is only 15, but believes she is an adult. He girlfriend likes the same guy. I continue to advise her that she really can't se the future, for now take each day at a time. If her girlfriend was any true friend she would back off, even if it is only puppy love for now.
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 9/2/2007 9:58:35 AM
Well said and the picture sure enhances the meaning.
God Bless You and Your Loved ones
The Christian Cop
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 8/18/2007 2:44:47 PM
Great digital image! I agree with your premise, the eyes are certainly the windows to the soul. It's funny too ... my Mother (rest her soul) told me those exact words when I was a kid. I could never lie to her - she always knew!
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 8/16/2007 10:39:05 PM
Wonderful write! Very inspirational and so full of love, compassion and understanding.....
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 8/16/2007 7:51:51 PM
I love the words, the art, the author!
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 8/16/2007 6:21:13 PM
Just talking about this over brekky this morning,"the eyes being the most important attribute to a person's overall attractiveness!
You are what you're eyes say you are, it's determining what they are saying where ppl get all mixed up.
Pretty eyes dont necessarily mean kind compassionate ones...
Excellent write here, just my thoughts above.
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 8/16/2007 4:10:11 PM
An inspired poem beautifully written with wisdom message. Great art too! Thanks for sharing, RN...
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 8/16/2007 12:53:41 PM
An awesome penning~adore it!
Blessings R. M~hope you are well,
THOSE EYES (Poetry) - 8/16/2007 11:45:56 AM
Our eyes speak.
I can catch someone in a lie
just by looking into their eyes.
I enjoyed this.
Love and Hugs,
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 8/4/2007 11:24:02 AM
Thanks for pouring out your heart and sharing your tears, this poem reminds me of my mother and the hurt she endured.
God Bless You, Your Loved Ones and Your Unselfishness.
Don't Lose Heart and Keep the Faith your best days are ahead of you.
The Christian Cop
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 7/18/2007 10:24:43 AM
Wonderful write! Crying releases the soul. It is okay to cry as long as you do not cry too long. Thanks for sharing a deep emotional and vivid piece with us! Keep up the great work!
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 2:36:02 AM
Outstanding and inspiring composition, "Shinnecock Dreams" depicts the wonders of Mother Nature and sings to life.
I in admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
BECAUSE... (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 2:26:05 AM
Admiration and gratitude, beauty and praise in "BECAUSE..." make this composition a poetic flower bearing the scent of honor and the aroma of wisdom.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 12:16:22 PM
This poem is very touching. I could sympathize and empathize with its narrator.
Thank you for commenting on Adventures with a Reluctant Teen.
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 4:18:41 AM
An outstanding write my friend, your words ring so true for so many...you've penned my mom's life as well! Amazing! She too raised children alone, three of us, no help from family or our dad...but she made it! The end results was much self satisfaction, a thriving business of her own, and three children whom turned out just fine! I am a married mother, grandmother, author and school teacher, my brother a retired coal miner living a comfortable life at home with his wife as their children are grown, and my sister own married and owns her own business...my mom, well we stil consider her the greates person on earth! Just as I bet your children think of you...you are truly a survivor! It will shine through your children as time goes by! Great write, enjoyed!
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 2:31:19 AM
I've been there too. Was a single Mom for quite some time. Well done.
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/26/2007 1:00:50 AM
This was just beautiful! I could feel all the emotions expressed so perfectly in this AWESOME Write! SC
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 6:35:55 PM
You are a very strong woman and a good mother! Never let anyone tell you different. God Bless you......
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 10:34:45 AM
This will most definitly keep poetry alive!!! Good job!!!!
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 9:52:43 AM
I can certainly understand why sometimes you would cry. Your poem is soul-stirring. Love, peace, strength, and healing to you,
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 9:44:33 AM
What a beautiful lament; what a lovely poem. Recovery is within the rhymes of your verse.
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 5:39:14 AM
Unique depicting of ontological and spiritual emotions...
"Soul Behind The Eye" a beautiful composition in poetic excellence.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Sometimes I Cry (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 5:31:56 AM
I have enjoyed the reading of "Sometimes I Cry". A poetic grand delivering a profound message.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
BECAUSE... (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 7:31:26 PM
BECAUSE... (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 1:57:18 PM
Beautiful RM! great tribute to a special man,and father !
