Recent Reviews for Larry M. Lounsbury
Hero's Heart (Book) - 9/5/2012 1:16:25 PM|
I really LOVE this poem...it's so beautiful!
Hero's Heart (Book) - 5/26/2012 10:05:18 PM
Beautiful story of true love.
Hero's Heart (Book) - 4/4/2009 12:14:47 AM
Curiosity kills the cat, but knowing the way you write it is not a difficult decision to order the book!
And, that it will be a success goes without saying.
That Special Woman (Book) - 1/25/2008 2:02:48 PM
Congrats larry,looks and sounds like a great book, I see you moving on I'm still trying to get my second one out
That Special Woman (Book) - 9/28/2007 5:32:33 PM
A great title for an expressive book. I loved the collection of poetry you selected. I especially like the romantic poems. Two thumbs up on a good poetry book.
That Special Woman (Book) - 9/11/2007 6:34:29 AM
Larry I love the title of course, this book sounds so beautiful and romantic. Congrats again~much success to you.
That Special Woman (Book) - 8/22/2007 6:21:19 AM
Thanks for dropping by my AuthorsDen site, appreciating and understanding the very simple aspirations of a child and letting me know you're here (or out there.) I'm new to the site but look forward to reading your work (all 200 titles). May all your days be blessed. Linda
That Special Woman (Book) - 7/4/2007 9:13:52 AM
This is Super news Larry!
Sounds Romantically Inspiring and more ~ Awesome!
WArm Hugs, WArrior "Spirit" Lady Sheeeoox
Magical Place (Short Story) - 11/1/2009 6:10:41 AM
The presentation of a true story is very good.When I was reading the story I was feeling that i have seen the place and happinings with you............I am also a mystery writer and I have written three true incidents in my first published book 'Krolin Group in Mysteries World'.Please read it and post your comments and suggestions. It's too important to me.
Free mice: Snake food or pet. (Short Story) - 12/1/2007 7:49:56 PM
lucky, lucky, mouse. Very nice write.
Magical Place (Short Story) - 10/4/2007 8:51:33 AM
I could hear you telling this story--accent and all. When I realized what I was hearing, I tried to read in straight out--no accent. I couldn't. Now that's great writing! Great story too. I believe it was the faeries you saw.
Free mice: Snake food or pet. (Short Story) - 8/3/2007 4:12:23 AM
That was one lucky mouse!.. Its all part of natures evoloutionary chain........M
Foul Creatures of the Night (Short Story) - 8/3/2007 4:09:54 AM
I really enjoyed the story. I can just see how frantic everyone must have been! We have bats flying around outside at night. I am sure glad one never got into our home..........M
Free mice: Snake food or pet. (Short Story) - 7/3/2007 6:44:31 AM
Interesting...attention grabbing, would love to see more. I like snakes, but would never have one for a pet that was big enough to have to feed mice to. Poor little mice. Elizabeth
Magical Place (Short Story) - 2/4/2007 10:27:00 PM
Aw! The wee people were at it. Nice story, thanks! Tom
Foul Creatures of the Night (Short Story) - 1/27/2007 2:56:46 PM
Delightful story full of adventure. What a night. Enjoyable read. R
Foul Creatures of the Night (Short Story) - 1/26/2007 8:25:47 AM
Excellent story, Larry; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D
Foul Creatures of the Night (Short Story) - 1/26/2007 6:46:22 AM
What a night! Thank you for sharing it. I'm glad I didn't have to go through it. Guy--
Magical Place (Short Story) - 1/7/2007 8:16:05 AM
Now here is a tale that should be expanded by your imagination! What IF: your car had not started; you and Caroline had followed the beconning light farther, what would you have found? Oh, so many possibilities! Write them...:o)
Free mice: Snake food or pet. (Short Story) - 1/7/2007 8:06:34 AM
I'm hoping for a conclusion of this, Larry. I don't mind mice, they can be gentle if you feed and tend to them; but I don't care much at all for any type of snake - wouldn't harm one, but wouldn't encourage their staying around :o)
Free mice: Snake food or pet. (Short Story) - 1/5/2007 8:13:07 AM
Free mice: Snake food or pet. (Short Story) - 1/5/2007 3:33:24 AM
Ah, you hit my worst phobia: mice. I'm not a fan of mice I'm afraid. Victor
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 8/22/2012 10:53:44 AM
Sacraments (Poetry) - 8/17/2012 4:23:20 AM
This is awesome Larry! I love it!
