Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 4/13/2004 4:51:38 PM
Jim...I am so happy for you!
What a wonderfully upbeat thing to happen in your life!
The cover is gorgeous, and I know the poems will be a
treat, too.
I hope you sell thousands!
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 3/22/2004 4:47:50 PM
(((shy)))
need a snail addy so i can mail a check--no credit/debit card
i want this book. :)
you've enticed me, okay?????? (((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 9/21/2003 7:35:53 PM
Filled with heart! Nice work.
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 3/12/2003 4:07:11 PM
WOW...beautiful work of art here!! I love the cover! Congrats
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 7/5/2002 12:40:56 PM
Hi Jim, well let me try again. Authors Den would not allow me to write two reviews and I just got your book and really want to write one, so I have come on in a different address, hope this works.....Jim I am astounded at the beauty of your poetry book. It is so amazing, your words are full of sadness, joy, hope and a true love of God.. I just received it and am so priviledged to know you Jim, and to have your book. It is truly a work of art and a treasure. I wish you all Gods blessings in promoting it..God bless your words as you continue to testify of His enormous love to us. Floria
Heartbeats & Musical Tears of Man (Book) - 4/24/2002 7:21:20 AM
I cannot wait for it to come out so that I may purchase it Shy. It will be a treasure. And I will cherish it. Your poems are explosive. And yet there is such gentleness and Love of God. Bravo!!! Floria
37 Billion, The Crop (Short Story) - 5/17/2006 10:02:07 PM
surprising character,story line and plot depth in such short space....truly the work of a craftsman using a vast excess of the average brain power.....at least 10%....well done SHYPOET1 !
Backlash (Short Story) - 7/8/2005 12:10:40 PM
What a write! I felt like I was in the rooms with the characters. You describe very well, Shy Poet!!!
God bless,
Sandie.
Ambrosia Is Waiting - chapter 4 (Short Story) - 4/11/2005 9:50:07 AM
excellent addition to this story, jimmy! well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your tx. friend, karen lynn. :D
Ambrosia Is Waiting - Chapter 3 (Short Story) - 4/9/2005 9:36:30 AM
Excellent story, Jimmy; very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
U-FATSO (Short Story) - 3/28/2005 4:55:31 PM
sad, but very readable story; thanks for sharing, jimmy! well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Chasing Picasso (Short Story) - 2/14/2005 8:22:01 AM
'Shy',
Great title and a most definitive, extra well-done write - Bravo!!
Best regards,
Robert
37 Billion, The Crop (Short Story) - 2/9/2005 3:01:01 PM
what an interesting conception, that has some analogie in the early mythology of many of humanity's traditional cultures, from the dogon to the maya. the scenes that you set were astounding, the world completely envisioned.
i read this as an outline of the book that you will write, where you will flesh out these general streams of thought with details and conversation and action. i look forward to it!
Talking to the Man in the Moon (Short Story) - 2/8/2005 12:21:04 PM
Shy~~~~~~~~~~~oh my goodness
so close to my three part poem a Japanese Garden n' America
cept the dealer didn't die he got sent-up state as they say
Man!!!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!!
You are trult amazing in this with story telling
WoW!!!
Talking to the Man in the Moon (Short Story) - 1/7/2005 11:41:49 AM
i have deleted some of my works too by accident; it happens to the best of us. good write, jimmy!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Talking to the Man in the Moon (Short Story) - 1/7/2005 9:09:06 AM
I have a good freind that is in a situation like this. I have told her that she cannot change him or save his soul. But don't feel bad I posted an item in the wrong column just a slip of the fingers. This is still a very interesting story and it is written very well.
Backlash (Short Story) - 12/28/2004 6:53:45 PM
I am glad that I read your stories too. I was not offended by anything in the poem it is just that too many place blame on something for chemical dependancy and the article you wrote could be true of any person regardless of color that sells drugs. It used to be moonshine etc. I know quite a few dealers through what I see in our area. They are white exploiting everyone they can. What I hate is the young kids.
Claire's French Recipe (Short Story) - 9/1/2004 4:43:08 PM
The ending is a happy one, and I really like it. I agree--it can be made longer into a novel.
