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Recent Reviews for Jennave Belleu Coz


Jen's Den (Short Story) - 9/22/2007 1:51:01 PM
Have you found him yet? Yes, good for you. No, he's right around the corner. Kathy

Jen's Den (Short Story) - 9/22/2007 10:16:23 AM
Great start, keep it up! Peace, Dan

Jen's Den (Short Story) - 9/21/2007 8:49:00 PM
Perhaps "from solitude to favorable reply" is exactly the direction we should all go to find more light in our lives. Enjoyed teh simple truth of this work. My very best Chris

Jen's Den (Short Story) - 9/21/2007 3:36:57 PM
Sure seems interesting to contemplate Jen but are these your lines or others and if others maybe you should list them. I think the lines are excellant regardless. Hugs Fee

Friends Of Mine (Short Story) - 9/19/2007 4:02:02 PM
Your freinds will "always" know that they are thoguht about. Your freindship can span many miles and still be felt. My very best Chris

Friends Of Mine (Short Story) - 9/19/2007 6:39:25 AM
The tinkling of the wind chimes evokes many pleasant and wonderful memories. When I hear mine, I remember where we were, when we bought them and the beautiful weekend my husband and I spent together. Am thinking, you could also have posted this in poetry - the images and write are excellent. Kathy

Friends Of Mine (Short Story) - 9/19/2007 3:17:16 AM
You are sweet Jen, I know they will miss you....But hey, Adventure awaits. Walt

Friends Of Mine (Short Story) - 9/18/2007 10:10:36 AM
Very nice, Jen. From someone who loves windchimes I really enjoyed...windchimes always seem to carry the memory of summer days at the lake or seaside cottage. Well done. Fee

Greatest Days (Short Story) - 9/17/2007 2:11:41 PM
Alovely write that smiles with the fond memories that will continue in your heart far into the future. I always enjoy the simplicity but open honesty of your writes Jen. Thank you for sharing so much of your heart Hugs and good luck in your move... Fee

Greatest Days (Short Story) - 9/17/2007 1:20:52 PM
It is truly from above that our real fullness is felt. The love of freindship and the love of one special person or partner fill in the "life" moments and bring fulfillment to our daily lives. This is a wonderful work of transition and realization. Another good work Jen. My very best wishes Chris

Have I Called (Short Story) - 9/15/2007 9:56:21 AM
I hope life does go your way Jen. Lovely work. Another keeper on a long list of wonderful writing. My very best to you Chris

Have I Called (Short Story) - 9/14/2007 7:58:44 PM
Beautiful Jen...simply beautiful Fee

See Her Dance (Short Story) - 9/14/2007 3:19:50 AM
Standing "O"..... I waltzed through this as I read along. I loved this one soooooo early in the morning. Best wishes Chris

See Her Dance (Short Story) - 9/13/2007 1:15:09 PM
Jen, a wonderful painting of changing seasons. Well done,love. Peace, Dan

See Her Dance (Short Story) - 9/13/2007 11:40:50 AM
The beauty of this write is spellbinding as you cover the change of the season with such passion and caring. Well done Jen. hugs Fee

See Her Dance (Short Story) - 9/13/2007 11:14:29 AM
Wonderful write, Jen; very well done! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your Tx. friend, Karen Lynn. :D

Slow Simmer (Short Story) - 9/7/2007 3:59:01 PM
Hmmmnnn what flavor Jello? I like the lime. Fee

Smoothly Go (Short Story) - 9/5/2007 11:10:47 AM
I agree with Felix. However, it has taken me 5 minutes to stop choking and laughing! thank you, thank you, thank you for making my day sooooo much better with this poem. I'm off to get ice cream best regards, Chris

Slow Simmer (Short Story) - 9/5/2007 11:05:27 AM
A GREAT mental picture! Memories, memories, memories...... Thank you, Best regards, Chris

Slow Simmer (Short Story) - 9/5/2007 8:23:55 AM
Cute! :)

Enigmatic Yen (Short Story) - 9/4/2007 5:59:46 PM
Your words ccnjure up sweet scents of romance amongst loves yearning. Nicely done. Dan

Smoothly Go (Short Story) - 9/4/2007 5:29:34 PM
very hot and I think the medicine may not be all that bad depending on who is holding the spoon. hugs Fee

