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Recent Reviews for Lynn Barry
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Puddles (Book) - 9/9/2004 1:47:25 PM
Lynn,
My wife Kim just finished 'PUDDLES' and absolutely loved it! She commented she 'wished I'd give up the 'Creepshow fiction' and write like you!
I'm just now into BJOYFL and am finding it a fresh, enjoyable read. You have a unique prose that is a true pleasure to delve into. Your talent is obvious, but also your love of writing shines through in every character...every word...and every page.
Thanks again for the honor of recieving your signed novels...
Terry
Puddles (Book) - 2/10/2004 7:19:21 AM
Congradulations Lynn, sounds good to me. You are such an inspiration in joy and achievement. love G
Puddles (Book) - 10/12/2003 2:29:11 PM
Remember the simple joy of childhood pleasures like finding images in clouds and jumping in puddles? That's where Lynn Barry got the title for "Puddles" and it's the feeling you get as you read it. Although the characters are facing some pretty big problems, the story has such an underlying sense of faith and appreciation for the little things in life that are really important, you can't help feeling uplifted as you read.
The plot is compelling and uncluttered with flowery prose that gets in the way of the action, and all the subplots come together for a satisfying ending. The characters are realistic and so varied that readers of all ages and genders should relate to at least one of them and empathize with the others.
This is a book that reminds us to laugh at ourselves and enjoy those occasions when we're so busy living we walk right into one of life's puddles.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 8/1/2003 3:47:05 PM
This is another vibrant creative imaginative novel by Ms. Barry. The main character, Valerie Martin desires to embrace the unlimited boundaries that come with the promise of knowledge as well as the hunt for love. Valerie armed with an eagerness to be a teacher, commits to the goal by entering college in her mid 30’s. This proves to be quite a feat filled with enough mayhem to keep this ferociously funny and deeply human story moving at a brisk pace. Anyone who blushes easily will fall in love with Valerie from page one!
I loved the true to life characters. These characters experience some sour lemons of disappointments yet encounter plenty of life’s gooey sweetness and of course, the gossipy pleasures. The kittenish claws, the wacky humor, the joyous times, are all part of the witty seduction of this captivating well-written book.
Ms. Barry captures the charming peculiarity of college life with traditional and non- traditional student viewpoints and does it with a playful poke in the ribs. As Valerie says “My braincells were doing pushups double time.”
Ms. Barry puckishly makes reference to the book meaning by the character taking note as to how the book received its title. I won’t deluge this unique and interesting tidbit of information. All I can say, is we all should understand the meaning of BJOYFL.
Ms. Barry is a master of this contemporary humor category. She is an exceptional energetic storyteller. Bjoyfl is a literary buoy to a down or bored mood. You will be hooked right from the beginning with this therapeutic cocktail. Bjoyfl is fun, witty, kooky, charming, and will magically regenerate you.
Ms. Barry, your talent is impressive and I’m a definite fan. More please!
Bjoyfl (Book) - 4/30/2003 5:56:07 PM
Lynn, your dialoge is fantastic. I have to read your book! I have to agree with the other poster. It does need to be made into a movie for Lifetime TV.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 4/23/2003 6:47:40 PM
Interesting book from what I've read, I'll check the rest out when I buy the book.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 4/11/2003 10:08:39 AM
Lynn ~
Thank you for letting me watch your baby for a few minutes. She was a delight. She was a head-turner from the very beginning, spunky and full of energy. You've created a winner here! She and you will go far!
Bjoyfl (Book) - 2/7/2003 7:22:51 AM
This is a humorous look at the life of an older “non-traditional” woman in college, looking for love and happiness. The dialog is not only believable, it is downright identifiable. This smoothly written delight pulls you into the story before you know it. A fun read!
Bjoyfl (Book) - 2/7/2003 4:37:45 AM
A wonderful slice of life! Crisp and sharp. Realistic thinking that puts a reader right into the mix of generations! Fun to read!
