You're Gone (Poetry) - 12/9/2006 3:58:53 PM
i like the rhythm and motif to this poem ...
wounded (Poetry) - 12/6/2006 3:19:02 PM
Children are sometimes very unkind to one another. Some pain hurts for a long time. You have expressed your experience excellently. Welcome to AD. R
wounded (Poetry) - 12/6/2006 6:03:55 AM
We we are young we do nasty things to each other. We can chalk that up to "being young." But when he are older and hurt each other, what do we chalk that up to? I submitted my request to be your friend at Myspace.
wounded (Poetry) - 12/5/2006 6:31:06 PM
Check the typo in the third last verse - "tongue." I hurt a girl badly once when I was in high school but I did not do it cruelly or intentionally. I felf (still feel) badly about it, though. She's forgiven me. Your poem affected me powerfully. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace,
You're Gone (Poetry) - 12/5/2006 6:28:26 PM
Love has no beginning and no ending. I can identify with these sentiments, Mary. Thank you for sharing this poem. Welcome to the Den. Love and peace to you,