Enigmatic Yen (Short Story) - 9/4/2007 5:25:58 PM
I love this: Don't call me friend Devour me Marvelous Man In that place between the trees Very sensual and it made me think of a man I would love to be devoured by! Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

Enigmatic Yen (Short Story) - 9/4/2007 5:18:23 PM
stand face to face without a trace laws desist as desires wish and when the moon glows blue reach for me as I reach for you... Your stunning work so inspired triggered this automatic quick reply, hugs Fee

Enigmatic Yen (Short Story) - 9/4/2007 4:52:30 PM
Passion rulez~ Very well done, Jennave! :) (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Leaving Town (Article) - 9/25/2007 4:04:37 AM
Letting go go the physical is so very difficult and heart wrenching. The place we have called home has been our sanctuary and place of thought. But, your AD family stands behind you and wishes you God speed in your new adventure. I continue you hold you in my prayers every day and hope your journey is safe. My very, very best to you Jen. Chris

Leaving Town (Article) - 9/24/2007 5:09:37 PM
Kissing the past goodbye is hard, but saying hello to tomorrow - pretty darn scarry, but oh so inviting. Look out world. Here she comes! Kathy

Call Me Crazy (Article) - 9/15/2007 9:58:25 AM
Exceptional.... "nor reaching beyond there..." It would be nice to grab hold of a dream sometime and not want to go beyond that point. Enjoyed this write. Thanks My very best Chris

His Love Has Gone (Article) - 9/4/2007 2:42:20 PM
Jen, a beautiful tribute, thanks for sharing, Peace, Dan

His Love Has Gone (Article) - 9/4/2007 5:00:59 AM
Beautifully written tribute to the remembrance and respect of someone you loved. Although my heart is sad at your loss, my spirit is lifted beacause of your words. My best wishes, Chris

His Love Has Gone (Article) - 9/4/2007 12:04:18 AM
A beautiful, lovin, carin, heartfelt write! LOVE YA! Sissy SC

Beauty (Article) - 9/1/2007 5:28:38 PM
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder. I am glad I have good eyes because this piece is beautiful. Thnak you once again for youability to draw me into your words. Thanks, Chris

Beauty (Article) - 9/1/2007 4:52:18 PM
Beautiful Words from the Earth Angel! LOVE Sissy

Beauty (Article) - 8/31/2007 10:45:17 AM
Such feminine aspirations...Beauty soars with this Hallmark verse...be well always Belleu Flower. Sage

Beauty (Article) - 8/31/2007 7:55:42 AM
Takes my breath and stills my heart for a few seconds to read such a lovely piece of art as this. Well done. fee

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 1/4/2009 3:53:58 PM
lovely work here...concise, yet filled with emotion.

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 11/1/2008 3:58:38 PM
Wonderful thoughts! Praise GOD! JMD

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 3/11/2008 6:32:45 AM
Lovely poem; haven't heard from you in some time - are you still writing poetry. I hope you are well. best, michael

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 11/29/2007 5:50:29 PM
This gives a good feeling of warm, familiar love...Jerry

The Invitation (Poetry) - 10/10/2007 10:11:33 AM
Oh, Jen, this is magnificent! There's more to this poem than meets the eye. God's reminder that He loves us and will take care of us. Kathy

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/10/2007 9:56:09 AM
Ain't love grand? Kathy

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 6:53:05 PM
Top write Mrs Quickly....

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 5:15:46 AM
So pure this will----(beautiful) * love Ted

The Invitation (Poetry) - 10/6/2007 5:05:09 AM
Yes Jen, lovely verse. Walt

The Invitation (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 11:09:20 PM
STriking image created with the strokes of your pen on every line on this story/poem that captures the imagination of the romantics in all of us. Lovely Jen. hugs Fee

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 10:36:16 PM
Jen, Welcome back, I've missed you! Hope you're well???? Beautiful write, well done. (((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla.

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 8:53:00 PM
Excellent write, Jennave; very well done! Nice to see you here! You'v been missed! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :)

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 7:21:45 PM
Lips, Hips, Or Quips...good to see you writing agin. Are you on the road yet? Walt

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 5:17:46 PM
Very beautiful! love holly

Call Me Quickly (Poetry) - 10/5/2007 5:12:30 PM
Very nicely done indeed and when love is real how true these sentiments react with the heart and mind to make a comfortable embrace in just a glance across such a room. Hugs \Fee

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 10/1/2007 10:46:48 AM
How shall you love..... With honesty of spirit and fullness of heart. Speak clearly and without hesitation and let the world know how you feel. Well done and enjoyable work. My very best to you Chris

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 3:34:17 PM
nice work... an expressive display of thought..... nice... Art Sun...

