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Recent Reviews for Vernon J. Davis Jr.
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Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 8/16/2009 5:25:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful and so eloquently spoken in your writing.
Many Blessings
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 6/17/2008 11:39:07 AM
Beautiful work, Vernon....Unique and inspiring....I wish you all the best....Sophia
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 2/15/2008 3:02:58 PM
This shows that the black symbole means beauty, I always admires the blacks, it is to me the symbole of struggle and human freedom.
Jackson aniefiok
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 8/12/2007 8:33:12 AM
"To grasp Her, to embrace Her, to
even love her
would be loving love Itself
And what more would a man, want
Desire, or need
Love is the Beautiful Black woman"
So reads "Love Is," the opening poem of Love, Is, The Beautiful Black Woman, the debut collection of poetry by Vernon Davis. A moving tribute to the prevailing attributes of Black womanhood, Davis' opus is altogether penetrating, wistful, and at times amusing. Its purpose is to extol the collective virtue of all African-American women, and it accomplishes this feat in a number of ways.
Consider this passage from "You Are The Sun":
"You are the Sun
that shines love into
his heart, and gives
warmth to this soul."
And this one from "Blackness Divine":
"She is the Creator.
She is Love.
She is that fantasy
That men are always wanting of."
Such vivid depictions are indicative of a humble respect and admiration almost too great for words.
Of course, when dealing with the all-encompassing subject of love, one must be prepared to take the good with the bad. Davis masterfully conveys this sentiment in "Deception":
"When I first met her,
she was beautiful.
Tight fitting clothes,
long flowing hair,
a sweet lovely smile...
But, when I saw her the
next morning,
she was wearing an oversize bathrobe
and what little hair she had
was in stubby braids..."
He also reflects on the woes of unrequited affection in passages such as this one from "Faded Warmth":
"Then your sister came and said, It's Time...' Do you have to?' I asked. `Yes,' you replied. `My husband is here, waiting.'
In a word: "Ouch."
If you're looking for one piece to sum up the essence of Davis's collection, though, the aptly titled "Passion" does it best:
"Her Name is Passion
And
We All Want Her
**Why?**"
Love, Is, The Beautiful Black Woman is a rewarding read, a treatise on the essence of desire and compulsion. Once you've read it, you'll find yourself celebrating the virtue of that someone special in your own life who you'll never see the same way again.
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 8/4/2007 9:10:11 AM
Damn that was sexy. I'm white( mostly) and this just made me quiver all over for some sweet brown sugar myself....
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 7/30/2007 4:24:58 PM
I love this excerpt and I know that I will enjoy the book that much more. Your words are indicative of the type of Black man that sistahs want in their life. That true Sincere love.
May you be prosperous in all your endeavors.
Thank you for the tribute.
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 7/30/2007 3:01:54 PM
I own this book and I'm just sorry that it took me so long to go out and buy it. It is spiritually uplifting, empowering, funny, nostalgic as well as deep, dark yet lighthearted. Above all it pays tribute to the beautiful black women we are inside and out. Some of my favourites 'Deception of the 1st Magnitude' - a tale of the beautiful woman you go to bed who isn't necessarily the same one you wake up with. 'Hot Chocolate' - I read it and came away feeling that I am her, 'Maybe I will Succeed' - despite what some men think -there's some hope for them after all, 'What is a Woman Like' & 'Curves' - a positive tribute to our individuality.
A recommeneded read for any woman who wants to be uplifted and honoured in verse.
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 3/24/2007 12:27:53 PM
Beautiful poetry....What a wonderful tribute to what I agree are beautiful women.
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 2/12/2007 10:22:44 AM
I love the very idea that you have titled your book Love Is The Beautiful Black Woman. It is so great to hear a male speak so highly of Black Women. That I just had to say Thank You.
Love,Is,The Beautiful Black Woman (Book) - 11/24/2006 9:45:47 PM
I simply love the excerpts to your book, and certainly appreciate your tribute to us! You are the wondeful type of Black Man we seek to have and to hold... Thank you from us all, from the bottom of our hearts!
RM Green
A Vision Of Awe (Poetry) - 7/7/2012 3:01:10 PM
There is no question about it; you love women, black women, and we love you. This is awesome. We need those affirmations coming only from you.
Humbled By Beauty As You Do What You Do (Poetry) - 7/7/2012 2:57:13 PM
Beautiful beautiful and hot. A Black Man IN LOVE!
