The Toy That Became A Tool, Messages Given (Short Story) - 9/29/2006 5:50:04 PM
I love this...it reminds me of A Christmas when I was growing up. You've written this well. I have enjoyed it, makes me wish times were this simple again...Looking forward to reviewing more. Keep up the good work.
Blessings
Joyce Bowling
The Christmas Doves , Messages Given (Poetry) - 12/27/2006 5:51:08 PM
Beautiful poem Teresa....Have a wonderful New Years!!! ~David
The Christmas Doves , Messages Given (Poetry) - 12/3/2006 2:15:37 PM
God always cares this is beautiful tribute thank you for sharing your faith and poem...
Happiest of Holidays
Jesus is the reason for the Season.
Joselyn
The Christmas Doves , Messages Given (Poetry) - 12/2/2006 8:14:01 PM
Wow! Nicely done. Christmas doves definitely put things into perspective for you. A great read with a wonderful ending. Thanks. Jim
Coinsides With God (Poetry) - 11/13/2006 4:30:05 PM
God does have a purpose and he does have a plan...when we pray in God's will and wait on him...that plan comes together for our good. Great write...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Coinsides With God (Poetry) - 11/13/2006 3:03:52 PM
God does have a purpose and a reason for each season we pass through this is so inspirational have mnissed you !!!!!
God Bless you,
Joselyn
Coinsides With God (Poetry) - 11/13/2006 2:55:05 PM
Leave it in God's hands and you'll never be disappointed. This is a wonderful inspirational write. God Bless you.
Point Of View, Messages Given (Poetry) - 11/12/2006 9:26:55 PM
There is a difference isn't there Teresa? God forbid that I should dislike Gay people. I will defend their right to be so. Two dear friends are Lezbians, that is their choice, but I know that my marraige is of God.
Robert
A Broken Heart, Messages Given (Poetry) - 11/12/2006 2:05:35 PM
Beautiful write my friend...for one way to view death is the beginning of our eternal life...this is a great testimony for others.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
A Wish On Me , Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/24/2006 4:37:47 PM
This one has a beautiful ending Theresa amazing......
Light & peace,
Joselyn
A Broken Heart, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/22/2006 7:59:26 PM
Beautiful poetry a very collective revelation and reflective versing in this one.... For your child...... It is good to not fear death and only knowing the ending allows one this peace with the qabsence from those we love for awhile.
Wonderful............
Light & peace,
Joselyn
A Nation Asking When, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/16/2006 6:19:12 PM
This is a beautiful write and very sincere and heart felt. I too felt a bit ashamed, and I wondered what we could do to help. I prayed and found the answer within, my little classroom of 26 students and I sent a care package to help at least a few, but we then presented a challange for others, I'm not sure how much was sent, but I felt that we did take an active part...what if that were us...makes one wonder if people really care about the human race, or someone other than themselves...Bravo well done.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Never A Right Time, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/7/2006 3:37:16 PM
There is always hope in Christ. I see so many hurting, depressed, rejected, cruley beaten, misused in this world you capture this very well......
Blessings,
Joselyn
Side By Side, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/5/2006 12:06:08 AM
Theresa, This is a beautiful heartfelt treasure tribute to them both. I am sorry for your loss but so glad they knew the way home... Yes Keep writing one day you will catch up with them.... Thank you for sharing...
Blessings & Peace,
Joselyn
Side By Side, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 4:10:29 PM
Wow! this is a wonderful devine tribute...very sad, but as a poet once told me...that is where a poet draws strength from,,,the sad, hurful, and the sorrows of life...I commend you on this write it is superb.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
The Promise Of A Butterfly , Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 3:02:11 PM
I wonder if you realy know and understand, how much truth you spoke of in your poem. "Their pain was but for a short moment". Now they are in the service of their God.
Side By Side, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 2:56:21 PM
Written with depth of feeeling for a loved one.
Robert
Screams My Name, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/4/2006 10:34:54 AM
I had nightmares as a child but now, most of the dreams I have I wish I would not wake up from them. Thank you. Love and peace,
Regis
Screams My Name, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/2/2006 1:37:48 PM
I have had that same feeling before, wake up and think that someone is calling my name...scary...you've captured it well my friend.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Screams My Name, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/1/2006 9:14:22 PM
makes you wonder if it was really a dream ...
Screams My Name, Messages Given (Poetry) - 10/1/2006 10:25:36 AM
You capture the nightmare well in this poem hauntig.... I hate it when this happens..
A Wish On Me , Messages Given (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 8:48:17 PM
beautiful! amazing imagery and expression to your wish! I completely loved it!
Chris Reed
A Wish On Me , Messages Given (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 8:29:30 PM
Beautiful wish!
Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)
A Wish On Me , Messages Given (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 7:56:21 PM
this is charming!
Don,t Give Up On Me, Messages Given (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 4:21:32 PM
if you knew where i came from, what my past was like, you would know how happy i am that my family never gave up on me, even when it seemed i had. this struck a note with me
Don,t Give Up On Me, Messages Given (Poetry) - 9/28/2006 12:33:33 PM
This is so sad and powerful I too have known those that feel the street is better for them a safe harbor for they are alone, rejected, lost, confused. You touched me to memory so deeply with your poem ... Thank you.
"But before it’s too late, I’ll make this finale plea: please look into yourself and don’t give up on me! "
Blessings,Joselyn
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