Recent Reviews for Seed4ever D. D.
Yellow Umbrella (Poetry) - 8/5/2009 3:18:21 AM|
Excellent poem,great work,take care
No Fear (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 10:00:19 AM
Fear is one thing I am trying to not let bother me. I do have fear of the darkness especially when coming home alone late at night. But get into house quickly, and feel safer inside. My fears of yesterday, many have I left behind. But working on it strongly to not fear anything and put it all in the Lord's hands.
Death what is It (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:58:29 AM
Know it gets better on the other side, no pain, no grief, no worries, all is perfection we are told that is like it will be.
You can conquer any Weather (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:57:37 AM
I do so love summer and want it to go on forever, which I know it won't but it is going by so fast this year, I don't want to see it end. 90's past 3 days and love it. Humid it is, but I love it.
A-Glow (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:56:04 AM
Flying a kite is not always easy but this little boy said his prayers and was rewarded easily.
After You (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:55:17 AM
Will take a while to read your 44--some writes, but will do eventually. Am an avid reader on den and author too. Yours is a variety of everything under the sun and I have trouble picking which ones to read first. Give me time, though.
Perfectly Balanced (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:54:05 AM
Being green is you and your writes. Glad I got into your site today. Bring happiness to me with your write, of what I've read so far. Each has a special meaning and I try to find it out. Your style is unique, easily maneuvered around and a joy to read out loud. Commenting is fun for your poetry.
Feeling Blue (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:52:39 AM
I am not as found of Blue as some people do. I love yellow, my favorite color. I do like the turquoise blue of the Bermudian Ocean though. Been there, seen it, adore it and have brought back some pink sand from it in a little glass heart to store it in on my dresser with a Bermudian penny for good luck in it.
Measurements (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:50:17 AM
I do not even bother about my measurements. At 63 yrs old I can be happy just being myself, don't care cause not out to impress anybody anyway. Good to watch your diet while young and your figure but at this age why care. It is hereditary anyway.
Day Dreams (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:48:26 AM
Found out the hard way not to dream of those delicious blondes or girls in your future. But how can you help it, it is life and meant to be. Hope you find your dream girl sometime if not already having her.
Ah the Countryside (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:46:49 AM
Enjoy nature as much as you do. Did see a mother blue bird feeding her young ones yesterday. See lots of nature in countryside, lots of different birds, animals. Would you believe it but a farm down the road on way to daughter's house has a camel in the field out back and can be seen from the road. A friend has a donkey which I visited in Va. and goats there too. I do so do enjoy getting to see as much nature as I can in my lifetime.
Life carries On (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:44:52 AM
Have a cat, love her dearly, she is my all in all in my life now. Seems to be the best company I will have now.
No Time will Toll (Poetry) - 7/13/2008 9:43:46 AM
The past is still with me, memories abide always, clean and pure,
Present, I am confused as to move to sr apt or stay here in trailer. Must make up mind soon, Need to get a life again after Hubby's death.
Future, I know now where I am headed except believing in God will get me to Heaven and my future does not look that great, but I must have faith all will be o.k. in the end and future times are gloriously awaiting me for some reason, I do know now why?
Don't Contend (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 8:40:31 PM
good to see you here--have a great time!
Don't Contend (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 5:51:30 PM
Awwww photograph and words penned bring smiles. Have fun, enjoy....
Be always safe,
Don't Contend (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 9:14:06 AM
Nice, I like, I like it very much
Don't Contend (Poetry) - 5/30/2008 5:24:31 AM
Sounds like a good plan to me! And I love that pic!
No Time will Toll (Poetry) - 5/16/2008 3:13:37 AM
No Time will Toll (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 1:24:34 PM
Very wise words & such truth to this nicely written poem. A nice write!
No Time will Toll (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 1:07:57 PM
clever words of wisom!
No Time will Toll (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 10:56:39 AM
Interesting concept, but in the present is where I chose to rest my feet as the other two swing like a pendullum, nicely written with much insight....
