Recent Reviews for Susan W Zarajczyk a.k.a. Obsidian Raven Shadow
Rage Against A Sadist God (controversial content) (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 11:10:50 AM|
You have to look to the top of the pyramid to know where this all comes from. Societies, cultures, creeds and religions are all played off against one another in order for the power-elite to force their agenda and consolidate power/control. We're in the midst of a very hostile take-over right now, as I'm sure you know. I like the anger!! If only millions felt the same way, we'd have a different situation.
Jeckyl and Hyde (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 11:03:48 AM
Alienation (Poetry) - 6/25/2009 11:02:01 AM
I agree wholeheartedly!!!
Falling Over The Edge Of Time... (Poetry) - 8/26/2007 10:34:20 PM
I am familiar with the poetry in motion and see the expanded version of thought...it is a well written piece and shows many emotions through poem...
Strap Me Down (controversial and explicit content) (Poetry) - 4/2/2007 3:39:53 PM
Intense.....a very intense view of your exotic pleasures through poetry.....the sensual explorations and sensations are felt even as one views your display....
enjoyed the read.....Art Sun...
Strap Me Down (controversial and explicit content) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 2:16:38 PM
Then he rolls over and falls asleep..fun fun fun..
Burn For You (explicit and controversial) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 1:44:00 PM
very beautiful write
Torture In The Name Of The Lord (controversial content) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 12:33:47 PM
Humans have used God to excuse a multitude of cruelties ever since the ermergence of religions. Very sad. Thank you, Susan. Love and peace to you,
Strap Me Down (controversial and explicit content) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 12:31:38 PM
I will simply echo Sage's words, Susan. Thank you for sharing this passionate write. Love and peace to you,
Strap Me Down (controversial and explicit content) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 10:58:09 AM
submission can be sexy but i have problems with lack of control, i prefer to be the binder rather than the bindee :} not that i have much experience with either these days...
Strap Me Down (controversial and explicit content) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 10:31:45 AM
Erotic passion play, Susan...classy lines...this is your genre! This line sends me!
"combine your feathers
with the bite of your leathers"
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Rage Against A Sadist God (controversial content) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 7:30:16 AM
powerful write - rage on the distructive force...transformed into the creative, a poem perhaps...the will to create...something 'good', constructive, the other face of your sadist god i think...and where faith can be found. Strong words, Nicky x
Rage Against A Sadist God (controversial content) (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 7:16:28 AM
Depends what God you worship....
Dichotomy (controversial content) (Poetry) - 3/20/2007 2:03:37 PM
"sanity borders dementia"
I understand all too well.....
I am quite insane
To those who cannot comprehend”
Dreams (Poetry) - 3/20/2007 2:00:14 PM
"where delicious wonder
is washing across the tide"
Simply beautiful my friend!
Alienation (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 6:26:44 PM
we are aliens upon our own planet striving to transcend its alienation ... powerfully penned, Susan ...
To Dream... (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 10:49:14 AM
Indeed, the mind is a battle field....
Alienation (Poetry) - 3/12/2007 3:45:18 AM
Always live and be your own person. There are enough puppets and clowns in this world.
Alienation (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 6:52:23 PM
There are many that do follow and know not of leadership, and so they continue within the paths of man made philosophies and brainwashed ideas...it is the few who can see beyond the repetition of centuries passed that find themselves within the alienation of a society because of their own views....
an interesting and well written work through poetry.....Art Sun...
Time Beyond Life...Floats Away... (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 6:44:13 PM
I sure can relate to the "looking for peace" theme. Thank you for sharing your thoughts, Susan. Love and peace to you,
Alienation (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 4:29:28 PM
Far too many are caught up in the unkind, uncaring system, a sytem to be dispised.. Well done...
Sands Of Time (Poetry) - 3/11/2007 11:14:07 AM
Your poem reflects one who lives without any regrets and or seeks the fullness that life can provide, a very nice way to live and view this journey of ....sands of time...
nicely penned expression through poetry.....Art Sun...
The Beginning Of Sorrows (Poetry) - 3/9/2007 12:31:04 PM
Sorrows is a garden that is going
to come to fruition quickly.
Your prophetic eye is focused well
ORS. Excellent insight.
Light and Wisdom ...
Sands Of Time (Poetry) - 2/21/2007 3:10:44 PM
beautiful great advice!!!
love the imagery and the flow
you took us there, what should be focused on
let the ocean have the rest
Sands Of Time (Poetry) - 2/21/2007 8:44:23 AM
It is always an indeed pleasure to read such splendid real work such as this one. This is well written and adqaute in everyway. Thanks for sharing this with us all here on the Den.
Mundane Words Transformed (Poetry) - 2/20/2007 9:31:07 PM
Very nice PIM excellent
Choice of tiles here
Great poetic view of thoughts
Planting the seed and it grows in to life
poetry is similar we plant that thought
we structure and give it life!!
Excellent poetry In Motion..
Love And Peace To You always..Morning Star
of your thoughts into paper!!
Sands Of Time (Poetry) - 2/19/2007 9:06:14 PM
the investigative purport of this poem reaches an inspired conclusion ...
Sands Of Time (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 11:15:44 PM
Sip each moment, enjoy its passion.
Weaving The Web (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 6:50:16 PM
A most interesting perspective, Susan. It elicits thinking and invites your verses to be read again. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace to you,
Sands Of Time (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 6:48:19 PM
This is wise advice, Susan. I do wish I could follow it. Thank you for sharing this meaningful poem. Love and peace to you,
Mundane Words Transformed (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 6:46:43 PM
Sweet poetic sentiments, Susan. Thank you for sharing you creativity. Welcome to AD. Love and peace to you,
Sands Of Time (Poetry) - 2/18/2007 4:50:10 PM
Blimey. Brilliance. Didattic narrative, very dramatic and tightly formed..