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Recent Reviews for Jennifer N Blum

A Childless Mother's Realization (Short Story) - 3/6/2007 11:44:01 AM
Bittersweet write, Jennifer. It does make one think about Charity's choice and how powerfully it will affect the rest of her life. Thank you. Love and peace, Regis

A Flame not yet Reconized (Short Story) - 3/6/2007 11:41:23 AM
Interesting write, Jennifer. Sometimes, dreams flow into reality and vice versa, it seems. Thank you for sharing. Love and peace, Regis

A Childless Mother's Realization (Short Story) - 3/6/2007 8:50:26 AM
Sad write, not bad for a first attempt! Well done!

Midnight Blue (Poetry) - 5/26/2011 4:36:16 AM
Very nicely done, tender and caring...almost a musing feeling to this one. fee

Spring (Poetry) - 5/21/2011 6:46:41 AM
Oh my how lovely sweet lady...Hugsss

Spring (Poetry) - 5/19/2011 7:45:13 PM
How enlightening and the mix of fragrance of blossoming flowers permeates the air... Be always safe, Karen

Truest Form of Love (Poetry) - 10/8/2010 12:46:30 AM
You captured the soft side of a big heart when filled with romance...lovely. fee

Where Am I? (Poetry) - 6/30/2010 2:03:18 AM
This poem definately makes one wonder if the photographer has intentionally decided to be an observer of life rather than a participant the end realizes maybe it is time to move out from the shadows. fee

Where Am I? (Poetry) - 6/30/2010 1:14:08 AM
Great piece of poetry. Wonderful! I enjoyed it! Blessings! Kingsley

Raw (Poetry) - 3/30/2010 12:57:48 AM
I love this open and revealing of character...the subject has reached a realization and regardless of the past is moving ahead. May want to check spelling "nieve" but other than that...perfect. fee

Grandmother (Poetry) - 12/17/2009 5:35:12 PM
Absolutely beautiful and a better find, there is not. Warmth and Love to you, Carin'

Alone With My Thoughts (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 12:02:08 PM
I can appreciate where you are "coming from" within these verses, Jennifer. I find what you have expressed very "close" to me. Thank you. Love and best wishes, Regis

Alone With My Thoughts (Poetry) - 11/23/2009 4:54:43 AM
It is always good to take a few moments alone now and then of quiet time to let our minds and hearts regroup and appreciate what is so beautiful in this world over the things that are not. Well expressed Jenn. Fee

Goodbye Reality (Poetry) - 11/19/2009 1:47:15 AM
Not only your pain but your anger at being whether involuntarily or not, deserted comes through in this write. well done and perfectly laid down. fee

Now Your Gone (Poetry) - 10/22/2009 1:50:16 PM
Jennifer, when we lose someone we care about we are left with so much self doubt and sense of "if only". The truth is that she and you were friends and you can hold to that forever as she (I have no doubt) also did. This is a wonderful way to say not goodbye but until we meet again to someone you held so fondly in your heart. hugs fee

Twenty-four and Counting (Poetry) - 9/27/2009 10:38:51 AM
Raw, real, and honest and thus very compelling, Jennifer. I appreciate where you are "coming from." Love and best wishes, Regis

Eyes Open Wide (Poetry) - 9/27/2009 3:22:18 AM
Strong and human offering of what a real love that goes wrong or perhaps was only a one sided love can feel when the reality of a breakup sets in. This is sad but also hopeful for as we step forward after such an experience we tend to keep our eys open and our hearts a little more protected. hugs fee

Twenty-four and Counting (Poetry) - 9/27/2009 3:15:07 AM
Wow 24...happy birthday and from a man double your age, I can still remember back what it was like to be that age. They (whoever "they" are)say we learn all the answers with age and experience. Guess what? "They" lie. Life is a continuous process of learning by our mistakes and love will alays be what it is...a roller coaster ride of the heart. Great poem of your true feelings Jenn, hugs fee

Choice (Poetry) - 9/25/2009 4:00:58 PM
Your heart is hung out on your sleeve in this one and I can easily relate to your words for I too have walked in similiar footsteps. Great job... hugs fee

Can It Be (Poetry) - 9/16/2009 3:21:35 PM
The reality of these lines contain the reality of the heart,love once formed is not easy to sweep under the rug no matter how easy it seems at the time, the lumps in that rug stick out for a long time to come. fee

Inside (Poetry) - 9/16/2009 3:14:24 PM
Intense and strong voice that almost screams from not only inside the heart but also with the full participation of the mind. Wow. fee