Holding Her (Poetry) - 5/26/2012 10:12:23 PM
A poet with an Artist's brush, a portrait of wedded bliss. Perfection.
Sacraments (Poetry) - 5/26/2012 10:07:55 PM
Your poem reads like Fine Art!
Sacraments (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 6:11:37 PM
beautifully said, LadyJ
Sacraments (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 1:09:30 PM
So when I tell my husband he makes me feel as though I was still a young woman, I am in deed telling the truth Larry. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Sacraments (Poetry) - 8/15/2009 1:43:45 AM
For some, love has been a mirage in front of them which never come near no matter how fast they run ahead.
Blessed are the ones that really felt and can describe love as a Paradise, because for many it has been a barren Death Valley or an endless Sahara.
Picture Perfect (Poetry) - 8/13/2009 2:35:57 AM
The last four lines are the most vividly expressed by any means by male praying-mantra insect...before he loses his head!
Thinking It Through (Poetry) - 8/13/2009 1:54:33 AM
Oh! Tammy Wynette has given many a woman that advice, and is up to any woman's man to recognize that she did.
Bittersweet, let her read the poem, it's better than any bunch of flowers!
Picture Perfect (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 4:25:42 PM
Larry, this poem is Picture Perfection! Love your mind, dear friend,
Much peace, love, and light,
Picture Perfect (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 2:29:52 PM
Well done and so clear and true.
Thinking It Through (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 10:27:18 AM
gReat words from you, glad I stopped to read this one. Lady J
Picture Perfect (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 10:25:01 AM
Very good write and what caught my eye was the reference to sitting out side walmart...as I was sitting there one day watching these new people in the new area I live I wondered what some of them were thinking...enjoyed the simple words. LadyJ
Picture Perfect (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 9:47:17 AM
Another Picture Perfect write you share with us Larry, make no wonder I am glad to be back. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
Picture Perfect (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 8:23:51 AM
I find your poem worthy of much more than a single reading; perhaps it's because I have been (am) there and your verses "hit home" pretty hard. Thank you, Larry. Love and peace,
Bullet Train (Poetry) - 8/12/2009 7:14:21 AM
You should be comforted by knowing that our hot-dogs are made from pigs that used gloss lipstick!
Carousel Mall (Poetry) - 8/10/2009 9:37:22 AM
I agree with LadyJ, very evoking piece enjoyed this
Carousel Mall (Poetry) - 8/8/2009 3:36:39 AM
VERY NICE!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Carousel Mall (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 8:46:53 AM
Many wonder why humans can't live as simple as life was back then. I wonder what would have become of us if this country was allowed to stay so simple as the rest of the world advanced. A good write that prompts much thought. Glad I stopped by today, Lady J
Carousel Mall (Poetry) - 8/7/2009 6:40:58 AM
Have you read anything that gave you a sudden feeling of deja-vÃ¹? Then you will understand why "...Time's Arrow seeking to conquer space..." Goddess Hunter Diana is there somewhere, isn't she?
Actions (Poetry) - 6/17/2009 5:21:42 AM
Flows so smoothly...a fabulous poem Larry, blessings, Holly
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 6/17/2009 5:19:50 AM
Beautifully written Larry, blessings, Holly
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 6/15/2009 3:56:57 AM
Oh my..this is so very beautiful..well done indeed sweet man..stay safe and well..OK..Hugss
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 6/12/2009 6:44:01 PM
A most lovely ode and tribute, Larry. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace to you,
Holding Her (Poetry) - 5/14/2009 12:01:42 PM
Very beautifully passionate. R
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 5/10/2009 6:32:56 AM
this is lovely!