Bjoyfl (Book) - 2/6/2003 2:50:20 PM
Excellent story, Lynn! Reminds me of younger years when I had a big crush on my high school guitar teacher whom I am still friends with to this day:)
The reader is instantly drawn into the story as we relate one way or another with Miss Martin.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 2/6/2003 5:43:29 AM
Colorful dialogue, smoothly written, pulls the reader into the story. I could really relate to the 'old' lady surrounded by these young people. Such an amusing, delightful story! A must read for any age.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 2/5/2003 2:01:46 PM
Lynn Barry had done it again! "Bjoyfl", like her "Puddles" is a captivating story of life as it really is. A good enjoyable read that will put you right smack dab in the middle of the action.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 2/5/2003 11:20:35 AM
Terrific Lynn! Reading your exerpts made me laugh as I could see the red face Miss Martin with overexerted hormones running amok through scenes of well endowed males (eyebrows and all!). I can't wait to read the entire book to see what torture she has to endure. Loved it!
Joyce Rapier
author Windy John's me 'n tut
Puddles (Book) - 12/29/2002 3:55:41 AM
Sounds great, Lynn. Modern day subject, modern day events. My wife, another Susan, and I are gonna love it!
Byron
John Adams - Space Cadet
Puddles (Book) - 12/25/2002 7:58:40 AM
Being a man I was surprised to find myself sympathizing and even identifying with Susan as she struggles to understand her friends and family.
Reminiscent of 'Payton Place', her life really does resemble the afternoon soaps she loves to watch.
Puddles is a completely believable, smooth flowing account of ordinary, and not so ordinary, life.
It reminded me of Erma Bombeck's 'The Grass is Always Greener over the Septic Tank', but with more substance.
A wonderfully moving story with never a dull moment, where love and faith conquers all. And, Mrs. Barry has accomplished this without bludgeoning the reader with crude or distasteful language.
I highly recommend 'Puddles' to anyone who wants to be entertained and titillated.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 12/17/2002 4:55:34 AM
Lynn,
Your colorful, descriptive narrative and intriguing dialogue make Bjoyfl a must read for all! Congratulations on a winner!
Bjoyfl (Book) - 12/14/2002 8:30:34 PM
Sounds like another winner, Lynn.
Good luck on novel #3!!!
Bjoyfl (Book) - 11/19/2002 5:14:06 AM
Looks like another hit by Lynn! Loved the flow of the conversation. Characters felt reeal and the flow of conversation makes this an easy read! Can't wait to read more!
Sherry
Bjoyfl (Book) - 11/15/2002 4:31:59 PM
Lynn Barry has done it again with her book Bjoyfl! Along with her book Puddles, Bjoyfl is a must read. Looking for a good book to read? One that will make you enjoy life all over again, then Bjoyfl is it.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 11/13/2002 9:40:48 PM
I can SO relate to the story of the older student--brings back memories. This is surely a wonderful book, one I must finish now that you got me started.
Puddles (Book) - 11/13/2002 9:01:26 PM
Lynn's talent for dialogue is impressive. This will be another fine book to add to my collection.
Teresa Harrison Starkey, Author
A GOOD WOMAN'S HELL: The Journey Through and Out of Darkness
Puddles (Book) - 11/13/2002 5:59:03 PM
Enjoyed your book, Lynn! A really great read.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 10/17/2002 9:53:53 PM
I really liked your dialogue. Your characters are realistic as well. Very interesting.
Bjoyfl (Book) - 10/16/2002 5:36:26 PM
Nice! Gave me a warm-fuzzy feeling of my college days...
Bjoyfl (Book) - 10/2/2002 6:37:29 AM
Well, Lynn, it makes one feel as if they are in college all over again. A vivid, realistic scene with believable characters.
Gutterballs (Short Story) - 12/4/2007 10:47:10 AM
lol. what a sense of humor. I can throw a gutter bar with the best of them. But I know I'm not an exotic dancer. lol. Liz
Gutterballs (Short Story) - 7/14/2007 6:51:08 PM
Sounds like a fun place Lynn.
Yeah, let us know if you go back
By the way, will you be a singing?
Love ya!
Gutterballs (Short Story) - 7/14/2007 12:06:33 PM
it beats watching reruns on the tellie...enjoyed, let us know what happens next week.
dan
Gutterballs (Short Story) - 7/14/2007 11:34:29 AM
Sounds like a good time, Lynn!
Gutterballs (Short Story) - 7/14/2007 8:35:30 AM
LOL Reminds me of the time I went bowling. I do gutterballs myself, but Karla my twin laughs at me because when I bowl, I am spastic. Try bowling on two crutches...t'ain't easy, McGee! LOL Funny write; am keeping this one! Enjoyed~!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Do you want me? (Short Story) - 5/12/2007 6:17:13 PM
Shows how true love is letting go. Very nice. L.