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 11:56:51 AM
nice, dan

Cracked Cake (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 11:55:04 AM
I'd a eaten the cake or pie, that's just the way I am. Cheers, Dan

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 11:52:57 AM
Excellent write...and excellent way to remember. Peace, Dan

Cracked Cake (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 7:01:02 AM
Keep your heart close to the cake. What frosting do you use on your heart Jen? This is a wonderful write. Only make pie when you are done eating the cake! My very best regards, Chris

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/30/2007 6:53:38 AM
Give to the ONE who will revcieve you...... Give to the ONE who will revive you.... Thanks to the ONE who gives you life... As ususal Jen, you bring me on a wonderful pathway. My very best Chris

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/29/2007 12:06:51 AM
i cannot decide whether he is a dream or a love who has died and visits from time to time but either way it is beautiful you paint the awkwardness of love and making moves so well... the inner workings of the mind while working out how to get his attention in a non threatening way... beatiful =)

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/28/2007 9:18:30 AM
The departure of a loved one - lives on in the heart. Remember that love and all it was, but remembering that tomorrow offers a bright future. Love, Kathy

Cracked Cake (Poetry) - 9/28/2007 8:45:28 AM
Naw, show your cracks. He'll still like you. Kathy

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/28/2007 5:38:14 AM
A wonderful way with words every time you write. George

Cracked Cake (Poetry) - 9/28/2007 5:31:36 AM
Clever write. Keep the cake and cover the crack with icing. :>) George

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/28/2007 5:14:10 AM
Reach for the sky. George

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 11:37:54 PM
A wonderful display of how love can play with another's emotions.... Be safe, Karen

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 10:33:57 PM
Hold fast to your dreams, dear one. Walt

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 9:08:09 PM
Jen, GORGEOUS, exquisitely tender write, my (((friend))), well done. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 8:51:07 PM
A captivating poem of romantic moments that play in the mind... Beautiful write,Jen! Love, ET

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 7:28:21 PM
Beautiful write, Jenn; well done! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

How Shall I... (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 5:56:48 PM
Poignant and achingly beautiful questions that all who love in an uncertain relationship ponder...you nailed the hearts pondering on this one... Fee

Cracked Cake (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 1:42:29 PM
My mother always said if a cake cracks it's more moist! Don't know but your poem was clever Jen.

Cracked Cake (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 1:30:16 PM
At least you can cook! I can, but I don't like to. I'd rather eat out, let someone else do the cookin' for me! LOL Well done, Jennave! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Cracked Cake (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 1:24:22 PM
Aw, Jen, All he'll care about is that you made it with your own two hands. :) 'Nuff said. :) Who cares if it's cracked: ain't we all? LOL Well done. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 12:45:53 PM
Open. Open. Open up to what God has to offer, and, yes, hold it dear. Kathy

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 12:34:48 PM
Yes, that's an Angel alright. blessings, holly

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 10:13:11 AM
Beautiful write, Jennave; brava! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Be An Angel (Poetry) - 9/27/2007 9:43:51 AM
Swee.....t write my dear friend. hugs Fee

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 7:56:51 PM
Right here, yup right is here, yup wanna be driven right through....

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 10:37:20 AM
excellent poetry Jen, in your famillar style

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 7:47:13 AM
Jen, Another wonderful work of love and anticipation. May your jouney be a short one to the realization of this hope. Your heart would be a tresure for anyone to cherish. My best wishes Chris

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 5:14:27 AM
Oh Jen with the heart of this poem incased in your kindness he can not be too far away that is forsure. hugs Fee

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/26/2007 5:10:00 AM
Touching poem Jen, all the best to you my friend, love holly

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 8:03:18 PM
Sounds like you're about to drive-into a 'right' Mr. Right. No turning back, no turning back. Kathy

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 7:21:11 PM
Jen, I'm still looking for my Mr. Right...sighhhhhhhhhhh...well done! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Mister Right (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 6:56:29 PM
Nice little number you have penned, Jennave; very well done! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Sweet Child Of Mine (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 12:56:13 PM
Special as are children, you give us a sense of how many of them there are that need our loving care. Thanks for sharing Jen! Love, Eileen