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 5/10/2009 2:09:36 AM
And a Happy Mother's Day to you! because I know you have a lot to celebrate! Let her read your words, they are worth plenty for this day.
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 4:58:59 PM
Another one of your fine penned poems, Larry, very nicely said.
Peace, love, and light,
Happy Mother's Day to your lovely wife, Caroline
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 1:33:34 PM
BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Crib’s Constellation (Poetry) - 5/9/2009 11:28:43 AM
Very beautiful song of love and adoration for a woman who has such an important vocation in life.
Actions (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 10:32:14 AM
Superb imagery with clearly defined sentiments...
Actions (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 4:17:38 AM
This is a great poem.take care
Actions (Poetry) - 5/3/2009 2:00:17 AM
And that eternal wine is the elixir of the Olympus gods, where, I think, never a lost sheep could find quicksands but plenty of lies.
From glen to glen you bring us poetry.
Actions (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 9:25:52 PM
a very beautiful write
Perfume (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 9:03:07 PM
i love your opening quote-the write is lovely as well
Actions (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 2:07:07 PM
Ahh the sweet wine of life..Your poem is mesmerizing!
Gorgeous visuals here, Larry, Love this one.
Peace, love, and light,
Perfume (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 12:14:59 PM
Love the stream of thought and how it unravels from beginning to end of this one Larry, put my mind into imagination mode for sure.
Perfume (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 2:27:38 AM
Oh my,this is beautiful writing dear man..enjoyed very much..have a wonderful and safe day...Hugss
Perfume (Poetry) - 5/2/2009 1:03:51 AM
Romanticism with pure words from pure thoughts describing a garden full of flowers telling us that the complicated scent we get is a compilation of many different dreams.
Perfume (Poetry) - 5/1/2009 7:28:26 PM
Perfume (Poetry) - 5/1/2009 11:19:53 AM
This is a flower diffusing the "Perfume" of the Major Art.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Perfume (Poetry) - 5/1/2009 9:29:27 AM
Larry, I love this poem...The Romantic is back. I have missed your golden pen, my dear friend.
Lovely way to end this beauty:
With an endless line of inkish skill,
She meets Cyrano in a midnight stream....
Much peace, love, and light,
Holding Her (Poetry) - 4/28/2009 12:04:35 PM
Lovely writing dear man..as always well done indeed...stay safe and well to both of you...Hugsss
Holding Her (Poetry) - 4/26/2009 5:19:10 AM
Larry, Perfection of the passionate soul. Caroline is one lucky woman!
Loved this passionate offering.
Peace, love, and light,
Holding Her (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 1:46:22 PM
Beautiful and excellent poem,I enjoy reading it,take care
Fullness of Life (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 1:45:01 PM
Excellent and beautiful poem,take care
Fullness of Life (Poetry) - 4/22/2009 4:47:45 AM
As always beautiful writing dear man..enjoyed very much..keep smiling OK...Hugss
Holding Her (Poetry) - 4/21/2009 6:44:09 PM
Wow Larry, she sure is a very special lady for you to write such beauty. Thank you for sharing.
Newfie hugs, Rose
Holding Her (Poetry) - 4/21/2009 6:22:12 PM
so passionate and romantic!
Holding Her (Poetry) - 4/21/2009 4:05:45 PM
Excellent. This is truly springs of unconditional surrender to genuineness as the chief principle of your art.
Holding Her (Poetry) - 4/21/2009 1:15:57 PM
Larry, poet and lover, reading the lines of your poem I cannot but visualize that painting about "The birth of Venus" you describe your Venus like an observer, not with your eyes but with your soul, not making apologies nor regretting to have given us a peek.
This one my friend, is one of the most tender ones you have offered.
