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Recent Reviews for Brian Heir

The Peak (Short Story) - 5/13/2009 1:47:25 AM

The Peak (Short Story) - 6/8/2007 6:21:46 PM
i really liked this. had a crisp and refreshing feel to it.

The Peak (Short Story) - 2/20/2007 6:55:57 PM
Thanks a lot, "Victoria Heiret" That is my 11 year old daughter's pen name. I'm afraid I have been schooled.

The Peak (Short Story) - 2/20/2007 6:38:53 PM
I thought this story had detailed description, but Shawn looked . Marisa way 2 many times.

How to Cook Monkeys (Article) - 2/20/2007 1:50:19 PM
ohmygosh! I am an animal lover to the max, but this did make me laugh out loud...of course, I knew all along that you really were not cooking monkeys but that it is all a figment of your least I hope! Too funny.

The Authors' Mom (be fair to baby) (Poetry) - 12/26/2011 4:43:15 PM
As a mom and a good proofreader and editor for creative projects, rambling without saying anything; using big words for the sake of using big words; while burdening the reader, leaves me with one comment: Over my head? No, I think the writer is drowning. If in fact, this was any good, many requests for reviews would of followed, possibly an internship, leading to a job. A would-be writer is a writer from a very early age, if the case be so... then a critical eye would guide the child, a critique would hone their skills, and a possible rewrite over and over, as many great writers hold as a constant, would do, until the piece was perfect. Helping your children become good writers, does not come from a choice of who to praise, or who is more needful? Really? It's guiding them to read other works, reviews, newspapers, favorite authors and possibly mom and dad's written work, to help them fully understand that the written page comes in many forms. The badly written content falls away, and the more they read the better writers they will become. It's all about the read.

The Authors' Mom (be fair to baby) (Poetry) - 4/13/2010 6:43:10 AM
Well, I know very well what my mother would have done. That wise woman would have chuckled softly over her daughter's anecdotes, and looked thoughtfully over her son's prose, and would have worded her "praise" for his word jungle in such a way, that a whole three days later he'd hear the gentle reproach in her words, and heed them. --Charlie (a very thought-provoking write)

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