Be always safe,
Life carries On (Poetry) - 5/9/2008 4:24:04 AM
Love your last line, and I better go feed my cats, they are all hungrily pacing about!
Life carries On (Poetry) - 5/8/2008 6:59:36 PM
Philosophical wonderment, filled with much wisdom....
Be always safe,
Life carries On (Poetry) - 5/8/2008 1:28:21 PM
a fair bit of wisdom here! I enoyed it!
Life carries On (Poetry) - 5/8/2008 11:14:57 AM
SEED! Seems you must have a very happy home and a lovely little critter to boot. A delightful poem, thank you for giving us a smile.
As time Drips By (Poetry) - 5/4/2008 10:33:07 AM
SEED! This is so delightful I want to laugh and weep I think pathos is the word. Congratulations!
Shake Spear (Poetry) - 5/4/2008 6:46:22 AM
Tom and Huck took me on my first grand adventures and expanded my imaginations; Mark Twain made me realize the value of words. Actually, Chaarles Dickens scared me a bit; maybe I read him at too young an age :o) A good 'take' on some classical writers!
Our Swing Tree (Poetry) - 5/4/2008 6:36:51 AM
And if you tie more knots in the hanging rope, makes for easier for climbing :o) Rope swings are the best thrill-rides for kids...who needs Disney World? Enjoyed...teased my memories!
Another Beer I seem to Repeat (Poetry) - 5/4/2008 6:22:52 AM
Images of loneliness is what I read: looking for chit-chat or companionship, and settling for "another beer". Going left or right, good that your legs were still working :o) I DID enjoy the poem...
As time Drips By (Poetry) - 5/3/2008 7:33:31 PM
so good to read your work again!
As time Drips By (Poetry) - 5/3/2008 9:40:39 AM
You've made some reasonable points...and they are growing. And you didn't put me to sleep!!
As time Drips By (Poetry) - 5/3/2008 4:48:34 AM
You've got me thinking now, and my nose is even itching, too!
Another Beer I seem to Repeat (Poetry) - 4/7/2008 8:00:06 PM
This had a real 30's feel to it and I was having flashes of Dylan Thomas, not from the writing style, but the lifestyle. This was like a photograph of a time, a time that could be anytime. Very well-written.
Another Beer I seem to Repeat (Poetry) - 4/3/2008 1:50:10 PM
interesting write--i agree be a lover, not a fighter!!
Another Beer I seem to Repeat (Poetry) - 4/3/2008 10:58:52 AM
No beer is worth a fight...e
Shake Spear (Poetry) - 3/21/2008 7:30:12 PM
LOL, Loved this!!!!
Shake Spear (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 4:24:03 PM
Seed shaking his spear in the wild... good picture
Shake Spear (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 1:58:11 PM
So lively, yet rings true at the same time. A life of inspiration and innocence to reach us all....
Be always safe,
Shake Spear (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 12:36:11 PM
Great PLAY on words. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Shake Spear (Poetry) - 3/20/2008 8:57:43 AM
sounds just like you--this sure made me smile--
Perfectly Balanced (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 5:36:19 PM
Perfectly Balanced (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 2:37:17 PM
Dynamic poem, making your point very well!
Perfectly Balanced (Poetry) - 3/9/2008 4:06:57 AM
Shit happens - on both sides of the fence - how so very true.
Perfectly Balanced (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 9:52:23 PM
...great write...great wit...great s..t!
Perfectly Balanced (Poetry) - 3/8/2008 9:09:54 PM
i think this is quite clever--very nice!
Our Swing Tree (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 9:21:31 AM
This poem reminds me so vividly of the days when a day like this filled your soul with the warmth of a simple, pleasurable uncomplicated moment of fun and those who shared it with you. (The tree is perfect for this poem!) Great poem.
Our Swing Tree (Poetry) - 3/5/2008 3:54:13 AM
You awakened some wondrous childhood memories here, my friend. I should try that again, but I better have the paramedics, on standby!
