Goddess of the Orient (Article) - 11/15/2009 3:47:32 AM
Intoxicating...is the word that come to mind on your writing and in our comments. Those dances most had make Horse so Crazy!
Wounded Eagle
Sioux
Goddess of the Orient (Article) - 11/14/2009 8:42:46 PM
Just as mesmerizing as the Dance of Seven Veils.
Blesswings and love,
Susan
Goddess of the Orient (Article) - 11/14/2009 1:42:46 PM
i agree completely enchanting
Goddess of the Orient (Article) - 11/14/2009 12:31:36 PM
Absolutely enchanting...
Goddess of the Orient (Article) - 11/14/2009 11:38:39 AM
Enjoyed the music / Loved the photos / Mesmerized by your poetry
Tranquility Lost ....Native American (Article) - 10/29/2009 6:40:39 AM
Art, I am always in such awe when I read your poetry. You always put so much time and effort into your work. This is so lovely and touching...for the simple reason that you write from your heart...and your last lines are so powerful.
Tranquility Lost ....Native American (Article) - 10/29/2009 6:03:08 AM
Nicely penned. Heart felt. Do you make youTube videos. A few more pictures and the words coming across them would be good. LadyJ
Tranquility Lost ....Native American (Article) - 10/29/2009 6:01:10 AM
The sorrows of the braves are beating on his chess drums as he can't see his prairies no more through bitter tears...
Honorable tribute, brother.
Wounded Eagle
a.k.a. Georg
Breathless (Article) - 9/9/2009 4:04:09 PM
wonderfully said, LadyJ
Breathless (Article) - 9/9/2009 10:07:23 AM
Art - Your poem Breathless puts forth that which makes us write poetry - The search for Truth and Wonder. - David
Breathless (Article) - 9/9/2009 1:07:56 AM
And thunder loaned the voice of the indian's drums to give the warriors a song coming from the skies.
"Breathless" sounds like Medicine Man's complaining questions to Manitou.
Well done.
Georg
Breathless (Article) - 9/9/2009 12:41:18 AM
And this is breathtakingly beautiful, Art.
Envision Us.... (Article) - 8/28/2009 8:07:43 AM
I too espeically liked the closing lines of this lovely piece... Myrna
Envision Us.... (Article) - 8/26/2009 8:09:09 AM
Art - Enjoyed the journey into a reality beyond the physical. Especially liked the closing lines:
Imagine
A contagious kiss
as we
Envision
Us
- David
Envision Us.... (Article) - 8/26/2009 6:47:35 AM
Not only a beautiful write the music was perfect, and as I realized at the bottom a wonderful video. Perfect today. LadyJ
Envision Us.... (Article) - 8/26/2009 6:27:35 AM
What an enchanting adventure...
Carole~
Envision Us.... (Article) - 8/26/2009 5:21:23 AM
"...on the other side of the looking glass..." with "...a contagious kiss as we envision us..." a peaceful introspective look, a meditation, transcending to another physical plane where memory isn't a burden.
Well done, my friend.
Georg
Chant to the Sun.... (Article) - 7/27/2009 10:29:11 AM
I love the lines
'We are the Sun
We are the Moon
We are
The Atmosphere'
It reminds me that we are indeed everything and nothing is separate from anything else. If we were more in tune with our environment as the native Indians were, the world would not be in the state it is.
Great write.
Helena
Chant to the Sun.... (Article) - 7/27/2009 1:51:35 AM
But then...some men didn't worshiped the Sun, like Shoshoni Cottontail tried but his arrows burnt before reaching the Sun or Chinese archer Hou Yi that succeeded shooting eight Suns so all trees of earth could have sprouts...the Sun will forgive and still give its warm and light to ungrateful children.
Georg
Chant to the Sun.... (Article) - 7/26/2009 12:17:46 PM
a wonderful write!
Chant to the Sun.... (Article) - 7/26/2009 10:16:43 AM
This piece is a fabulous piece, Art... it has a spiritual and earthy
rhythm to it...beautiful
Carole~
Veterans ...Methodical Song... (Article) - 7/7/2009 2:03:56 AM
A magnificent write with a magnificent tribute.
Semper Fi
The Silken Bench... (Article) - 7/6/2009 1:28:53 AM
An inner space journey with Magritte like images with eyes that can see not only what it was but also what it will be.
With the touch of a finger the bubble will burst!
Georg
The Silken Bench... (Article) - 7/5/2009 10:41:36 AM
This is beautifully done, thank you for sharing it. LadyJ
Secrets that ensure... (Article) - 5/14/2009 11:50:15 PM
Art, I know I've told you this before, but the combination of your words with your choice of music and photos is simply beautiful. The last ten lines of this are my favorite. Wonderful work, Art, as always.
