Recent Reviews for Candace M Ho
Wannabe (Short Story) - 9/5/2009 10:45:24 AM|
This is a fine short story, Candace. I shall simply echo what the others have written before me. Thank you for sharing. Love and best wishes,
Clunkers (Short Story) - 6/26/2007 7:50:49 PM
Fabulous story! I love the way it appeals to all the senses.
Dancing With Ghosts (Short Story) - 6/19/2007 1:14:34 AM
Candace, you have such talent. You put life and colours into your characters!
Clunkers (Short Story) - 6/16/2007 10:58:07 PM
YOu have a definite way of grasping a moment. You and Jean Pike have a lot in common. Bravo Cadance you havea bright future ahead of you.
Dancing With Ghosts (Short Story) - 6/16/2007 10:49:53 PM
I fell into a trance while reading, finding myself captivated by your use of soothing discriptions. You taught me some things here, Excellant read....look forward to reading more....
Wannabe (Short Story) - 6/16/2007 10:40:25 PM
Tis the eve of fathers day, and I've been dadnapped. Snuck away to vist the Den. Candance, Wow is and over used pharse so how about, WOWOWOWOWOW....great job! I agree with Jerry and Jean but add, moving, gripping, spell binding....
Wannabe (Short Story) - 6/14/2007 4:03:54 PM
Jean Pike is so perceptive, isn't she? I want to say words like raw, honest real, rhythm, beauty and sadness too because she got them all right. I want the girl in the story to be an iswhatsheis instead of a wannabe because her ownself is wonderfully poignant. Wonderful look at someone who will become a powerful person.
Dancing With Ghosts (Short Story) - 6/14/2007 3:14:47 PM
I'm just going to say I share Jean's thoughts on this, Candace, a very different write...Jerry
Dancing With Ghosts (Short Story) - 5/27/2007 4:39:12 PM
Eerily beautiful, Candace. Filled with the energy of first love, the pain of final loss. The ending chilled me.
Wannabe (Short Story) - 5/6/2007 4:22:17 PM
Very powerful writing; raw and honest and real. Rhythm and beauty and sadness, all rolled into an incredible piece of fiction. Wonderful!
Screaming barefeet (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 4:19:13 PM
I find you poetry most engaging, Candace. Thank you! Love and best wishes to you,
Screaming barefeet (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 3:39:06 PM
It has a feeling of the Phoenix rising from the Ashes
And sometimes it takes real courage and blind faith to keep walking
on in the face of undaunting adversity
Blink Blink (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 2:42:51 PM
Very nice. This is certainly more than a fucking blink. Enjoyed.
Jamais Vu (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 2:40:26 PM
Blink Blink (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 10:39:17 AM
There is a depth of emotions and powerful feelings expressed within these verses, Candace. To me, it is almost "palpable." Love and best wishes,
Falling (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 10:37:53 AM
This poem reaches right into my soul, Candace; I can relate. Love and peace and best wishes,
Jamais Vu (Poetry) - 9/5/2009 10:36:54 AM
French being my first language, your title caught my attention. I was intrigued by "jamais vu" meaning "never seen." When I read your poem, I can see how it all relates. Thank you for sharing, Candace. Love and best wishes,
Media Flaw (Poetry) - 3/4/2008 10:17:48 AM
This is fine poetry, Candace; it packs a lot of meaning. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Media Flaw (Poetry) - 8/22/2007 6:10:13 PM
Candace, this is a brilliant piece of poetry. So meaningful. Like Jerry, I liked the analogy of the candle. You, my friend, are wise beyond your years.
Media Flaw (Poetry) - 6/23/2007 8:35:42 PM
I especially like the analogy of the slow-burning candle and the truth at the ends, but the entire poem is deeply poignant and meaningful...well-done, Candace...Jerry
Media Flaw (Poetry) - 6/21/2007 5:28:17 PM
You have an ear for the structure and a nice flow to your use of language. Very nice.
Media Flaw (Poetry) - 6/21/2007 12:12:47 PM
Wonderfully deep. A profound look into our souls, what motivates us? Great Poem...I bet your got a very good mark with this one... Great Job!
Steps (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 7:07:25 PM
I felt your emotions as you walked the halls remembering the love. It may have seemed like a ghost as you walked along the corridors. Ghost that waft in the halls gliding through your memories. Love is like that when we miss that special someone. Great write Cadence!
Constant[ine] star. (Poetry) - 6/20/2007 6:59:09 PM
Very moving and thought provoking. It moves me to sadness. You did an excellent job of portraying a feeling of helplessness. If this was a personal poem related to an experience in your own life you did an outstanding job of demonstrating your feelings. I canít wait for your next works.
Constant[ine] star. (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 8:42:26 AM
These are very meaningful and thought-eliciting verses, Candace. Thank you for sharing them. Love and best wishes,
Steps (Poetry) - 6/17/2007 8:34:33 AM
I can completely relate to these feelings, Candace. This is a compelling write. Thank you for sharing it. Love and best wishes to you,
Constant[ine] star. (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 3:10:42 PM
Good writing and thoughts, Candace. The truth is,I think, that we all have rough lives--no learning without mistakes--no wisdom without pain. Who was it, Thoreau or Walden, who wrote that most men lead lives of quiet desperation. I have to comment that sometimes the whole world against you and me is really you and me against the whole world--we struggle against the yoke...Jerry
Steps (Poetry) - 6/14/2007 3:05:29 PM
I felt the sweet melancholy as I read this, Candace. All the steps of our lives are somewhat like this. Sometimes when I, too, have been introspective, people have told me I think too much. Keep thinking and remembering anyway--you're on the road to love...Jerry