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Recent Reviews for Carol Ann Erhardt
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Reflections on a Childhood Memory (Short Story) - 3/30/2009 7:20:18 PM
Solid work. I would recommend editing or even removing the first two sentences. I know an introduction is necessary, but sometimes diving right into it is a powerful grabber of attention. The intro somehow does not mesh with the body of the work. I think you wrote something very poignant, very real, very personal.
Eye of the Storm (Short Story) - 11/15/2007 7:04:45 PM
Wonderful story, Carol; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Reflections on a Childhood Memory (Short Story) - 10/4/2007 6:03:55 AM
Very sweet memory. The whole atmosphere of the piece is one of reminiscing. I like how you discribed the clouds. I also like the way you turn full circle at the end--taking us back home with you.--Charlie
The Mother's Day Celebration (Short Story) - 10/2/2007 7:09:29 PM
Beautiful story, Carol Ann, very heartwarming! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Seasons of Life (Poetry) - 3/29/2008 8:41:22 AM
A very well written piece... I enjoyed reading it from start to finish... wishing you well..
Sam
Seasons of Life (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 6:32:46 PM
And each time you turn around a new season presents itself for you to explore, how lovely....
Be safe,
Karen
Seasons of Life (Poetry) - 1/14/2008 2:34:24 PM
I will rest tonight in the dark-well I can relate to this as well-lovely imagery Carol
Seasons of Life (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 5:00:21 PM
Beautiful imagery, Carol Ann; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)
Seasons of Life (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 2:54:05 PM
well i must say i enjoy your style of writing. great imagery worded throughout and to integrate our natural world with our natural self works wonders with this Carol. Glad I read this.
always,
randy
Seasons of Life (Poetry) - 1/13/2008 1:54:06 PM
Thank you for the walk through the seasons,,,Much enjoyed,,We can find strength in nature,, it can revive the soul.
Christine
Choices (copyright by Carol Ann Erhardt) (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 7:00:48 PM
Sad! But I concur with Karla: those who come to our land LEGALLY and/or learn our ways, our LANGUAGE, I have no problem with; it's those who expect us to cater to THEM that I have problems with or those who intentionally break the law with no regard for those around them. Sad! I say send 'em back; they don't NEED to be here! PERIOD!! And what really ticks me off: WHY Are they gettng benefits that native-born Americans can't get?? It's ludicrous!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Choices (copyright by Carol Ann Erhardt) (Poetry) - 11/15/2007 6:51:01 PM
Carole,
I have no problems with anyone coming to our country, as long as they come LEGALLY, as long as they learn our language, as long as they obey our laws. Too many come illegally, now, ruining it for all immigrants. My grandfather was 14 years old when his parents put him on a ship from Croatia; in order for him to get a job, he had to learn English. In order for him to become a citizen, he had to learn English. He did, and refused to speak his native language...NOBODY catered to him. This was sad, in a way, because it denied him his culture, and us, his grandchildren, from learning more about it.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
A King's Burden (Poetry) - 7/25/2007 10:38:50 AM
A beautiful write, Carol Ann. This is the first of your works I've read and I can tell from reading this that I will be reading more of your artistic endeavors.
George
Along The Path copyright Carol Ann Erhardt (Poetry) - 4/29/2007 1:47:28 PM
Hi! Carol Ann, I read your poem, "Along the Path". I can see why you are a Romance writer through this poem. Very good work. I Have read Romances long before I read Mysteries and Sci-fi and Fantasies. Please feel free to visit my site at www.freewebs.com/kendoo or here in the "den".
Patchwork Christmas copyright Carol Ann Erhardt (Poetry) - 4/28/2007 1:42:23 PM
What a lovely poem!! Oh, how I loved to make snow angels. I still do!! Yes, the hustle and bustle of the holiday season leaves us with many memories. A well written poem. I enjoyed the memories!
Smiles,
Dorothy
A King's Burden (Poetry) - 4/9/2007 3:30:36 AM
Carol Ann,
A beautiful and inspirational piece. Your rhyme and flow were perfect but the Subject of your poem is Perfection.
A King's Burden (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 8:17:06 PM
And keep praying until you have the inner strength to stand tall. Beautifully written, Thank You!
Be safe,
Karen
A King's Burden (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 5:03:45 PM
Carol Ann,
This is beautifully written, with a wonderful message; He gladly takes our burdens and gives us rest, gives us freedom from sin. :) Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Hope you had a blessed Resurrection Sunday!!
A King's Burden (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 4:50:14 PM
O, Carol Ann, this is beautiful! Thanks for remembering why we celebrate Easter: the Resurrection of our Lord and Saviour, Jesus Christ! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
A King's Burden (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 10:12:23 AM
You remind us of one of the greatest acts of love ever done. Praise His name!!! Your faith in Christ is strong. Blessings to you ... Welcome to Authors Den.
Light and Wisdom ...
Along The Path copyright Carol Ann Erhardt (Poetry) - 3/9/2007 12:37:16 PM
Gentle, loving words. This has a nice rythem, simple, sweet.
Be safe,
Karen
Along The Path copyright Carol Ann Erhardt (Poetry) - 3/9/2007 2:52:28 AM
Carol Ann,
I love the metaphors. Your poem hoes a full road to follow but always followed with passion.
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