The other side (Poetry) - 8/28/2009 5:11:49 PM
I like this and enjoyed the feel of it. You don't write often but when you do you sure make it worthwhile to read and enjoy. hugs fee

Detente (Poetry) - 7/24/2009 8:41:57 AM
Often love and romance get mired in a bog of confusion and feelings that leave only a trail of uncertainty to follow but...if it is true love than a beacon will glow from the heart to keep us on the right track. hugs Fee

Detente (Poetry) - 7/23/2009 6:06:20 PM
Most compelling, Jennifer. I wonder how many times a day this scene is replayed in this world/life. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes, Regis

In the Mirror (Poetry) - 7/1/2009 4:13:01 PM
Jenn I read this twice and both times thought it was my own reflection I was seeing in the mirror...reminded me of so much. fee

Goodbyes (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 2:53:15 PM
Very intense young Jenn, but to be able to say goodbye and feel sadness also means we had to know the person well, and perhaps even love them if the hurt of goodbye is strong and as the old saying goes..."it is better to have loved and lost..." Great write. hugs fee

I Think Too Much (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 2:51:10 PM
We should never worry about thinking too much, it is the absence of thought that usually leads to a persons downfall. As poet and writers it is our job to always be thinking not of just today but of yesterday and tomorrow, not just of a thing but what the thing can or cannot do, not just of beauty and joy but also of ugly and sad. We must embrace thought as you did to write this and offer it to all the world. hugs fee

Glass Box (Poetry) - 6/29/2009 2:42:20 PM
We all throughout our lifetimes feel we are trapped in this same clear but confining box. Our hearts and souls as well as our physical bodies bare to those who stop and stare. Ah but glass is fragile and breaks sooner or later and then we become free to soar...great write Jenn. hugs fee

Mysteries of Life and Dreams (Poetry) - 6/21/2009 1:43:59 PM
I love the way your heart melts into this write as you contemplate and perhaps embrace the night even if sad... fee

I Know Now (Poetry) - 6/5/2009 7:34:57 AM
Life is just tooooo....short.

Sandstorm (Poetry) - 6/4/2009 3:37:04 PM
Very nice capture of internal emotional storms and heartache.This is really good Jenn. hugs fee

I Know Now (Poetry) - 6/4/2009 3:34:05 PM
All too often we find out too late the mistakes we make in life are paid for in the heart forever...Good one Jenn. hugs fee

In Your Eyes (Poetry) - 5/5/2009 2:47:44 PM
To be loved in such an overpowering way can also be ooverwhelming and make the recipricant feel trapped or smothered in a grip they can't break free of. Your words express this well. fee

Goodbye (Poetry) - 5/5/2009 9:11:10 AM
So sad; and yet not an uncommon theme in this world/life. Thank you for sharing, Jennifer. Love and peace to you, Regis

Dreams of The Soul (Poetry) - 5/5/2009 9:10:05 AM
I can relate to the powerful feelings that you express within your verses, Jennifer. Love and best wishes, Regis

Still (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 3:52:16 PM
Another sweet open expression of love and love stirred passion...very nice. hugs fee

Wake Up (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 10:42:44 AM
I like this one and the feeling of such a warm morning person trying to wake the old sleephead. Fee

Choice (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 10:41:06 AM
Sounds like a dreamy summer afternoon lazing on a patio overlooking the ocean...nice images stirred up with this one. hugs fee

Reflection (Poetry) - 5/4/2009 10:31:27 AM
Very well expressed. we often forget where we came from and need those gentle reminders hidden in storage closets and seldom opened photo albums. very nice write Jenn. hugs fee

life and death (Poetry) - 3/23/2009 4:55:44 AM
Such a wise sage write for one so young but also very beautiful, well done Jenn. Fee

Dream (Poetry) - 3/17/2009 4:06:46 AM
Perhaps not there in reality, however a dream and reality can coexist if there is love and feelings and an understanding that one day he will be there... hugs Fee

Pen and Paper (Poetry) - 3/17/2009 4:04:39 AM
Jenn this captures so well the feelings of so many people who now find themselves meeting and falling in love long distance or maybe just cyber distant apart. For some it is a heartbreaking experience as words on a screen cannot replace the feel of hand in hand but for ends up being a miracle of love that lasts forever. Well done. hugs Fee

Night Magic (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 5:27:50 PM
So tenderly expressed it has to come from a loving heart and a caring soul. Well done Jenn...enjoyed. hugs Fee