Our Swing Tree (Poetry) - 3/4/2008 8:17:22 PM
brought back some swinging good moments--wonderful!
Our Swing Tree (Poetry) - 3/4/2008 5:41:14 PM
I did it! I loved every minute of the youthful years that I spent outside. From dawn to dusk we had adventure and creativity on our minds.
Love and blessing,
Our Swing Tree (Poetry) - 3/4/2008 3:22:56 PM
You should try swinging over water, makes you wet. Lovely write with all the imagery complete...
Be always safe,
Seal the Deal (Poetry) - 3/4/2008 4:15:38 AM
My lips are the only ones I seal
A brand new car is always better
Tummy gut feeling says no deal
Though a free meal sounds lekker
Seal the Deal (Poetry) - 3/1/2008 4:12:24 AM
Handshakes - once the sign of every good deal. Now, many skip the handshake and have to sign 22 pages of legalese, on each friggin page. Handshakes are much better.
Seal the Deal (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 7:15:36 PM
i love your style--nicely written prose!
Seal the Deal (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 2:20:17 PM
Take the moment and shine....
Be always safe,
Seal the Deal (Poetry) - 2/29/2008 9:57:20 AM
...when the moment is right...in the moment...and the heart is followed...the instinct of the gut...puts forward the hand...shake.
well written pen of hope...and a positive smile.
Take a Chance (Poetry) - 2/21/2008 6:16:16 PM
If only everyone really tried, this world would be a much happier place, well stated...
Be always safe,
Take a Chance (Poetry) - 2/21/2008 6:03:47 PM
Whoever this is sounds like someone - who feels alone; who has a thirst for love; that only in helping another would feel better about himself; who will take a chance to get ahead with no remorse or guilt.
Sharing love will just be hypocrisy - even he himself will find obscure. I don’t think this man would change without help. He would be too weak to fight this addiction of greed.
This is a sad one. No wonder why you don’t want me to read it.
No worries - you are still my one and only poet – This shows your versatility.
Take a Chance (Poetry) - 2/21/2008 3:11:28 PM
"Imagine if everyone tried! this is a goal we poets keep screaming about. I know some are listening and to quit would cede to failure and no of us are built that way.
Thank you Dave for bolstering harmony.
Blessings and love,
Take a Chance (Poetry) - 2/21/2008 2:07:03 PM
yes, just imagine the change we could have if everyone did indeed "try"
He wants to Convert (Poetry) - 2/16/2008 7:30:17 PM
Even for folks with no impairments, life is grim. Each day I can't help but about wonder what's in store for humanity. Perhaps, one day we will all convert our thinking and be more accepting.
God bless you. Kathy
He wants to Convert (Poetry) - 2/16/2008 7:07:42 PM
...of one alone...who has lost sight...but seen much....change seemed wished for...in a reality of lost hope.
well written thoughts...
He wants to Convert (Poetry) - 2/15/2008 3:54:07 PM
Oh your photograph depicts a kindly soul, sad that society refuses to accept all people into its fold. So many are left alone, ignored and brushed aside. Maybe one day mankind will learn and break the mold to allow all in.....
Be always safe,
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/14/2008 3:13:40 PM
This was alot of fun! Brings a smile this Valentine's Day-a happy one to you and yours- Michelle
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/12/2008 4:43:05 AM
I'm sure the answer was 'yes,' and I love that pic!
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/12/2008 3:17:47 AM
Beautiful, charming, delightful, brought a tear to my eye. You have touched our hearts with your honesty and love. Waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}}}} Barbara
Kay (Poetry) - 2/12/2008 12:29:23 AM
Very sweet Dave, I am suren she loves your poetry
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/12/2008 12:28:35 AM
A beautiful write Dave, keep these coming
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/11/2008 7:10:30 PM
Agreed, no one should be alone and your writing brings out all the honesty and heartfelt love that surrounds you....