Sweet Child Of Mine (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 12:22:33 PM
We are all God's children. Sheish, I have so many questions for Him. Your answer -- "fear not, you will be fine" makes me a bit sad. Sad in the sense that so often I don't feel fine even though in my heart I know He's taken care of everything. Such a wonderful and inspiring prayer, Jen. Love, Kathy

Sweet Child Of Mine (Poetry) - 9/25/2007 4:07:49 AM
Jen, This piece flows with the love in your heart. Always stop to speak with the child who's questions will always be honest and open. My very best Chris

Sweet Child Of Mine (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 11:23:02 PM
This entire piece is just wonderful, filled with so much love and adoration.... Be safe, Karen

Sweet Child Of Mine (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 7:13:34 PM
Jen, Precious! We are His children, He is our Abba Father. :) Well done. (((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla.

Sweet Child Of Mine (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 5:38:48 PM
nice thoughts....it is so nice to be like a child of a child...inspiration comes from a hand me down... nice work..... Art Sun...

Sweet Child Of Mine (Poetry) - 9/24/2007 5:34:52 PM
Very moving and the questions of a child must be answered by the wisdom of experience by parents...not with lies or platitudes that diminsih the real truth. Excellant work here Jen. Fee

Moonlight's Son (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 7:17:22 PM
Beautiful, Jen, simply beautiful. Please come get this howling mutt. Walt

Moonlight's Son (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 12:35:37 PM
Moonlight's son - Sunshine's delight! Jen, This is beautiful. Even though you say you're less afraid, you've overcome that and are now moving FORWARD, cautiously. Such a treasure you will both win, as the friendship pledge moves forward into the realm of "what's to be, will be". Thank you [you know for what]. God continue to bless you, Kathy

Moonlight's Son (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 10:11:13 AM
A sweet and wonderful write for your friend, well done. Cheers, Dan

Moonlight's Son (Poetry) - 9/23/2007 6:14:57 AM
OMG! Jen, this is BEAUTIFUL>>>> "splashing water to wet my dress" Everything here is just perfectly put to word. Your freind is lucky indeed to have you write like this... My very best to you this day... Chris

Moonlight's Son (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 8:47:25 PM
Jen, This is stunningly imaged and penned; well done! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Moonlight's Son (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 8:41:17 PM
Beautiful imagery Jen! Your friend will love it... Spiritually uplifting... Love, Eileen

Moonlight's Son (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 7:03:09 PM
Sweet write and I got almost feel myself sitting on a driftwood log on the shore watching you dance in the water. Fee

Falling (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 1:53:31 PM
Falling --- in love? Kathy

Falling (Poetry) - 9/22/2007 7:51:38 AM
An humbling write. George

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 8:40:20 PM
Jen, what you said in your mail, I'm so very touched. This is eloquent and ever so beautiful,I'm saving it. Thank you! Love, Eileen

Falling (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 5:29:00 PM
Jenn, Can Bluette come with you on your journey? It seems she likes you more than me now. If you read to her she may just wimper instead of all this damned howling she's doing.. Walt

Falling (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 3:38:08 PM
AS always stunning images that touch the heart and mind and stimulate the thought processes. Which is what good writing should do. hugs Fee

Falling (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 12:00:38 PM
Simply written and beautiful in words. I loved the ending..."Come to meet you....willingly". Uplifting to the spirit and warming to the heart. Thank you for another journey.... My very best wishes Chris

Falling (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 12:00:25 PM
How easily your spirit fills this page and shares with us a beautifully inspired message! Thank you Jen! Love, Eileen

Falling (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 11:29:25 AM
...few words...speak many...falling thoughts of winters chill...find me lifted in this season. enjoyed... John

Falling (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 11:05:13 AM
Jen, As it should be. This is falling I don't mind. :) Beautiful: so much so, I'm putting this into my library to remind me again and again. Thank you for blessing me today! (((HUGS))), love and prayer, Karla.

