Following the Bio-Organic War, in which weaponized disease organisms all but destroyed Earth's population, some children are being born with extra mental powers. Reviled ..
A Long Way To Fall (Short Story) - 10/13/2008 2:01:24 PM
This heartfelt story is gripping, to say the least. It held my attention throughout, wondering what was to come next. Your style, intertwining the past with the present was artful. You need to go back and do some editing on the piece, but the things needed in order to make this a more professional writ in no way detracted from its potential genius. Well done Zahid. Do yourself a great favor and drop everything and get to work on those edits.
Thank you for a very exciting read.
Paul H. Kogel
A Long Way To Fall (Short Story) - 9/17/2008 9:53:54 AM
What a tragic story. You told it so well, if it were a book I couldn't put in down. And I cried at the end.
Mary