Beyond smiles... (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 9:26:22 PM
True soul mates can celebrate the differences as well as rejoice in their sameness and deep connection. Beautiful write, Art ~Lizzie
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 9:53:14 AM
No never be denied of that Art, for the world is enriched by your expression. Beautifully penned.
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/18/2009 9:37:19 AM
Great poem.A well written and excellent piece,take care
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/17/2009 9:37:37 AM
i concur with your perspective ... conceptually stimulating and well written ...
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/16/2009 8:54:50 AM
Undone by the power, the truth in these lines - well done, Art, one of your (many) bests -
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/15/2009 10:53:42 PM
You speak from your heart and soul and so beautifully and with meaning. Words for many to read and remember. Life is much too valuable to be tossed aside...
Be always safe,
Karen
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/15/2009 6:22:10 PM
Would that the world shared the enlightenment of your
words, Art, and your healthy heart. -gene.
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/15/2009 6:16:53 PM
Well written and understood. LadyJ
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/15/2009 2:02:33 PM
Sometimes I ask myself if there will be a reckoning time for the ones with dark souls, because they are the ones dying on a warmth comfortable bed when innocents are dying in the mud.
How much is worth our souls?
You are right on the money, I hope they listen...for once.
Georg
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/15/2009 12:31:30 PM
Oh the world has changed, that is for sure, Amber. Art, this is a keeper for me. You laid it all out in such a beautiful, artistic way, but with TEETH! I love this. It says much. Will it change anything? No. but it says much!
Viral Infection... (Poetry) - 11/15/2009 9:03:05 AM
Art,
This is very powerful and well meaning. I know of what you speak, and sometime, some where, there will be a reckoning, and those "People" will pay the piper. Once a very long time ago, when I was a teen, I thought for sure our generation was going to change the world. well I guess I was really wearing rose colored glasses for sure!
I am so glad that you wrote this poem, it is indeed an eyeopener!
Much peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
Sky –blue dreams (Poetry) - 11/15/2009 4:03:44 AM
Erotic and sensual. Each word perfectly placed and descriptive.
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/12/2009 2:41:44 PM
Layers of reasoning that are like shutters and filters on a camera... which ever way the lens focusses, the effects can be different according to the shutter-speed of the mind, the light of revelation and the particular mood in which a subject is approached. I very much enjoy these kinds of mind-matrices, Art! Well set out deck of thoughts here. Thank you, xx
Hace tiempo....A long time ago... (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 4:25:32 PM
The gentle swell of the cadance of the words - makes me tipsy just drinking in your incredible words. The Spanish rendition says it all with such a passion. Yo creo que tu esposa sienta con toda su corazon que tu eres todo para ella, porque tu le has ensenado y dado tu amor.
God bless you. Kathy
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/9/2009 4:20:41 PM
The more I think I understand, the more I realize that I only have a glimpse of the whole. And then confusion abounds. I'll be thinking on this one for a while. Thank you - I think.
God bless you. Kathy
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/4/2009 6:02:00 PM
thought provoking and well written ...
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/3/2009 11:25:23 AM
awesome descriptive of the complexity of emotional patterning thoroughly engrained within the biology of the human consciousness
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/3/2009 1:43:06 AM
ohhh...its so confusing...but sure its...well true as i could follow few things..we got to analyze ourselves to get over the confusion....
great write Art.
best wishes
neerja
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/2/2009 12:43:24 AM
Talk about a thought provoker;-) this is brilliant,and takes the reader on a merry-go-round of deduction...
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 5:34:12 PM
i like this-it made me think and consider-i believe that true understanding takes much time, confusion and thought
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 2:06:00 PM
Foreign...thoughts, confusion...like walking with a tiny pebble inside one shoe.
Georg
Foreign.... (Poetry) - 11/1/2009 7:26:58 AM
..."there is more to understanding than the exposure of those foreign, unfamiliar, confusing thoughts"....Art, I so love these lines. You write with a soft wisdom and power.
A River of Dreams... (Poetry) - 10/27/2009 11:40:06 AM
this is beautiful ...
your profile it is beautiful ...
very rare, and, very well done at the same time
your writing, inspires me
thank you, for sharing your gems & your treasures
they added incredable length, width and deep to this day :)
love/susan
Hace tiempo....A long time ago... (Poetry) - 10/27/2009 4:47:42 AM
HEAVENLY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Hace tiempo....A long time ago... (Poetry) - 10/26/2009 3:25:22 PM
I'm so glad you provided the English translation, but if you want to speak Spanish into my ears, I won't complain - this is beautiful, Art.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
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