37 Billion, The Crop (Short Story) - 7/9/2004 2:04:10 PM
Man Shy I am a sci-fi lover
but never to the point of machines
it's like aliens scary type...but i really enjoyed this
it is so well put together and i love the way you break it down in section makes it very easy to read....not what i was expecting
but this is a winner in sci-fi you should summit somewhere
People Are Strange (Short Story) - 4/25/2004 7:25:00 AM
another great one, this is fully developed and rounded:)
interesteng and true it is a good thing he spoke up hopefully repaire some of the damage and helped to open the eyes of that young minister putting him in the right lane of the right road he had choose
Stark in Candyland (story being edited again) (Short Story) - 4/25/2004 7:09:53 AM
i couldn't download it i think i delected my acorbat reader
i mean i downloaded it i couldn't open it
what i read so far was hot
Backlash (Short Story) - 4/22/2004 12:01:24 PM
I really don't know what to say how could i have missed all these great stories.....You are definitly a talent it's not just your poetry I have alot of reading to do I see....this was outstanding so real I could picture everything
The Devil's Candy (1st edit) (Short Story) - 4/22/2004 11:34:47 AM
wow this is truly an amazing write, I wrote out a very beautiful comment on it and my computer frozed, but what i did say was that i came on here to write you a thank you message and when i got to your page i was blown away at the things you've written this story starts out with a wild ride that was so real (sadly i know) and then it's like someone grabbing you by your shoulders shaking the shit out of you with reality, after smacking the you know what out of you!!! This was I think one of the best stories I have read here...I liked Tuesday Night by Dempsey and it was one from Reilly and now this one got to copy this so when I'm not on I can reread it....this is it. man
Backlash (Short Story) - 4/13/2004 4:35:34 PM
Excellent story Jim...I loved the characters and the story line...
Your descriptive lines of scenes and places is fantastic..you get
better and better with each story you write...same with your poetry...I liked that this took place in Chicago...your characters were very interesting...I am not quite sure I understand the thought for the day....I don't think it had anything to do with this story did it..but your life....your real life....hope things get better for you Jim....clap clap clap on the writing...floria
Backlash (Short Story) - 4/12/2004 6:21:53 PM
Hey, I really liked this story. This is the first short story that I've read of yours. Thank you for sharing your work. I look forward to reading more.
Travonne
John Tiberius Dryer, Thief (Short Story) - 4/4/2004 8:08:58 AM
Jim..this IS one of your best....I love the intrigue here..and the plot of the story keeps the reader interested throughout...you always pick such great colorful characters...and you know there is such a great moral to this story....everyone is always wanting money...to win the lotto etc....money surely isn't everything...many times it is the cause of a mans downfall....Great writing from you...clap clap....floria
People Are Strange (Short Story) - 3/31/2004 7:24:42 AM
Intriguing story - the title first attracted me because of the muisc title by the 'Doors.' Strange and not so strange. I believe that every person we meet is a reflection of us, saying that nothing ever happens without a reason. A deep-minded exchange with another person means that they take from me, and I take from them. I become them, and they become me. And your friend is now in church. Maybe the precher will join the Air Force and receive medals. Cool story. Franz
People Are Strange (Short Story) - 3/30/2004 7:11:53 AM
Stranger, still, my friend...are the ones in the pulpit whose
eyes are NEVER opened...and those in the pews who gullibly swallow
every word they utter...without making them show a scripture to
back up their "college knowledge."
This was an extremely well-written story, Jimmy. One of your finest.
Company Man 2545 (Short Story) - 3/27/2004 8:22:12 PM
::donning the \m/:: This is a tight story; one that is not only tight but very dark as well. You can deliver the goods when it comes to this genre.
Company Man 2545 (Short Story) - 3/17/2004 10:41:00 AM
excellent story, jim! compelling (and frightening) story! very well done!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :(
Company Man 2545 (Short Story) - 3/17/2004 9:32:57 AM
Wow....what a fabulous twist on the truth...You just took some
truth and wove a wonderful fiction out of it Jim...I love the creation
of the space shuttle company...when you get into the family part...that is very tender....how loved ones can be torn apart by hatred inflicted .... you did well with this....You used hate to create a novel that is very rivetting....You will always be one step ahead because of your mind, creativity and strong will...like you say at the end...your warrior spirit...which leads me to believe that you were a great military man.....well done....floria
Texas BINGO (Article) - 7/6/2007 7:22:17 PM
Brown Dust, Blood on the Cross (Article) - 3/19/2006 4:51:11 PM
Brown Dust, Blood on the Cross (Article) - 6/29/2005 4:27:15 AM
As soon as I find my hand pictures, I'll publish this. True, Jimmy is NO angel. I never claimed to be! Did I? Sure, I'll show my face - no problem. Question: I've posted two of these articles in which you made cutting comments. Why? Obviously, when I post one of these, I am NOT hiding - I am putting it all right out in the open. I slept with you once time, and you think you can continually try to get me whan I publish one of these? Had you been the woman you could have been, you'd have a man right now. I went to your site, no picture or anything? Why? Is that really you? Parniod? Read my article again. You say publish this? Why? Get a life! For your information, I broke up with my girl friend in Killeen. If i'm single and you are single, we are both consenting adults. Get it? IF, this is relly you, show YOUR FACE! You say, I'm hiding. Why no information on your sight. Stop playing games!