Fullness of Life (Poetry) - 4/21/2009 4:16:29 AM
BEAUTIFL, VERY BEAUTIFUL!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Fullness of Life (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 7:41:20 PM
So beautifully does this flow, into a reality that glistens with life....
Be always safe,
Fullness of Life (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 12:14:42 PM
The introduction phrase told me to imagine a sweet ripe peach.
The poem was like a whirlwind of engulfing arts and Pharaohs to slow down until it stops on the beach sand of a paradise for loving souls.
A poem for those uncomplicated souls that think any kiss is the best.
Fullness of Life (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 11:21:18 AM
Dear Larry, "Life is flowing in soulâ€™s lighted heart,"
This verse contains the essence. The soul is the carrier of life and light. Love Emile
Fullness of Life (Poetry) - 4/20/2009 9:03:55 AM
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/19/2009 8:56:16 AM
Excellent use of symbolism. Enjoyed. R
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/18/2009 12:43:53 PM
Excellent depiction of how life really is, with all its twist and turns....
Be always safe,
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/18/2009 6:21:34 AM
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 6:34:59 PM
Excellent writing dear man...stay safe and well..Hugss
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 4:49:00 PM
love the flow and your choices of words-very nice!
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 1:03:58 PM
Larry, you have done like no other author as done, ever, picturing the mountains as petrified brutal big waves caught on a moment of rage by some god that shouted "be quiet! ! ! " and the poem continues until the reader is drown in words.
Excellent! ! !
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 11:38:19 AM
Very smooth write Larry, well done.
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 10:19:41 AM
Such a deeply moving poem. I have all kinds of emotions floating in my head after reading this. Somehow I get paying the piper for choices one makes that may not be the best for you.
Love the pic..What airport is that?
Peace, love,and light,
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 9:46:39 AM
Well woven words, Larry. Enjoyed this!
Waves of Mountains (Poetry) - 4/17/2009 9:26:52 AM
A poem that displays what lies before you if you fall into evils trap. A youthful thought provoker but every one is liable in this day and age of the fast buck and greed.
Priority (Poetry) - 4/9/2009 3:47:26 AM
Very beautiful writing sweet man..stay safe and well..Hugss
Priority (Poetry) - 4/8/2009 4:15:29 AM
Excellent poem,fantastic work,take care
Priority (Poetry) - 4/8/2009 2:42:01 AM
Faith, it will be cynical to say that it is a state of mind? or it is based on unquestionable love?
Because we need to have faith, otherwise our world will be seen trhough a bitterness glass.
"Priority" the authors tell us between lines about treason, laughter and satires, but also telling us to no wish to hurt him.
Priority (Poetry) - 4/7/2009 5:49:34 AM
Larry, thank you for such a beautiful Easter offering. Sometimes we get so caught up in the hustle of daily life we forget about what is so important. Your poem brings me back to reality! Much peace, love, and light and Easter blessings to you and your family,
Priority (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 6:17:38 PM
a lovely offering for the season
Priority (Poetry) - 4/6/2009 4:08:18 PM
A spiritual rendering most elogant and precise and nice to have the opportunity to read your words. Happy Easter to you and yours....
Be always safe,
Amalgam (Poetry) - 4/4/2009 1:36:04 PM
Long time ,good to see you back, Larry!;-) Love the appreciation in your poem for even simple things,which treasures are made from...ET
Amalgam (Poetry) - 4/4/2009 5:23:23 AM
yes, treasures in every day--i enjoyed this!
Amalgam (Poetry) - 4/4/2009 4:08:41 AM
''There are whispers of a lonesome song it has shadows of your smiling face'''.....--------I LOVE THIS BEAUTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Amalgam (Poetry) - 4/4/2009 2:01:34 AM
Larry, can a poet become more mellow? or his the reader that become it after reading your poems?
This poem has mixed fragrances, the musty odor that came from forgotten pharaohs vat with sandstorms from afar gardens and a maiden's smiles.
You were long gone...now is the time to pay your readers their dues in the form of your intelligent poetry.
