Recent Reviews for Jayne Dough
Solitary Confinement (Short Story) - 1/8/2008 8:47:52 AM|
This story is chilling. I can't imagine how this woman will survive until tomorrow, let alone for the duration of her sentence. I don't know how you know the details. This story grabs the mind and doesn't let go. Great work.
Solitary Confinement (Short Story) - 4/18/2007 8:51:59 PM
Excellent story! Well done! :)
A Mother's Prayer (Poetry) - 9/14/2008 8:53:42 AM
Sad but beautiful Jayne. If this does not touch the Lord, what will?
Domestic Violence (Poetry) - 8/30/2008 4:16:13 PM
Felt the whole thing, been there, he still envades my space.
This Moment (Poetry) - 5/15/2008 9:36:26 AM
Chilling but Awesome - God Bless You!
The Rose (Poetry) - 2/6/2008 7:31:26 PM
Wonderful expression of inner growth, determination and hope for the future. Kudos to you!
Cocaine (Poetry) - 11/29/2007 7:34:41 AM
Bad memories, scary trip...e
Only My Father (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 1:56:54 PM
Jayne, I could cry with you, reading this. God bless you and keep you in His love and in His path. You are so right, that He has not left your side and so right that He knows each tear. Not only does He know them, He keeps them. You are precious to Him.
Guilty (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 1:52:58 PM
Know what this makes me think of? The devil, who is called the Accuser in the Bible, hurling accusations at me, pointing out every sin and weighing me down with condemnation and my guilt. I squirm before his piercing words and hang my head in defeat and self-hatred.
Thank God, the blood of Jesus Christ my Savior, covers my sin and sets me free, and I am declared not guilty before my God!
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 1:45:02 PM
OMG, this is heartbreaking! You write so convincingly; well done!
A Mother's Prayer (Poetry) - 10/23/2007 1:39:04 PM
Just beautiful. A poem/prayer that reveals the yearning you have to be with your beloved children. You have put them in God's hands, the best place for them and for you.
Cocaine (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 8:34:19 AM
A tense, difficult atmosphere.
And a question that remains unanswered.
Interesting piece of writing.
This Moment (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 6:16:24 AM
Excellent write. Enjoyed very much. Understand those words Lady J
Guilty (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 6:14:15 AM
Well, put. Lady J
That Is You (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 6:12:16 AM
Well done, I liked this. Lady J
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 4/21/2007 6:07:45 AM
Your talent for expression is great. I enjoy writings when they are shorter yet all that is said, says it all. Very good. Lady J
This Moment (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 9:26:52 PM
"...over the course of broken years." Flowing metaphors, melodic words. Lovely.
This Moment (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 2:05:31 PM
WHAT A WELL WRITTEN POEM FROM THE HEART
But a Mem'ry (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:25:43 PM
Good write left with a good question. Lady J
Her (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:23:39 PM
Sad write about the inner sadness many of us have carried. Lady J
The Rose (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:20:52 PM
Nice inner reflection. Lady J
A Mother's Prayer (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:19:31 PM
Good write, lot's of feeling of seperation. Lady J
Mem'ries (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:17:53 PM
Good rhythm and rhyme and good words. Lady J
Only My Father (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:16:52 PM
Well done and well taken. I loved the line "yet again I traded right for wrong" Lady J
Seasons Change (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:14:24 PM
Enjoyed this. I know that moment when you just don't know the person anymore or more so I guess for me they didn't really want to know me. Lady J
Return (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:11:33 PM
Tells of the uncertainy of the heart after time seems have brought more distances then the miles. Good words. Lady J
Only a Child (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:09:10 PM
Good write and express of this. Lady J
Alone in the Dark (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 1:00:19 PM
very evocative write! enjoyed much
But a Mem'ry (Poetry) - 4/20/2007 12:44:28 PM
well written poem! thankyou for sharing
Living Hell (Poetry) - 4/19/2007 4:34:43 AM
Home is where one hangs his hat. Very effective writing.
Living Hell (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 11:48:49 PM
So very bitter and angry, a sad write.
Living Hell (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 7:51:19 PM
Welcome To Club,i.e. We All have Cross To Bare Sum More Than Others!
If You Made It Thus Far If You Get Back Up After You Fall You As I Will Make It To The (Your) End...
Now You Should Turn Around Walk Away Never Look Back..
Credit For Outstanding Write...
Domestic Violence (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 5:50:48 PM
The memories of D.V. remains as does the memories of our childhood. Learning to live with the past and making a new future is hard. Lady J
Living Hell (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 5:47:06 PM
well, done here. For the grace of God at 16, there go I. I see you are new, I'd like to welcome you and look forward to your journey here. Lady J
Living Hell (Poetry) - 4/18/2007 5:46:37 PM
loved it, are you shure you wernt mary magdaline in a past life...
read my poem emmanuels life 2007...
tell me what you think,