BLACK BEAUTY (Poetry) - 7/7/2012 2:54:59 PM
Beautiful tribute.
Your Fingers (Poetry) - 7/7/2012 2:54:10 PM
This is hot. I love it. Molten lava---a volcano.
A Nubian Kiss (Poetry) - 5/29/2012 1:45:24 AM
Hauntingly beautiful. I love your style & word usage. Inspiring!
Mother's Day Poems (Poetry) - 5/9/2011 3:58:17 AM
well said
HER SMILE (Poetry) - 4/18/2011 4:31:29 AM
Oh those smiles-
Very well done.
John
HER SMILE (Poetry) - 4/17/2011 3:34:52 PM
YES...VERNON. I DO BELIEVE THAT YOU ARE THE PATH TO KNOWING WHAT TRUE BEAUTY IF ALL ABOUT. WONDERFUL WORK, THANKS FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Miss Fabulous (Poetry) - 2/28/2011 7:56:15 PM
Great emotion.
She Sits On A Shelf (Poetry) - 2/28/2011 7:51:44 PM
Excellent, very moving.
Humbled By Beauty As You Do What You Do (Poetry) - 2/27/2011 2:58:39 PM
...'SMITTENED'...TO SAY THE VERY LEAST(SMILE) AND SO BEAUTIFULLY AND NATURALLY STATED. THANKS FOR SHARING, VERNON. LOVE, BLESSINGS & FAITH...JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
REMEMBER--CELEBRATE BLACK HISTORY! (Poetry) - 2/4/2011 4:15:52 AM
The ending you have expressed here gives me chills Vernon.
None of us should ever forget where we came from & where we
have been. I know I cannot forget where I came from & all
the horrible things that are in history over ignorant prejudices
it's shameful tragedies to say the least. But thankfully times
are changing in big ways for us all to share our values & worth
May Love's Eyes Always Conquer You
(all of us)
Vickie
Your Fingers (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 12:09:52 PM
I love this poem. If it's not supposed to be erotic, it really is!
rege
ONLY (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 12:08:39 PM
Meaningful, but sad poem.
I like it!
rege
A Nubian Kiss (Poetry) - 1/11/2011 12:07:27 PM
Sounds mystical, puzzling, and by all means, exciting.
rege
A Vision Of Awe (Poetry) - 1/10/2010 8:15:02 AM
This is written so eloquently Vernon, I loved how your stirring arousal become my own, for you!
I wish SHE knew how transfixed in her look/spirit she made you!
Will you possibly see her on the bus again...?Good Luck!
Faith Will Follow!
Blessings and Harmony, SOULFUL_Purple_PassionsSHEEoxxo
BLACK BEAUTY (Poetry) - 12/13/2009 3:16:10 AM
Another outstanding writing. You capture the womans beauty on every line.
GOD BLESS
Tony Nerone
A Vision Of Awe (Poetry) - 12/13/2009 3:10:55 AM
Silence became silent. What a great line of poetry. There are so many great lines in this masterpiece. I am sorry I missed this entry before. Great job of writing.
GOD BLESS
Tony Nerone
A Vision Of Awe (Poetry) - 12/11/2009 3:58:50 AM
Magnificent poem.A well written piece.take care
A Vision Of Awe (Poetry) - 12/9/2009 1:34:58 PM
Vernon...this is a very eloquent
& beautifully expressed encounter...
if only she could read this or knew...
Peace & Inspiration
Vickie
Clouds (The Eyes Above) (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 7:00:20 AM
well done
A Nubian Kiss (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 6:54:32 AM
it is a nice poem keep it up
ONLY (Poetry) - 10/14/2009 5:37:41 AM
This is so hauntingly beautiful.
ONLY (Poetry) - 10/13/2009 12:35:58 PM
...'ONLY'...EVEN SOUNDS...LONELY. MUST BE TERRIBLE WHEN ONE DOESN'T REALIZE...THEY ARE NOT EVER... 'ONLY'. THIS IS A GREAT WORK - ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
ONLY (Poetry) - 10/13/2009 12:17:53 PM
Vernon,
You show your sorrow in so few but powerful words.
Mary
Your Fingers (Poetry) - 9/27/2009 10:41:18 PM
very beautiful and thought provoking words of love that build the love sky high!