Amalgam (Poetry) - 4/3/2009 9:22:35 PM
Larry, A breath of fresh air passes through my soul as I read your golden pen once again! Welcome back I surely have missed you.
Much peace, love, and light,
Alice's Eden (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 3:26:24 PM
Alas there is always a bit of truth in fantasy writings...what you want the reader to know and what you don't. Enjoyed very much, love Holly
Alice's Eden (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 2:06:59 PM
Feels as if you and your readers have fallen into wonderland Larry!
Alice's Eden (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 4:46:35 AM
Alice's Eden (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 2:36:40 AM
...or, a mystic walk through a garden covered with fog, with demented flashes of surreal happening.
Alice's Eden are a kaleidoscope of hidden colors.
Alice's Eden (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 12:13:07 AM
a silly walk in poetic lore
loved this line sooooo much
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 2:16:01 AM
While I enjoy Practice now and then I will prefer to have our Larry back writing from his heart about a world that don't make us dizzy.
Your diamond is so well cut than it don't need polishing, the wind of your talent will do it for you.
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/12/2008 1:18:37 AM
Keep posting more of this PRACTICE.
"Beneficial" complied with the intention in the title.
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 11:20:04 PM
So nice to have you back. You and your poetry have been missed. This is just wonderful and a joy to read you again...
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 8:36:03 PM
i like this--the feel of knights and princesses in the language
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 6:40:13 PM
this is a co0l write
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 6:04:31 PM
Enchanting Dear Larry!
Love, Suzie :-D
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 4:45:26 PM
You've been missed! I like this a lot! I see Shakespeares "Much ado about nothing" while r4eading it;-)
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 4:29:40 PM
Very interesting. Liz
Beneficial (Poetry) - 1/11/2008 4:06:39 PM
Taps (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 9:40:27 PM
The last line really speaks to me, profoundly.
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 11/19/2007 1:53:05 AM
Excellent work...love the pic of the girl blending in with the foliage
Maestro (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 12:53:12 AM
These thoughts are the reason I loved the show "Little House on the Prairie" so much. Neighbor helped neighbor without thought of gain, and family was more important than money. This is an excellent write, filled with longing for the way life used to be. So many advancements (progress?) have clouded what is truly important in life. I love the beginning of this piece, because you point out the regret that many have later in life - after all their purity is lost to this crazy world.
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 4:43:05 AM
Who say that aromatic oil and waters from melted snow can't be mixed?
The collaboration left one wondering who is who, and that doesn't matter because we become entrapped in that literary spindle web where a naked aloe vera freeds reminiscence.
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:06:04 PM
To see our work in print here on the den, was luminescent! I am so proud of this, and you are an amazing person to work with. I think we should do more! It was a pleasure to work with you on this poem.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 6:37:59 PM
An absolute beautiful collaboration from the two of you, thank you so much for sharing.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 5:47:06 PM
a perfection of predilection. .. a senses pouring piece of heARTwork.. alone you are amazing but together you make an even more resonant force
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 2:08:57 PM
A dance of perfection when two spirits unite.
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 12:08:48 PM
The picture is as enchanting as the words.
You are an awesome pair,
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 10:58:40 AM
You are a winning team...well done !!
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 10:07:33 AM
...a duet of fluidity...united by flesh...music.
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:58:33 AM
This is a warm and tender collaboration by two of AD's best. I love the way graphic, word imagery, and font coloration blend it all into one single unit of excellance.
Eternal Recital-By Amber V Moonstone&Larry Michael Lounsbury 9/08/07 (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:32:34 AM
The recital is only impart what lies ahead; excellent collaboration with two romantic hearts, Blessings, Holly
Taps (Poetry) - 8/27/2007 3:05:37 AM
Excellent write Larry. I loved the first line especially. Some beautiful imagery penned throughout - concept and meaning 'spot on' Bravo ~ Helena
Taps (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 10:49:57 AM
Taps (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 3:17:17 AM
The GOP is a poet trying to rhym patriot with idiot, and, what you got armé with armour made of papermaché.
