Death of Innocence (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 11:31:22 AM
You filled in alot of intense emotions and vivid scenes into a small area without overdoing, great work.
Death of Innocence (Poetry) - 1/12/2007 6:33:17 AM
sad
true pain coined here.....
yes well done
Death of Innocence (Poetry) - 1/10/2007 4:31:09 PM
Vividly illustrates the plight of so many children today. Well done. Michelle