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 8:40:09 AM
I like this form Jenn...youjust keep getting better Walt

First Rain To Fall (Poetry) - 9/21/2007 8:21:46 AM
great stuff Jen. Walt

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 8:36:20 PM
Jen, Compassion and love ring in every heartfelt word: well done. Pray YOU'RE well, (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 6:41:02 PM
This is just precious, very spiritual and inspirational.... Be safe, Karen

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 6:19:42 PM
Very lovely as usual, Jen, this is ever so peaceful. Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 6:14:47 PM
As always Jen your poetry is loving and kind and usually aimed at someone you find special. Fee

First Rain To Fall (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 6:09:01 PM
Jen, Rain is angels tears of cleansing energy...I love the rain. Thank you for such a beautiful poem. Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 2:54:22 PM
Eloquently written Jen. Your writing always brings inspiration. I agree with Kathy that your verses look like dove's wings in flight. "She seeks to share him", words of tenderness and love. I enjoyed this very much. My very best Chris

Ode To The Lady (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 2:10:27 PM
Your words [the format] look like a dove flying away as your words take flight. Awesome! Kathy

First Rain To Fall (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 1:34:41 PM
Jen, such a lovely description of rain. It is indeed God's watering can. Blessings, Kathy

First Rain To Fall (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 12:41:07 PM
Sweet music of nature presented by our friend Jen...well done. Fee

First Rain To Fall (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 12:17:24 PM
Wonderful to get rain when it is needed, isn't it? Well done!

First Rain To Fall (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 11:45:34 AM
What a nice rhythm--You make'em nice nature music: Speaking of rain: got a ton of it yesterday here in Central Florida, it was really blowing in off the ocean. Have a nice first day of fall Jen!

First Rain To Fall (Poetry) - 9/20/2007 11:15:15 AM
A treat to hear someone else appreciate the first rain of the season. My posem is about it too;-) Isn't that fun;-)lol...I love to get a break from the constant sun here in northern California. I love rain,and watching storms,though I don't like seeing their destruction or people getting hurt. That's always the duality we have;-). Loved your poem! Love, Eileen

Mother (Poetry) - 9/19/2007 6:54:34 AM
A mother is love, not just a birth canal. You and she are blessed to have one another. Wish your Mom happy birthday and God's continued blessing to you, both. Kathy

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 5:54:37 PM
Beautiful, I'm sure your mom is smiling! Hugs, Laura

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 9:42:14 AM
I'm so glad you can be thankful for your stepmom and I'm sure she is pleased for your good wishes!Thanks for sharing! Love, Eileen

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 8:41:33 AM
Sweet birthday wish Jen. Walt

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 7:50:16 AM
Beautiful words of praise for all the mothers of the world. Fee

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 7:46:27 AM
Blessings to you and the Mom that raised you. Peace, Dan

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 7:40:19 AM
Wonderful to see a grateful heart! blessings, Holly

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 7:32:34 AM
A Happy birthday to your mother. Isn't it a great thing to have a mother who TOOK the time to love and care. She is also blessed that you TOOK the time to appreciate her for being your mom. This was very enjoyable to read. Thanks and very best wishes Chris

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 7:16:10 AM
Happy Birthday to your true Mother, the one that raised such a beautiful daughter..Blessings to her and to you Jen. Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

Mother (Poetry) - 9/18/2007 7:10:03 AM
Beautiful, Jen, she raised a loving daughter in you. I know she's proud. I'm proud of you, too! Well done. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 9:05:26 PM
Beautifully expressed! The knowing is a gift... Love, Eileen

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 7:58:47 PM
Love reciprocated does indeed overflow the heart. With each passing day, I look forward to your writing and beautiful heart. Kathy

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 11:34:51 AM
Well expressed words here. You are ready to give; it's up to the receiver to accept or deny the blessings you are ready to share. George

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 11:18:58 AM
Perfection, Jen. Well done! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 11:11:19 AM
Sometimes no matter how much we car, how much we love, how much we desire...all we can do is make the offer and hope it is returned to us.. hugs fee

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 10:44:13 AM
Beautiful writing.When we feel that other(s) who understands and can connect with us, then, our writing has fulfilled its purpose. In friendships we do not have to worry about first or last words, but, rather in the dialogue we share each time words are spoken. My very best to you Chris

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 10:21:58 AM
I'll second what Don said below, strong emotions conveyed,i do get that part of it.well writen indeed, stan

Up To You (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 10:05:10 AM
So well written, yet it seemss incomplete, perhaps a response from the intended, I don't know, but the one thing I do know is that it is damn good writing. Dan

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 9:04:14 AM
Nice write, Jen, I enjoyed. Thanks, Dan

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/17/2007 4:02:27 AM
Jen, I love the flow of this and the words are warming to the heart. Your heart shines in these verses and your pen sings of friendship born of best wishes. My very best to you this sunny morning, with hugs Chris

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 10:42:22 PM
A beautiful tribute from an angel.

