Why I hate you! (Poetry) - 11/26/2006 4:21:29 PM
venomous and to the point ...
Why I hate you! (Poetry) - 11/22/2006 4:37:15 PM
Very straightforward. You could do more "show" and less "tell". I'm curious about the eye thing - maybe go more into that.
Why I hate you! (Poetry) - 11/22/2006 11:52:10 AM
well, it was certainly outspoken, i take it the friendship is over? the writing is very descriptive and vivid, i think it flows well and definately gets your message across