The YOU (Poetry) - 8/6/2009 9:49:37 AM
...AND IN THE FINAL ANALYSIS....'YOU' CAN ONLY BE...WHAT 'YOU' WAS MEANT TO BE...NO MATTER WHAT YOU WANT 'YOU' TO BE. WELL DONE AND ENJOYED. THANKS FOR SHARING AND BLESSINGS. JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
ALWAYS (Poetry) - 6/26/2009 12:33:55 AM
Your muse...this is so very lovely.
Your Fingers (Poetry) - 6/19/2009 2:49:49 PM
WOW!!! This just about says it all, lol. Phew! Cold shower poem :)
Midnight Mistress (Poetry) - 4/23/2009 3:22:17 PM
So TRUE and So WRONG! In my opinion
she preys on the weak, and don't believe in commitment!
It takes effort and self-control, little do they have~!
Like your poem, speaks volumes!
Stay Positive!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings and Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo
YOU sure get into a woman's head, as I have a few poems getting into a man's drifting brain myself. Lvoe your expressive style!
ENIGMA (Poetry) - 4/23/2009 12:05:31 PM
YOU got that right, a woman's Perogative! I say....
Great uplifting empowering poem Vern!
STay Positive!
Love the essence in your heart!
Warmest Blessings of Peace, Love and Light, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
To be an enigma is such a blessing from the soul!
A Salacious Look(For Just...Only Me) (Poetry) - 4/23/2009 9:09:14 AM
For (maybe) just that BLESSED GIVING "Moment"!
WOW Vern. what a salcious gifted way of expressing your wanting!
I sure hope she has eyes/etc. for YOU (ONLY YOU)
I would ask, or pass her a short sweet note, you won't know, till you take action!
Be sweet and discreet and you may just have your ANSWER! I so hope so, for you!
Good Luck! and YOU write beautiful and honest!
I am a faithful follower/Tracker! I will try to read a few more while I am here...now...
Stay Positive!
Come by my den, when you can and see if your heart and soul is touched!
WRITE ON!
Warmest Blessings of Love, Light, Peace and Inspirations, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo
P.S. Her fine inspirations got you a writing! and writing you sure did! A
Beautiful yearing kinda' Poem!
A Salacious Look(For Just...Only Me) (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 1:27:39 PM
Well, she caught your attention, huh? Perhaps it is "for just only you"....
Be always safe,
Karen
A Salacious Look(For Just...Only Me) (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 12:39:15 PM
After this great introduction, Vernon, I hope
it was only for you. -gene.
She Sits On A Shelf (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:26:47 AM
Fantastic poem,take care
Edwin
THE RIGHT RELIEF (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:25:30 AM
Excellent poem,take care
Edwin
Miss Fabulous (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:24:14 AM
Good poem,take care
Edwin
ON THIS DAY (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:22:05 AM
Great poem,take care
Edwin
A Nubian Kiss (Poetry) - 3/9/2009 1:20:39 AM
A well written poem,excellent work,take care
Edwin
A Nubian Kiss (Poetry) - 3/8/2009 5:38:26 PM
Very well done indeed..stay safe and well...Hugssss
A Nubian Kiss (Poetry) - 3/8/2009 8:17:50 AM
Very well done, Vernon! A delightfully creative and refreshing poem!
A Nubian Kiss (Poetry) - 3/5/2009 4:01:33 PM
Vernon,
This is a very interesting poem with a unique point of view and rich in feeling and expression.
John
ON THIS DAY (Poetry) - 1/18/2009 7:59:59 PM
God Bless you!
Talent you have in abundance!
God Blessed you.com
Amen!
One-Way Love (Poetry) - 11/9/2008 12:59:13 PM
I like the title especially the use of the words "One Way" because everyone talks about the one when being in love. However, there are so many heartbreaks along the way to finding the one that it gets frustrating like a one way street. You travel it and can't go another way so you just have to keep on keeping on until love comes out of nowhere and swerves right in front of you. I think this piece is right on point. I can say I've been there but I won't Yield because there's only One Way to Love and that's All the Way! I really enjoyed this piece brother. Oh yeah are you any kin to Sammy Davis Jr. because you kind of got that cool about you in your photo. Anyways Take Care & Keep writing the Real Bro Davis!
THE RIGHT RELIEF (Poetry) - 8/28/2008 1:39:49 PM
This is truly to the point and delicious!