Be always safe,
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/11/2008 6:25:13 PM
a very nice write!! i love the "always" in the last line
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/11/2008 5:40:52 PM
Literally Millions Even Tho They Are Together Married Or What -They Are Still Alone,i.e. They Will Never Admit It Alone Tell That Truth_
Please Be My Valentine Today!
Credit For Illuminating Write...
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/11/2008 5:14:10 PM
Sweet Kay you are loved by Dave...our own Seed Man!
Blessings and love,
No one should be alone on Valentines Day (Poetry) - 2/11/2008 4:20:32 PM
What a beautiful "heartfelt" piece, love. How can anyone not fall in love with you... you are so sweet... also, you know where to find the best chocolates ever!!! It's a always a V-day with the Seed - Yummy !!!
Take care always. Love, K.
Head over Heels (Poetry) - 2/4/2008 5:54:43 PM
for me i hope ???
Kay (Poetry) - 2/3/2008 6:21:10 PM
Loved this write my friend, truly written from the heart...touching!
Kay (Poetry) - 2/1/2008 4:07:04 AM
A marvelous Ode to your Angel, my friend.
Kay (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 10:51:18 PM
a beautiful and loving write
Kay (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 7:03:09 PM
There is nothing more beautiful than feeling your trembling warm embrace in the cold autumn rain...or than feeling your tears upon my chest...or knowing how protecting your arms are as they hold me close...or with your charms creating a day of bliss and pleasure...or seeing how you smile when you see me that brings more shine than the sun...or making me sigh on every tender loving word you say...or recalling the fun memories you leave behind when you are not near...or your sweet and tender moist kisses that makes any skin soft...or feeling the love I only know in poetry and dreams...and when I close my eyes I have thoughts of you that only must be experienced by the angels. It is by your love that makes one so beautiful...and I am a lucky girl to be loved by you!
Now can you please take that picture down???
Kay (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 2:39:31 PM
There is no lover as passionate as a poet in love.
Kay (Poetry) - 1/31/2008 1:40:35 PM
A beautiful tribute to the one you love. enjoyed
Light a Cigar (Poetry) - 1/30/2008 3:17:40 PM
the girl is somewhere here baby ...
what are you doing wandering around the bars lol
uhmm go home after work; you are so grounded !!!
Watching (Poetry) - 1/29/2008 7:25:12 PM
Watching is as watching does and you have done it admirably.
Waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}
Watching (Poetry) - 1/29/2008 9:55:44 AM
Watching (Poetry) - 1/29/2008 6:33:14 AM
You see a lot when you look around
You certainly do. Look On!
Watching (Poetry) - 1/29/2008 6:08:48 AM
Being a quiet observer is a profound way to see amazing happenings. Go for it Dave. I love sitting on a rock in the mountains and after a while...the animals come out .
Love and blessings!
Mustang Man (Poetry) - 1/27/2008 5:36:17 AM
Although I somehow thought this was gonna be a Cowboy poem by your title, it's very good. And let us know if you figure out where to put that A-N-G!
Mustang Man (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 8:26:55 PM
Mustang Man (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 5:55:09 PM
Add an "Ang-EL" and what lady wouldn't be under your thumb?
One of your very best Dave!
Mustang Man (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 4:29:30 PM
...great remembrance...sold my 1964 1/2 Mustang about 6 years ago...still miss it. Just wish they had kept the high octane gas needed to originally sport about...in such a fun car.
Mustang Man (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 8:57:05 AM
Another Joy Ride with you Seed, wild and delightful, love it.
Mustang Man (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 7:31:48 AM
Enjoyed this brought a smile to my face...I can remember when I was a little girl my mom had a 67 Mustang, powder blue. Let me set the stage for you, she was a young divorced good looking single mother who drove a hot car! All the younger guys wanted to race her when we pulled up at a red light. I remember once her telling me to hold on tight....we left em in a cloud of dust....thanks my friend for sparking a memory I hadn't thought about in a long time....I think I'll call my mom!
True Love (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 6:55:43 AM
It is TRUE !!!
Hey, is that my picture ???