Jumbalaya...a recipe for living??? (Short Story) - 5/12/2007 6:14:54 PM
Charming.
L.
Driven (Short Story) - 4/22/2007 9:28:21 AM
Short. Very emotional view of the reluctant adventurer. It always looks much better after the fear and excitement is over.
Next time, Formula 1. ;-)
Ron
Moving....and standing still.... (Short Story) - 3/16/2007 7:19:58 AM
Excellent write, Lynn; very well done! Thanks for the reviews; they are much appreciated! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Counter (Short Story) - 2/10/2007 6:45:54 PM
Hi Lynn!
I was excited to come across your site here at Author's Den. Love your story! I may have to read it again, just to make sure I got it!
Nudges (Short Story) - 2/9/2007 1:54:51 PM
I agree we get nudges taps on the shoulders and we don't always listen to them but when we do were glad we did they are a gift.
Thanks for this Hugs Angela
Why I write (Short Story) - 2/9/2007 1:52:22 PM
So true what you say here:
The answer to what we are supposed to do with our God given talents is inside us.
We all have a God given gift we find it by going within. It is wondeful you went back to school and all you have done.
You followed your gut and you saw the gift you have inside of you.
Hugs Angela
Jumbalaya...a recipe for living??? (Short Story) - 2/9/2007 1:47:27 PM
I like that thanks
Angela
Dumped (Short Story) - 1/27/2007 8:27:07 PM
Tough Love (Touch Write) and I do believe she will see the light!
Hang in! ((Faith)) YOur're in my thoughts/prayers!
WArmest Blessings and HuGs,WArrior Sheeeooxx
Driven (Short Story) - 12/16/2006 8:16:06 PM
How do we get "Driven" into these situations? This reminds me of a visit up North to a snowy field and two sixteen year old boys and their snowmobile...They took me on a ride for my life and probably, to this day...still laugh about it!
Great write...I'd do it again too!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
P.S. Thanks for stopping in my den...I look forward to sharing more...
Driven (Short Story) - 11/13/2006 6:25:05 AM
great job, but has never rode a go-kart!
must of been fun.
Do you want me? (Short Story) - 11/13/2006 6:19:56 AM
I liked it very touching, keep up the good work.
Driven (Short Story) - 10/13/2006 11:37:01 AM
Sweet, Lynn; and I'm sure your son appreciated your efforts. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Counter (Short Story) - 6/5/2006 4:16:16 PM
This was a good read, actually could part of something bigger...
B&R
Driven (Short Story) - 6/5/2006 4:13:04 PM
Oh, this was wonderful! Our youngest son loves the rides, most the roller-coaster and his mom will NOT EVER get in with him, but the go-kart, well... maybe better not... We really enjoyed this one!
B&R
Negativity is a no no (Short Story) - 2/9/2006 9:36:22 AM
Lynn,
I love this poem. There are so many people that die from a negative life. If everyone had your outlook we may not need so many doctors my friend. Cindy
Flashes in the night (Short Story) - 1/15/2006 7:51:37 PM
AMEN. I know this feeling. You described it to a "T". Thanks for sharing.
Nudges (Short Story) - 1/15/2006 7:50:37 PM
That's what real friends do and you know very well how to be a "real" friend.
Peeling with Laughter (Short Story) - 1/15/2006 7:49:34 PM
As they say, "laughter is the best medicine"! I couldn't live without it!
Why I write (Short Story) - 1/15/2006 7:48:38 PM
You have guts to go back to school and get your degree. Not everyone has what it takes. You go girl!
Embarrassment and genes... (Article) - 6/1/2005 3:56:10 PM
interesting
Embarrassment and genes... (Article) - 6/1/2005 9:43:07 AM
kids pick up cues from their parents, it doesn't matter if they are adopted or not. she is still your daughter, and that is what is important! i am all for adoption; a lot of my stories have to do with that theme, even though i, personally, am not adopted; still, knew a lot of people who were (or are), and they have been the inspiration behind my stories about adoption!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :)
Embarrassment and genes... (Article) - 5/31/2005 7:50:32 PM
Oh my, your genes must float around everywhere? I guess your
adopted daughter is talking about your genes?