Taps (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 2:31:57 AM
democracy is a fine thing but hard to achieve. Victor
Taps (Poetry) - 8/25/2007 9:07:12 PM
a cold convicting allegory of what we refuse to open eyes and minds to; savage depth and a plea for us to look around. .. .
Taps (Poetry) - 8/25/2007 5:22:08 PM
deeply touching write
Taps (Poetry) - 8/25/2007 3:26:29 PM
I am very happy that I found you. You bio page touched me, man, as did this poem . . .
Taps (Poetry) - 8/25/2007 1:59:41 PM
Exceptional Larry, the sound of Taps to me like the sound of the Last Post has always affected me to the point of silent tears for the finality of the close of day and the close of life for anyone serving there country...
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 7/11/2007 4:11:11 AM
Second Nature (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 7:32:43 AM
I think that there is much to be gleened within this write-it is well written and flowws beautifully-i was reminded of the incredible strength within us all when the chips are really down
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/19/2007 5:28:31 AM
-wonderful sentiment for this one so special that "angels seek to see her" The beauty of this is that the poet is fully aware of what he has found in her. Well done.
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 4:03:18 PM
A saga of woman loved. Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery.
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 7:35:41 AM
'Crystalline Cypher' begins...and ends, in the garden of Eden..who could ask for more!
I can appreciate a True Gentleman's prolific pen.
Bless you, Rhonda
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 4:59:59 PM
Lovliness,That you have painted her so beautifully, respectfully,lovingly...It is an exact likeness...of someone who loves you completely,Bravo
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 2:48:49 PM
Poets can be the ultimate chphers. To capture the emotions of a reader is the ultimate goal. Well writen. Lady J
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 2:03:57 PM
This poem is so amazing, I really was captivated...thank you for writing such wonderful words, and always remember, we never own or possess another's spirit or body, but when given freely, it is the greatest gift.
Much peace, love, and light to you and yours,
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 8:09:36 AM
Larry, WOW...a great tribute to your true love. Your words are prolifice and keeps a reader interested.
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 10:28:42 AM
Most beautiful tribute to your loved one!!
Blessed are those who really care!!
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 7:08:58 AM
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 10:31:20 PM
Profoudly Awesome Larry
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 10:06:54 PM
excellent choice of words, well done.
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 9:44:39 PM
you have a flair for deep yet loving sentiment ...
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 9:23:32 PM
You make a woman feel like one! Captivating flow of beautiful thoughts, Larry!
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 9:18:02 PM
Excellent. How refreshing to hear these beautiful words from a man who really appreciates a woman. The photo is lovely.
She's Crystalline Cypher (Poetry) - 6/15/2007 7:35:34 PM
Love's elixer, yes indeed. Good write.
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 2:37:37 PM
Great thoughts one after the other, Larry. It seems we have lost so much in our society, but as you point out, it's attitudes. We can begin again, one person at a time...Jerry
The Temple Mount (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 7:57:01 PM
This gave me goose flesh!
What a most exellent tribute to your father,
and your Father,
and His Son!!!
God Bless, God Speed,
Second Nature (Poetry) - 6/10/2007 5:06:31 AM
Your words flow smooth, mystical, and beautiful. You my friend write with such a gentle spirit, it comes from the heart and the soul...always allow your fingers to write freely from the heart, it speaks multitudes of beauty bringing together unique poetry as only you can write. I had a thought while reading this wonderful offering, do you ever feel as though you were born in the wrong era of time? I often find myself writing about days gone by, only my thoughts are of days of depression the early 1900's what some consider to be a more simple time. Your works reflect much of the mystical days of courtyards of the romantic period of time. Just a thought, keep writing as you do, your readers enjoy it much as I can tell you do to. Great write!
Second Nature (Poetry) - 6/10/2007 3:54:38 AM
Kamikaze, the Divine Wind, blows alike for sinners and just people.
But the real countdown started with our first scream at birth.