Outside Looking In (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 5:25:44 PM
Sadly all too often in the hustle in bustle of todays world where both parties in a marraige need to work to survive love is put on the back burner and if not carefully tended once in a dries up. Fee

Seasons of Dreams (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:45:17 PM
I like how this "love affair" progresses through the seasons, Jennifer. Thanks for sharing. Love and peace, Regis

Night Magic (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:44:08 PM
A peaceful and soothing offering, Jennifer. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes, Regis

Outside Looking In (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:43:16 PM
You paint a stark but real view of modern family life, Jennifer. Love and best wishes, Regis

Remembrance (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:52:50 AM
Such a sweet sense of nostalgia and love memories delivered in this write that comes from the heart directly to the page. Well done Jenn. Hugs Fee

Life (Poetry) - 3/12/2009 4:50:15 AM
Deep and intense and definatly one to think and dwell on. hugs Fee PS Check spelling of shelter.

Insperation (Poetry) - 2/20/2008 5:41:11 PM
Intense and deeply emotional write that takes the reader for a glimpse inside your heart and the thoughts that keep your heart yearning. Fee

manic (Poetry) - 12/19/2007 4:28:57 AM
When the mind leaps into the anger or depression stages it is often beyond our control as to how we react. Writing out your feelings and nightmares does often help and bipolar sufferers especially. You captured some vivid images here regardless. Fee

manic (Poetry) - 12/19/2007 12:23:53 AM
Now this is frightful. However this poem does not apper on AD??? Or is it my ISP?

Simply put (Poetry) - 12/18/2007 3:39:43 PM
Wonderful capture of innocence being lost in the realm of fairy tale love, we learn to love by loving and yes sadly to often by our broken hearts. They are painful lessons Jenn but trust me love is worth it. Fee

Simply put (Poetry) - 12/17/2007 6:15:05 PM
Culmination of your experiences <>Refining your sense of beauty(heart-beats)Evol*Ted

Paper Doll (Poetry) - 12/17/2007 2:46:24 PM
A trophy, not a person...

Give no Take (Poetry) - 11/20/2007 3:44:49 PM
A cry for help that I hope comes soon. Ron

Give no Take (Poetry) - 11/20/2007 3:34:31 AM
Strong feelings in this one and though the last line sums it up with "giving all I have yet not enough" it left me asking myself is she really giving she smiling, laughing, savoring the waves on a beach, the falling leafs, the first snow, children...all the things that can make us complete and happy, or is she just going through the mechanics of breathing. For a short write stirs up lots of thought that is for sure. Excellant. Fee

Give no Take (Poetry) - 11/20/2007 12:35:28 AM
Short and expressive. Clearly conveyed message. I like "Life giving lemons, forgetting the sugar." "Trying to make it in a world so cold": so true. Axilea

Against The Grain (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 1:07:00 PM
The Rats Win the Race? Most people go about their lives without thinking, they just act. Others are in unhealthy relationships that they choose not to leave for fear. We are not free f we let others control us. It may mean sacrifice, but we can make it alone if we try. Ron

Against The Grain (Poetry) - 11/17/2007 12:59:49 AM
Concrete Jungle. Envy, jelousy and hate, the deadly sins are all within this poem. One can stand up, often it is the one who makes the diffo'

Against The Grain (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 7:15:26 PM
Common theme throughout is "Life is". This journey sadly depicts the reality of living for many.... Be safe, Karen

Against The Grain (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 6:25:43 PM
I don't know, but I got this feeling of "Life's Stew", but I like Felix' title as well...Ed & Rufuz (w00f)

Against The Grain (Poetry) - 11/16/2007 5:18:45 PM
Deeply moving look of life seemingly of two people at odds or perhaps a little envious of each other. How about "Against The Grain" Fee

Betrayal (Poetry) - 11/12/2007 1:55:02 AM
Love the metaphor for peripatetic thoughts.

Betrayal (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 1:31:20 PM
A cloud of doubt... Ron

Love (Poetry) - 11/11/2007 12:38:31 PM
Lovely and loving. Ron

Love (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 3:09:19 PM
Very beautiful and romantic piece. There is an eternity to this kind of heart and soul.

The One Within Me (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 3:07:20 PM
Lovely piece of work.

Betrayal (Poetry) - 11/10/2007 3:05:54 PM
Allow the light of hope to shine eternal...betrayal is the ultimate sin yet can be conquered by faith in onesself.