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 2:44:48 PM
I love the way you did this tribute that I am sure Chris will cherish as a testament to your affection and appreciation of his friendship...I would. hugs fee

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 2:17:48 PM
Jen, This is beautiful. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 1:45:33 PM
very nice flowing and touching. Angela

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 1:12:23 PM
Beautiful write, Jen; very nice! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 12:12:44 PM
The ebb and flow of the words and length of the lines convey [to me] how is love changes every moment of every day, but always THERE! Kathy

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 10:59:25 AM
Perfectly written Jen, thanks for sharing, love holly

His Very Best (Poetry) - 9/16/2007 9:46:28 AM
Jen, very wonderfully written and a beautiful tribute to a very fine man. Thanks for sharing! Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 9:42:48 AM
The sense of yearning here is intense. Another well written work. My best regards, Chris

Desire (Poetry) - 9/15/2007 9:33:08 AM
Eloquent!!! "With snow's momentum.....a great picture for me to see and experience. "Still mine to give"....I love this realization that the emotions belong to you for the giving. I loooooved this work. My best regards Chris

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 3:18:37 PM
Such a dreamy and womanly write here Jen..oh the lengths we go to and the way we love and dream. Love, Taylor

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 2:12:26 PM
Well ma'am, I just plain liked this dark moody write. Thanks, Dan

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 1:37:58 PM
Beautiful, but sad. Expectations - what dreams are truly made of. Kathy

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 1:12:49 PM
Very moving poem that captures all too well the longing, the desire and the want of the love that can never be fulfilled except in dreams. well done Fee

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 12:34:27 PM
Romantic poem that makes the heart pine.

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 12:29:01 PM
Another beautiful poem, thank you for sharing, Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

To Speak Of Dreams And Things (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 11:45:32 AM
Beautiful, Jen, simply beautiful. Well done! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Desire (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 11:26:07 AM
...and as the snow purifies what's seen in shades of white on white, I'll wash my soul in the poet's words and my heart in your pleeasant dream. Very good Jen...love this concept. hugs Fee

Desire (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 10:22:30 AM
Quiet mellow; I like that, love Holly

Desire (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 9:58:31 AM
Lovely poem Jen, gentle and sweet.

Desire (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 9:43:14 AM
And, so comes love - small and slow, but growing with each day. A beautiful poem filled with expectation, Kathy

Beaches (Poetry) - 9/14/2007 3:17:18 AM
Mmmmm....reminds me of mid-night swims in the pool. "liquid moonshine", Terrific picture. Good way to start my day. Where did I leave that robe? Best wishes Chris

Beaches (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 7:43:46 PM
Seems enticing that is for sure, warm sands, cool waters, moonlight and passion in the air...who could ask for m ore. Fee

Spirit Of My Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 1:28:08 PM
And yet one day in the future your spirit will live again, and this hurt will pass, blessings, Holly

Spirit Of My Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 1:17:02 PM
it's a sad story you've told, but told quite well. peace, dan

Than I shall (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 12:18:11 PM
YAY, I knew I'd make it if I waited long enuff..lol

Than I shall (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 12:17:24 PM
Friends of that depth are a blessing to have and to know...and this write shows that to it's best design. Fee

Than I shall (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 12:16:59 PM
Jen, This is such a lovely poem from a lovely poet..take care and blessings to you. Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

Spirit Of My Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 11:55:08 AM
Very painful write sounds like betrayal of love and it's resulting anguish. Well done Jen. Fee

Than I shall (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 11:47:55 AM
Beautifully written. "I shall paint you...." a wonderful image with many hues. My very best Chris

Spirit Of My Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 11:22:01 AM
Very well expressed poem, Jen; very well done! BRAVA! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

What Face (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 10:42:54 AM
Jen, The face I see every time you write is yours. They say that the eyes are the mirror to the soul. I beleive your soul and spirit are found in your face. You have a beautiful face..... My very best Chris

Spirit Of My Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 9:22:57 AM
By the sound of this poem - love really got 'deep-sixed'. Sorry, Kathy