BECAUSE... (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 12:59:36 PM
Would that all men were like this, Michele. Nicely done. It's good to read you again. Best wishes with the screenplay. Welcome back. Love and blessings to you,
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 11:33:09 PM
Haven: A place of safety; location offering favorable opportunities or conditions. . . .fully agree with the last line, for all of our spirits become vulnerable. Praise to the Spirit sending this poem to you for sharing with us all. blessin's, Sis. Michele,
cynth'ya lewis reed
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 3:33:01 PM
Amen...yes this is true and sometimes we need to be reminded
very uplifting and so real in these days and times
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 12:02:32 PM
Amen my friend...for God is our safe haven...one like no other! Great uplifting and inspirational write....enjoyed!
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 3:07:26 PM
Amen!!! A splendid poem of how there is nothing too difficult for Creator to overcome! Beautifully done RM!
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 12:35:51 PM
I have enjoyed the reading of "Safe Haven" for its contents wise thoughts and poetization. It is a poetic bouquet of springs flowers.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 8:42:56 AM
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 7:42:07 AM
"To allow me to scream in my silence." is a thought that I can totally relate too RM. I do it often when I am hiking. God is the shelter that all wise men and women eventually find. Excellent write, thoughtful and wise. Blessings to you!
Light and Wisdom ...
Safe Haven (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 7:30:31 AM
A beautiful, plaintive, heartfelt piece Mishie. Loved it! Michelle
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 6:37:38 AM
A very suggestive picture, don't you think? As tempting as the rhymes that accompany it. Tender words, you write. A sensuous poem, as zesty and luscious as those Valentine sweets.
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/16/2007 9:54:03 AM
You are correct to quote you.. "it is a very sweet and sensous poem"..I will go further and call your wonderful writing ..An Ode To Love. And your Photo is out of sight . Thank you for sharing.
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/6/2007 9:15:14 PM
A sweet poem of sensual love...a nice gift for Valentines...
nice work.....Art Sun...
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/5/2007 8:38:53 PM
Wow! RM you have written the most sensual valentine I've
ever read!;-) I'm keeping this one! Thank you dear friend!...et
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/5/2007 9:59:29 AM
You are sizzling again my dear. Quite a sexy write.
Light and Wisdom ...
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/5/2007 5:35:17 AM
The imagery is amazing Mishie. VERY hot, and sweet! Love, Shell
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/4/2007 8:13:43 PM
I enjoyed the opportunity to read your poetry...you did an excellent job...look forward to reading more!!!!
Valentine Sweets (Poetry) - 2/4/2007 7:47:06 PM
Poem and picture both yummy.
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 1/29/2007 10:03:25 AM
Beautiful! Well done! I particularly liked the last verse. I wouldn't mind if all poetry in the world flowed like this.
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 1/29/2007 9:58:40 AM
I appreciate poetry that's meaningful, melodic and easy to understand. I liked this piece, particularly your reference to seeing through the eye's pane (pain). Beautifully done!
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 12/17/2006 12:30:39 PM
Beautiful write...yes the eyes can divulge much about the inner soul, if we just take the time to look deep within as you have. The exterior doesn't always match the interior, you've captured this one well my friend!
Merry Christmas and God Bless,
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 12/9/2006 6:54:25 PM
Tough exterior, soft interior, and you blended both together in one poem so well. Excellent job.
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 11/27/2006 8:50:15 PM
Inner scars of a man soothed by the balm of your poetry, RM. A quill of gentle anointment dipped for the soul-heal. You've found the right words to reach the tender spots, the scene turning an emotional racket, soaking up the pain...Blessed Be.
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 11/25/2006 8:32:37 PM
A sweet write of healing, rite of healing for right one. :-) Thank you for your visit to my den. ~~Nordette
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 11/24/2006 11:41:09 AM
A lovely poem...full of compassion and emotion. I hope your new friend appreciates just how wonderful a person has come into his life! Much love, Michelle
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 11/24/2006 11:25:35 AM
Compassionate and compelling, this is soul-stirring. Thank you. Love and peace to you,
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 11/24/2006 10:30:15 AM
Beautifully written RM. One of your best! You write of a hero of sorts here.
Light and Wisdom ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Soul Behind The Eye (Poetry) - 11/24/2006 9:51:58 AM
What a loving and insightful poem you have created. These words tell of a kind and compassionate heart.
Love & Light always and in all ways,
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 11/23/2006 4:39:15 PM
It truelly is amazing what one person can for anothers life. This is absolutely beautiful. Keep up the good work.