Betrayal (Poetry) - 11/9/2007 9:22:27 PM
Your piece is so deep and profound with only a tiny glimmer of hope. Maybe the optimism and hope will ignite and allow the light to come in..... Be safe, Karen

Betrayal (Poetry) - 11/9/2007 3:27:35 AM
Your lines are strong and get better with each write. Intense and personal as if you are telling us face to face how you feel. Great work. Fee

Meeting (Poetry) - 11/8/2007 3:05:16 PM
My computer has just over heated and yiou've blown my

Meeting (Poetry) - 11/8/2007 10:19:40 AM
AS the sparks flew across the room, and I knew then and there that there was such a thing as love at first sight... Excellant write young Jenn...just lovely. Fee

Meeting (Poetry) - 11/8/2007 3:29:48 AM
Jen, Excellent. The truth of a moment can lie in a single glance. Blessings Always, Paul.

Love (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 10:57:09 AM
Delightful write on the power of love. Your heart is always close to the surface when you portay love so well. Fee

Love (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 3:06:57 AM
Jen, Very passionate in verse and emotion. I also love your visuals. Poetry is always exceptional when the imagery is so. Blessings Always, Paul.

Love (Poetry) - 11/7/2007 12:35:18 AM
Beautifully penned and exceptionally romantic. A deeply touching poem.

Things (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 3:34:41 PM
Thoughtful things. Ron

Wanting (Poetry) - 11/2/2007 3:32:16 PM
First love can be the hardest. Ron

True Love (Poetry) - 10/31/2007 3:26:15 PM
You are a hopeless romantic. The world could use a few more of you. Ron

Wonder (Poetry) - 10/30/2007 1:25:04 PM
Very loving, heartwarming and innocent, very enjoyable... Be safe, Karen

Wonder (Poetry) - 10/30/2007 2:32:12 AM
The mystery of any new meeting of romantic nature is part of the thrill and build up of any new relationship and the last line sums it up sweet is sweet. Fee

Conflict (Poetry) - 10/27/2007 7:52:54 AM
Bitter sweet the conflict that enhances a poem. Ron

Questioned (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 4:36:41 PM
I always love a sweet tweet. Ron

Mania (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 10:59:34 AM
This sonnet could be about my ex's pmt... Amazing what lies beneath peeps masks.. Nice one..

Mania (Poetry) - 10/25/2007 3:37:22 AM
Lots of feeling simmering in a cauldron of emotion in this write that allows a glimpse of a frustrated soul perhaps, regardless great writing format and formula here Jenn...enjoyed. fee

Mania (Poetry) - 10/24/2007 10:13:46 PM
A mind deep in thoughts that have been scattered all about. Interesting tale.... Be safe, Karen

The One Within Me (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 8:32:59 PM
Just wonderful and so utterly sweet, enjoyed... Be safe, Karen

Things (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 2:40:51 PM
Sweet write and like the other a beautiful testament to a first right developing poet...keep em coming Jenn. hugs Fee

Wanting (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 2:38:09 PM
The need to love and be loved even at an early age tests the boundaries of a poet's talents and increases their ability to emphazize with the world of life around them. As this write shows Jenn you have only developed into an even better poetess over the years. Fee

The One Within Me (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 2:19:32 PM
awwwww, this is so, so delicate. I love your writes, man if I were younger, after looking at your

True Love (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 7:26:46 PM
Such in depth passion and adoration is spilling off the page in sweet delight..... Be safe, Karen

True Love (Poetry) - 10/22/2007 4:14:40 AM
Jenn this is absolutely beautiful and stunning as it grips the reader from beginning to end. The picture also draws the reader in as if I were walking along and seen you standing there and asked what you were so seriiouly thinking about and the poem was your reply. I loved this write. That being said the only suggestion I would make is to replace "your" with "you're" all the way through. You are growing every day as a writer and a romantic. Lovely write dear Jenn. hugs Fee

Conflict (Poetry) - 10/17/2007 4:41:31 PM
One of my fav poets. So much talent. Clever poem, but never stop dreaming. I love your style and class, you have a magical future, and such an endearing heart......

Conflict (Poetry) - 10/16/2007 10:54:34 PM
So deeply withdrawn into ones self in dispair and agony. As all dreams are lost. So well written.... Be safe, Karen

Worship (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 8:28:47 PM
Nicely written piece of passionate devotional love, enjoyed.... Be safe, Karen

Worship (Poetry) - 10/15/2007 4:36:59 PM
Such times are pure bliss... Well captured...