Spirit Of My Heart (Poetry) - 9/13/2007 9:16:44 AM
Jen, Words of love and loss expressed so well. "I shall send even the moon away" expresses the completness of separation. Thanks and best wishes Chris

What Face (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 5:21:41 PM
Poetry is communication... faces can portray a body style language all their own, laugher, anger, amusement all can be seen without a single word spoken Fee

What Face (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 2:02:24 PM
Yout poetry is a reflection of your face, your soul your heart, everything that makes you, whom you are. Peace, Dan

What Face (Poetry) - 9/12/2007 12:39:14 PM
I would hope they see YOUR face, Jen, because OF poetry. :) Beautifully stated. (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 11:48:54 AM
"Father God Master Keeper"-it is only He who can. Thank you for this one. With my best, Chris

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 11:18:58 AM
Very stirring and striking memorial to such a sad sad time. fee

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 10:44:55 AM
I like the ideal of "plan" it seems to make things easier somehow, nice write,jen stan

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 9:38:24 AM
He can, if we let Him Jen. Walt

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 9:22:02 AM
Jen, "Can You make us whole again?" I hope He will. :( Tears in your lines: well expressed sadness. (((((HUGS))))) and love, Karla. :(

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 9:07:12 AM
wonderful prayer, even greater is the question. peace, dan

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 9:02:09 AM
"Weeping" indeed is a masterpiece to me! So sadly and tenderly prayed, will always remember. Yes "father God Master Plan Can you make us whole again ?" So beautiful~this prayer in the heart. Thank you for sharing these lovely words here at the den. Sincerely, ~Gwendolyn A happy belated welcome to the den also, hope you enjoy your stay here.

Weeping (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 8:39:52 AM
>tears! <

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/11/2007 8:35:55 AM
You said it all so very well. Do keep smiling. Peace, Dan

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 11:45:54 PM
A smile can conquer even the most dismal of days and the worst of problems. Another one of God's gift to mankind. Get more with a little sugar than you do with lemons, right...... Be safe, Karen

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 8:56:39 PM
All Rome was conquered by a smile. Walt

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 4:37:08 PM
The smile can lead us to feel so many emotions, everything from gratification and release to humor and strength. There is no greater gift to brighten one's day, simply, and I believe that a smile always leaves a lasting impression. Well done, Jen. Jill

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 1:36:01 PM
(smile)

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 1:19:42 PM
One thing that I always love is a genuine smile! Thank you for such a gem of a poem.. Peace, Love, and Light, Amber "V"

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 12:59:12 PM
What a great follow up to our collaboration write, this one hits the mark for when a person smiles sincere it is a touch of human sunshine. Great write Jen. hugs Fee

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 12:30:35 PM
Yes, indeedy. A smile is a good thing. Well done! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 12:17:05 PM
A smile can wipe away all our troubles and fears. You portrayed the essence of a smile ~ beautifully. Keep smiling, ;) Kathy

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 12:07:27 PM
:) :) :) :) :) I love this positive attitude! Strength shines through your determined words to overcome. Good on ya, Jen! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. Thanks for the smiles. :)

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 12:05:20 PM
the power of a smile catchy, for sure to perk up even the gurmpiest or sourest among us ....nicely done, jen, stan

A Smile (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 11:50:04 AM
You did it again! Best poem I've ever read about the need to smile! Your short and sweet style is a smile! here's one for you ( sideways smile I guess: michael

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 5:41:00 AM
Excellent! "Just this once in our lifetime" I have enjoyed this for the third time. My best regards, Chris

Dread (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 5:33:53 AM
Let those fingers keep trying to dog out! Love is found in the most unobvious places and situations. I met someone at a yard sale and let my fingers scratch all the way to the top. I thank you once again for the clarity of your work and deep heartfelt emotion you use on the end of your pen. Best regards, Chris

He Didn't Even Kiss Her (Poetry) - 9/10/2007 5:31:08 AM
Jen, Wonderfully done. We all hope, in times of love found, that "Love is going to be...Different...This time. I am one of the lucky people who have found this to be true. God Bless, Chris

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:16:53 PM
Fee, and Jen, Bravo, very wonderfully collaborated! Peace, Love, and Light, AMber "V"

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 8:58:44 PM
A stunning collaboration, Jennave and Fee: excellence in verse. Well done! Yes. You two need to do this more often! Each of you stand alone, but together: magic! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 6:42:32 PM
A wonderful write Felix and Jen, enjoyed it very much. Thank you for sharing. Newfie Hugs, Rose