Brown Dust, Blood on the Cross (Article) - 6/28/2005 10:27:21 PM
I read a little of half of this article. It really gave me a big migraine that I had to stop reading it. If you claim to experience prejudice and torture, why did you move from Killeen to Alabama? I still believe, and this is my belief, so don't get upset with my opinion that you are just paranoid. Why don't you just sit down somewhere and read the Bible and draw closer to God-- so that he will draw closer to you. One more thing, show people what you look like. Quit hiding behind the "white man" about your past "bad" years. You're not an angel (and you know what I am talking about)! Please publish this.
Part 8 My Car (Article) - 2/5/2005 7:05:34 PM
I hate to say this Daniel but this sounds exactly like Nottoway County and I am sorry that this happens. You really did a bang up job with this one.
Red Dust (Article) - 1/22/2005 6:34:12 PM
I must say why do these people think we have to explain what has been done to us. I am white and personally I find it appalling that they always think it is your fault. My abuser when he abused me at six tried this same tactic. Nothing justifies this type of treatment to you, me or any other person that has been attacked for what they think is their right to do so.
Texas BINGO (Article) - 1/22/2005 6:29:22 PM
You don't have to be black to have this happen to you in that during the 1980's in Virginia I always thought these Bingo halls were crooked. I believe that when you are outspoken and stand up for your rights you become a target. It is ludicrous that they would attack your girlfreind. Sorry and it makes me ashamed of them but I understand how you feel really. For me it was a drunk that was white that exploits the black and anyone he can and he is a snitch for the communist attorney. A man Larry Stokes is in prison here for a crime he did not commit. The DNA evidence cleared him but no the snitch was a liar and said the CA put her up to it. We have tried to have him released and are still working on it. I have to say this if you came here they would do the same thing. These type people think they are going to heaven but I say they won't. By the way our group is composed of white people that despise what was done to the man. It is this the elite or so called elite gets away with everything at least for now. They leave a lot of people in their wake. I do understand.
Red Dust (Article) - 5/18/2004 6:28:36 PM
Jimmy,
I have read all of your "Dust" articles and I have to tell you that I shake my head every time I read it. Readers...I have seen his "hands" and they are nothing like hands like he says. The pictures will definitely speak for themselves.
I can't wait for the "Brown" Dust article. That article should definitely get you a Pulitzer.
Your friend,
Honey
Yellow Dust (Article) - 4/17/2004 7:40:32 AM
I agree with Tami Ryan's comment.
Black Dust (Article) - 4/3/2004 5:39:30 PM
I believe every word of this....a story worth reading and heeding.
Love
from
Kay.
please email me privately re this article
email
bekindandblossom.yahoo.com
I think I know someone who will publish it.
Yellow Dust (Article) - 3/6/2004 6:19:31 PM
Shame, shame, shame is right. Some of this is quite difficult to read, to say the least of it. It's unreal that, in this day and age, some people still behave the way they do. Gladly, not all "white folk" feel this way.
Keep writing; let it be cathartic for you, and don't lose the faith.
I wish you peace within.
Hugs,
Tami
Yellow Dust (Article) - 3/4/2004 11:04:16 AM
Jim....I ....Of course was waiting for a few replies before I did mine..Of course I have read this over several times...It is really difficult to add to what Jacqueline said....Not all white people are evil...you had a horrific experience in your life...TO SAY THE LEAST...I don't think I would still be living after all that...and to think....some of us complain over our daily burdens...things have to be put into perspective here...what I am most angry about at this moment...is the care that you are denied...That infuriates me to no end...yet...you may not be able to shake the cages hard enough...I don't know what it would take...Prayer you always have Jim...from me anyway...Perhaps there is a deeper purpose for your life...I love what Jackie said...the pen being mightier than the sword...You know you can help others...just by your hell that you lived...you show your courage and faith in God to be non ending....I think from when I first met you that was what shined...not hatred..not pity..none of that..You spoke of dying and touching His clouds and sky and I remember how that touched me...You have seen the face of Jesus...what is more powerful than that...and He has sustained you Jim...You did not die....neither did your faith...It is really difficult for me to put in words how I feel...Anger...frustration...injustice...and yet...God can help us to overcome all of this...I pray you do not lose faith in humanity...Then the enemy wins Jim....thats when they win...Please....don't let them win....bless your heart....floria
Black Dust (Article) - 3/4/2004 11:03:24 AM
Wow, I read these last to first, and I am still speechless. You told me many of these things already, but it is something to see the articles in print. I had a Texas Real Estate license for nearly 20 years, so I can tell you that 'yes' they can and will go back at least 10 years on credit history if you try to purchase a house. I've never heard of Texas as being a pay by the month rental state. That's a new one on me. Most housing complexes have debt against their buildings, and the leases are 'accounts receiveable' that satisfy the banks that the debts will be paid, via the rental contracts. That's standard proceedure in any state. Month by month just doesn't cut it.