Spellbound (Poetry) - 10/14/2007 7:51:20 PM
Very vivid piece that just drew me in, nice work.... Be safe, Karen

Spellbound (Poetry) - 10/13/2007 10:53:26 PM
this was a great offering of expression

Questioned (Poetry) - 10/12/2007 7:54:02 PM
Like the way you put this piece together. Yes, questions, but seldom any real answers.... Be safe, Karen

Questioned (Poetry) - 10/12/2007 10:00:40 AM
Questions? The more we know, the more we question - or at least that's the way it should be. You think? Kathy

Questioned (Poetry) - 10/12/2007 5:55:16 AM
Ah the enigma of which came first the question or the answer, for with each question answered usually another question is generated...but...perhaps that is how we learn.. Fee

Writers Block (Poetry) - 8/9/2007 9:40:24 PM
It is often said, for us writers to write beyond what most call "writers block" it is necessary to write down anything at all that comes to far as I am concerned "writers block" is merely a situation where I cannot write what is in my heart but it is replaced by something I write in my mind..l.thoughts opinions etc... It seems you have created something even through this period so therefore...writers block did not block you at all. Superb work.

Writers Block (Poetry) - 8/9/2007 3:35:41 PM
Been on that block. The other night, recovering from surgery. I wrote a beautiful blues song on the floor by my bed in my mind. Two great poems followed. By morning they were gone. My page has been empty since. Ron

Writers Block (Poetry) - 8/8/2007 7:36:00 AM
Err, hummm, errr, Reviwers block I guess.. errrrr, hummmmmmmm.. Can I get back to you on this!!!

Writers Block (Poetry) - 8/8/2007 4:58:42 AM
W feared placed tat i no longer like [is there an error in this line...? it seems a little off...?] writers block sucks. but it does serve us well if we allow it. once i asked all these ppl what they did when they suffered from the inability to write and they said to write something autobiographic, to force something, to write anything [even if it was crap]. i tried those suggestions and they kinda helped but i dont think there is an answer really... i think its a vacation of the mind... i guess it works... and sometimes writing about writers block makes the whole block move so heres hoping =)

Writers Block (Poetry) - 8/8/2007 3:05:41 AM
Writer's block to me, or how I like to look at it anyway, is a temporay R & R of the imagination side of our brain. Sometimes we have to back off, relax, and re open our minds to the world and what we are not seeing so that when we do write it is natural and not forced. I think you captured that well here in this write as well. Fee

A poem from the Heart (Poetry) - 7/28/2007 2:37:57 PM
Lovely expression of love. Ron

A poem from the Heart (Poetry) - 7/25/2007 5:11:17 AM
A wonderful heart expression.

A poem from the Heart (Poetry) - 7/25/2007 2:28:12 AM
Young love and young lovers have a way of capturing a moment that we old folks seem to lose somewhere along the way. This is beautiful Jenn...truly. fee

A poem from the Heart (Poetry) - 7/24/2007 8:25:26 PM
So beautiful and full of passion and sensual expression..... Be safe, Karen

Looking Back (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 6:26:06 PM
Nice work!!! It takes poets like u to help keep poetry alive!!!!!

Looking Back (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 2:52:08 PM
Interesting concept. Sometimes looking back is not what we thought it was. Enjoyed the write..... Be safe, Karen

A day with the unknown (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 9:36:50 AM
What a beautiful sense of beauty & self -love <>Ted

Looking Back (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 9:04:47 AM
Like finding an old family portriat in a long abandoned house. Three years ago, my brother took my mother to explore her childhood home, long abandoned. She married and had twins at seventeen, forgoing college. Was she too young? Ron

Looking Back (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 8:49:52 AM
The past can haunt one, if we let it.

Love or lust (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 8:01:36 AM
I think you hit the nail on the head with your last line, love will be there even if the lust can no longer be. Fee

Looking Back (Poetry) - 7/22/2007 7:59:30 AM
Makes the reader ponder the issues of what was right and what was wrong in their own past as we stare at the writers reflection of hers. Fee

Endless (Poetry) - 7/19/2007 11:17:47 PM
Raw emotions erupting out of this one and I hope it is from someone else or at least a past experience for your are too young and sweet to feel this way. Fee

Thief (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 3:41:33 AM
So sorry for your loss for I know ones pets fill hearts with joy and love. Fee

Thief (Poetry) - 7/6/2007 3:41:20 AM
I am so sorry for your loss. We have raised and loved 9 Rottweilers in the past 14 years. We lost mom and son within 48 hrs. of each other and the second son exactly one year later. Dad left us the two years before that. We had a healthy 9 month old go outside and one minute later just laid down and died. Another died from Parvo at 9 months. We now have a rescue Rottie who was severly abused, a nine month old, who is a little spit fire and my boy, A wonderful 7 yr. old. I can't tell you the pain will go away but it will age like wine, always there but softer with time. A wonderful poem you penned.