Copper Girl (Poetry) - 7/22/2008 10:16:21 PM
wow! You captured the essence of this 'copper girl' in a way that opened my eyes and allows me see her. I Like the easy, natural conversational style you use here and the way your ryhms are fitting and not forced. Thanks for sharing this tribute with the world Vernon! -Zach
She Sits On A Shelf (Poetry) - 7/20/2008 5:30:46 PM
Vernon,
Awesome write. The last verse told it all. Magnificent. So many, many women can identify with this. This is a keeper.
Blessings,
~Linda
She Sits On A Shelf (Poetry) - 7/18/2008 2:23:24 PM
Great write, very beautiful, thanks for sharing, Valerie
She Sits On A Shelf (Poetry) - 7/16/2008 9:07:59 PM
How sad when that is all there is, wonderful writing....
Be always safe,
Karen
IRRESISTIBLE (Poetry) - 7/10/2008 7:53:03 PM
Intriguing and interesting, awakening all the senses to such a delightful presence....
Be always safe,
Karen
Midnight Mistress (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 12:27:15 PM
Vernon, this makes one stop & think - where's my husband? I found this to be interesting.
Midnight Mistress (Poetry) - 6/29/2008 11:44:43 AM
For a while there, Vernon, I thought you were writing
about Lilith. Love the poem. -gene.
Copper Girl (Poetry) - 6/8/2008 9:18:06 PM
A beautiful thing to write in honor of a lady-I love the title, made me want to read it as soon as I saw it.
Copper Girl (Poetry) - 6/5/2008 10:41:17 AM
This is alluring and caused this reader to enjoy to the last line.
Euphoria (Poetry) - 6/3/2008 8:19:54 PM
Beauty so artfully creative with a sharing of love eternal....
Be always safe,
Karen
One-Way Love (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 9:23:32 PM
Always very difficult when one offers love and it is not offered back, a very pointed yet delicate piece....
Be alway safe,
Karen
One-Way Love (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 12:06:45 PM
A one sided love can destroy the heart and aching for a "love" that is real. A nice write.
One-Way Love (Poetry) - 6/2/2008 5:28:50 AM
I wish you would stop reminding me of this.
Okay, I'm kidding - you SHOULD remind all of us of this aspect of all-too-real one-sided love; and you've definitely touched on something to which I can readily relate. -- Jeff
ENIGMA (Poetry) - 5/29/2008 6:40:15 PM
I think all of us women at one time or another like to be an enigma. I know I do. I don't want everyone knowing where i go all the time or what I've been thinking. What is wrong with some enigma in our lives. I tell you intriguining things make men observe and try to get to us more. That's only one opinion though.
AROMA (Poetry) - 5/29/2008 10:24:57 AM
Fragrances of love, Make me thing of Bermuda's flowers the Oleandar, which I had bought perfume over there of it. Jasmine is sweet, chinese and so are Wisteria, southern vine. I love the purple blossoms of wisteria in the spring. Rose cologne is aromic too and so are Southern flowers, but the fragrance of love is the best. This is one of your best poems I've read so far. **********
APPLE (Poetry) - 5/29/2008 10:23:00 AM
Apple reminds me, My oldest daughter Karen is taking me Fri night to the Dutch Apple Theatre to see Footloose, a play, musical and all. And to dinner there too. Apples are used in so many ways and NY is the Big Apple, they are red like your script and also yellow and green. I loved baked apples too, and apples surely are sweet as she is you write about too. Thanks**********
Breath-Beat Of You (Poetry) - 5/28/2008 8:37:02 PM
Enjoy it when you can. It is such a dreamlike write and I hope it is true. I know it is true after going back and rereading it and seeing it is a tribute. Nice work ***********. Ecstasy is such a loving thing and to say it to her is so sweet of you.
A-DREAM-FOR-A-DAY (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 4:44:11 AM
Very unique and sublime poetic expression in this wonderful poem.
I salute You, Poet.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
A-DREAM-FOR-A-DAY (Poetry) - 5/11/2008 4:38:03 PM
Simply put but words so serence and mellow and queens we all were today so it was really a dream come true in a way. Thanks for the write. You sound so bright.
The Crumble Woman (Poetry) - 4/11/2008 5:18:27 AM
Such power within these lines...and as a woman, I can say that I have been able to identify with this from time to time. Wonderful writing.