And, you can be black-listed, and red-lined. Certain areas are red-lined by banks. The practice became very public knowledge in the '80, when I still lived in Texas. Black-listing in housing is a real thing. If you skip out on rent, you put yourself on a list as a liability to landlords. If you pay month by month, there is no record of your rental history, so it too is a detriment, if you are trying sincerely to build a credit history.
Nebraska sounds like a horrible place to be.
As to churches...I look at religious organizations with a jaundiced eye. The real measure of a Christian or Buddist, or whatever, is how you live your life. It is a sad commentary though, that you could not find fellowship in a church. Says a lot about "the Christian thing to do." Scary. Reminds me very much of the drive my shootings in Phoenix, by those who have "Jesus saves" tatooed on their arms or a bumper sticker saying much the same. An oxymoron, to be sure. I'm sure God is having a heart attack.
Very good articles, Jim. It would make a very good book about life in America. The human condition produces those still swinging from the trees by their tails. It also produces genius, compassion, kindness, and helpful people. I've met all the above at some point in my life and have scars to show for it. Believe me, concentrating on the positive, and being thankful, is soul-saving.
Love,
Elizabeth
Yellow Dust (Article) - 3/4/2004 6:44:59 AM
Yes, Jackie, what a terrible web we’ve woven, isn’t it?
Thank you so much ......... for you wise words big hearted lady.
Yes, I’ve seen this CODE OF SILENCIA first hand.
It sucks. It allows crimes against humanity to be committed,
while claiming to be the cradle of humanity, what hypocrites.
Never doubt, some white people have created a society where they themselves are afraid to speak up. The good white people, (there I go generalizing again) can be hunted just like you and I. I’ve learned everything, always, comes full circle. Yes, the chickens ARE coming home to roost, once again. They got one thing right though, I am a hard man to kill. After all, I have God on my side.
ShyPoet1
Yellow Dust (Article) - 3/3/2004 10:23:38 PM
This is excellent but in this community you are talking about some of the same people, not all but believe me there is a silence code.
Funny my brother there are many black writers in this community and guest what they are doing there own thing. I can identify with every thing which is written in your article, but always keep in mind my brother the rich man will hold the door for the poor. Hold on stay in faith. You can not come to terms with the devil. Nevertheless many of us read out the same book. Think of your blessings they can scar your body but they can't take your mind only if you give it away. God gave you the power of the pen. Gods spirits drwell through you, you are a master poet so you are not the looser you are the winner. For every stroke you may take of the pen, you are educating someone to beware of the devil when he come. Nevertheless all white people are not evil, but the devil have many followers. Continue to right my King. God have the last word your beauty flows within your pen and your heart. You can breathe, and God speak through your pen. This is excellent where is the book?
Black Dust (Article) - 2/23/2004 5:17:09 PM
Dear Jim....I have known you for a long time...I met you on the PC at a poetry board right after you were released from the hospital..I am going to reply with a poem I wrote for you....In getting to know you...I have found you to be a spiritual man...kind...considerate...with a wonderful soul...thats what I saw first....your soul.....I pray that many people read this...and that somehow changes can be made...most of all what my wish for you is that you learn to again trust in humanity....there are many good people out there....bless you...floria
Courageous Soul
Were I to write of what my thoughts bespeak,
The pain that I have gathered from your soul.
Not ever would my words come forth as weak,
Once you were broken down but came out whole.
The courage you have shown amazes me.
For you cannot be broken down, Oh no!
The faith you've shown is strong as it could be.
I wish it now for all the world to know.
That hunted down a human must fight back.
And never let the enemy within.
Determination must not ever slack.
For God will hold you up and you will win.
Just how one human could survive this hell.
Friend Shy, you did it, and you did it well.
