Ignoring History (Poetry) - 8/23/2007 9:30:36 AM
Very good write, but also very scary too.
Thanks,
Dan
Ignoring History (Poetry) - 8/23/2007 9:07:57 AM
you said it - we are the all-powerful, almighty. and in my opinion, we suck the big one.
(note: by 'we' I mean 'them' - not 'us')
Poets at Thirty (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 4:22:58 PM
How'd you like to be a poet at 52? I enjoyed this, espcially since I've published a book with Lulu.com and i'm having trouble getting people to notice it, read and review it.Hang in there.
Poets at Thirty (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 12:19:07 PM
I would imagine that trying to make a living as a poet these days would be akin to scratching diamonds out of hot blacktop with bare hands. You paint a picture here that touches the heart!
Blessings ...
Richard
Poets at Thirty (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 11:43:31 AM
Nicely done. I guess that's why most "poets" become famous once they are long gone. Thank you, Jeffrey. Love and peace to you,
Regis
Stiletto (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 8:45:12 AM
Nice write! it reads very much like something from Edgar Allan Poe.
Thanks,
Dan
Poets at Thirty (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 8:41:06 AM
Jeffrey, it that's what it takes to sell a book, I can't wait 'till I'm 30. Nice write.
thanks,
Dan
Locked In The Poetry Room II (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 8:05:47 AM
I loved this poem,beautifully written and oh so very excellent!
Reindeer
Talk About My Girl (Poetry) - 8/9/2007 9:03:17 AM
ain't that the truth
Talk About My Girl (Poetry) - 8/9/2007 8:08:20 AM
Wow!
Dan
Talk About My Girl (Poetry) - 8/9/2007 5:22:56 AM
Oh myyyyyyyyyyyyy
Sprinkler (Poetry) - 8/3/2007 11:09:35 PM
I love the way you captured a moment that seems to percolate to the surface of all of us in our early morning adventures of earthly reality. Hilariously real.
Coming of Age (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 8:58:10 AM
Wow! really powerful pen.
Peace,
Dan
Sprinkler (Poetry) - 7/31/2007 8:55:56 AM
just watch where you step. enjoyed the read.
thanks,
dan
Barbie Dolls (Poetry) - 7/21/2007 4:56:44 AM
A bit of both!
justin at fifteen (Poetry) - 7/21/2007 4:54:11 AM
Thank you very much!
And yes, he is my son.
Barbie Dolls (Poetry) - 7/20/2007 6:49:42 PM
again amazed; i read this as allegorical, although it's entirely possible it is literal; since i teach, i unfortunately see these "dolls" all too often....they all ahve their empty socket eyes on a much bigger prize than just BEing. ..
great write.
.ness.
justin at fifteen (Poetry) - 7/20/2007 6:47:21 PM
wow; blown away by your voice, and your endearing lopsided comparison. .. i esp liked how you blended the lines, stop/start iterations and subliminal (thats). .. must endeavour to read more of you.
.ness.
justin at fifteen (Poetry) - 7/20/2007 2:34:20 PM
good on justin and good on you for telling us about him.
dan
justin at fifteen (Poetry) - 7/20/2007 8:40:07 AM
of course, you know he is...must be a son or grandson, we all know they are perfect.
Never give up on the gravy (Poetry) - 7/19/2007 7:27:55 AM
great advice.
peace,
dan
Cherry Juice (Poetry) - 7/14/2007 1:38:18 PM
I agree with Rose.
On Mars (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 7:47:58 PM
Interesting indeed,Hugsssss
On Mars (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 8:53:25 AM
very good write,
thanks,
dan
Memoirs of the Poet Laureate (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 4:20:28 PM
This is based on a poet I once knew in Oklahoma.
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