AROMA (Poetry) - 4/4/2008 8:35:39 PM
Very sensual indeed, I like how you took this idea of scent and worked it through all the senses, nice work.
AROMA (Poetry) - 4/2/2008 4:20:08 PM
How sweet and effervescent a scent this has...
Be always safe,
Karen
PRINCESS LIGHT (Poetry) - 3/28/2008 12:40:47 AM
One word...beautiful!
The Eyes Of Lynda (Poetry) - 3/25/2008 2:37:38 AM
Lynda has precious eyes like mine. You, Vernon have a heart of gold. Your writing is always beautiful.
The Eyes Of Lynda (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 6:43:54 PM
Love how you formed this, the "beyond" lines especially-wonderful.
The Eyes Of Lynda (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 11:49:53 AM
A very emotional piece, yet a tribute to your friend....
Be always safe,
Karen
The Eyes Of Lynda (Poetry) - 3/19/2008 3:41:37 AM
Very nice writing,stay safe and well...Happy Easter Vernon...Hugsss
The Eyes Of Lynda (Poetry) - 3/18/2008 6:17:30 PM
Lynda must have the most beautiful eyes...nice writing
IN REMEMBRANCE OF (Poetry) - 3/6/2008 2:25:25 PM
My daily devotions reading poems was blessed by you today. Thanks.
AN ANGEL ON CHRISTMAS (Poetry) - 3/6/2008 2:24:05 PM
Best reading kind I love you are talented. Great about angels. Do my daily devotions and this greatly appealed to me and helped me.
belive it and it will happen.
Hot Chocolate (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 11:04:37 AM
Nice imagery and poetry.
APPLE (Poetry) - 1/15/2008 2:50:23 AM
You're turning me into applesauce. What a fruity tasting poem.
APPLE (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 8:26:03 PM
Sounds cute and delicious...
Be safe,
Karen
Hot Chocolate (Poetry) - 12/5/2007 3:14:09 AM
well said
Woman (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:18:00 PM
nicely done
The Wisdom Keepers (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:17:06 PM
well said
Syawla (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:16:41 PM
i like this
IN REMEMBRANCE OF (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:16:22 PM
lovely tribute
Love At First Sight (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:15:55 PM
well done
Unconditionally (Poetry) - 11/18/2007 2:15:30 PM
enjoyed the read
Unconditionally (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 8:33:40 PM
Wonderful writing sweet man,enjoyed..Hugsssssss
Unconditionally (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 8:21:48 PM
Awwww! Isn't love beautiful? You have a giving heart....
Be safe,
Karen
Unconditionally (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 4:36:46 PM
Wonderful, selfless love will always last and you will be the better for it.
Woman (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:28:58 AM
An expression of tribute and admiration that displays woman as beauty beyond comparison...
nice work...
enjoyed...
Art Sun...
Woman (Poetry) - 11/13/2007 4:16:04 AM
That's what's up! Terrific title. I enjoyed your poem first thing this morning and it was like sipping a cup of hot chocolate. I just love your work. Keep doing what you're doing. When is the next book out?
Love At First Sight (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 1:32:07 PM
Very well put.
Barbara Novella
Night Goddess (Poetry) - 8/4/2007 9:11:28 AM
You're a very talented writer. best of luck to you!
Man With The Golden Wings (Poetry) - 7/30/2007 2:44:12 PM
This is a lovely poem for Christmas - I can't wait for a sequel.
Vernon, you make it so easy to imagine reading this aloud, surrounded by kids on a winters eve in front of a fireplace. Very much a bonding and spiritually uplifting verse. Well written.
Hot Chocolate (Poetry) - 7/30/2007 2:21:56 PM
I AM HOT CHOCOLATE!
When I read this it makes me feel very empowered and I also wonder that as women do we really have this effect?
Syawla (Poetry) - 7/16/2007 4:56:18 AM
How beautiful and passionate, may she always visit and inspire you.
DISCLOSURE (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 10:34:20 AM
"DISCLOSURE"
Very precious and honestly heartfelt~lovely Vernon I truly respect this pov.
Sincerely,
From the heart of an Artist...
Bonded (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 10:32:49 AM
"Bonded"
A powerful acclamation of fidelity~just precious and extremly heartfelt for me!