Release (Poetry) - 7/3/2007 6:56:18 AM
Nice work on this view of one's release of emotions through does show a variety of those feelings when one is walking away from an uncaring relationship... nice work..... Art Sun...

Release (Poetry) - 7/2/2007 4:55:03 AM
Undercover agent for your soul - See's all - {willful} - Ted

Release (Poetry) - 7/1/2007 11:01:53 PM
Although a sad topic...your lines translate the beauty of its wording. Superb work.

Release (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 7:38:07 PM
They say the eyes are the window to the soul, beware and be careful..... Be safe, Karen

Release (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 4:48:16 PM
This is sharp and immortal my friend.....Well crafted emotional journey..... Peace, Bill

Release (Poetry) - 6/29/2007 1:33:55 PM
Sounds like a trickster. Not the right kinda release

Easy Way Out (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 9:00:32 PM
Sounds like you still love him. Divorce is never easy when you are the one traveling down the road. So full of heartache and passion...... Be safe, Karen

Easy Way Out (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 11:07:40 AM
Sometimes the outpouring of our feelings on paper clears the way for our hearts and souls to move on inside the body to a new day... Fee

Easy Way Out (Poetry) - 6/25/2007 7:12:15 AM
One way to become unfettered....

In the Night (Poetry) - 6/18/2007 9:02:06 AM
Beautiful pen of ones emotions. You may want to change "gentile" to "gentle".

In the Night (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 12:23:51 AM
This indeed will keep poetry alive!

In the Night (Poetry) - 6/16/2007 9:56:51 PM
So very lovely and heartfelt, enjoyed. Be safe, Karen

New Horizon (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 3:12:20 PM
Run too fast and you'll only catch yourself. Enjoyed

New Horizon (Poetry) - 6/13/2007 6:11:21 AM
Great writing,stay well...HUgssss

New Horizon (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 5:28:40 PM
Interesting write! Keep trying, you will succeed..... Be safe, Karen

New Horizon (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 4:43:43 AM
Excellant write young Jennifer and in youth we have the endless bag of optimism to draw from so don't ever forget that, tomorrow there will always be a new beginning. hugs Fee

New Horizon (Poetry) - 6/12/2007 2:25:30 AM
Keep moving, keep running, but don't forget to catch the elusive butterfly one must sit still and it will land... Excellent poem, full of hope, and the ancient fear. The hurdle I keep falling over...

Lost and Found (Poetry) - 6/1/2007 7:58:38 AM
know this pain pouring write and you said it "of my own" know that we all have to grow it takes some of us longer than others but we will learn enjoyed this very very much peace

Lost and Found (Poetry) - 5/30/2007 10:34:35 PM
This one is very good, has a bite to it! Never let go of your hopes and dreams, this carries us all through the passages of life..... Be safe, Karen

Lost and Found (Poetry) - 5/30/2007 7:13:32 AM
Your hearts emotions flowed without obstruction through these lines. Excellant pen

Lost and Found (Poetry) - 5/30/2007 4:25:13 AM
For such a young poetess you have a strong grasp on feelings and expressing those feelings with honesty and a mingling of regret but always a hint of hope for love to come in the future. Very well done Jenn. hugs Fee

Lost and Found (Poetry) - 5/30/2007 3:40:04 AM
Jennifer, Very sad piece. Finding one's way to daylight becomes a task when the road only leads to the darkest paths. I like your comparison of thorns to barbed wire.

Thoughts (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 10:45:38 AM
cause thats they way love and life goes love these emotional pieces

Letting go (Poetry) - 5/27/2007 10:43:55 AM
wow the strength and powerr in these lines!!! once so sure"letting go" does that to a person brings insecurity from way back somewhere and toss it right in our got it down packed here great emotion felt

Letting go (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 4:35:10 PM
Letting go is more than a hard thing to do. Sometimes it can be impossible. Those with the heavy load walk quietly, recognizing the other ones - the ones like them with the empty eyes and heavy hearts. -j

Letting go (Poetry) - 5/26/2007 2:04:18 PM
Wise words from one so young, in this semi sonnet. Like how it builds with expectation, and ends with, two become one the the one becomes two...