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 6:33:22 PM
good on both of you. dan

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 4:53:33 PM
A truly lovely duet in poetic syllables that fill the heart and inspire the soul. Enjoyed it very much. Aberjhani

Dread (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 4:35:24 PM
SAY WHAT? Walt

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 3:49:05 PM
Just wanted to thank Jen for such a lovely sharing of ideas and heart pulls as this offering captured the romantic nature of two hopeless romantics. Enjoyed working with you on this one Jen. hugs Fee

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 3:39:26 PM
excellent colaboration guys pretty....... Walt

The Poetic Gentleman And The Lady Jennave (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 3:34:18 PM
A dance of pens spin a duet in time with the rhymes of Romance. Chance and space erase the miles between two souls who feel the lash of hearts beating for Loves casement. Enjoyed

Dread (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 10:38:09 AM
We all share the need to feel love, and sense the spirit of its existence in a world often broken by screams. Hold on, cause it seems Love will eventually reign supreme.

Dread (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 10:02:25 AM
Intense and painful articulation, done quite well. Peace, Dan

He Didn't Even Kiss Her (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:56:10 AM
beautiful Jen especially loved the verse that started: "She was comparable to nothing..." what a sensational copliment to give anyone. Hugs fee

Dread (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:53:34 AM
Intense and aching feelings introduced as feelings of love are kept locked inside...yes they can be crushed but not sure if ever completly killed...sharp write. Fee

He Didn't Even Kiss Her (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:48:30 AM
Encouraging words from a friend are always a welcome sight to see, a holy gift. Blessings, holly

He Didn't Even Kiss Her (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 9:22:50 AM
A beautiful encouragement of romantic promises birth.

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 7:01:24 AM
Beauty personified in the written word Jen. Walt

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/9/2007 6:14:02 AM
The longing and lost love is so vividly expressed in this poem. Thank you for such beautiful words. Peace, Love, and Light, AMber "V"

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 10:19:05 AM
Love, lost, but remembered in a most loving way. This is truly sensitive and WONDERFUL! Blessings, Kathy

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 9:54:46 AM
This poem exemplifies the sadness and longing that goes along with losing a loved one, whether by the lover's choice or by death. Beautiful words, Jen. Jill

California Calling (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 9:20:12 AM
A polished version of a journey about to take place. Enjoyed. George

Touching (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 9:19:44 AM
now, that's touching. peace, dan

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 9:11:18 AM
sweet and gentle words. dan

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 7:47:43 AM
:) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) :) LOL You make me smile, Jen. :) :) :) :) :) ((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 6:39:40 AM
:) :) :) :) :) :) :)

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 6:28:58 AM
:))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))))

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 6:02:58 AM
Beautiful thoughts, blessings, Holly

Perpetual Spring (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 5:51:35 AM
Once again, you have shared the journey to self renewal with all of us that need to remember the steps to our personal freedom. Thank yo for your gift. Best wishes, Chris

Touching (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 5:48:58 AM
Beautiful thought put down for lasting memories. Which word would you choose? Hmmmm, now you have me thinking. Very best regards, Chris

California Calling (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 5:38:09 AM
The possibilities of love are always endless and promising. Sometimes slow at first and then with the "getting our feeet wet" time over, we continue to experience that love. Good luck on this journey. My very best Chris

California Calling (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 4:32:00 AM
Very moving, to love even as if only at first in friendship is often difficult and awkward but to have hope that somthing is possible if you give it a try is what sometimes starts great relationships. hugs Fee

If I Could See You Smile (Poetry) - 9/8/2007 4:29:26 AM
I know this is written to a past love but it was so pure and with such emotion that I could so put myself into that lovers shoes as he read this and cursed the day he lost you. I can almost feel him debating whether he could still manage to see you and be with you against the rules and against the odds. This is one hell of a write sweet Jen. hugs Fee

Touching (Poetry) - 9/7/2007 8:30:22 PM
Jen, Beautiful; hope everything is well? You're in Karen's and my prayers-- (((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Touching (Poetry) - 9/7/2007 7:57:46 PM
would make the world a much better place ... inspiring thoughts ...

Touching (Poetry) - 9/7/2007 6:41:59 PM
To share that kind of friendship and love is a special gift that is always appreciated. hugs fee

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