Love ya! Cuzz............
Learning to live with it... (Article) - 5/3/2005 8:47:06 PM
well done
Learning to live with it... (Article) - 2/14/2005 9:19:20 AM
One mans junk, is another mans treasure. As long as they're happy about it, I guess all we can do is bless it. Sincerely, Leslie
The ones that got away... (Article) - 12/25/2004 2:07:05 PM
Right on Judy...thanks
The ones that got away... (Article) - 12/25/2004 2:05:04 PM
Well actually my mother-in-law and mother both swam away in that sea of life. My daughter is swimming around somewhere but then there are some fish I am glad did not take a bite. But I am glad for the ones that did.
She just called to say, "I love you".... (Article) - 8/4/2003 6:49:28 PM
Very touching, moving, and wonderful!
Hugs,
Victoria
She just called to say, "I love you".... (Article) - 7/7/2003 6:21:49 PM
Lynn, I am so happy for you. When I read this I cried. I know your heart is filled with joy and I rejoice with you. She does LOVE you! Hugs
Joyce
She just called to say, "I love you".... (Article) - 4/28/2003 9:39:42 AM
Hi Lynn! Children can hurt us just as well as love us. "I love you" is the best words ever heard from a child. Thanks for sharing!
Clarifying....and pondering... (Article) - 4/24/2003 9:04:21 PM
Hi Lynn, I could undersand a child feeling hurt by wondering why they were adopted out. Love is powerful. I've known family's who hate one another being all blood kin. I truly believe if a parent raises an adopted child from a chid until let's say 18 years, that child is most assuredly that parents child. Some parents that do adopt didn't really want the child like they thought, so the love goes out the window. I don't blame anyone adopted wanting to know why they were adopted. Let's face it, many parents are not fit to raise a child. Lynn, you and your family showed and gave your daughter much love and a wonderful family life. Where ever your daughter goes, or what ever she does, she will always remember the real Mom you were to her. Many Hugs cuzz.
Learning to live with it... (Article) - 4/24/2003 1:25:25 PM
Dear KarissaAnne,
Thank you for your comments. I helped my daughter find her relatives. If you have time, please read the other essays and pieces I ahve written in my den concerning my daughter. I hope you find the peace you are looking for. Take care.
Learning to live with it... (Article) - 4/24/2003 8:25:09 AM
It is only natural for an adoptive child to want to know her true identity and heritage. Adoption erases that true identity and all. I know I am a throw away adult adoptee so is my daughter and many others of us who have been thrown away by our adoptive parents.
Learning to live with it... (Article) - 4/22/2003 12:23:49 AM
I cant relate to the anguish and pain that you're experiencing reason being that I dont have kids of my own. But yes, i can relate to the raw sense of hurt and the stabbing ache, that can only be caused by someone that you love. But i am sure you have the satisfaction of knowing that you did the right thing. Prayers & Wishes for U, Alwayz! :)
Learning to live with it... (Article) - 4/21/2003 6:55:36 PM
It is always said, the person who raises the child is the true parent. Her bi logical parents didn't do this apparently. (raise her nor attempted too.) I know you have pain, but at least your daughter loves you and the rest of your family. Anyone wants to know who their real parents are. I even wonder about my Axelson grandparents, what they did, and all. They were cold hearted people. They wanted nothing to do with their son's family, sad isn't it. At least your daughter called you. I know you raised her and feel she is your daughter, who wouldn't? Happier days dear cuzz.
Ron
She just called to say, "I love you".... (Article) - 4/1/2003 4:04:38 PM
so glad for you, lynn! i know that had to be so hard, not knowing, but now you do! praise god; he DOES answer your most urgent prayers! :) (((HUGS)))
She just called to say, "I love you".... (Article) - 4/1/2003 3:36:08 PM
How wonderful! I'm so happy for you.
She just called to say, "I love you".... (Article) - 4/1/2003 3:29:38 PM
excellent
If you dream it...it may happen... (Article) - 4/1/2003 3:28:52 PM
poignant
If you dream it...it may happen... (Article) - 3/31/2003 11:42:08 PM
very heartfelt !
Over the rainbow (Poetry) - 7/15/2009 3:46:24 PM
Very cute and creative!