Mustang Man (Poetry) - 1/26/2008 6:51:52 AM
Long rides short rides I really enjoy watching you drive
But the Mustang convertible was the best and you had fun the most
Don't be surprised when you see one on our driveway...
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 11:45:02 AM
I can hear the tune - I'm working on it, dada dadaaaah da da - reminiscent of the 60s, or perhaps a c/w song with all the melodrama of a guy telling his wife 'I'm working on it' as he sits fishing and drinking a beer.
Many thoughts result from this wonderful title. I'm sure the finished product will be Awesome!
God bless you. Kathy
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 2:15:24 PM
Fantastic, am anxious to hear it when its all put together...
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 2:10:52 PM
A poem in progress. Let me know when it's finished :)!
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 8:38:35 AM
you can always come back to the islands and finish what you have started... i am sure if you can find the words, i will have the melody to go with it... your bed is still made up !!! ck
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 5:07:07 PM
cool-i can hardly wait--just thinking about you and wondering when you would post!!
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 2:12:56 PM
Can't wait to hear it! Glad to see you posting...you've been missed!
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 12:44:01 PM
I can hear the prelude now..."working on it!" with a be-bop rhythm. You have it Seed. Where ya been Dave?
I'm Working on It (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 12:30:22 PM
Makes two of us funny man. Love to hear it when it is finished if you will read my new book of poetry when it is finished. What do you think of these titles ----Mysteries ----Unbuttoned ? Can't make up my mind.
She’s so Lovely (Poetry) - 12/14/2007 3:40:14 PM
Love this Powerful INtense display of affection Seed for Kay!
A Blessing for both! A love so right
as you show it today and tonight
a love so bright...
Warm hugs and Warmer Blessings, Warrior Lady Sweet Sheoooxoo
She’s so Lovely (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 10:57:11 PM
To love and be loved as much as this is pure splendor....
She’s so Lovely (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 4:46:07 PM
What a lucky girl your Kay is! Waves of love }}}}}}} Barbara
She’s so Lovely (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 10:10:25 AM
Biting and nibbling is just what love does to you sometimes. It surely won't leave you alone once you've tasted love's passion.
She’s so Lovely (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 6:10:35 AM
Sounds Heavenly to me!
She’s so Lovely (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 4:38:38 AM
such a fun write!
She’s so Lovely (Poetry) - 12/12/2007 4:00:09 AM
Where... What... Huh? When baby? Heh !
I just love yah !!!
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 8:35:19 PM
Having fun sunny day a crisp sting to your cheeks and running with a full tank...I feel your atmosphere.
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 7:56:15 PM
funny how the simple things can give great pleasure
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 7:13:57 PM
The beauty of a simple escape and so delicious.
God bless you. Kathy
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 6:13:00 PM
Very cute and refreshing!
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 3:34:45 PM
Delightfully minty tale, enjoyed....
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 1:54:33 PM
Good poem, good mints, good work...JDM
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 1:48:48 PM
Why couldn't everyday be like this I wished
May all your wishes come true, my friend.
Christmas Happiness and Love (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 1:37:42 PM
Dear Seed what a loving and generous heart you show in this lovely poem , working your magic as a true poet. I am proud to know your work. HAPPY HAPPY CHRISTMAS AND JOY, PROSPERITY, GOOD HEALTH IN THE NEW YEAR 2008. Waves of love }}}}}}}}}} Barbara xxoo
Real Time (Poetry) - 12/7/2007 1:31:40 PM
Most charming and delightful little poem Dave, you keep me smiling and giggling, waves of love and Happy Happy Christmas Joy and Prosperrity in the New Year 2008 to you and your family.
Christmas Happiness and Love (Poetry) - 12/2/2007 5:54:25 AM
A beautiful write my friend, wonderful warm and sincere sentiments.
Blessings & Happy Holidays,
Christmas Happiness and Love (Poetry) - 11/30/2007 4:38:42 AM
Please send a gift of love we pray
Amen, my friend, Amen!