Cheers and blessings fellow author,
From the Heart...~United Through Love
ALWAYS (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 10:30:11 AM
Emosewa indeed~smile
Simply beautiful I can imagine your recitation of this and also the beautiful imageries that are portrayed are precious. "SHE is... my Inspiration SHE is...where Words come from."~for she is poetry~Love it!
I feel this very same way about my poetry too...although the interpretations are also multi dimensional I believe~thank you for sharing this lovely piece.
Blessings,
From the Heart...
Absentia (Poetry) - 6/28/2007 10:25:12 AM
Love this Vernon heartfelt, and filled with such deep emotions.
Continued love, joy, and enlightenments to you.
Bidding you great success in your works filled with many blessings!
From the Heart of an Artist...United Through Love
ALWAYS (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 6:50:47 AM
You have truly found your calling. Your words drip like honey and stick to our souls they were meant to be shared and cherished.
My friend, your writings are so awesome.
ALWAYS (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 9:01:47 PM
How very lovely and moving this piece is, enjoyed it very much.....
Be safe,
Karen
ALWAYS (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 3:26:35 PM
She is your MUSE
ALWAYS (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 4:03:06 AM
Wonderful writing,enjoyed...Hugs
ALWAYS (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 3:01:22 AM
Marvelous! Well penned. Thanks for sharing.
Love At First Sight (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 6:27:47 PM
I love the fluidity in this piece. Outstanding piece! Thanks for sharing this piece with us.
Love At First Sight (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 4:19:25 PM
Very beautiful flow to your poem.
Love At First Sight (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 11:28:07 AM
Do you have to know love, before it's real? The sayings is, Love is blind, therefore love is felt by your heart. You don't have to know me, but you can fall in love with my actions, deeds, kindness, and sweet thoughts.
Your poems are so warm and heartfelt. Your words go straight to my soul and reach the bottom of my toes. It makes me think about the one I so dearly want to hold. But love seems to escape with time. But your poems are always there to comfort my broken heart.
Thanks for sharing.
Love At First Sight (Poetry) - 6/7/2007 6:24:55 AM
Excellent writing,Hugssss
Love At First Sight (Poetry) - 6/6/2007 10:16:43 PM
Lovely expressions of desire and love.....
Be safe,
Karen
DISCLOSURE (Poetry) - 1/24/2007 8:45:36 AM
enjoyed this cool write
Man With The Golden Wings (Poetry) - 11/21/2006 5:29:18 PM
wow i agree with CJ
very touching...done different!!
Man With The Golden Wings (Poetry) - 11/19/2006 6:29:03 PM
Vernon, this poem is so touching. It gave me goosebumps all up and down my arms. I love your style of writing -- it goes straight to the heart. Wonderful. Truly wonderful.
Love,
CJ
You Are The Sun (Poetry) - 11/15/2006 7:13:33 AM
Outstanding~~~~in Awe of the beauty
You Are The Sun (Poetry) - 11/12/2006 11:12:16 AM
Love is the sun that shines in the heart.Without love where will all of us be
Bom Bhole!
Roshan
Beyond Lust (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 3:02:49 PM
A passionate write.
Chanti
Beyond Lust (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 9:04:09 AM
WHOOOOOAAAA! Time to head off for a cold shower again. There have been some very sensual postings on AD ove the last few days. This one is amazing too! Michelle
Beyond Lust (Poetry) - 11/11/2006 7:53:33 AM
Wow, Vernon, this is positively inspired, an exceptional poem. Sultry, sensual, full of emotion -- again, an inspired work. I applaud you.
My warmest regards,
CJ
Thunder In The Sky (Poetry) - 11/2/2006 4:34:27 AM
Very nice
Hot Chocolate (Poetry) - 11/1/2006 4:48:41 PM
Delicious, Mr. Davis. :) You capture all of the senses in engaging poetry; well done, Sir.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Thunder In The Sky (Poetry) - 11/1/2006 4:47:56 PM
Mr. Davis,
This is beautiful, empowering poetry; no matter the race, it is fine verse, indeed. I have been blessed by your words; thank you!
And welcome to Author's Den, you're among friends.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hot Chocolate (Poetry) - 10/11/2006 12:18:35 PM
This is such a lovely tender warm poem.
Hot Chocolate (Poetry) - 10/11/2006 10:51:56 AM
Whoa!very nice and detailed as well hmm..I should try and make one like this as well haha..
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