Second Nature (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 1:13:13 PM
A gentle wind of change...I like it. Wish change was always gentle.
Second Nature (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 12:08:21 PM
You poem as always thought provoking yet my thoughts kept going back to that picture and the woman's expression next to you. some how it seems out of place. lol.. Lady J
Second Nature (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 10:38:45 AM
What a beautiful family picture! Thanks for sharing! This is a thought provoking, inspired poem Larry, and the profound topic is one to ponder. Excellent!
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 10:03:50 AM
It is the fact that common bonds ties us all together. The simpliest of pleasures become our greatest treasures as we travel life. Very good writing here. I enjoyed reading your verse.
Second Nature (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 10:00:17 AM
This seems to be a very strong statement of growth. The relation of darkness and light being held in the same frame of a (wo)man is spot on accurate. And it is, in the end, their choice of journey. Very thought provoking read this evening.
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 8:15:52 AM
A wonderful write...I always try to instill life skills within my classroom and my students. They always seem to enjoy learning about the simple things in life, and the activities that I grew up with, such as making mudpies, exploring and creating my own adventures from bits of this and that, not from a computer, television, or games. The simple things in life are often forgotten as time passes as are the simple life skills that we were taught but are necessary. Education is very important, but so is good common sense and life skills. Enjoyed this much!
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 6:53:57 AM
Nice write. Many things to reason. I wish they would throw so much of the garbage out of children's early school lessons and teach life skills instead. Hope your fish live in better water the most here for if it's not the mercury content is to high inland it's always something that makes one not want to eat the fish. I do miss the shore for that, good fish. Lady J
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 4:41:46 AM
For this place could be overflowing with the cup of everlasting providences grace.
It truly could be, if only we allowed it to happen. And the children of today are truly the only hope for tomorrow.
Quite a powerful piece, Larry.
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 2:28:42 AM
A great peice of poetry Larry. I really enjoyed it a lot. And is that a fishing rod in your hand? I used to fish, haven't in a while but its very relaxing, love Theresa.
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/9/2007 1:19:41 AM
Since 1776 many fought and died trying to preserve the works of the Maestro against those that will have none of it.
Chaos and anarchy aren't the Maestro teachings, good moral and orden are, and many, in their arrogance, are building within themselves a new babel tower and forgetting to take care of Nature.
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/8/2007 8:01:53 PM
Nice peice. :)
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/8/2007 7:37:33 PM
Enjoyed this very much Larry...
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/8/2007 7:25:42 PM
Very beautiful writing as always,Hugssss
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/8/2007 7:03:50 PM
a very thoughtful and inspiring write-you choose your words well-
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/8/2007 5:31:19 PM
This is a beautiful poem, filled with hope, grace, and strength. Thank you, Larry.
All the best,
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/8/2007 5:04:01 PM
An outsanding write Larry
Maestro (Poetry) - 6/8/2007 4:50:28 PM
This is an amazing piece of work!
The Temple Mount (Poetry) - 4/10/2007 2:07:38 PM
Appropriate for the Word of God made flesh to get a word on AD in a remembrance that He came for us all, even the hardened hearts. Thanks...Jerry
The Temple Mount (Poetry) - 4/7/2007 6:40:17 PM
Truly meaningful, somewhat pensive, but rightfully so. R
The Temple Mount (Poetry) - 4/7/2007 10:57:43 AM
a unique spin in a faithful poem
The Temple Mount (Poetry) - 4/7/2007 6:23:39 AM
His destiny and choose that openned those gates for everyone. Lady J
The Temple Mount (Poetry) - 4/7/2007 2:30:00 AM
If everybody weren't so busy with chocolate bunnies, decorated eggs and wishing each other HAPPY Easter, and remembered that it took three
nails, a crown of thorns and a piercing lance for us to have Easter.
We are selectively forgetting the Passion of the Christ replacing it with the happiness of His Resurrection.
The Passion should come first........and last longer than a LongFriday
Thanks for your thoughs.