Floria
Black Dust (Article) - 2/23/2004 4:10:20 PM
Jim this is so heartwrenching, I hardly know what to say!..You did a superb job of writing, making it very clear.I hope someone with authority and know how will read this and give it to whomever can help the most.It's a terrifying tale. I believe you, but I'm shocked it's happening in America today! Why haven't the news people picked this up or the ACLU? They are always so quick to hype their pet needs.I wish you all the best, and hope something gets done!
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 8/20/2007 6:55:03 PM
This is pure soul music for sure...
Stay safe....
Thanks for your reviews...
Hugs...
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 5/1/2007 1:45:51 PM
I Oveeeeeeeeee Blues and I'm glad you added this----->I got da big ole Black
Earthshaking Su-per-man Blues …
The whole song is a winner!
A gem for me to treasure! and savor again later!
Thank you for sharing ShyPoet!
BE SAFE~!
STay POsitive!
I don't think I've been here, but I will be BACK! :)
and I just may start tracking/following them there Blue Heartfelt writes...
WArmly, WArrior Lady PURPLE Sheeeoox
Shy’s Ode to Poetic Souls (Poetry) - 2/13/2007 6:35:35 PM
Shy Poet, how beautiful the gift that you possess! Reading this beautiful piece causes me to question what I've been doing that has kept me away from Authors Den so long! Never stop stirring up and pouring forth the gift.
God bless you.
Gloria Lewis-Vaughn
For Loretta (Poetry) - 2/13/2007 7:04:29 AM
Very touching! Holly
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 1/7/2007 6:48:36 PM
AWESOME!
Your mind shares so much at 1 time~
WArmly, WArrior Sheee
For Loretta (Poetry) - 1/7/2007 6:47:13 PM
This touched my soul, with your expressive personality!
Wow!
What a fulfilling tribute too!
WArm HuGs,Warrior Sheeeoxxo
Man Not Boy 24/7 (Poetry) - 11/25/2006 5:10:04 PM
thank you for your writing-and for your thoughts for today
Everywhere I Wept (Poetry) - 11/25/2006 5:06:01 PM
What a great introspective write-i enjoyed reading
Baptized a Baptist (Poetry) - 11/15/2006 5:29:05 PM
No one should define who you are except YOU.
I like that bit about the Alabama poop farmers. ROFL
Jim, you are priceless...and you are the only one who doesn't think so.
You really have a gift.
Elizabeth
A Poem for Dreamers (REPOST) (Poetry) - 10/21/2006 6:21:44 AM
Beautiful sentences, beautiful poem!!!!!! Liana Margiva
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 2/28/2006 3:51:44 PM
Beautiful, Jim.
Keep writing... you definitely have a calling.
For Loretta (Poetry) - 10/15/2005 8:24:55 PM
This is absolutely gorgeous, beautiful, passionate work!
Elizabeth
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/18/2005 12:12:14 AM
This is wonderful, so very deep and outstandingly written,
Reindeer
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/13/2005 9:41:55 AM
A most excellent expression of emotions, Shy!
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 3:39:09 PM
Will never kill a mocking bird again.
Ron
Sunday’s Song (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 11:04:44 AM
Shy, you never fail to stir all the senses, very emotional poem!
Hope one day you can just be...!
Eileen
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 9/11/2005 6:39:24 AM
Don't ever let go of that song in your Soul, Shy Poet! Magically engaging write. Bravo!
Peace,
Carolyn
I Danced with the Devil Ha! Ha! Ha! (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 12:23:34 PM
" ... In a place where the truth is blurred by evil men,
it has become less important whether i live or die.
It is more important, how I live or die! "
Love it! Wonderful inspirational write!
God bless, Jimmy!
Sandie.
Black Superman Blues - song (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 12:10:00 PM
You got the blues and you got them bad!! Love it! Excellent piece, ShyPoet!
God bless,
Sandie.
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/24/2005 12:05:33 PM
Beautiful, powerful haikus ShyPoet!
God bless,
Sandie.
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/6/2005 4:23:15 PM
a fantastic collage of ku!
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/4/2005 5:24:03 PM
OK Sweets, so good to read you again!
Take Care & Happy 4th, Janny xoxoxo
PS. Speaking of the south, I am a member of the 'Nat'l Campaign for Tolerance', have my name on the wall. ;)
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 1:56:18 PM
Shy,
Thought provoking, powerful haiku--exceptionally well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 7/1/2005 7:37:09 AM
Terrific captures, Shy One! Masterfully expressed.
Haiku 6-30-05 (Poetry) - 6/30/2005 9:17:44 PM
Nice to see you are still penning such insightful and powerful writings. :)
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