A fishy tale (Poetry) - 7/15/2009 3:45:30 PM
Yikes! lesson learned:)
Dumb and Dumber (Poetry) - 5/6/2008 6:33:53 AM
As we age and looke into our mirrors, we see our Mother's in ourselves. We don't like it , but it is as it is. I can also see my sister in law is looking more like her mother all the time and my cousin is looking more like her mother all the time. But you still see yourself in the mirror, so you must be quite young and free.
Dumb and Dumber (Poetry) - 4/28/2008 2:02:49 PM
Very nice and direct.
Dumb and Dumber (Poetry) - 2/8/2008 9:39:21 AM
I think you are wonderful as well sweet lady,great pen...missed ya...HUgss
Dumb and Dumber (Poetry) - 2/8/2008 12:30:59 AM
Now that was just delightful. It happens to the best of us.
be well and happy,
Kathy
Dumb and Dumber (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 8:09:13 PM
Reminds me of Audie Murphy when he shot at a mirror thinking it was the enemy.
Dumb and Dumber (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 5:42:05 PM
lol, done that a time or two...
Becca~
Dumb and Dumber (Poetry) - 2/7/2008 5:19:51 PM
Yes Lynn, who are you lo0king at you?
I think you are wonderful..
Love ya cuzz
Ron
Read the label (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 5:47:16 PM
Oh damn, and here I wanted to see a picture of you with no hair...;) e
Read the label (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 9:55:43 PM
Well, I admit this is not just fiction... It happened to me already! :-o
Nightmarish-ly realistic! ;-)
axilea
Read the label (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 10:23:44 AM
Hee, hee, I thought I was putting some
orgel in me mouth for a tooth ach and it was
some itch cn cream. Yukeeee..
Loves your work
I put my glasses on and read it
with love
Ron
Read the label (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 9:43:14 AM
*Laffin' too hard to review; too funny! LOL*
Read the label (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 9:26:16 AM
Cute one. Enjoyed it.
Sleeplessness (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 6:09:39 AM
You pen one closer than I want ... older I get, less I can sleep - doesn't help I need a new mattress, can't afford - my neck and back kill me - and there's my twin sis in the other room, snoring her ass off! LOL I hear you - maybe one day we'll get some rest. Excellent expression (in verse and image).
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.
Read the label (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 6:07:35 AM
Laughing too hard to review--glad I read the warning, here--
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
The Beacon (Poetry) - 2/1/2008 11:48:59 AM
Oh Boy, I get enough of that serving dinner at home...I'm heading to the five star sit downs, pleasantly quiet and served! LOL!
Cool place though, one of a kind...
Enjoyed
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
The Beacon (Poetry) - 2/1/2008 9:26:07 AM
Interesting pen,enjoyed sweet lady...Hugsssss
The Beacon (Poetry) - 2/1/2008 6:28:15 AM
I've never been to the Beacon. Sounds great
the sign is neat.
So you came to the South?
Do you have a Southern license? Got to have
one to get into the South.
With love, bunches of it,
Ron
Sleeplessness (Poetry) - 1/27/2008 7:37:11 PM
I go through the same stuff..
Love ya!
Ron
Sleeplessness (Poetry) - 1/27/2008 2:16:14 PM
"They" say, the computer might be the cause of certain insomnias...maybe you need a liitle break???? Take care and get some sleep!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Disturbing (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 10:20:31 AM
Nice tribute...truthful too!
Peace,
Dan
Disturbing (Poetry) - 1/25/2008 9:04:49 AM
Portrayal or reality - God directs us to love one another as He loves us. I think this 'church' is not one that promotes His word nor love. Makes you wonder about what message is being sent to this congregation in other aspects of life.
God bless you. Kathy
Disturbing (Poetry) - 1/25/2008 5:25:33 AM
So call Christians don't go to Church
for worshiping God anymore.
Pointing fingers is their main purpose now
even among themselves.
I know all Church people are not this way, but
I hear a lot of this profiling stuff going on.
I have a friend who smokes, but his Church
forbids him to join; he can come to Church,
but because he smokes he can not join
Most of the people that go to his Church are overweight
FAT, they really pig out my friend said.
Isn't it a sin to go home and eat 10 candy bars in
one setting?
Yes, it is very disturbing.
Love ya Lynn
Invasion of the snowflake (Poetry) - 1/24/2008 5:21:42 AM
It's Craziness, the weather... It's 20 below here! --Charlie
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