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Life Understood... (Short Story) - 3/21/2009 8:56:57 PM|
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Diablo (Short Story) - 3/21/2009 8:55:00 PM
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Diablo (Short Story) - 8/14/2007 11:17:27 AM
Very descrptive write! Very well done -- however, I'm left with questions such as, why did you not end the story after the word, "loathed"?
By adding, "yet I couldnt let myself accept my fate. In a way, I am Diablo." it leads me to believe that you did something to change your situation. What did you do? And how are you, like Diablo?
In any event, I still liked this powerfully descriptive story! Good work!
Life Understood... (Short Story) - 6/24/2007 8:46:13 PM
i've always wondered why people take their own lives and what goes through their minds when they are actually in the process. this seems an accurate description to me. what an awesome sense of self one person must get when one is about to take their own life. i wonder if one never feels more alive in a way.
Diablo (Short Story) - 6/24/2007 8:27:04 PM
i really enjoyed reading this story. i felt as if i got a glimpse into the mind of the author and his inner demons. the vividity and the detail in the story guide the reader clearly through the story until the end when one wonders, is it a real person who is chasing him, a demon, or himself? very thought provoking and dark.
Life Understood... (Short Story) - 6/24/2007 6:15:18 PM
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Psychological Thoughts (Article) - 8/14/2007 10:53:49 AM
I enjoyed this article, young man! You have passion -- and you will most certainly grow stronger, mentally and spiritually, if you consciously chart and use a personal life-guide plan as your guide. Be flexible, changing and adapting when necessary, yet never forgetting your guest/goal. Remember, that you must also listen to your heart when pursuing your dreams. Don't forget that man is of triune nature -- mental, physical, AND spiritual. What YOU think of yourself is important, yet be not egotistical. Be the best YOU, that you can be! And -- keep on writing!
My confession (Poetry) - 6/13/2008 11:22:06 AM
Very Tight & Emotional Piece. Keep doing them Confessions like Usher bro! Take Care & Be Easy.
My confession (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 8:39:50 PM
in the beginging he hints at something about love or sex or maybe lust then he comes right out and says it. to me it becomes very transparent and honest. the first part is how is would like my love to think about me and the second part is how is hope he would never become. but it is honest.
My confession (Poetry) - 6/24/2007 7:41:00 PM