Christmas Happiness and Love (Poetry) - 11/29/2007 9:42:41 PM
Wonderful sentiments and a very heartwarming piece...
Christmas Happiness and Love (Poetry) - 11/29/2007 7:47:44 PM
a sweet and pure Christmas write-very nice
Christmas Happiness and Love (Poetry) - 11/29/2007 4:01:02 PM
Beauty in this heardt Dave. You are one compassionate men. I thank you for showing how sweet your heart is too.
Like an Outlaw (Poetry) - 11/28/2007 11:35:14 PM
Cute, but think Bonnie and Clyde had far more action going for them.....
Like an Outlaw (Poetry) - 11/28/2007 5:03:25 AM
WOW! And I never realized before that you look just like David Janssen!
Like an Outlaw (Poetry) - 11/27/2007 7:33:28 PM
cute and clever-i enjoyed it much!
Like an Outlaw (Poetry) - 11/27/2007 6:14:51 PM
Your Jill is very lucky to be the companion of Jack. A delightful and imaginative write Seed. Waves of love }}}}}}}}} Barbara
Like an Outlaw (Poetry) - 11/27/2007 5:07:15 PM
So that's really why Jack and Jill ran. I often wondered. Now, finally, my curiosity has been satisfied. lol
God bless you. Kathy
Like an Outlaw (Poetry) - 11/27/2007 3:25:52 PM
Living the life of an outlaw is always an adventure full of mystery and intrique. I can't say that I blame you Seed!
Tried counting Sheep (Poetry) - 11/27/2007 5:37:09 AM
Tried counting Sheep (Poetry) - 11/26/2007 7:45:43 PM
hah! so cute and good to see your work again
Tried counting Sheep (Poetry) - 11/26/2007 3:24:48 PM
This is darling! I love it. I can see you counting sleep and them jumping over your head.
Tried counting Sheep (Poetry) - 11/26/2007 1:35:44 PM
Delightful imagery and writing and not one of them said Bahhh or even humbug!!!! You make me smile and laugh. Waves of love }}}}}} Barbara
Tried counting Sheep (Poetry) - 11/26/2007 1:19:04 PM
I can relate to this, keep these coming and be blessed
Tried counting Sheep (Poetry) - 11/26/2007 9:50:53 AM
Might as well shear them, and make some nice sweaters. Christmas is just around the corner, and it would be a lot cheaper than buyin sweaters at the mall!
Teeth are only materials (Poetry) - 11/5/2007 5:09:01 AM
can i have a bite on your birthday?
just a little tiny bite?
please... promise i won't bite hard...
happy birthday sweet tooth
One Day (Poetry) - 11/3/2007 4:45:20 AM
Get a better shed next time...
Teeth are only materials (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 4:27:44 PM
my children would love this ;)
lol enjoyed this really cute write
Teeth are only materials (Poetry) - 10/31/2007 7:43:17 PM
timely write for halloween night!!
Teeth are only materials (Poetry) - 10/31/2007 1:47:10 PM
Sounds like atrick or treaters malady a few days later. I love chocolate...dark chocolate.
Teeth are only materials (Poetry) - 10/31/2007 12:23:17 PM
We must have the same eating habits and wishes, I lost a tooth last week just before I had to read my poetry in front of an audience, no time to have it repaired. Delightful poem Dave, waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}} Barbara
Teeth are only materials (Poetry) - 10/31/2007 12:08:57 PM
Your dentist has got to just love seeing you come into the office. I think I've got a sugar rush just from reading. lol
Teeth are only materials (Poetry) - 10/31/2007 7:27:20 AM
And they will get quite a workout, this Howloween!
Love is there (Poetry) - 10/28/2007 5:12:40 AM
This beautiful, thoughtful poem says it all with such dynamic feeling and impact, Congratulations! Seed. It could be made as a pamphlet and dropped from a plane over the whole world. You are an extraordinary poet. Waves of love }}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}} Barbara
Love is there (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 5:24:32 PM
Always make the time to tell those you love and care about, how much they have meant and do mean to you before they are gone forever... Very touching piece...