Letting go (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 8:44:09 PM
The journey of life most certainly be cruel at times. A very poignant write, enjoyed this. Be safe, Karen

Letting go (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 8:34:28 AM
i agree the heartache comes clearly thru the words, which is what we all strive for, whatever emotion we hope to express

Letting go (Poetry) - 5/25/2007 2:21:23 AM
Heavy thoughts conveyed in deep images from the soul and heart. This kind of pain is only caused by heartache, hope it is not recent dear Jennifer. Hugs Fee

Thoughts (Poetry) - 5/20/2007 7:28:53 AM
A nice view of the thoughts carried within the mind, body, and soul where the emotions stay hidden at times... nice..... .....enjoyed, Art Sun...

Thoughts (Poetry) - 5/20/2007 5:44:44 AM
Well written. To live in the Now can be difficult...

Thoughts (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 11:57:03 PM
Interesting to say the least. A mind full of confusion and conflict..... Be safe, Karen

Thoughts (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 9:33:43 PM
Tension is felt through the lines. Well done.

Thoughts (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 8:41:20 PM

Thoughts (Poetry) - 5/16/2007 8:06:01 PM
Besutiful but also filled with pain and sadness. Fee

Understanding (Poetry) - 5/9/2007 7:22:40 PM
A pen of a concerned heart. well done

Understanding (Poetry) - 5/8/2007 6:06:40 PM
Okies, I wanna know your's aswell, seya in the park...

Understanding (Poetry) - 5/8/2007 9:33:08 AM
This really shows your resolve to understand.Beautiful

Understanding (Poetry) - 5/8/2007 3:53:58 AM
Compasioned plea for the opening of hearts doors to share the feelings too often kept private from ones in love. For one so young you do have a strong grasp of the intimacy and intriquesy of love. Very nice Jenn... Fee

The Weight of a Soul Tormented (Poetry) - 5/8/2007 3:50:05 AM
Painful write but one you can only take consolation in the fact that most of us have felt this way at least once if not many times in our lifes. The good news is that it signifies you are living life to the fullest and taking the time to love even if somtimes it hurts. Hugs Fee

The Weight of a Soul Tormented (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 8:38:41 PM
Ooooooo now that is bitter. Such a hurt as this should not happen. Look to better tomorrows...... Be safe, Karen

The Weight of a Soul Tormented (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 8:31:05 PM
You really made me feel the poems emotions.

The Weight of a Soul Tormented (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 7:11:33 PM
Things will get better have faith...Hugssssssss

The Weight of a Soul Tormented (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 6:57:56 PM
jennifer; what a wonderfull name, my sister's as well. keep your chin up girl, this too shall pass, and who know's perhaps something fabulous awaits you. :) :0 :) :0 :)

Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 2:14:41 PM
Go for it, life, we never know when our finale is, so why wait...

Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 7:32:26 AM
Very powerful

Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 5:17:47 AM
well written.neerja

Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 3:48:08 AM
Jennifer, The mind can be a powerful tool.

Far Away and Wondering (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 2:33:05 AM
A lot of questions but I am sure the recipiant of them will only want to hold on tight and never let go. hugs Fee

Sleepless (Poetry) - 5/7/2007 2:30:33 AM
Beautiful poem Jenn, really moving with longing for lost physical contact of love. Fee

Daydreams and Whispers (Poetry) - 5/5/2007 8:36:52 PM

Daydreams and Whispers (Poetry) - 5/5/2007 3:20:09 PM
Aww, a duvet wrap around poem...

Daydreams and Whispers (Poetry) - 5/4/2007 11:30:10 PM
A time to relax and enjoy the moment however long it may last. Enjoyed. Be safe, Karen

Daydreams and Whispers (Poetry) - 5/4/2007 6:50:38 PM
"Sooner or later love is gonna getcha, sooner or later love is gonna win!" (the grass roots)

Daydreams and Whispers (Poetry) - 5/4/2007 6:45:57 PM
Short and sweet, disproves the theory that short cannot capture romance easily. This says so much between the lines Jennifer. Very nice indeed. Fee

A Lovers Rambling (Poetry) - 4/13/2007 8:42:19 PM
So undecided, and although not alone, very lonely. Felt the sadness in your heart. Be safe, Karen

Taken (Poetry) - 4/13/2007 3:31:03 AM
The sad reality of love is when we give our heart and soul we expect and believe that we will get the same in return, sometimes this happens but more often then not it is just a dream.Well said Jenn Fee

nowhere (Poetry) - 4/13/2007 3:29:02 AM
great little write with a great message or perhaps a life lesson for reason overides insanity Fee

nowhere (Poetry) - 4/13/2007 2:40:02 AM
Jennifer, You're so right but it does give one a sense of relief.