Tapestry of Desire (Poetry) - 11/22/2006 2:22:21 PM
I uhhh, well, let me see ... um, uh ... well, of course, ummm. Time for a shower! WOW!
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Tapestry of Desire (Poetry) - 11/21/2006 4:42:18 PM
first the picture is outstanding
and such a "ladylike"title lol
this poem started off and then once i got in
Wow I FOR SURELY CAN RELATE
glad i didn't miss this...enjoyed
Tapestry of Desire (Poetry) - 11/18/2006 4:13:34 PM
OHMYGOSH!!!!!!!!!!!! FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!! You have hit your stride Mishie...this is a superb piece of work. Love, Michelle
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 10/18/2006 4:36:46 AM
"My Heart's Song"
RM Green, this is one of the most
heartfelt tribulatories I have ever read Hon!
Just the wonderful memories the love you two shared.
Even her baby soft skin, wow it was felt!
Thank you for sharing this awesome poetry.
Yes, keep that fire burning in your heart she is by
Blessings let them flow and continuously wash over you.
Gwendolyn A. Thomas(gath)
"From the heart of an Artist Quiet Storm"
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 9/29/2006 9:10:41 AM
Wonderful and beautiful poetry. I love the Native American Culture, they were my descendents. The movies don't paint a fair picture. Again beautiful write...
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 9/23/2006 4:50:49 PM
Beautiful poem, such sweet and fond memories...I knew that these kind words were about a grandmother, it reminded me of my own who passed on to a better place nine years ago. Great work...I love the sentiment.
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 9/2/2006 7:21:57 PM
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 8/26/2006 3:02:00 PM
Tasteful and eloquently penned.
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 8/25/2006 6:13:19 PM
Passionate and uplifting; thank you for sharing this offering. Love and peace to you,
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 7:53:25 PM
Michelle this is a lush luminous poem of passion igniting two people into a wondrous forever love!transcendent! Kudo's! ...Eileen
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 4:28:12 PM
Is it hot in here, or is it just me? :-) WHOA!
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 1:00:21 PM
A luxuriant wash of words portraying life's greatest gift.
"sweet as honey and fragile as glass" Indeed!
In fraternity ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Warrior Love (Poetry) - 8/19/2006 11:59:29 AM
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 8/17/2006 1:36:16 PM
Michelle,this is a beautiful and eloquent tribute honoring your grandmother!She is ever with you in spirit, and is gladdened by this gem you wrote for her!Thanks for sharing!...Eileen
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 8/15/2006 11:11:39 PM
A spellbinding glimpse of Creator's beauty cascades down the page in beautifully expressed images and words. Thank you for sharing!
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 8/13/2006 10:43:16 AM
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 12:04:33 PM
beautiful poem of a child's trust and awe, and innocence, thank you. My sister will be going to a Shinnecock family reunion on Long Island this or next month. Best to you, Mary
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 10:26:21 AM
A most loving and heartwarming tribute; a wonderful gift which will make your grandmother smile from heaven. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 10:24:49 AM
Your kinship with nature shines through your verses as you describe Eden on Earth. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 10:21:24 AM
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It's ready for the next step. YOU NAILED IT! WOW! Michelle
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 9:54:53 AM
A virtual tapestry of imagery in rich and verdant colors. Like dipping ones senses into cool pure water.
I enjoyed the savoring of SHINNECOCK DREAMS. This poem was like viewing a beautifully rendered painting captured with the innocence of a child and the skill of a master artist.
Very well written ...
Richard Lloyd Cederberg
Shinnecock Dreams (Poetry) - 8/12/2006 9:44:58 AM
~~RM~very beautiful and movng poem~~
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 4:03:25 PM
May this be the beginning of many lovely poems...your Grandma would be so proud. Love, Michelle
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 12:21:35 PM
MICHELE THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL, I KNOW YOUR GRANDMOTHER IS SMILING WHILE LOOKING DOWN AT YOU. SHE WILL INSPIRE YOU TO FINISH THAT BOOK AND THEN HER WORK WILL BE DONE,,,,THANKS FOR SHARING SO MUCH OF YOU...GLENN
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 12:17:16 PM
very beautiful tribute to your grandmother. Mary
My Heart's Song (Poetry) - 8/7/2006 11:00:51 AM
What a loving tribute...i hope my grandchildren feel this way about me