Love is there (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 7:22:25 PM
Tell someone you love then before it is too late....we run so fast and think that we should say those words but, always, something gets in the way. There's nothing like death to give all of us a wake up call. He loves you Seed. I love you and those here do as well. Your heart is always full of love. Your father knew that before and he knows it now.
Love is there (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 8:39:47 AM
Sometimes we can't get things fixed - the other person is unwilling. In those instances, all we can do is pray for them.
Love is there (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 6:01:44 AM
So poignant truly heart touching.
Love is there (Poetry) - 10/26/2007 5:54:18 AM
A very sad pen, my friend, and a lesson we could all truly use.
Grab one before they Disappear (Poetry) - 10/21/2007 6:21:22 PM
I think this is a lesson that most of us have learned the hard way...I did! Great write with a wise message my friend!
Better to paddle down Stream (Poetry) - 10/20/2007 9:04:38 AM
Profound write my friend, with a wise message within! Enjoyed!
Better to paddle down Stream (Poetry) - 10/20/2007 4:59:42 AM
Always better to go with the flow - and I love that picture!
Better to paddle down Stream (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 7:07:07 PM
lovely-would love to be out on that lake!
Better to paddle down Stream (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 6:08:14 PM
How beautifully your words and your photograph compliment each other. Words of wisdom sweetly told.....
Better to paddle down Stream (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 2:17:35 PM
Going "with the flow" is sometimes a good thing, but if we don't fight "city hall" the river's course will never change.
Grab one before they Disappear (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 7:27:02 AM
Boy, do I know this one. I've composed some wonderful poetry in my sleep - and never quite get it right in the light of day.
Grab one before they Disappear (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 4:11:43 AM
Magnificent inventions and great ideas are devised whilst asleep
I think that is very true, and I'm gonna grab a cookie before they're all gone, too!
Grab one before they Disappear (Poetry) - 10/19/2007 12:30:27 AM
Delightful! Yes, keeping pen and paper at your side is most valuable and those home baked cookies look pretty good too! Snif, snif mmmmmmm, smell good too....
Grab one before they Disappear (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 6:15:39 PM
boy, there is so much truth to this!! Love it!
Grab one before they Disappear (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 5:23:23 PM
So true! I try to grab them, but they're very elusive.
The dream world is a strange place, alright--well said!
Grab one before they Disappear (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 3:40:37 PM
Great idea. I'm one of those sleep writers too. I do my best indepth musing when I'm in a twilight sleep.
How are ya?
Sleeptype (Poetry) - 10/18/2007 4:51:03 AM
I feel this way today love
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/17/2007 5:05:29 AM
really nice surprise and yes cleva
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 9:33:36 AM
Isn't it amazing the things that can bring ecstasy? and boy is this delightful!
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 4:56:59 AM
and fresh chatni? you made me hungry for some...
let's go eat
after the alphabet
hmmmm so yummy
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/14/2007 4:51:24 AM
So clever and hilariously multifaceted, it sparkles with creativity Dave, waves of love}}}}}}}} Barbara
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/14/2007 4:08:59 AM
Wow! A gimlet with those poppadoms and chicken curry would be - perfection!
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 8:45:33 PM
a clever write-i enjoyed it completely
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 6:39:10 PM
A delightful piece, so lively and a nice twist at the end...
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 4:37:36 PM
What are they?
Sounds like something worth waiting for.
Submerge into Ecstasy (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 2:46:05 PM
Great write my friend, imagery is outstanding, loved the ending!
Tattooed Tits (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 6:06:06 PM
This must be your most read poem... catchy title dear
The puck has plopped (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 5:55:48 PM
I am not crazy about hockey babe... Let me see... Nice Canadian blue eyes... British curly hair... A kilt? :) OK Seed I am convinced. I love hockey!!!