Time after Time (Poetry) - 4/12/2007 10:01:36 AM
Intriquing thoughts.

Time after Time (Poetry) - 4/12/2007 7:26:20 AM
Don't be in a hurry to depart. Your pen holds promise.

Time after Time (Poetry) - 4/11/2007 4:42:45 PM
Brave step, as one may miss the relationship, but not the person..

Secrets (Poetry) - 4/10/2007 9:46:55 AM
Wow. This is certainly worthy of thought, Jennifer. Thank you. Love and peace to you, Regis

Secrets (Poetry) - 4/9/2007 3:22:02 AM
Jennifer, Very vulnerable piece.

Secrets (Poetry) - 4/9/2007 12:56:35 AM
Good poetry, it leaves a mystery with it, that has the feeling that one has been betrayed, and holding a lid on the volcanic emotions... Clever poetry..

Secrets (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 6:51:15 PM
This reads of secrets that betray trust and love, it is those secrets that keep one within the graps of fear and shame.... nice work on this expression of thought through poetry... nice... Art Sun...

Secrets (Poetry) - 4/8/2007 4:31:15 PM
Power is in secrets and what we manage not to show. Somtimes sharing hearts and feelings is good at other times it leaves us vunerable to attack if the things don't work. Fee

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 10:34:39 PM
Daydreaming is what so many enjoy doing, but lack the time. Enjoyed this much. Be safe, Karen

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 3:38:39 PM
I spent my day like this, but with a note book and pen, it's funny how ideas spring into ones mind when we're day dreaming, most of the best inventions and art came from day dreamers....

Within (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 6:22:34 AM
this one really reflects your ageless wisdom, though as you say in your profile you are only young, you have from the poems I have read pouring from your heart learned lessons that most don't often challenge. Fee

Daydream (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 6:17:58 AM
Sweet brings to mind youth and laying in fields of clover with someone special trying to pick our cloud figures. Great word picture Fee

Too far away (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 3:02:33 AM
Jennifer, Very beautiful and doting write. You've captured love and caring perfectly.

Rapture in the Moonlight (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 2:45:20 AM
Sweetly sensual as a young lovers first time. Jennifer I can the sweet picture of beauty this write paints. Hugs fee

Too far away (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 2:42:56 AM
Jennifer this write is as open as a book and the heart of and love for is offered with a desire to capture and always hold the feelings of the moment. Well done. Fee

Only Forever (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 2:33:11 AM
Well expressed and new age but love is always in style and the dreamsof love forever echo the romantics of all ages. Very nice sentiments and enjoyable read Jennifer. Thank you for sharing this part of your heart. Fee

Only Forever (Poetry) - 4/6/2007 2:32:01 AM
Jennifer, That's what most of us want my friend and for forever can be for a long long time.

A Letter so Long Ago Written (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 12:07:58 PM
Oh Jane, so beautiful, yet so sad. Dreams of the past, locked away until after dark,enjoyed. Be safe, Karen

To: My Son (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 4:58:27 AM
A very special child with a very special mother, words that describe what a heart must feel. Fee

Spirit (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 4:56:43 AM
Beautiful self defining write that speaks openly from the heart. The dancer is the symbol of fluid art in our world and this write personifies her. Fee

Silent haunting (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 4:55:01 AM
The emotional roller coaster of feelings that occur in any strong love encounters is often confusing to say the least, and yes your descriptives of "Haunting, overwhelming, confused, scared" are all part of the magic of love. You did a wonderful job of this one Jenn. Fee

A Letter so Long Ago Written (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 4:51:41 AM
I like the way you offered this insight into a love that though shared by only two captures the loves of many like it. Sweet, simple but full of intensity of young romance. I like this one a lot. Fee

A Letter so Long Ago Written (Poetry) - 3/30/2007 2:26:19 AM
Jennifer, Sweet Dreams. " Parting is such sweet sorrow." Just thought I'd add-lib a little. (lol) Seriously, beautiful dreams and exquisite feelings.

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