Be my Mentor (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 4:54:49 PM
I'll surely be a mentor to you Mister Seed Man!
Be my Mentor (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 2:09:03 PM
A very lovely, lighthearted piece of love between two people, enjoyed...
Be my Mentor (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 12:16:34 PM
You got a twin who's as good as you?
Yes, I'll buy the plane ticket.
No, do you make house calls?
Someone is awfully lucky to have you.
Be my Mentor (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 10:22:24 AM
Lovely poem, when are you coming to Toronto? I need you to fix some things as well as your love, I would be happy to be your mentor along with millions of others. Waves of love }}}}}} Barbara
Be my Mentor (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 4:40:43 AM
so clever-what a great gift-yourself!!
Be my Mentor (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 4:36:11 AM
I was thinking of "things" you could do for me and the door bell rings? aahhh not schweet!!!
Be my Mentor (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 4:28:16 AM
I must say you look very dashing in that photo. But I sure hope my wife doesn't read this, she might just want me to do the same - and I like my grubby old jeans! (I hate shaving, too.)
The puck has plopped (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 12:17:57 PM
An exciting write, enjoyed this much. Hockey is a great sport, very action packed just as your write is, well done!
I'll Pray (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 11:07:26 AM
I believe, all prayer is answered - perhaps we don't like the answer or are to busy to hear. God's truth is always our guide.
Like you, I will continue to pray even though sometimes I feel like God has gone on vacation and does't have call forwarding.
I'll Pray (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 8:11:15 PM
The awe of the child is still in your prayers. Charming!
I'll Pray (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 6:45:36 PM
Wow, this is such an inspirational piece filled with so much love for all mankind. Keep praying and I will assuredly be praying with you because the end result would make everyone smile and live freely....
I'll Pray (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 10:47:25 AM
A beautiful write from a caring heart, sometimes when we least expect our prayers to be answered they are, and many times when we think they are not being answered...they are, only we don't always see or they are often answered in a way that we don't expect...pray on my friend, for I am a firm believer that prayer does change things...
I'll Pray (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 10:11:00 AM
i love the sweet innocence of this write-from a pure and unselfish heart
I'll Pray (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 6:35:11 AM
And we pray with you. Love that pic!
I'll Pray (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 6:21:32 AM
are you troubled dear?
The puck has plopped (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 12:31:32 PM
You can feel the intensity rising in this game through your words.
Hockey is ok on TV, but in real life it is more brutal.
The puck has plopped (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 12:55:52 PM
Great write, very descriptive! A rough game, enjoyed by many....
The puck has plopped (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 6:25:55 AM
Love it Seed!
WE have the Ice Palace here where the Tampa Bay Lightning go at it.
The puck has plopped (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 5:26:08 AM
You have plopped another winning puck of a poem Dave, your pennant is on the way! Waves of love }}}}}}}} Barbara
The puck has plopped (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 4:52:23 AM
i hope for all to have a passion for something-you have written of the passion for hockey-for me it is the horses--anyway- 'cool' write
Measurements (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 8:40:30 PM
very cute write
Measurements (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 5:33:53 PM
36-25-36 and 10 - we're perfect !!!
Measurements (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 5:24:37 PM
"When the I within you is happy
And all around you is not
We shouldn't go on measurements
But just love yourself a lot"
this is an incrdible motivator. I love it. Great job and a keeper of inspiration for me!
Measurements (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 8:19:14 AM
So true Dave, so cleverly written, Bravo! Waves of love }}}}}}} Barbara
Measurements (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 8:15:51 AM
Very Sage Advice!
I’m stood there too (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 8:03:11 AM
Profound with humour and humility. Excellent writing Dave. Waves of love }}}}}}}}} Barbara
I’m stood there too (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 11:56:29 PM
You have captured the enigma of the "Peter Principal". Well done
I’m stood there too (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 8:33:54 PM
Real cute and yet somewhat sympathetic, enjoyed.
I’m stood there too (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 8:21:36 PM
you do have a certain charm-i love reading your work